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Posted: 2 years ago
#11

Beautiful ❤️

Abhinav's past, Akshara's support, Abhir wanting to go home

Sharma family spending some time in peace in between all the negativity ❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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It was beautiful ❤

I wanna see their flashbacks of those 6 years in the show.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: PenguinBaby

Loved it! It's nice to see a glimpse of Abhinav's past and how he found happiness in the most simple things. And how understanding is Akshara as a partner and a friend, she knows feeling of pain and loneliness, that's why she knows Abhinav needs his space to vent out and reminisce his past. And how sweet is Abhir, little baby just wants to go back home with his Mumma Papa😭

Loved it!!!


Thanks... I actually wrote it based on my feelings when I was a kid....


I loved going to my Nani's place every summer vacation... Enjoyed playing with my cousins from morning to night.. ate all delicious food... But the end... I would be looking forward to going back home...

Apna Ghar apna Ghar hi hota hai feeling

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: PeacefulLove

This was so beautiful 🤩❤️..I was so much looking for this.. Not sure how I missed first one.. It brought be back that Kasauli vibes.. The understanding between Abhinav and akshara is outstanding.. Little Abhir gives that cute boy vibes here as well 🤩🤩..I was all smiles while reading it ❤️


Probably because I am bad with usernames and generally do not tag people..


I really tried not to steer away from their basic personality...

Let's see if I can write more of this

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: umawanderer

second one.. Based on the BTS

Abhinav looked around. There was no one. He sighed. Today's group activity completed everyone dispersed.

Akshara and Nikkiji went to have dinner with everyone.

He held the guitar. He smiled as many memories came back. He slowly strung the guitar.

“Achcha.. toh aap yaha hai Khana nahi khana?” Akshara surprised him.

“Aree! Akshara aap?” A startled Abhinav said as he tried to hide the guitar.

“Aap guitar ke saath kya kar rahe?”

“Arre kuch nahi ji.. Woh mei ise andar dalene wala tha..”

“Abhinav…” Akshara had to just call his name and look at him. He sighed. He really cannot lie to her.

“Aap Hasiye mat.. Par mujhe thoda sa guitar bajana aatahai..” He said closing his eyes

Akshara was pleasantly surprised. “Isme hasne ki kya baathai?”

Abhinav opened his eyes and smiled.

“Kab se bajana aata hai aapko..” Akshara asked as she sat down. All these 6 years, she didn’t know that he could play guitar. She wondered what else could she discover on the way.

“Nahi nahi.. Mujhe sirf ek hi gaana aata.. Woh bhi sirf isiliye kyunki Ramakant ji ki chahthe the”

They both felt silent. Akshara knew about Ramakant ji. He was the old caretaker of the orphanage Abhinav was brought up. Abhinav had taken Her and Abhir to meet him.Abhir was only 8 months old back then. Abhinav wanted to show his family to the old man. The old man was very weak.. could not even move by himself. Maybe he lost his memories. He did not show any sign of recognising Abhinav. Demetia. At least that’s what she heard after they left the hospital. Abhinav rarely talked about Ramakant ji after his death. His childhood guide and mentor.

Abhinav sensed the mood became heavy and he immediately broke the tension, “Zeenat aman ke bahut bade fan the.. Jab bhi Doordarshan mei Zeenat aman ki picture hoti toh unhe dekhna hi tha.. Kya musibat the woh.. humme se kam se kam 3 logon ko antenna pe nazar rakhana padtha tha.. picture beechmei ruk nahi sathi thi.. Sach mei.. Bachcho se bhi zyada ziddi the woh ”

Akshara smiled... Whenever he told her about the orphanage days, Abhinav smiled and joked but did he really have a nice childhood... she wondered. He always says about providing a nice childhood for Abhir. Maybe wanted to give him things and happiness which he did not get.

“Aur Ek baar ek aur zid pakadli unhone.. ki jantantra divas mei kisiko “Churaliya hai tum ne” gaana gaane hoga woh bhi guitar ke saath”Abhinav continued.

“Aur humese kisi ko gutar bajana to chod .. pakadna tak nahi aata tha… Sach kahoon toh humese kisi ko bhi gaana gaana aatha hi nahi tha..Isi liye saare ladkone chit se faisla karne ko socha… Aur phir.. meri hi kismat sabse phooti nikli.. ban gaya mei bali ka bakra..”

Akshara laughed. She could already imagine a sad tiny Abhinav as his name was announced by his friends.

“Ramakant ji to Strick se bhi strick the ji.. in baton keliye.. Jantantra divas mei koi MLA bhi aane wale the Humare anadhaalay mei.. Aurkya 10 din ka katarnak practice Raat nahi din nahi dopehar nahi.. humesha practice.. jab bhi galat kartha tha to hathon mei lakdi ke scale se maar miltha tha.. . Phir ek din theek se bajana aa hi gaya ji.. Par gaana mujhse nahi gawaya..Agar mei gata toh woh MLA saab toh bhaag hi jaathe… Rosy ne gaya aur mai ne guitar baja ya..”

Abhinav became quiet.. Akshara knew he was reminiscing about his past. He sometimes did that.. Akshara always gave him some space at times like these. She was about to get up and leave when he started talking again.

“Pata hai Akshara.. uss samay shayad mei kitne kostha tha apni kismat mei.. par na zindagi ne sikhya ki jo hota hai achche keliye hotahai.. Us ek gana guitar ke wajah se mujhe tab naukari mili jab koi umeed hi nahi thi.. Mumbai gaya tha.. sapnon ka shehar.. par kisi ne jeb kaat liya.. aur Ek anjaan shehar mei akela bhatak raha tha.. Ek bar mei Musician ki job bhi bohot minnaton ke baad mila.. Main pagar bhi nahi maanga tha.. bas khana de de.. Tab guitar ka ek gaana mujhe zinda rakhdiya ji”

He wiped his tear. Akshara looked on. Her heart was so heavy. This man faced so many bad things just like her. But he did not letthose things affect him. And here she was still struggling with her past. She is still controlled by her past... when will she be able to move on?

“Mumma? Papa? Aap dono khana nahi kha rahe ho..” Abhir cameand interrupted her thoughts. Both of the wiped their tears and smiled at him.

“Arre aa Abhir.. Papa guitar bajane wale hai..” She said as she made him sit on his lap.

“Papa Aapko guitar bajana aata hai?” Abhir asked in wonder.

“Arre!! Nikkiji.. bas ek hi gana aata hai..”

“Bajaio na papa.. please..”

“Abhinav!! Ab Aapka beta aapse ithni sweet hoke poochega toh aapko Aapko bajana hi padega na..” Akshara winked as she cuddled Abhir closer to her bosom.

Abhinav shook his head at the cute gesture by his family. He smiled.

“Aap bhi saath gayiye na, Akshara”

Akshara smiled.

“Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko

Nazar nahin churaana sanam

Badal ke meri zindagaani

Kahin badal na jaana sanam

Le liya dil, haai mera dil

Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana”

Her Family... These days were filled with so much tension and anxiousness. She really missed this calmness.. This peace…

“Bahar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein

Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein

Bahar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein

Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein”

Abhir yawned as he felt more comfortable. He snuggled into his mother for warmth.

“Mumma.. Hum Ghar kab ja rahe hai..” He asked as stifled hisyawn.

“Hein? Tumhe toh Udaipur acha lagtha tha na?” Akshara asked.She saw the droopy eyes of Abhir and signalled Abhinav. He put the guitar down.Smiled at it for one last time. And picked up his nikkiji.

“Udaipur achcha hai.. par humara ghar nahi hain na.. ghar jaane ka mann kar raha hai.. Tinku se bhi baat nahi hui.. mere saare friends bhi toh waha hai.. Neelamma ki siddhu.. Mera tent.. Bhola uncle ke samose..sab waha hai” Abhir said and rested his head on his father’s shoulder. And just like that he fell asleep.

“Bahut maza kiya hoga nikkiji ne.. isiliye toh ithni jaldi so bhi gaye”Abhinav said as they walked towards their tent.

“Abhinav.. Ab toh.. Abhir ko bhi ghar jaane ka mann kar rahahai.. Hume ghar jaana hai.. jald hi..” Akshara said as they reached the tent.

Abhinav looked at her confidently, “Hum humare ghar wapas jayenge!!”

Akshara also hoped so.. She prayed to Kanhaji that she couldreturn to her peaceful life again.


So beautiful. Thanks for the tag

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: umawanderer

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I am really bad with usernames.. So sorry if I missed out tagging anyone..

thanks so much for remembering me.... 🤗
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: umawanderer

second one.. Based on the BTS

it was such a sweet moment among Sharma family, Ramakant ji's reference (I dont know if he is really on the show) was adorable
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Why am I discovering this thread now 😔 will respond later after work


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