Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 23

wow, chapter 16 toh aur bhi zyada acha tha. 😊

ViDev spending quality time together, living more like a married couple. 😳 Dev taking care of sick vidhi, then vidhi ka irritate hona unse. Fight karke lonavala jana, baad mein guilty feel karna for hurting dev. she later apologized to him for her misbehaviour. Really liked this chapter. Good job. 👍🏼

this is going to be my favorite chapter!!!! I LOVEEEEE ITTTT. The age difference through their habits and ideals is so well handled. I wish they highlight such age gap diff in the show as well. Satyavati and Vidhi's conversation has my heart. I love how Vidhi reasoned with Dev. The health and trip part is the BEST. Vidhi acting her age and Dev his ❤️❤️. Going to read it again. Update soon.

Thanks for reading my FF and thanks a lot for all your valuable feed backs.

We have come to the most difficult part..the age gap related issues in a relationship, which the makers have denied us so far. Hope I tried to do some justification through this track,

Thank you for the feed back.

I am glad you liked it.

"People like this Dev are very rare or should I say fictional 😒"

So true. Dev is very much fictional. We cant expect any white knight (Dev) to come with a shiny armor to protect us...we need to channel our inner Dev to balance out the Vidhi in us,

Originally posted by: Minami_koi

Chapter -16 Pyaar Diwaana Hota Hai

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You out do yourself with every update Minami! 🤗The part was absolutely fantastic and the way you managed to capture the age difference and different personalities was amazing.

I am in love with this ViDev and frankly your updates make up for what is currently lacking in the show

This Dev is so firm and clear with what he wants and has no calms about showing it while Vidhi is still learning

I related to that part where she goes quietly and eats cookies and chips! Thats my way of spending me time too so i could imagine the calmness VIdhi feels. It is such a big change when you have to share everything in your life with someone with the fear of being judged.

Keep it up! and Agla update jaldi please. We all are very greedy

Haaye Part 6 and part 7 ek saath padi mein. Dev ko gossip aunty banaye 🤣🤣🤣I laughed so hard. You had a right balance on humour and expressing other emotions also. Arjun ki haalat mujhe show ki yaad dilaye jab woh cafe mein use pata chala kee Vidhi ke dil mein Dev Sir hein..Project waali baat ko leke kaise taang kheenchi Vidhi Dev ke. Aww Dev is a kiddo, chocolate wrappers chupa rahe hein Aww kitne cute thaa aur woh Yamini se kya bhaaga , I like how Vidhi encouraged Dev to overcome the past and move on. Padke man ko bahut shaanti mili mujhe, I am in love with this ViDev, thank you Minami Dil khush kar diya aapne

I am glad you liked it Revu👍🏼

You portrayed age difference with the life style so well.

I can relate to it with how I changed over time.

Dev in your story is pretty much laid back to tolerate Vidhi's tantrums.

Do this type of guy even exist?😂😂

Thanks for the tag and update.

Waiting for more.

Originally posted by: Dreamzz

You portrayed age difference with the life style so well.

I can relate to it with how I changed over time.

Dev in your story is pretty much laid back to tolerate Vidhi's tantrums.

Do this type of guy even exist?😂😂

Thanks for the tag and update.

Waiting for more.

Thank you for the feedback . Iam glad you liked it. 👍😊

Waiting for the update

Please update whenever possible 🥺