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Posted: 3 years ago

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I don’t know which place u talking about but yaar me to yahi rahti hu and har time me apne hubby ka haath pakad ke chalti hu.and I m not the only one here 😆

Pata nahi but main to jab bhi unke saath shopping pe akeli jati thi log ajeeb nazron se dekhte the

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Part 13



Azka:aap dono yaha hamesha aate the?

Azlan: sometimes. Aap pehle kabhi nahi aayi?

Azka:nahi first time.me jayada bahar nahi aati jaati thi.

Azlan:kyu

Azka:Amma mujhe akele Jane nahi deti thi.me jab bhi kehti thi ke mene ghumne jana hai wo aage se bol deti thi shaadi ho jayegi na phir jaha marzi jana apne miya ke saath.aur me kahmosh ho kar planning karne lag jati thi

Azlan:kis cheez ki?

Azka:apne Honeymoon ki.

Azka flow me aakar ye boldeti hai but than she realised wo kya bol gayi.Azlan enjoy this side of azka.azka ko comfortable karne ke liye azlan kehta hai

Azlan:aur phir mene aapse shadi kar ke aapke honeymoon ke plan par pani daal diya.

Azka pehle azlan ko dekhti hai jo use ek genuine smile de raha hota hai.

Azka:bilkul aapne mere sab plans par pani pher diya.wo kya kehte hai sab khawab tod diye.

Azka muskurati hai.

Azlan:accha agar aap honeymoon par jati to kaha jati?

Azka:agar mene sach me kahi Jana hota to me Umraah karne jati ya phir HAJJ !!! Zindagi ka pehla safar apne Humsafar ke saath agar Allah ke Ghar ka ho to usse acchi koi aur baat ho hi nahi sakti.

Azlan: Inshaallah aapka ye safar bahot jaldi aayega.

Azka ye sunkar kuch nahi bolti.

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:kuch nahi.

Azlan:waise aapki fav place kaunsi hai?

Azka:apne ghar ki balcony.

Azlan:r u serious?

Azka:Ha mujhe accha lagta hai raat ko khule aasman ke neache taaro ko dekhna.

Azlan:aur kya accha lagta hai?

Azka:aap kya Janna chahte hai mere baare me?

Azlan: anything you want to tell

Azka:aise aapko apne baare me khud se batana bahot awkward hoga mere liye aap aisa aap puchte jaye me batati jaugi

Azlan:that's very interesting,but don't worry me aapse aapki date of birth ya year nahi puchne wala.

Azka burst out laughing..she said mockingly

Azka:bade reham dil hai aap ,aapki badi meharbani

Azlan smriked at her

Azlan:waise aap pehli insaan hai jo mujhe Reham dil bol rahi hai..is hisaab se reham dil to aap hui.

Azka smiled and azlan looked at her in the eyes

Azlan:aapka fav season kaunsa hai?

Azka:baarishe

Azlan: typical girl thing.kabhi roads dekhe pani se bhare hue!!! god terrible.

Azka:aur apka?

Azlan:winter kyu ke sardiyo me raate lambi hoti hai.

Azka:jo aapko aur jayada time degi akele andhere kamre me bethne ka.

Azlan:Nahi aisi baat nahi hai sardiyo ki raate mujhe suru se pasand hai wo thandi hawaaye aur wo sun shaan raaste aur wo baadlo me chupa hua chaand.

Azka:kabhi bartan dho kar dekhe Sardi me aapke andar ka jo ye shayar hai na khatam ho jayega.

Azlan hasne lag jata hai.Azka use haste hue dekhti rahti hai.

Azka:aapse kuch puchu bura to nahi manayege?

Azlan: puche

Azka:aapko flowers kyu nahi pasand ?

Azlan kuch der rukta hai

Azlan:kyu ke wo mujhe us din ki yaad dilate hai jab mene Shanaya ko khoya tha,......me uske ghar gaya tha bouquet lekar use sorry bolne par use de hi nahi saka.aur aaj har roz uski Qabar par bouquet lekar jata hu.

Azka:isliye aapne kaha tha ke har flowers aapko acchi yaad de ye zaruri nahi

Azlan:ha ye phool mujhe ye baat yaad dilate hai ke me use bata hi nahi saka

Azka:kya?

Azlan: ke me usse kitna pyaar Karta tha.wo kabhi sun hi nahi saki mera Izhaare mohabbat.

Azka:par aap …mera matlab hai aise kaise aap ki aur Shanaya ji ki to love marriage hui thi?

Azlan:Nahi aisa nahi tha

Azka shock hoti hai

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:Par mujhe to yahi laga tha.

Azlan:Shanaya was my friend meri bahot acchi dost hum kisi REALTIONSHIP me nahi the.par ha wo hamesha se mujhse pyaar karti aayi thi.aur ye baat mere alawa sab jante the.mom ne mujhe samjhya tha.i still remembered yahi isi jagah mene usko shadi ka bola tha.

Azka:phir?

Azlan:phir kya jab samjh aaya tab tak wo meri zindagi se hamesha ke liye Jaa chuki thi.

Azka:aapke liye wo sab bahot mushkil raha hoga na?

Azlan:Shanaya ke jane baad meri zindagi ruk si gayi thi.na koi maqsad tha na koi khushi.bina maqsad ki zindagi jeene laga tha

Azka:aapne phir dusri shaadi kyu nahi ki?

Azlan Azka ke paas aakar bethta hai

Azlan:kabhi dil hi nahi kiya.mom hamesha koshish Karti thi koi na koi ladkiya mujhe kisi na kisi bahane se dikhati rahti thi aur me har baar inqaar kar deta tha.

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:kabhi khyaal hi nahi aaya dusri shadi ka.par wo kehte hai na kismat me jo hona hota hai wo hokar rehta hai.

Azka:ap kismat me mante hai?

Azlan:pehle nahi par ab yaqeen karne laga hu

Azka:ab kyu?

Azlan azka ki aakho me dekhne lag jata hai

Azlan:ab soch raha hu ke

Azka:Ke??

Azlan:mujhe bol dena chahiye

Azka:..kya?

Azlan:aapko bol dena chahiye

Azka:....

Azka does not say anything, Azlaan comes near her face and starts looking at her.He comes a little closer and Azka lower her face. Azlaan goes to her ears and said

Azlan:aapko pata hai mene aap jaisi ladki kahi nahi dekhi.

Azka ye sunkar apna face upar karti hai aur azlan ko dekhti hai.

Azlan:aap sabse alag hai.pata hai kyu?

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:because aap dunia ki pehli biwi hai jo apne hi shohar ko phir se shadi ka puch rahi hai.

Azka:,......jee???

Azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azka:aap bhi na…mujhe nahi pata tha aap gusse ke alawa mazaq bhi karte hai.

Azlan:me to bahot kuch karta hu.aapne kabhi mauka hi nahi diya.

Azka:azlan saab aap to mujhe bolne ka mauka tak nahi dete the.sara time bas ghoorte rahte the.jaise mene pata nahi kya chura liya tha aapka.

Azlan:chura to liya aapne?

Azka:mene kya churaya?

Azlan:aahmm meri ice cream.

Azka:aapko pata hai me kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi ek din aap aur me aise is tarah baate kar rahe hoge.

Azlan:iska matlab hai humara aise milna Allah ne socha hua tha.

Azka:Aur Allah jo karta hai wo sabse behtar hota hai

Azlan:matlab humari jodi upar se bankar aayi thi.

Azka becomes silent after hearing this from Azlan.Azlan smiled lightly Azka doesn't say anything she starts looking at her mobile

Azlan:Azka have you ever been in love with someone?

Azka:jee?

Azka:kabhi kisi se mohabbat hui hai?

Azlaan's life rests on this one question. He is eagerly waiting for Azka's answer.He wants to hear if there is or was someone in Azka's life.

Azka:meri mohabbat hamesha se bas ek hi thi.. UMAIR

Azlan:UMAIR

Azlan is shocked to hear this name, his life ends in an instant. He starts looking at Azka. He becomes very sad.

Azka:wo unki call aa rahi hai ek minute

Azlaan sees that Azka's phone is ringing. He feels like he is breathing again.The sorrow that was there a moment ago is gone.

Azka: Asalamualaikum jee nahi nahi aap bole nahi umair aap bataye me koi disturb nahi hui..jee jee ..accha me dekh lugi..jee..mujhe bahot acche lage.aapko to pata hai mujhe waise bhi phulo se bahot pyaar hai ,mene room me hi rakhe hai.nahi wo me bas bahar aayi Hui thi jee Azlan saab ke saath ..ha jee Allah hafiz.

Azlan sab sun raha hota hai and he knows ke umair kya baat kar raha hai aur kis baare me kar Raha hai usko bahot gussa aa raha hai.

Azlan:AZKA AAPKI TABIYAT SAHI NAHI HAI AUR AAJ SUNDAY HAI UNKO BATAO TUM FAMILY KE SAATH HO YE KOI TIME NAHI HAI KISI KI PRIVACY DISTURB KARNE KA.

Azka: wo bas bata rahe the ke unhone reports send ki hai i m sorry

Azlan khud ko normal karta hai.

Azlan:aap kyu sorry ho rahi hai..umair dr.umar ko bhi check Kara sakte tha na report.

Azka:Jee wo bas yahi bol rahe the.

Azlan:chale ghar chalte hai.

Azka ko samjh nahi aata ke azlan ko kya hua hai abhi kuch der pehle to wo sahi the.dono ghar aate hai.azka room me jati hai

Sitwat:aa gaye tum dono.

Azlan: Asalam alaikum mom aap kab aayi?

Sitwat: Walekum assalam kuch der ho gayi hai so tumne enjoy Kiya.

Azlan:jee mene to kiya aapki Bahu ka nahi pata

Sitwat:aise kyu bol rahe ho?

Azlan:pata nahi mom bahot tuff he

Sitwat:kya tuff hai?

Azlan:apni hi wife ko impress karna..uff mene nahi socha tha mujhe ek din aisa bhi karna padega.

Sitwat smile karti hai.

Sitwat:socha to mene bhi nahi tha ke tumhe aise dekhugi..wo bhi Azka ke liye.

Azlan:sach me kitna gussa karta tha me uspar koi mauka nahi chodta tha.aur aaj uske aage peeche ghum raha hu ke bas kisi bhi tarah uske dil me jagah bana lu

Sitwat smile karti hai.

Azlan:aapko hasi aa rahi hai apne bete ki situation par.

Sitwat:ha aa rahi hai par mujhe pura yaqeen hai mera beta meri Bahu ka dil jeet lega.

Azlan: inshaallah bas aap duaa kare

Sitwat: inshaallah

In the night

Azka apne room me hai wo saari baate yaad kar rahi hai jo kuch bhi uske aur azlan ke beach me hui azka muskura rahi hai.

Azka pov

Ye mujhe kya hota jaa raha hai kyu me unki baato ko yaad kar rahi hu..par me to hamesha se unki baato ko yaad karti thi…par aise nahi karti thi jaise ab kar rahi hu.mujhe unka aise hasna,mujhse baate karna mere paas aana kyu accha lag raha hai.me kya kar rahi hu.

tabhi azlan room me enter hota hai.

Azlan:aap soyi nahi?

Azka:bas sone hi lagi thi.

Azlan: medicine lee aapne?

Azka:jee abhi kuch der pehle hi Lee hai

Azlan:good

Both become silent. Azlaan stands there for some time and then he goes to the balcony.He is also thinking whatever happened between Azka and him today.The way Azka taking ice cream from his hand, The way she feeling jealous of Mariam's name.

Azlan:pagal ladki

Azka:kaun ?

Azlan turn hota hai aur dekhta hai azka waha khadi hai.

Azka:kis ko pagal bol rahe the aap?

Azlan:aapko

Azka:baat badal rahe hai na? Chale me nahi puchti.

Azlan kuch nahi bolata Azka uske paas aakar khadi hoti hai aur dono kuch nahi bolte bas aasmaan ki taraf dekhne lag jate hai

Azka:Mausam badlne laga hai

Azlan:hmmm.

Azka: MUBAARAK ho aapka favourite Mausam aane laga hai

Azlan:mujhe to lagta hai ab sabkuch meri pasand ka aane wala hai

Azka:kya matlab?

Azlan:matlab ye ke Allah ka khaas karam hone wala hai aisa mehsoos ho raha hai

Azka:lagta hai aapko aapki wo deal mil gayi hai

Azlan:abhi nahi bas koshish jaari hai

Azka:mil jayegi aapko.

Azlan: inshaallah

Azka:waise aapke paas sabkuch hai aisa kya hai us me ke aap itna bechain hai.

Azlan:sach kahu wo koi deal nahi hai.

Azka:phir?

Azlan:bas kuch hai!! kuch aisa jo kai saalo se mere saath tha par me usko nazar andaaz karta jaa raha tha but ab nahi ab jab zindagi ne use mere paas bhejha hai to me use is baar Jane nahi duga.

Azka:phir to mujhe bhi intzaar rahega dekhne ka

Azlan:kyu?

Azka:aisa kya hai jisse aapko …mera matlab hai Azlan saab ko bhi darr lag raha hai

Azka ye bolkar Hasne lag jati hai.Azlan kuch nahi bolta.Azka haste haste ruk jati hain

Azka:kya hua?

Azlan:kuch nahi.Aap jayada der khadi na rahe yaha Beth Jaye.

Azka:jee me bas inko vase me hi daalne aayi thi.

Azlan table pr rakhe bouquet ko dekhta hai aur phir wo bina kuch bole aasman ki taraf dekhne lag jata hai azka notice karti hai

Azka:Azlan saab kya pyaar hume itna badal deta hai ke hum Allah ki banayi Hui cheezo se bhi nafrat karne lag jate hai.

Azlan:me nafarat nahi karta par ye bouquet mujhe hamesha Shanaya ke kho Jane ka ehsaas dilate hai.shanaya ke saath ye sab bhi meri un purani yaadon me qaid ho chuke hai

Azka:to aap inko azaad kar de

Azlan turn to azka

Azlan:matlab?

Azka bouquet ko pakadti hai aur usme se flowers alag karne lag jati hai.Azlan use aisa karte hue dekh raha hai.hawaa tez chal rahi hai aur azka ke baal baar baar uske chehre par aa rahe hai.Azka saare flowers ko ek haath me pakde hue hai.aur wo baki leaf aur grass ko alag kar rahi hai.Azka azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.aur khadi hoti hai.

Azka:Ab ye bandhe hue nahi hai Azaad ho chuke hai.bikul waise hi aap bhi apni yaado se inko baandh ke na rakhe !!!! Azaad kar de inhe

Azlan azka ki taraf dekhta hai

Azka:baat nazariye ki hai azlan saab aur kuch nahi.kisi ke liye ye sajawat ki Cheez hai to kisi ke liye tohfa,jaise inke alag alag rang hai waise hi alag alag mauke hai Dene ke liye.

Azka flower ko apne haath me leti hai

Azka:kisi ke liye ye safed gulaab dosti ka rang hai to kisi ke liye ye laal mohabbat ka koi inko Khushi ke mauke par deta hai to koi gam me..jaise kabhi ye qabar par chadhaye jate hai to kabhi kisi shadi ke mauke par dulhan ki sej par.

Azka gives all those flowers to Azlaan. Azlaan takes them in his hand. His eyes are still on Azka.

Azka:azaad kar de inki buri yaadon ko aur ek baar inki khushboo ko mehsoos kar ke dekhiye

He looks at Azka and smells the flowers.

Azka:kya mehsoos kar rahe hai?

Azlan azka ko dekhkar bolta hai

Azlan:sukoon

Azka smiled and she starts collecting the leaves and grass on the table. Azlaan keeps looking at her. He comes to Azka.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:jee??

Azlan azka ko flowers deta hai.Azka wo apne haath me leti hai aur azlan ko dekhkar smile karti hai.

Azlan:inko vase me daal de kamre me bahot acche lagege.

Azka is happy to hear this and starts putting the flowers in the vase. Azlaan sits on the chair.

Azka:kaise lag rahe hai?

Azlan: bahot khubsurat

Azka:hai na?

Azka is carrying the vase when Azlaan holds her hand. Azka turns. Her hair is coming on her face.Azlan stands up and pulls the hair back from Azka's face.Azka pauses for a moment,Azlaan's touch gives her a different feeling.Azlan releases her hand and gives her a white rose

Azlan:Thank you

Azka:,.........

Azka keeps looking at Azlaan for a while, then she takes the flower from his hand and without a word she goes to the room.Azlaan keeps watching her going into the room.He feels that he is starting to have an effect on her.He starts smiling thinking about something.


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Edited by sanabmw - 3 years ago
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Hammad&Imaan (KAM)

Posted: 3 years ago

So romantic...in this one I loved azkas dialogues more...especially reg the flowers❤️

But yaar yeh hamesha azlaan ko jalaate ho...azka ko jalaane ki baari hai ab🤣

Btw because of you i dreamt of this drama without even watching...in my dream yeh drama romance ke bajai thriller tha, aur azlaan villain tha😆

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Part 13

Azka:aap dono yaha hamesha aate the?

Azlan: sometimes. Aap pehle kabhi nahi aayi?

Azka:nahi first time.me jayada bahar nahi aati jaati thi.

Azlan:kyu

Azka:Amma mujhe akele Jane nahi deti thi.me jab bhi kehti thi ke mene ghumne jana hai wo aage se bol deti thi shaadi ho jayegi na phir jaha marzi jana apne miya ke saath.aur me kahmosh ho kar planning karne lag jati thi

Azlan:kis cheez ki?

Azka:apne Honeymoon ki.

Azka flow me aakar ye boldeti hai but than she realised wo kya bol gayi.Azlan enjoy this side of azka.azka ko comfortable karne ke liye azlan kehta hai

Azlan:aur phir mene aapse shadi kar ke aapke honeymoon ke plan par pani daal diya.

Azka pehle azlan ko dekhti hai jo use ek genuine smile de raha hota hai.

Azka:bilkul aapne mere sab plans par pani pher diya.wo kya kehte hai sab khawab tod diye.

Azka muskurati hai.

Azlan:accha agar aap honeymoon par jati to kaha jati?

Azka:agar mene sach me kahi Jana hota to me Umraah karne jati ya phir HAJJ !!! Zindagi ka pehla safar apne Humsafar ke saath agar Allah ke Ghar ka ho to usse acchi koi aur baat ho hi nahi sakti.

Azlan: Inshaallah aapka ye safar bahot jaldi aayega.

Azka ye sunkar kuch nahi bolti.

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:kuch nahi.

Azlan:waise aapki fav place kaunsi hai?

Azka:apne ghar ki balcony.

Azlan:r u serious?

Azka:Ha mujhe accha lagta hai raat ko khule aasman ke neache taaro ko dekhna.

Azlan:aur kya accha lagta hai?

Azka:aap kya Janna chahte hai mere baare me?

Azlan: anything you want to tell

Azka:aise aapko apne baare me khud se batana bahot awkward hoga mere liye aap aisa aap puchte jaye me batati jaugi

Azlan:that's very interesting,but don't worry me aapse aapki date of birth ya year nahi puchne wala.

Azka burst out laughing..she said mockingly

Azka:bade reham dil hai aap ,aapki badi meharbani

Azlan smriked at her

Azlan:waise aap pehli insaan hai jo mujhe Reham dil bol rahi hai..is hisaab se reham dil to aap hui.

Azka smiled and azlan looked at her in the eyes

Azlan:aapka fav season kaunsa hai?

Azka:baarishe

Azlan: typical girl thing.kabhi roads dekhe pani se bhare hue!!! god terrible.

Azka:aur agpka?

Azlan:winter kyu ke sardiyo me raate lambi hoti hai.

Azka:jo aapko aur jayada time degi akele andhere kamre me bethne ka.

Azlan:Nahi aisi baat nahi hai sardiyo ki raate mujhe suru se pasand hai wo thandi hawaaye aur wo sun shaan raaste aur wo baadlo me chupa hua chaand.

Azka:kabhi bartan dho kar dekhe Sardi me aapke andar ka jo ye shayar hai na khatam ho jayega.

Azlan hasne lag jata hai.Azka use haste hue dekhti rahti hai.

Azka:aapse kuch puchu bura to nahi manayege?

Azlan: puche

Azka:aapko flowers kyu nahi pasand ?

Azlan kuch der rukta hai

Azlan:kyu ke wo mujhe us din ki yaad dilate hai jab mene Shanaya ko khoya tha,......me uske ghar gaya tha bouquet lekar use sorry bolne par use de hi nahi saka.aur aaj har roz uski Qabar par bouquet lekar jata hu.

Azka:isliye aapne kaha tha ke har flowers aapko acchi yaad de ye zaruri nahi

Azlan:ha ye phool mujhe ye baat yaad dilate hai ke me use bata hi nahi saka

Azka:kya?

Azlan: ke me usse kitna pyaar Karta tha.wo kabhi sun hi nahi saki mera Izhaare mohabbat.

Azka:par aap …mera matlab hai aise kaise aap ki aur Shanaya ji ki to love marriage hui thi?

Azlan:Nahi aisa nahi tha

Azka shock hoti hai

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:Par mujhe to yahi laga tha.

Azlan:Shanaya was my friend meri bahot acchi dost hum kisi REALTIONSHIP me nahi the.par ha wo hamesha se mujhse pyaar karti aayi thi.aur ye baat mere alawa sab jante the.mom ne mujhe samjhya tha.i still remembered yahi isi jagah mene usko shadi ka bola tha.

Azka:phir?

Azlan:phir kya jab samjh aaya tab tak wo meri zindagi se hamesha ke liye Jaa chuki thi.

Azka:aapke liye wo sab bahot mushkil raha hoga na?

Azlan:Shanaya ke jane baad meri zindagi ruk si gayi thi.na koi maqsad tha na koi khushi.bina maqsad ki zindagi jeene laga tha

Azka:aapne phir dusri shaadi kyu nahi ki?

Azlan Azka ke paas aakar bethta hai

Azlan:kabhi dil hi nahi kiya.mom hamesha koshish Karti thi koi na koi ladkiya mujhe kisi na kisi bahane se dikhati rahti thi aur me har baar inqaar kar deta tha.

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:kabhi khyaal hi nahi aaya dusri shadi ka.par wo kehte hai na kismat me jo hona hota hai wo hokar rehta hai.

Azka:ap kismat me mante hai?

Azlan:pehle nahi par ab yaqeen karne laga hu

Azka:ab kyu?

Azlan azka ki aakho me dekhne lag jata hai

Azlan:ab soch raha hu ke

Azka:Ke??

Azlan:mujhe bol dena chahiye

Azka:..kya?

Azlan:aapko bol dena chahiye

Azka:....

Azka does not say anything, Azlaan comes near her face and starts looking at her.He comes a little closer and Azka lower her face. Azlaan goes to her ears and said

Azlan:aapko pata hai mene aap jaisi ladki kahi nahi dekhi.

Azka ye sunkar apna face upar karti hai aur azlan ko dekhti hai.

Azlan:aap sabse alag hai.pata hai kyu?

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:because aap dunia ki pehli biwi hai jo apne hi shohar ko phir se shadi ka puch rahi hai.

Azka:,......jee???

Azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azka:aap bhi na…mujhe nahi pata tha aap gusse ke alawa mazaq bhi karte hai.

Azlan:me to bahot kuch karta hu.aapne kabhi mauka hi nahi diya.

Azka:azlan saab aap to mujhe bolne ka mauka tak nahi dete the.sara time bas ghoorte rahte the.jaise mene pata nahi kya chura liya tha aapka.

Azlan:chura to liya aapne?

Azka:mene kya churaya?

Azlan:aahmm meri ice cream.


Azka:aapko pata hai me kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi ek din aap aur me aise is tarah baate kar rahe hoge.

Azlan:iska matlab hai humara aise milna Allah ne socha hua tha.

Azka:Aur Allah jo karta hai wo sabse behtar hota hai

Azlan:matlab humari jodi upar se bankar aayi thi.

Azka becomes silent after hearing this from Azlan.Azlan smiled lightly Azka doesn't say anything she starts looking at her mobile

Azlan:Azka have you ever been in love with someone?

Azka:jee?

Azka:kabhi kisi se mohabbat hui hai?

Azlaan's life rests on this one question. He is eagerly waiting for Azka's answer.He wants to hear if there is or was someone in Azka's life.

Azka:meri mohabbat hamesha se bas ek hi thi.. UMAIR

Azlan:UMAIR

Azlan is shocked to hear this name, his life ends in an instant. He starts looking at Azka. He becomes very sad.

Azka:wo unki call aa rahi hai ek minute

Azlaan sees that Azka's phone is ringing. He feels like he is breathing again.The sorrow that was there a moment ago is gone.

Azka: Asalamualaikum jee nahi nahi aap bole nahi umair aap bataye me koi disturb nahi hui..jee jee ..accha me dekh lugi..jee..mujhe bahot acche lage.aapko to pata hai mujhe waise bhi phulo se bahot pyaar hai ,mene room me hi rakhe hai.nahi wo me bas bahar aayi Hui thi jee Azlan saab ke saath ..ha jee Allah hafiz.

Azlan sab sun raha hota hai and he knows ke umair kya baat kar raha hai aur kis baare me kar Raha hai usko bahot gussa aa raha hai.

Azlan:AZKA AAPKI TABIYAT SAHI NAHI HAI AUR AAJ SUNDAY HAI UNKO BATAO TUM FAMILY KE SAATH HO YE KOI TIME NAHI HAI KISI KI PRIVACY DISTURB KARNE KA.

Azka: wo bas bata rahe the ke unhone reports send ki hai i m sorry

Azlan khud ko normal karta hai.

Azlan:aap kyu sorry ho rahi hai..umair dr.umar ko bhi check Kara sakte tha na report.

Azka:Jee wo bas yahi bol rahe the.

Azlan:chale ghar chalte hai.

Azka ko samjh nahi aata ke azlan ko kya hua hai abhi kuch der pehle to wo sahi the.dono ghar aate hai.azka room me jati hai

Sitwat:aa gaye tum dono.

Azlan: Asalam alaikum mom aap kab aayi?

Sitwat: Walekum assalam kuch der ho gayi hai so tumne enjoy Kiya.

Azlan:jee mene to kiya aapki Bahu ka nahi pata

Sitwat:aise kyu bol rahe ho?

Azlan:pata nahi mom bahot tuff he

Sitwat:kya tuff hai?

Azlan:apni hi wife ko impress karna..uff mene nahi socha tha mujhe ek din aisa bhi karna padega.

Sitwat smile karti hai.

Sitwat:socha to mene bhi nahi tha ke tumhe aise dekhugi..wo bhi Azka ke liye.

Azlan:sach me kitna gussa karta tha me uspar koi mauka nahi chodta tha.aur aaj uske aage peeche ghum raha hu ke bas kisi bhi tarah uske dil me jagah bana lu

Sitwat smile karti hai.

Azlan:aapko hasi aa rahi hai apne bete ki situation par.

Sitwat:ha aa rahi hai par mujhe pura yaqeen hai mera beta meri Bahu ka dil jeet lega.

Azlan: inshaallah bas aap duaa kare

Sitwat: inshaallah

In the night

Azka apne room me hai wo saari baate yaad kar rahi hai jo kuch bhi uske aur azlan ke beach me hui azka muskura rahi hai.

Azka pov

Ye mujhe kya hota jaa raha hai kyu me unki baato ko yaad kar rahi hu..par me to hamesha se unki baato ko yaad karti thi…par aise nahi karti thi jaise ab kar rahi hu.mujhe unka aise hasna,mujhse baate karna mere paas aana kyu accha lag raha hai.me kya kar rahi hu.

tabhi azlan room me enter hota hai.

Azlan:aap soyi nahi?

Azka:bas sone hi lagi thi.

Azlan: medicine lee aapne?

Azka:jee abhi kuch der pehle hi Lee hai

Azlan:good

Both become silent. Azlaan stands there for some time and then he goes to the balcony.He is also thinking whatever happened between Azka and him today.The way Azka taking ice cream from his hand, The way she feeling jealous of Mariam's name.

Azlan:pagal ladki

Azka:kaun ?

Azlan turn hota hai aur dekhta hai azka waha khadi hai.

Azka:kis ko pagal bol rahe the aap?

Azlan:aapko

Azka:baat badal rahe hai na? Chale me nahi puchti.

Azlan kuch nahi bolata Azka uske paas aakar khadi hoti hai aur dono kuch nahi bolte bas aasmaan ki taraf dekhne lag jate hai

Azka:Mausam badlne laga hai

Azlan:hmmm.

Azka: MUBAARAK ho aapka favourite Mausam aane laga hai

Azlan:mujhe to lagta hai ab sabkuch meri pasand ka aane wala hai

Azka:kya matlab?

Azlan:matlab ye ke Allah ka khaas karam hone wala hai aisa mehsoos ho raha hai

Azka:lagta hai aapko aapki wo deal mil gayi hai

Azlan:abhi nahi bas koshish jaari hai

Azka:mil jayegi aapko.

Azlan: inshaallah

Azka:waise aapke paas sabkuch hai aisa kya hai us me ke aap itna bechain hai.

Azlan:sach kahu wo koi deal nahi hai.

Azka:phir?

Azlan:bas kuch hai!! kuch aisa jo kai saalo se mere saath tha par me usko nazar andaaz karta jaa raha tha but ab nahi ab jab zindagi ne use mere paas bhejha hai to me use is baar Jane nahi duga.

Azka:phir to mujhe bhi intzaar rahega dekhne ka

Azlan:kyu?

Azka:aisa kya hai jisse aapko …mera matlab hai Azlan saab ko bhi darr lag raha hai

Azka ye bolkar Hasne lag jati hai.Azlan kuch nahi bolta.Azka haste haste ruk jati hain

Azka:kya hua?

Azlan:kuch nahi.Aap jayada der khadi na rahe yaha Beth Jaye.

Azka:jee me bas inko vase me hi daalne aayi thi.

Azlan table pr rakhe bouquet ko dekhta hai aur phir wo bina kuch bole aasman ki taraf dekhne lag jata hai azka notice karti hai

Azka:Azlan saab kya pyaar hume itna badal deta hai ke hum Allah ki banayi Hui cheezo se bhi nafrat karne lag jate hai.

Azlan:me nafarat nahi karta par ye bouquet mujhe hamesha Shanaya ke kho Jane ka ehsaas dilate hai.shanaya ke saath ye sab bhi meri un purani yaadon me qaid ho chuke hai

Azka:to aap inko azaad kar de

Azlan turn to azka

Azlan:matlab?

Azka bouquet ko pakadti hai aur usme se flowers alag karne lag jati hai.Azlan use aisa karte hue dekh raha hai.hawaa tez chal rahi hai aur azka ke baal baar baar uske chehre par aa rahe hai.Azka saare flowers ko ek haath me pakde hue hai.aur wo baki leaf aur grass ko alag kar rahi hai.Azka azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.aur khadi hoti hai.

Azka:Ab ye bandhe hue nahi hai Azaad ho chuke hai.bikul waise hi aap bhi apni yaado se inko baandh ke na rakhe !!!! Azaad kar de inhe

Azlan azka ki baato ko sun raha hai


Azka:baat nazariye ki hai azlan saab aur kuch nahi.kisi ke liye ye sajawat ki Cheez hai to kisi ke liye tohfa,jaise inke alag alag rang hai waise hi alag alag mauke hai Dene ke liye..kisi ke liye ye safed gulaab dosti ka rang hai to kisi ke liye ye laal mohabbat ka koi inko Khushi ke mauke par deta hai to koi gam me..jaise kabhi ye qabar par chadhaye jate hai to kabhi kisi shadi ke mauke par dulhan ki sej par.

Azka gives all those flowers to Azlaan. Azlaan takes them in his hand. His eyes are still on Azka.

Azka:azaad kar de inki buri yaadon ko aur ek baar inki khushboo ko mehsoos kar ke dekhiye

He looks at Azka and smells the flowers.

Azka:kya mehsoos kar rahe hai?

Azlan azka ko dekhkar bolta hai

Azlan:sukoon

Azka smiled and she starts collecting the leaves and grass on the table. Azlaan keeps looking at her. He comes to Azka.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:jee??

Azlan azka ko flowers deta hai.Azka wo apne haath me leti hai aur azlan ko dekhkar smile karti hai.

Azlan:inko vase me daal de kamre me bahot acche lagege.

Azka is happy to hear this and starts putting the flowers in the vase. Azlaan sits on the chair.

Azka:kaise lag rahe hai?

Azlan: bahot khubsurat

Azka:hai na?

Azka is carrying the vase when Azlaan holds her hand. Azka turns. Her hair is coming on her face.Azlan stands up and pulls the hair back from Azka's face.Azka pauses for a moment,Azlaan's touch gives her a different feeling.Azlan releases her hand and gives her a white rose

Azlan:Thank you

Azka:,.........

Azka keeps looking at Azlaan for a while, then she takes the flower from his hand and without a word she goes to the room.Azlaan keeps watching her going into the room.He feels that he is starting to have an effect on her.He starts smiling thinking about something.


End of part 13

Do comments




It was really a heartfelt update..Loved it❤️

So Azka ne socha hua tha apne honeymoon pe kahan jayegi and obviously now Azlan will fullfil her wish❤️ It is really good that she is now opening up to him at a personal level..And having fun talks with Azlan..they like different weathers..Azka likes rains that means Saawan is also coming😆Azlan likes Winter and long long nights.. They give funny remarks to each other on their preferences😆 Azlan kahan bartan dhoyega😆

Finally Azka gets more clarity about Azlan and Shanaya's relationship and what flowers mean to him now...It's a very big deal for Azlan to tell her something he does not share with anyone but now he is telling her everything ...whatever he feels..Trust...bonding...all there❤️

Azlan ab toh kismat pe karega hi yaqeen..Azka jo mil gayi...And He is flirting with Azka...Indirectly usko sab kuch bol raha hai...Jodi Aasman se ban kar aayi hai and all...Azka ne dil chura liya hai❤️ but Azlan abhi ye toh nahi keh sakta...And sabse important question ki Has she even been in love? Umair sunke uska kya hamara dil bhi band ho jata but obviously ye kabhi nahi hoga...Azlan ki jealosuy be cute hai...umair unka moment kharab kar raha hai...And its true Azka ko impress karna tough toh hai..Azlan ko aur mehnat karni padhegi😆

Azka is thinking about him...uska bhi kaam hone laga hai..Its really deep line for me ki Mausam badal raha hai as unke dil ka badal raha hai...Azka ka kehna ki aapka favourite mausam aa raha hai...and Azlan ka kehna ki sab kuch meri pasand ka hone wala hai..so ye ek tarah se predictiion hai ki kya hone wala hai...

And the flowers se related conversation...very well written❤️..Azka jis tarah se usko samjhati hai...yar its all very good..usko uski purani yadon se bhi azaad kar rahi hai jo Azlan ko hurt karti hai,,She is his healer and sukoon❤️ And Azlan jo usko white flower deta hai for their friendship...companionship..good❤️ And Azlan ko uske face se baal hatana...Azka toh fir ab melt hui ja rahi hai..may be she does not understand it but unki relationship change ho rahi hai..She is getting more and more comfortable with him..And finally Azlan is happy that he is affecting her❤️

This update was all about them..Their feelings...his memories..now he is relieved...Azka is really a ray of hope for him...Now they know more about each other...Azka is getting so much affected by him...Well Looking forward for the next update and what happens in their life now❤️

So keep writing dear..awaiting the next update❤️ Lots of love❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago

Wonderful update..

so cute and romantic…

Loved all the Azkaan moments…

Awaiting the next update…

Cheers

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Story unki hai so unpe jayada focus kiya hai warna show me to AZKAAN bas last episodes me hi Mile hai wo bhi Itna acche se nahi.

Yes I agreed Mariam se jealous hone wala part small tha but azlan ne bas check karna tha ke wo jealous feel karti hai ke nahi..azlan not a young boy jo ye sab se enjoy kare.usko jo jan na tha wo jan liya.but aage aayega don’t worry

Please do keep writing the stories ... tag me ... have exam in Dec so quite busy ...❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: la_Reine

So romantic...in this one I loved azkas dialogues more...especially reg the flowers❤️

But yaar yeh hamesha azlaan ko jalaate ho...azka ko jalaane ki baari hai ab🤣

Btw because of you i dreamt of this drama without even watching...in my dream yeh drama romance ke bajai thriller tha, aur azlaan villain tha😆

Chalo I m happy tumko romantic lags warna romance me mera Itna accha nahi hai writing 😆flowers wala part mene bahot soch ke likha tha..❤️

Azka ka turn bhi aayega bas thoda sa wait kar lo🤣

@red omg ye to mere liye khushi ki baat hai😳

@green🤣poor Azlan yaar he is too good tumko usko villain bana diya🥺🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: kamleshmehra

It was really a heartfelt update..Loved it❤️

So Azka ne socha hua tha apne honeymoon pe kahan jayegi and obviously now Azlan will fullfil her wish❤️ It is really good that she is now opening up to him at a personal level..And having fun talks with Azlan..they like different weathers..Azka likes rains that means Saawan is also coming😆Azlan likes Winter and long long nights.. They give funny remarks to each other on their preferences😆 Azlan kahan bartan dhoyega😆

Finally Azka gets more clarity about Azlan and Shanaya's relationship and what flowers mean to him now...It's a very big deal for Azlan to tell her something he does not share with anyone but now he is telling her everything ...whatever he feels..Trust...bonding...all there❤️

Azlan ab toh kismat pe karega hi yaqeen..Azka jo mil gayi...And He is flirting with Azka...Indirectly usko sab kuch bol raha hai...Jodi Aasman se ban kar aayi hai and all...Azka ne dil chura liya hai❤️ but Azlan abhi ye toh nahi keh sakta...And sabse important question ki Has she even been in love? Umair sunke uska kya hamara dil bhi band ho jata but obviously ye kabhi nahi hoga...Azlan ki jealosuy be cute hai...umair unka moment kharab kar raha hai...And its true Azka ko impress karna tough toh hai..Azlan ko aur mehnat karni padhegi😆

Azka is thinking about him...uska bhi kaam hone laga hai..Its really deep line for me ki Mausam badal raha hai as unke dil ka badal raha hai...Azka ka kehna ki aapka favourite mausam aa raha hai...and Azlan ka kehna ki sab kuch meri pasand ka hone wala hai..so ye ek tarah se predictiion hai ki kya hone wala hai...

And the flowers se related conversation...very well written❤️..Azka jis tarah se usko samjhati hai...yar its all very good..usko uski purani yadon se bhi azaad kar rahi hai jo Azlan ko hurt karti hai,,She is his healer and sukoon❤️ And Azlan jo usko white flower deta hai for their friendship...companionship..good❤️ And Azlan ko uske face se baal hatana...Azka toh fir ab melt hui ja rahi hai..may be she does not understand it but unki relationship change ho rahi hai..She is getting more and more comfortable with him..And finally Azlan is happy that he is affecting her❤️

This update was all about them..Their feelings...his memories..now he is relieved...Azka is really a ray of hope for him...Now they know more about each other...Azka is getting so much affected by him...Well Looking forward for the next update and what happens in their life now❤️

So keep writing dear..awaiting the next update❤️ Lots of love❤️



Yes azlan ab na sirf azka ke but aone bhi arman pure karega🤣after all azka ki khusi me uski bhi khushi hai.Azkaan paas aa rahe hai and now azka knows about azlan kaisa tha and ab kaisa ho Gaya hai.usko shanaya and azlan ka relationship kaisa tha ye bhi idea ho Gaya hai😊

Mausam badal raha hai uska deep meaning wahi tha jo Tumne samjha😊i m happy u understand what I mean to say with that lines of Azkaan❤️ab wahi sab hone wala hai jo bahot pehle se likha hua tha means in dono ka saath ❤️


Flowers wala scene mera fav tha but me confused thi ke ye sabko sahi lagega ke nahi but that’s good ke ye sabko accha laga 😊ab azlan Itna affect ho raha tha kab se to azka ka bhi to banta tha na😆azlan is happy and azka samjh ke bhi samjh nahi rahi ke wo azlan ke charm me girti jaa rahi hai☺️


Thank you for ur comment update ho jayegi jaldi tumko to pata hi hai🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wonderful update..

so cute and romantic…

Loved all the Azkaan moments…

Awaiting the next update…

Cheers

Azkaan in full on romance mode but azka don’t realised yet 😊

Thank you for liking my work dear😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: shridharg

Please do keep writing the stories ... tag me ... have exam in Dec so quite busy ...❤️


I will dear and all the very best for ur exam👍🏼

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