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Posted: 8 months ago
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Scene 4


It was a clear dark night and they were driving with speed to reach their destination before any alarm was raised. Sameera turned to check on Geet. She was still unconscious and in the same condition that they had dumped her in the car. Her legs and Hands were tied and mouth taped

“I am the daughter of a prominent businessman and here I am a partner in kidnapping a girl. I had suggested to hire someone for this task”

“I am a ruined man and don’t have money to hire people so I did it my way. You are just sitting with me in the car. On top, It was not as easy as you think. The surveillance that he has placed is very strict. Breaching it was near to impossible. How I have managed it, you should appreciate that.”

In the morning when everyone left the house, Pinky had locked the door and had the house key in her finger. She mostly placed the house key in the car. But the moment she was out of the surveillance area and neared her car, someone walking hit her accidentally.

“Ohh I am so sorry” and he bent down to give her the keys. Innocent Pinky did not know that he had already taken the impression on the keys.

“Ok, drive fast. We can listen to your story later”

They were ten minutes away from their destination when suddenly the clear night changed to dark clouds, it started raining and there was a strong thunderbolt and lightning. The car left its control and shook as if someone was doing it deliberately. All this happened for a fraction of seconds and brought Geet in sense. She got scared seeing her own condition and where she was. Who were these people and where are they taking her? Geet got scared and decided to not alert the kidnappers.

Then soon the weather was back to its old form.

“What the hell was that?” Dev wondered.

“Keep driving Dev. It is back to normal and we are almost there. Let me check on her” and Sameera turned to check on Geet who was lying unconscious in the same position. But she very slightly opened her eyes to see it was Sameera.

“Dev and Sameera?” she wondered.

No She cannot let them do anything to her. She has to protect herself for Maan, their love and her family.

Geet was placed in a dark room. More than being kidnapped and being placed in the dark room, she hated the fact that Dev had carried her on his shoulder

They left her in the room and went out to discuss. What they did not know is Geet did yoga and had good flexibility with her body. Other than her regular flexibility, she felt a power within her, which gave her courage and strength. As if someone was with her, by her side, supporting her. She just had to act brave.

On the other hand, the whole Khurana family was in motion. Maan had taken the earliest flight, which was after four hours. Maan headed for the airport.

There was no option but Geet’s family had to be informed as well.

“You all don’t need to panic. We will soon find her as all our private intelligence is in action. On top Maan has his own resources placed on high alert. They are all in action”

“We will be there tomorrow.” They were in panic but could not start in the dark night. They have to wait for sunlight to start. The whole house was in panic.

Maan’s men were already in action to track the location.

Geet, used her yoga flexibility in the dark, stretched her tied hand and from back brought it front. She bent down completely to remove the tape from her mouth. She kept dragging herself to find a sharp tool.

When Dev and Sameera entered she kept lying as it is?

“Today I will tarnish her forever”

“Dev No. We don’t want more complications. Just tear her clothes and we will tarnish her name. Maan will then have no option but to leave her and then I will come to rescue of his respect and grace him by marrying him”

“Do you think I did all this trouble for your benefit? I will tarnish her once to teach them both a good lesson. Let her marry him carrying my child”

Dev was nowhere to listen and he held Geet’s clothes to tear, she surprised him by hitting him and he fell on his back

“You??” he ran behind her in dark

“She is awake and loose, how did you tie her”

“I tied her tight. Get hold of her. I cannot lose this chance. Geet, where are you? Don’t you remember how I slept over your body, everyday. Played with it. Come, no harm in doing it once more” He instigated her to speak but Geet kept mum. She was seething with anger but now it was more important to keep herself safe.

They could not find her “We have to switch on the light” Dev said getting mad for not finding her

“We can’t switch on the light. You don’t know Maan Khurana, his men must already be nearby”

“I know how he is. How he had insulted me, I can never forget. Today in any case I will ruin all his respect. I am already in jail, I don’t fear”

Dev went to switch on the lights “ No Dev” Sameera shouted but Dev switched the light and horror was on Geet’s face as she was near the lights.

“Now you see” He pulled her clothes, she fought but her clothes got torn. Geet, without caring of it, kept throwing things at Dev.

She ran when Dev got hold of her pants but she pushed him by her feet. Her actions were surprising for him.Geet kept throwing things at him. Lights and sound, soon Maan’s men were there with police officers

They grabbed both Sameera and Dev

“Geet, tell them I did nothing. It was all Dev’s doing” shouted Sameera

Raj entered with Vicky and covered Geet with the old cloth in the godown.

“Ha ha.. take me, She is tarnished” Geet looked at Raj

“No, he is lying. He could not even touch me.”

“I trust you beta” said Raj

Geet was brought to the Khurana Mansion. Doctor’s checked her for injury and found no internal injury. But Geet was numb, not talking to anyone.

Her parents were there, everyone was trying to make her talk but she went numb.

“She is in shock. don’t force her” Doctor said before leaving.

Four hours passed, Geet neither talked nor ate or drank anything. Then Maan rushed inside the mansion, throwing his bags

“Where is Geet?” he asked the servant, who showed him the room.

As he entered the room “Geet”. Geet looked at him, threw her blanket, ran and hugged him tight. It was then her tears came out like a stream. Maan hugged her back, tight.

Maan looked at everyone in the room “Can we get some time alone” everyone left them alone. Maan closed the door

“I didn’t let him” he placed finger on her lips “I know. It’s all my fault that” then she placed her finger on his lips, moving her head in No “Had your men delayed a bit, it would have been…” she hugged him again

He kissed her forehead “My brave girl.”



This is from my ongoing story, you all will know which one. And I have password protected this FF because I needed to.smiley6


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Posted: 8 months ago
#52

Could this possibilly be PyarHua Chupke Se

Edited by taahir004 - 8 months ago
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Posted: 8 months ago
#53

Wonderful it's phcs

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Posted: 8 months ago
#54

This is from pyaar hua chupke se. When Sameera and dev kidnapped geet but saved her on time

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Posted: 8 months ago
#55

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geet act breve n fight with dev surprising him

maan's men n police find geet n save her

geet was numb but react when maan come back

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Posted: 8 months ago
#56

Pyaar huya chupke se

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#57

A superb depiction of Geet being trapped by Dev and Sameera & how she manages to save herself. Gosh those two are so stupid and disgusting. I felt like ghusiong in the scene and strangle Sameera. She did this to another girl being a girl. Pathetic! They had upper hand still they lost such idiots lol!
Geet was unconscious, tied to a chair in a dark room yet she fought back and didn't back down.


-Dev switched the light and horror was on Geet’s face as she was near the lights.-


- She ran when Dev got hold of her pants but she pushed him by her feet. -


-“I didn’t let him” he placed finger on her lips “I know. It’s all my fault that” then she placed her finger on his lips, moving her head in No “Had your men delayed a bit, it would have been…” she hugged him again

He kissed her forehead “My brave girl.”- These parts need mention.

Lovely one!

Edited by WaveTeal - 8 months ago
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Posted: 8 months ago
#58

I think this is a scene from pyar Hua chupe ke se

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Posted: 8 months ago
#59

Hi Anu

hope you are well.

just saw now that you posted the next Scene

thanks for posting

always great reading your stories


one of fav stories Pyar Hua Chupke se


Scene 4

Intense scene... magnificently written

disgusting Dev and Sameera

they resorted to kidnapping Geet

sad that innocent Pinky was used

good that Geet gained consciousness

her fears were reasonable

great that she realised who kidnapped her

glad that Khuranas are looking for Geet

of cos Maan is on his way back

at least they informed Geet's family

pleased that Geet managed to keep her calm

liked that she managed to free herself

Gosh Dev tried to forced himself on Geet

however Geet did not let him

admire that she bravely fought

oh no he tore her clothes

but Geet did not let him near her

Thank God Raj, Vicky and the police arrived

as expected Dev tried to tarnish Geet

loved that Raj trusted Geet

Geet was certainly shocked after what happened

finally Maan is there

Maan really trusted Geet

wonderful that he assured her

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Posted: 8 months ago
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Hi, this is from pyar hua chup ke se.

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