NeiVika OS: Alvidaa

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Disclaimer: Neil fans please do not throw tomatoes at me

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The moon hung low in the night sky, casting a somber glow over the quiet hospital room. Yuvika sat in the dim light, her heart heavy with an unbearable weight. The sterile scent of antiseptic and the soft hum of medical equipment filled the air, creating a stark contrast to the whirlwind of emotions inside her.

The doctor's words echoed in her mind, a cruel refrain that refused to fade. "I'm sorry, Mrs. Yuvika Bharadwaj, but we did everything we could. Your husband, Neil, couldn't make it. He succumbed to his injuries."

Yuvika's vision blurred with tears as she looked at Neil's lifeless form on the hospital bed. His once vibrant eyes were now closed, his face frozen in a peaceful repose that contradicted the chaos of the accident that had stolen him away.

"No," she whispered, the word catching in her throat. "This can't be real. Neil, please, wake up."

She reached out to touch his cold hand, desperate for any sign of life, but his fingers remained still. The reality of her loss crashed over her like a tidal wave, and she crumbled into a chair beside the bed.

Memories flooded her mind, each one a dagger to her heart. She remembered the first time they met, the warmth of his smile, and the way his laughter could fill any room with joy. Neil had been her anchor, her confidant, and the love of her life.

They had shared countless moments together, building a life full of dreams. One memory in particular surfaced, and Yuvika found solace in the bittersweet nostalgia it brought.

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They used to spend lazy afternoons at their favorite chai tapri, nestled in a corner of the bustling city. The aroma of freshly brewed tea and the rhythmic clinking of glasses filled the air as they sipped their chai, exchanging stories and laughter.

Yuvika could almost hear Neil's voice, animated and full of life, recounting their adventures and weaving tales of a future they planned to build together. The chai tapri had been their sanctuary, a place where time stood still, and the world outside faded away.

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As she sat by Neil's side, Yuvika's mind wandered through the labyrinth of their shared memories. She recalled the evenings they spent getting drenched in the rain, dancing under the droplets like carefree children.

The memory of one particularly stormy night flashed before her eyes. They had been on their way home when the heavens opened up, unleashing a torrential downpour. Instead of seeking shelter, Neil had pulled her into the rain-soaked streets, and they had twirled and laughed, drenched to the bone but deliriously happy.

Yuvika clutched Neil's lifeless hand, her voice breaking as she pleaded with the universe to rewind time and undo the tragedy that had befallen them.

"Neil, utho na, please! Tum mujhe chodhkar nahi jaa sakte",her words were a desperate cry, the ache in her heart spilling into the sterile air of the hospital room. She pressed her forehead against his cold hand, tears streaming down her face. The reality of his absence weighed on her, and she couldn't bear the silence that echoed his departure.

"Main kaise jiyungi bina tumhare saath, Neil? Humne toh saath mein har sapna dekha tha. Hamara start up, wo...woh ball party, humara bacha.... " Her voice wavered between anger and despair, the emotional storm raging within her.

Yuvika's cries reverberated through the room, a heart-wrenching symphony of grief.

 "Tumne vaada kiya tha, Neil! Tum mujhe chodhkar kabhi nahi jaoge. Please wake up!!"

She clung to his lifeless form, as if her sheer willpower could breathe life back into him. "Aaj tak toh hum har mushkil saath mein face kiye, phir aaj kyun neil? Kyun? " The questions hung in the air, unanswered and haunting.

A sharp pain gripped her heart as she remembered their shared excitement about starting a family. Neil had been over the moon at the prospect of becoming a father, his eyes sparkling with anticipation and love.

They had spent hours planning their future, imagining a nursery filled with laughter, sleepless nights spent cradling a tiny bundle, and the joy of watching their child take their first steps. Yuvika had never seen Neil so ecstatic, and the thought of raising a family together had woven a tapestry of dreams that now lay shattered at her feet.

In the silence that followed, Yuvika's anguished sobs filled the room. The reality of Neil's absence crashed over her in waves, and she continued to pour out her heart in a language only the universe could understand.

As the first light of dawn illuminated the room, Yuvika's cries faded into a weary whisper. "Neil, laut aao, please..." Her words lingered, a mournful plea that echoed in the hollow space left by a love lost too soon.

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                                                                   Maar ke bhi na hum kahenge.....

                                                                                      Alvidaaa.

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I'm sorry for being this sadistic...now BYEsmiley37

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Team Neivika

Posted: 4 months ago
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Tagging a few peeps who maybe interestedsmiley9

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Team Neil

Posted: 4 months ago
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MAAR diaaaa Neil ko  smiley42

Uff! Sukoon smiley27 

Thank you Rosy smiley31

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Apne to sachmehi marr Diya Neil ko aur o vi shadi k baad 😂

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Team Neil

Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: Spandan24

Apne to sachmehi marr Diya Neil ko aur o vi shadi k baad 😂

Vanshaj is important smiley15

Neil ish story mein serf Yuvika ko pregnant Karne K liye hi hai that's his whole purpose in this Rishtoon Ki Mahabharat smiley39 

Take love from all Neil fans Rosyyyy smiley31

Marrrr geyaaaa Neil smiley41 

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Team Kabir

Posted: 4 months ago
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Yaar dii, yeh kya kardia Apne...

You just touched a raw nerve & the floodgates of my eyes are left open..

I am crying..

How beautifully you captured Yuvika' s pain for Neil...

There memories, moment, 

When someone who is resides within you becomes a memory nothing hurts more than that...you have captured the essence...

Kya hi bolun main toh ye tak na keh Sakti ki I want it on show ..Death is messy, it is painful & you have captured it perfectly..

Yuvika's visceral scream,tears I could visualise everything...

You are fabbbsmiley27

Please i don't want Neil to die in the show everrr..

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

MAAR diaaaa Neil ko  smiley42

Uff! Sukoon smiley27 

Thank you Rosy smiley31

nahin ab mujhe nahin chahiye Neil ki maut...

Nooo

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Team Bhidur

Posted: 4 months ago
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Such a nice OS , i hope this doesn't happen in the show

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Posted: 4 months ago
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Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

nahin ab mujhe nahin chahiye Neil ki maut...

Nooo

nehi marega , don't worry hum use bachake , par dialogue na dekar tum logo ko tease karenge 

                    _____SKT

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Posted: 4 months ago
#10

This OS is painfully beautiful smiley19

But IT SHOULD NEVER HAPPEN IN THE SHOW smiley7 sun rahe ho Tiwari jismiley35