Pal Pal dil ke pass - Page 22

ch other making up for the last couple of weeks.

Brilliant part Minami ❤️ as a fellow hater of working out, I feel for vidhi - truly! But it’s all for good 😄 love how Dev deep dives into taking care of her 1000%. Vidhi went through a roller coaster of emotions - I absolutely loved how you depicted that! It was brilliant ❤️❤️

Thanks Sns.. I hope the age gap issues were relatable and not silly.

I felt since Dev is a sorted person.. He would be bringing with him certain discipline that someone in their 20s might find hard to handle..

Hope I did justice to the characters.

Oh, my goodness. This was so good! Each scene is perfectly paced and you've managed to make us want to read more, and now that you're in the age-gap-romance stage, it just keeps getting better and better. It's not over-the-top or anything.

At 25 I was quite disciplined but I can still relate to her, she doesn't come across as a brat! Binging could also be her way of dealing with the pent up emotions.

Well done!!

Wow wow.. this is so good..i was badly missing this story..you just made my day.. thankyou..❤️

You never disappoint!! Awesome update, showing the age difference, love and care all in one go!! Superb job!!

Yaar i m loving this ff ❤️❤️❤️.

Brilliant writing skills 👍🏻👍🏻

Waiting for next update now 🙏😂

Haayee.. you write so well.. ❤️❤️

Amazing Part.. loved reading it..

Continue soon ❤️❤️

I can't put into words how much I have loved this particular update

this is so amazing i don't think I have read anything of this sort ever

It is so worth the wait

I'm so in love with this one it's going to be my favourite always

You have used the age gap and more than age gap them being opposites so well

I'm just like Vidhi exactly like this it was like someone was describing me so i know how much I need to follow the healthy lifestyle Dev made her follow which I'm wanting to and unable to also like her i need my own space and me time

I also love how she went on the trip she needs to live her individual life as well and so does Dev

And how on the trip Dev not being there was there with her every moment whether she liked it or not 😂

Loved how their combined efforts made her fit enough for the trek

And j knew it the moment she left she'll come back running all the way to him leaving her friends

I could feel her emotions and what she was feeling when she came back

Also absolutely loved how Dev let her be by herself on her trip because she needed it and it's the right thing to do one does not need to be with the partner or be in touch 24/7 ( given that 0he is so protective and possessive still which i love btw as long as it's little) this guy is such a green flag

And also let her realise on her own

And what her friends said about men and boys is so true

People like this Dev are very rare or should I say fictional 😒

I knew it after listening to her friends

Vidhi ko lagega nahi bhai mera wala hi theek hai jaisa bhi hai 🤣🤣

I loved how Dev said miss nautanki what's all this crying for fave dialogue

But i felt bad she was crying so much the moment he entered i was like Jaa Jao kar lo Huggie here's your bf now hug him and stop crying 🥺

I rarely to awww on things 🤣😭

But here i did

Also love Satya's advice to Vidhi top notch writing 👌

Now I'm saying so much about the entire update literally 🤣

I already love this living together ViDev phase can't wait for more of it and next update please continue this bit

Sorry for such a long feedback apologies

And why do they need a 4 bedroom

A lavish 2 bedroom would have been enough Dev ke paas bohot paise hain thode muje de do Mera 2 bedroom aa jaaye 🤣

Oh wait 1 minute isne bachho vachho ki planning karke Ghar liya hai 🤣

Last but not the least please send this update to the writers of the show

They should really be writing like this instead of the crap they are showing

Also the whole ring thing it was so well written the writing is chef's kiss