DhruvTara - I WILL FIND YOU fs Completed - Page 5

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

You finally commented after whole three chapters. I can't tell you how excited I got reading your comment last night 😆.

in 1st part I felt really bad for Taru😭🤗 even I was Sad for Few moments😭

In 2nd part I felt bad for Tara & her family 😭

So I didn't know what to do except Sending virtual hug to Taru Baby 🤗🤗

Here in 3rd Part she is Stable & story moved forward ❤️

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Originally posted by: ErUm.J

😆 🤣

in 1st part I felt really bad for Taru😭🤗 even I was Sad for Few moments😭

In 2nd part I felt bad for Tara & her family 😭

So I didn't know what to do except Sending virtual hug to Taru Baby 🤗🤗

Here in 3rd Part she is Stable & story moved forward ❤️

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I feel like first chapter was the saddest.😭

Because it was mostly Tara centric. Stable yes chapter 3 was supposed to bring stability in her life. From here she keep getting stronger i guess but we will see where I take it from here.

Amazing part , this was great 👏👏

Tara's and mahaveer's attempt to rescue Ravi , Mahaveer's guilt , and Tara imagining Dhruv , everything was on point 👍🏼. I imagined the whole scene , you have written it so well . And now Ravi baba is also free😃 , maharaj is on the path of redemption .

Well Raj vaidya treating Dhruv and his condition , is actually a great idea better than bhaiji treating Dhruv and he walking in 2 days .Logical and realistic 😳

And Dhruv is alive isse khushi ki baat to koi ho hi nahi skti Ab taarif krne baithi to din nikl jayega .

Keep writing , eagerly waiting for next.🤗

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

tumne to Dhruv ko logical way me recover hote hue dikhaya hai good 👍🏼

Logical recovery hi deni thi mene😆.

All sukku scenes❤️

Ravi baba free ho gaye finally

haanji Ravi baba free go gaye

Nice written up dear 🤗

thank you❤️

meri Tara ke liye kuch bhi nhi💔

Originally posted by: Tia-life

Amazing part , this was great 👏👏

thank you🤗

Tara's and mahaveer's attempt to rescue Ravi , Mahaveer's guilt , and Tara imagining Dhruv , everything was on point 👍🏼. I imagined the whole scene , you have written it so well . And now Ravi baba is also free😃 , maharaj is on the path of redemption .

I am basically giving my everything to this story, so I am happy that you are liking the story lol.

Well Raj vaidya treating Dhruv and his condition , is actually a great idea better than bhaiji treating Dhruv and he walking in 2 days .Logical and realistic 😳

show valo see toh koi umeed rakhni hi ni chihye😆. Or agar mai logical and realistic na rakhti na toh mene pagal ho jana🤣

And Dhruv is alive isse khushi ki baat to koi ho hi nahi skti Ab taarif krne baithi to din nikl jayega .

Dhruv ko toh zinda rakhna hi tha😆. itni bhi taref mat kardi ke mai hawa me udne lag jao🤣

Keep writing , eagerly waiting for next.🤗

next chapter is coming soon.

Originally posted by: Minhasmansi92

meri Tara ke liye kuch bhi nhi💔

Ab mai itni mahan nahi hu ki apni sautan tara ki tarif karu 😉

Originally posted by: Chinmayi18

Ab mai itni mahan nahi hu ki apni sautan tara ki tarif karu 😉

Tera sahi hai 🤣

Hello,

Finally I am here, somehow less insane than I was last week. And here is the promised long, review.

The updates, both this and the previous one, are great to read. Although some of the things are unclear to me (since I still have not watched the show), but there is nothing to worry. I figure them out when I go back and re-read the chapters. Plus, I think it still works well for most of the readers. Your grip on the plot and sharp contrasts of emotions, the way you alternate them, all of it works well in the story.

I like how you have still managed to surprise me with Dhruv. I knew he is not dead, but because of Mahaveer and Rajvaidya - that I did not see coming.

Keep writing, and let me know whenever you update.

Originally posted by: LizzynDarcy

Hello,

Finally I am here, somehow less insane than I was last week. And here is the promised long, review.

It's not like I haven't gone insane last week.

The updates, both this and the previous one, are great to read. Although some of the things are unclear to me (since I still have not watched the show), but there is nothing to worry. I figure them out when I go back and re-read the chapters. Plus, I think it still works well for most of the readers. Your grip on the plot and sharp contrasts of emotions, the way you alternate them, all of it works well in the story.

Thank you! I personally can't stick to one emotion for long. So you get a contract of emotions throughout the chapter lol.

I like how you have still managed to surprise me with Dhruv. I knew he is not dead, but because of Mahaveer and Rajvaidya - that I did not see coming.

Keep writing, and let me know whenever you update.

I will! I need ideas(help me out).

Bold- I tell you girl, you don't wanna know how they saved Dhruv in the show (if still interested i will tell you in Dms)🤡I had a headache watching that episode 🤪

Yrr sbse pehele to tumhari english ....👏It's Amazing dear , ekdum high level ki english use krti ho tum , mujhe kitna kuch sikhne milaa isse bro
Well written👏

And now about the story ,
it was just loved.....❤️
U had taken very small emotions of tara , sukanya , bhaiji and even rajvaidyaji ...👍🏼

And most importantly , My fav bonds bhaiji and taru , sukanya and dhruv usse kitna achche se execute kiya yrr tumne

dhruv ki condition was sessibly written , not like the show , bina sar aur per ki trh...

At last , just
Kudoos to your story 👏