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Hammad&Imaan (KAM)

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Pyaar ho Gaya hai azlan ko ab wo care bhi karega and ring bhi khud pehna raha hai😳abe Yaar ye Pakistan hai Afghanistan nahi 🤣tu abhi to aakar gayi hai Dekha nahi aur waise bhi azlan apne ghar ke gate se utha raha tha so it’s not a big deal

Pakistan mein maine kabhi pda nahi dekha...uk mein to sab chalta hai but Pak mein to hum public mein haath bhi nahi pakarte isi waja se😆

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Hammad&Imaan (KAM)

Posted: 3 years ago

abey mushkil se i caught up and you posted a new part🤣

btw dialogues ache hain story ke

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Hammad&Imaan (KAM)

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

Par 11 80


Part 12

Azlan pov

Azlan:Azka ki aakho me jo mujhe abhi nazar aaya kya wo sach tha ya mera wahem..? Kya me azka ke dil me apni jagah bana paya hu..ya aaj bhi me wahi hu jaha aaj se 5 saal pehle tha..ye 5 saal ki duriya me 5 dino me nahi teh kar sakta.me janta hu aur waise bhi jaisa mera behaviour tha past main ,me azka se ye expect kar hi nahi sakta ke wo mujhe…

Tabhi Kanwal aur Khalid Azka se milne aate hai.wo enter hote hai aur unko Azlan drawing room me nazar aata hai.azlan unhe dekhkar unke paas jata hai.

Azlan: Asalam alaikum Aap log aaye na.

Khalid: Walekum assalam

Kanwal bahot ajeeb sa mehsoos karti hai as usual azlan ki ye new side use still digest nahi ho rahi.

Azlan:bhabhi aaye na bethe.

Kanwal:wo Azka kaisi hai ab?

Azlan:jee Allah ka bahot sukar hai.

Kanwal:wo kamre me hai.

Azlan:aap bethe me use lekar aata hu.

Kanwal:AAP..nahi nahi .me aati hu.

Azlan door pehle knock karta hai.

Azka:aa jaye.

Azlan:aap jaye me bahar hi hu Khalid Bhai ke paas.

Kanwal again shocked hoti hai.wo room me jati hai.

Azka: ASALAM ALAIKUM bhabhi.

Kanwal: walekum assalam mashaallah aaj to bahot fresh nazar aa rahi hai.

Azka:accha bas abhi change kiya.bacche nahi aaye?

Kanwal:nahi bas me aur Khalid hai.

Azka:wo waha bahar akele bethe hai.aap chale mujhe lekar unke paas.

Kanwal:nahi wo azlan saab hai unke paas.

Azka ye sunkar khush hoti hai.

Azka:accha

Kanwal:ha wo khud mujhe bole ke me tumhre paas aa jau wo Khalid ke paas bethte hai.

Azka:chale acchi baat hai.

After sometime Azlan room me azka ko bahar lene ke liye aata hai.use Kanwal ki awaaz aati hai to wo wahi ruk jata hai.

Kanwal:Khalid bahot pareshan the Tera sunkar.wo Amma ka bhi itna hi khyaal rakhte hai.

Azka:aap bahot lucky hai bhabhi.me jab bhi aap dono ko ek saath dekhti hu dil khush ho jata hai.itna pyaar karne wala shohar naseeb walo ko milta hai.

Azlan ye sab sun raha hai.use azka ki baat me uska dard mehsoos hota hai

Kanwal:azka tu yahi hai kal se.

Azka:jee kal se yahi hu.

Kanwal:Aur azlan saab

Azka:aaahh bhabhi wo ..wo bhi.

Kanwal: kyaa tere saath ek hi kamre me?

Azka:jee

Kanwal:sote kaha hai?

Azka:bhabhi ye kaisa sawaal hai ?

Kanwal:Azka mera wo matlab nahi tha.par Azka unke liye ye koi badi baat nahi hogi par tere liye hai.

Azka:kya matlab hai is baat se?

Kanwal:azka wo to tujhe talaq dekar apni purani zindagi me wapas chale jayege Mard hai .par Tera kya..Teri zindagi bhi to hai..kal ko teri shadi honi hai.agar tere hone wale shohar ko tujh par ya tere qirdaar ko lekar Shaq hua to.

Azlan ko ye sunkar bahot bura lagta hai.wo Azka ke jawaab ka wait kar Raha hai.

Azka:bhabhi mujhe pata hai aap kya kehna chahti hai par sach to yahi hai na ke mere talaq ke baad sabki soch to yahi hogi jo aap bol rahi hai.kaun yaqeen karega ke mere aur Azlan saab ke beach koi rishta nahi tha.

Kanwal:tune kyu kiya azka ye?.kyu apni puri zindagi barbaad kar dee.wo bhi us shakhs ke liye jo ke samjh hi nahi saka ke tune kitni badi qurbani dee he.

Azka:ehsaan the bhabhi utaarne to the na.

Azlan ye sunkar bahot bura mehsoos karta hai.

Azka:chode ye sab.koi aur baat kare.

Kanwal:meri duaa hai azka tujhe ek bahot pyaar karne wala shohar mile..dekhna tujhe milega.

Azka:mujhe meri kismat par yaqeen nahi raha bhabhi.mene ab sab Allah par chod diya hai.

Azlan ko ye sab sunkar accha nahi lagta.use Azka ke dard ka ehsaas hota hai.wo dard jiski wajah wo khud hai.

Kanwal:sab accha hoga dekhna Allah ne tere naseeb me bahot si khushiya likhi hai bas wo tere darwaaze par khadi hai.

Tabhi Azlan darwaaze par knock karta hai.Azka aur kanwal dono use dekhte hai.Azka ekdum se apna face neache kar leti hai she don't want ke azlan use aise kamzor dekhe.

Azlan:Wo Khalid Bhai ne aapse milna tha.

Kanwal:jee me azka ko lekar aati hu

Azlan waha se chala jata hai but uske dil se azka aur kanwal ki baate nahi jaa rahi.Azka Kanwal ke saath bahar aati hai

Azka: Asalam alaikum Khalid Bhai

Khalid: walekum assalam Azka beta kaisi ho?

Azka:bahot behtar.

Khalid: mashaallah bas jaldi jaldi thik ho jao.

Azka:jee ek do din ki baat hai bas.

Khalid:Azlan bahot pareshan hai aapke liye.mene dekha hai iski aakho me.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai than Khalid ki taraf aur smile karti hai

Azlan:kaise nahi pareshan hu after all meri zindagi me Mom aur azka ke alawa hai kaun? Aur waise bhi as a husband ye meri duty hai ke me azka ka har tarah se khayaal rakhu.Azka is se bhi jayada deserve karti hai.

Azka ye sab sunkar nervous feel karti hai wo Kanwal ko dekhne lag jati hai.kanwal bhi ye sunkar heran hoti hai.

Khalid:bahot Khushi hui aapse milkar.me sach kahu nikaah ke time dil me darr aaya tha aapse milkar.par ab saare darr dur ho gaye. azka Allah tumhe aur Azlan dono ko bahot khushiya de.

Azlan azka ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura kar kehta hai.

Azlan:Ameen

Kanwal:chale hum ab chalte hai

Azlan:are aise kaise raat ka khana khaa kar jayiye ga

Kanwal:nahi itna sab to liya humne.bas ab ijazat de

Khalid:Azka kisi din Azlan ko lekar aana humari taraf.

Azka:jee ..

Azlan: inshallah hum bahot jald aayege.

Kanwal aur khalid dono chale jate hai.Azka waha bethi hui Azlan ko hi dekhti rahti hai.

Azlan:aapki bhabhi mashaallah se bahot khush hai apni nayi zindagi me.

Azka:jee Allah ka bahot shukar hai.khalid bhai bahot acche hai.Bhabhi pehle dusri shadi ke liye mana kar rahi thi par Amma ne bilkul sahi faisla liya tha bhabhi ke liye.

Azlan:ha zindagi ke kuch faisle hume pehle galat lagte hai par kuch waqt ke baad hume ehsaas hota hai ke wo humare liye kitne sahi hai.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo kuch sochne lag jati hai

Azlan:Azka aap bore to nahi ho rahi.

Azka:nahi kyu?

Azlan:kyu ke me bore ho Raha hu aap baat hi nahi kar rahi

Azka:sorry me bas kuch nahi aise hi kuch soch rahi thi.

Azlan:kya ?

Azka:kuch nahi.

Azlan kuch nahi bolta wo janta hai ke azka nahi batayegi.

Azlan:chale aaj lunch bahar karte hai.

Azka:hum....

Azlan:ha kyu ?

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha aapki mom aa jaye phir unko bhi saath.

Azlan:unko bahar ka khana abhi allowed nahi hai doctor AZKA AZLAN AHAMAD.

Azlan se ye sunkar Azka use dekhne lag jati hai.but azlan bilkul bhi hesitate nahi hai ye bolkar.

Azlan:ab chale??

Azka node

Azlan:come

Azlan use apna haath deta hai aur phir Azka ko waist se pakad ke chalne lagta hai Azka thoda sa uncomfortable ho rahi hai b/c aaj se pehle kisi ne use aise nahi pakada tha azlan notice this aur wo usse baate karne lag jata hai.

Azlan:aapki favourite ice cream kaunsi hai?

Azka: favourite aise koi bhi nahi hai par ha mujhe PISTA flavour nahi pasand.

Azlan:kyu ?

Azka:bas nahi pasand.

Azlan:accha accha me samjh gaya bas nahi pasand.

Azlan muskurata hai aur azka bhi

Azka:aapne mom ko bata diya ke hum ghar nahi he.

Azlan:nahi kyu?

Azka: nahi wo aise hi mujhe aadat hai suru se kabhi bhi bahar jati thi to Amma ko batakar jana

Azlan:don't worry guard hai na wo bata dega..aur waise bhi aap mere saath hai so wo kyu pareshan hogi.

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Azlan Azka dono lunch kar rahe hai.Azlan baar baar azka ki taraf dekh raha hai but azka ka face neache hai.

Azlan:Azka can I ask u something?

Azka:jee puche.

Azlan:me aise aapko achanak yaha le aaya aapko bura to nahi laga?

Azka:aap ye sawaal kyu kar rahe hai?

Azlan:i mean to say kahi aisa..i mean.mera aise aapko lunch par Lana pasand na aaya ho

Azka:Azlan saab mere aur aapke beach aajtak jitni bhi mulaqate hui hai us me ,me kai baar aappar gussa Hui hu..naraaz Hui hu ..sharminda Hui hu par uncomfortable kabhi nahi hui.

Azlan:isse ye pata chal raha hai ke aap siwaay khushi ke sabkuch hui hai.


Azlan sad si smile deta hai

Azka:aapko pata hai me jab kabhi aapki personality ko lekar sochti hu to aap mujhe har baar alag nazar aate hai

Azlan:kya matlab me samjha nahi?

Azka:wo ye ke aap ka kuch pata nahi chalta aap kabhi bina baat ke gussa kar jate the to agale hi pal zarurat se jayada caring.

Azlan:dimaag jo kharaab tha

Azka hasti hai.

Azlan:to aapko lagta hai me unpredictable hu?

Azka:me ye kaise bata sakti me aapko janti hi kitna hu.

Azlan ek sec ke liye rukta hai and than azka ki taraf bend hota hai aur uski aakho me dekhkar bolta hai

Azlan:To aap mujhe jaane na kisne roka hai?

Azka ye sunkar use dekhne lag jati hai.aur azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:kuch nahi aap aise khush Raha kare acche lagte hai.

Azlan:kisko aapko?

Azka:Mariam …..

Azlan confused ho jata hai

Azlan:kaun Mariam?

Azka:wo aunty jo ghar aayi thi mera rishta lekar

Azlan:WO HARRIS Ki mom

Azka:AAHISTAA..….peeche na dekhiyega wo yahi dekh rahi hai.

azlan:me kyu dekhuga usko?

Azka:par wo aapko hi dekh rahi hai seriously

Azka hasti hai ye bolkar aur azlan usko ghoorne lagta hai.

Mariam:Hey azka kaisi ho aap?

Azka: Asalam alaikum me thik aap kaisi hai?

Mariam:sab thik hai aap log bhi lunch karne aye hai.

Azka:jee

Mariam:well us din jo kuch bhi hua i m really really sorry par sach me hume nahi pata tha.

Azlan:it's ok misunderstanding thi aap logo ki clear kar dee mene

Mariam:aap ko tab bahot gussa aa gaya tha.

Azlan: ofcourse meri biwi ke liye koi rishta lekar aayega to me uska ISTAQBAAL to nahi karuga.

Azka Azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai,aur Mariam ko bhi.

Mariam:ok than have a nice day Allah hafiz.

Azka: Allah hafiz.

Mariam waha se chali jati hai.

Azka:waise aap rude hue bina bhi bat kar sakte the.

Azlan:R U serious ?

Azka:wo aapse kitne pyaar se baat kar rahi thi.

Azlan:Aur aapko usse koi problem nahi hui.

Azka:mujhe kyu problem hogi?

Azlan kuch der ke liye azka ko dekhta rahta hai.Azka pehle kuch nahi bolti but phir Azlan ka aise dekhte rahne se wo apni aakhe jhuka leti hai.Azlan still use dekh raha hai aur phir wo Mariam ko awaaz deta hai.

Azlan:Mariam

Azka Apna face upar kar ke azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.Azlan Azka ko dekhte hue apni chair se uthta hai aur Mariam ke paas jata hai.azka wahi bethi hui hai.Azlan Mariam se baate kar raha hai aur uska dyan azka par hi hai.Azka ko distance hone ki wajah se pata nahi chal raha ke wo kya baat kar rahe.

Azlan:aapki job ka kya bana?.

Mariam:wo bas Interviews diye hai ek do jagah but kuch samjh nahi aa raha.

Azlan:good all the best.

Azlan smile karta hai and Mariam bhi

Azlan:koi bhi kaam ho aap batana

Mariam: Awww thank you so much Azlan.

Azka dekh rahi hai ke Azlan smile karte hue baat kar raha hai.wo unki side nahi dekhna chahti but phir bhi kuch kuch der baad wo wahi dekh rahi hai.azlan notice this and he smirk

Azlan:ok take care

Wo waha se wapas aa jata hai aur Aise behave karta hai jaise wo bahot khush hai

Azka:kya hua?

Azlan:nothing u r right Mariam bahot sweet hai.me aise hi rude baat kar raha tha.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur chupchaap khana khane lag jati hai.Azlan azka ko aise dekhkar enjoy karta hai.

After lunch both are in car Azka notice karti hai ke Azlan ghar ki taraf nahi jaa raha

Azka:hum ghar jaa rahe hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:bore ho gayi hai mere saath

Azka:aisi baat nahi hai.

Azka window ki taraf dekhne lag jati hai.azlan samjh jata hai ke wo baat nahi karna chahti.after a minute

Azka:aap Mariam se kya baat kar rahe the?

Azlan(with smile):as kuch khaas nahi kyu?

Azka:nahi aise hi bas.

Azlan:aapko mera usse baat karna accha nahi laga?

Azka:nahi to aisa nahi hai.mujhe kyu bura lagega aap jisse marzi baat kare.

Azlan:ha wahi to aapko kyu problem hogi

Azka:matlab?

Azlan:matlab phir kabhi!!! abhi mene ice cream khani hai

Azlan stop the car

Azlan:chale aaye.

Azka:mujhe bhi aana hai?

Azlan:haa to kya me akela ice cream khata hua accha laguga.

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha ke aap jo marzi le aaye.

Azlan:aur meri pasand aapko acchi nahi lagi to

Azka:koi baat nahi me adjust kar lugi

Azlan:jaise abhi kar rahi hai.

Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai.Azlan kuch nahi bolta aur chala jata hai

After sometime

Azlan:here u go me Chocolate Chip for u and brownie with coffee and vannila for me.

Azlan azka ko dono icecream deta hai aur drive karne lag jata hai.

Azka:aap kahi gaadi rok de na, drive karte hue ice cream kaise khayege?

Azlan:kyu aap hai na aap khila de apne haatho se

Azka ye sunkar azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai with wide eyes Azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:relax me mazaq kar raha tha.bas kuch der meri ice cream pakad to sakti hai na.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur azlan drive karne lag jata hai.after sometime azlan gaadi rokta hai aur azka ko waha lekar aata hai jaha usne Shanaya ko shaadi ka bola tha

Azka:ye kaunsi jagah hai?

Azlan:hum hamesha yaha aaya karte the

Azka:Hum???

Azlan:Shanaya aur me.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo dekhti hai ke azlan kuch soch raha hai.wo samjh nahi paati wo kya soch raha hai.sayad wo udas hai ya phir kuch aur baat hai.wo janna chahti hai ke azlan kya soch raha hai

Azlan:aapko koi problem to nahi hogi na .i mean bas thodi si walk hai

Azka:aap hai na saath phir kaisi problem

Azlan ye sunkar azka ki aakho me dekhne lag jata hai.he feel happy.azlan azka ke saath us jagah aata hai aur azka ko bithata hai.dono ice cream khaa rahe hai.

Azlan:ice cream kaisi lagi..?

Azka:bahot acchi.aapko ye pasand hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:par aapne to kaha tha ke aapko jo pasand hai wo khilayege.

Azlan:ha kaha tha but mujhe laga aapko pasand na aayi to.i don't want ke aap mere saath adjust kare.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.

Azka:aur aisa kyu laga aapko?

Azlan:pata nahi may be aapko meri choice na pasand aati. mujhe laga aap mere saath comfortable nahi hai

Azka:aisa aapko isliye laga kyu ke me ice cream parlor nahi aayi ?

Azlan kuch nahi bolta azka use dekhkar smile karti hai.

Azka:agar me aapke saath comfortable nahi hoti to yaha bhi nahi aati.jab ke yaha dur dur tak hum dono ke alawa koi nahi hai.mujhe bas jayada logo me Jane ki aadat nahi hai mujhe nahi pasand sab mujhe dekhe aur...

Azka ruk jati hai.

Azlan:aur ???

Azka:aap mujhe aise haath pakad kar le jate to log aur jayada dekhne lag jate.

Azlan hasne lag jata hai.

Azlan: seriously Azka...aap is wajah se nahi aayi.aap mujhe bol sakti thi.

Azka:mujhe Darr laga pata nahi aap kya sochte

Azlan:aapke darr ki wajah se aapne itni acchi ice cream khane ka chance Gawaa diya.

Azlan phir se hasne lag jata hai azka use kuch der dekhti rahti hai.aur phir wo uske haath se uski ice cream le leti hai.

Azka:jee nahi me abhi bhi khaa sakti hu.ye dekhe

Azka azlan ki ice cream taste karti hai.azlan ne socha nahi tha ke azka aise uski ice cream taste karegi.he was surprised plus happy.

Azka:hhmmmmm ye to bahot tasty hai.chale aap ye saari mujhe de de.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:kya…ap ye meri wali lele.

Azlan happily take it her ice cream aur wo khane lagta hai.wo soch raha hai ke usne kuch to azka ke dil me jagah banayi hai.

End of part 12

Do comments

This part was full of AzKaan..i loved their convo and Azlaans dialogues especially

Hamesha bechare azlaan ko jalna parta hai...finally we get to see him making azka jealous😆 but itna khaas maza nahi aaya...i want to see her feeling more jealous😛

and finally inn dono mein frankness aana shuru hui hai...azka is also opening up slowly

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Part 1 51

Part 2 52

Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

Par 11 80


Part 12

Azlan pov

Azlan:Azka ki aakho me jo mujhe abhi nazar aaya kya wo sach tha ya mera wahem..? Kya me azka ke dil me apni jagah bana paya hu..ya aaj bhi me wahi hu jaha aaj se 5 saal pehle tha..ye 5 saal ki duriya me 5 dino me nahi teh kar sakta.me janta hu aur waise bhi jaisa mera behaviour tha past main ,me azka se ye expect kar hi nahi sakta ke wo mujhe…

Tabhi Kanwal aur Khalid Azka se milne aate hai.wo enter hote hai aur unko Azlan drawing room me nazar aata hai.azlan unhe dekhkar unke paas jata hai.

Azlan: Asalam alaikum Aap log aaye na.

Khalid: Walekum assalam

Kanwal bahot ajeeb sa mehsoos karti hai as usual azlan ki ye new side use still digest nahi ho rahi.

Azlan:bhabhi aaye na bethe.

Kanwal:wo Azka kaisi hai ab?

Azlan:jee Allah ka bahot sukar hai.

Kanwal:wo kamre me hai.

Azlan:aap bethe me use lekar aata hu.

Kanwal:AAP..nahi nahi .me aati hu.

Azlan door pehle knock karta hai.

Azka:aa jaye.

Azlan:aap jaye me bahar hi hu Khalid Bhai ke paas.

Kanwal again shocked hoti hai.wo room me jati hai.

Azka: ASALAM ALAIKUM bhabhi.

Kanwal: walekum assalam mashaallah aaj to bahot fresh nazar aa rahi hai.

Azka:accha bas abhi change kiya.bacche nahi aaye?

Kanwal:nahi bas me aur Khalid hai.

Azka:wo waha bahar akele bethe hai.aap chale mujhe lekar unke paas.

Kanwal:nahi wo azlan saab hai unke paas.

Azka ye sunkar khush hoti hai.

Azka:accha

Kanwal:ha wo khud mujhe bole ke me tumhre paas aa jau wo Khalid ke paas bethte hai.

Azka:chale acchi baat hai.

After sometime Azlan room me azka ko bahar lene ke liye aata hai.use Kanwal ki awaaz aati hai to wo wahi ruk jata hai.

Kanwal:Khalid bahot pareshan the Tera sunkar.wo Amma ka bhi itna hi khyaal rakhte hai.

Azka:aap bahot lucky hai bhabhi.me jab bhi aap dono ko ek saath dekhti hu dil khush ho jata hai.itna pyaar karne wala shohar naseeb walo ko milta hai.

Azlan ye sab sun raha hai.use azka ki baat me uska dard mehsoos hota hai

Kanwal:azka tu yahi hai kal se.

Azka:jee kal se yahi hu.

Kanwal:Aur azlan saab

Azka:aaahh bhabhi wo ..wo bhi.

Kanwal: kyaa tere saath ek hi kamre me?

Azka:jee

Kanwal:sote kaha hai?

Azka:bhabhi ye kaisa sawaal hai ?

Kanwal:Azka mera wo matlab nahi tha.par Azka unke liye ye koi badi baat nahi hogi par tere liye hai.

Azka:kya matlab hai is baat se?

Kanwal:azka wo to tujhe talaq dekar apni purani zindagi me wapas chale jayege Mard hai .par Tera kya..Teri zindagi bhi to hai..kal ko teri shadi honi hai.agar tere hone wale shohar ko tujh par ya tere qirdaar ko lekar Shaq hua to.

Azlan ko ye sunkar bahot bura lagta hai.wo Azka ke jawaab ka wait kar Raha hai.

Azka:bhabhi mujhe pata hai aap kya kehna chahti hai par sach to yahi hai na ke mere talaq ke baad sabki soch to yahi hogi jo aap bol rahi hai.kaun yaqeen karega ke mere aur Azlan saab ke beach koi rishta nahi tha.

Kanwal:tune kyu kiya azka ye?.kyu apni puri zindagi barbaad kar dee.wo bhi us shakhs ke liye jo ke samjh hi nahi saka ke tune kitni badi qurbani dee he.

Azka:ehsaan the bhabhi utaarne to the na.

Azlan ye sunkar bahot bura mehsoos karta hai.

Azka:chode ye sab.koi aur baat kare.

Kanwal:meri duaa hai azka tujhe ek bahot pyaar karne wala shohar mile..dekhna tujhe milega.

Azka:mujhe meri kismat par yaqeen nahi raha bhabhi.mene ab sab Allah par chod diya hai.

Azlan ko ye sab sunkar accha nahi lagta.use Azka ke dard ka ehsaas hota hai.wo dard jiski wajah wo khud hai.

Kanwal:sab accha hoga dekhna Allah ne tere naseeb me bahot si khushiya likhi hai bas wo tere darwaaze par khadi hai.

Tabhi Azlan darwaaze par knock karta hai.Azka aur kanwal dono use dekhte hai.Azka ekdum se apna face neache kar leti hai she don't want ke azlan use aise kamzor dekhe.

Azlan:Wo Khalid Bhai ne aapse milna tha.

Kanwal:jee me azka ko lekar aati hu

Azlan waha se chala jata hai but uske dil se azka aur kanwal ki baate nahi jaa rahi.Azka Kanwal ke saath bahar aati hai

Azka: Asalam alaikum Khalid Bhai

Khalid: walekum assalam Azka beta kaisi ho?

Azka:bahot behtar.

Khalid: mashaallah bas jaldi jaldi thik ho jao.

Azka:jee ek do din ki baat hai bas.

Khalid:Azlan bahot pareshan hai aapke liye.mene dekha hai iski aakho me.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai than Khalid ki taraf aur smile karti hai

Azlan:kaise nahi pareshan hu after all meri zindagi me Mom aur azka ke alawa hai kaun? Aur waise bhi as a husband ye meri duty hai ke me azka ka har tarah se khayaal rakhu.Azka is se bhi jayada deserve karti hai.

Azka ye sab sunkar nervous feel karti hai wo Kanwal ko dekhne lag jati hai.kanwal bhi ye sunkar heran hoti hai.

Khalid:bahot Khushi hui aapse milkar.me sach kahu nikaah ke time dil me darr aaya tha aapse milkar.par ab saare darr dur ho gaye. azka Allah tumhe aur Azlan dono ko bahot khushiya de.

Azlan azka ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura kar kehta hai.

Azlan:Ameen

Kanwal:chale hum ab chalte hai

Azlan:are aise kaise raat ka khana khaa kar jayiye ga

Kanwal:nahi itna sab to liya humne.bas ab ijazat de

Khalid:Azka kisi din Azlan ko lekar aana humari taraf.

Azka:jee ..

Azlan: inshallah hum bahot jald aayege.

Kanwal aur khalid dono chale jate hai.Azka waha bethi hui Azlan ko hi dekhti rahti hai.

Azlan:aapki bhabhi mashaallah se bahot khush hai apni nayi zindagi me.

Azka:jee Allah ka bahot shukar hai.khalid bhai bahot acche hai.Bhabhi pehle dusri shadi ke liye mana kar rahi thi par Amma ne bilkul sahi faisla liya tha bhabhi ke liye.

Azlan:ha zindagi ke kuch faisle hume pehle galat lagte hai par kuch waqt ke baad hume ehsaas hota hai ke wo humare liye kitne sahi hai.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo kuch sochne lag jati hai

Azlan:Azka aap bore to nahi ho rahi.

Azka:nahi kyu?

Azlan:kyu ke me bore ho Raha hu aap baat hi nahi kar rahi

Azka:sorry me bas kuch nahi aise hi kuch soch rahi thi.

Azlan:kya ?

Azka:kuch nahi.

Azlan kuch nahi bolta wo janta hai ke azka nahi batayegi.

Azlan:chale aaj lunch bahar karte hai.

Azka:hum....

Azlan:ha kyu ?

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha aapki mom aa jaye phir unko bhi saath.

Azlan:unko bahar ka khana abhi allowed nahi hai doctor AZKA AZLAN AHAMAD.

Azlan se ye sunkar Azka use dekhne lag jati hai.but azlan bilkul bhi hesitate nahi hai ye bolkar.

Azlan:ab chale??

Azka node

Azlan:come

Azlan use apna haath deta hai aur phir Azka ko waist se pakad ke chalne lagta hai Azka thoda sa uncomfortable ho rahi hai b/c aaj se pehle kisi ne use aise nahi pakada tha azlan notice this aur wo usse baate karne lag jata hai.

Azlan:aapki favourite ice cream kaunsi hai?

Azka: favourite aise koi bhi nahi hai par ha mujhe PISTA flavour nahi pasand.

Azlan:kyu ?

Azka:bas nahi pasand.

Azlan:accha accha me samjh gaya bas nahi pasand.

Azlan muskurata hai aur azka bhi

Azka:aapne mom ko bata diya ke hum ghar nahi he.

Azlan:nahi kyu?

Azka: nahi wo aise hi mujhe aadat hai suru se kabhi bhi bahar jati thi to Amma ko batakar jana

Azlan:don't worry guard hai na wo bata dega..aur waise bhi aap mere saath hai so wo kyu pareshan hogi.

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Azlan Azka dono lunch kar rahe hai.Azlan baar baar azka ki taraf dekh raha hai but azka ka face neache hai.

Azlan:Azka can I ask u something?

Azka:jee puche.

Azlan:me aise aapko achanak yaha le aaya aapko bura to nahi laga?

Azka:aap ye sawaal kyu kar rahe hai?

Azlan:i mean to say kahi aisa..i mean.mera aise aapko lunch par Lana pasand na aaya ho

Azka:Azlan saab mere aur aapke beach aajtak jitni bhi mulaqate hui hai us me ,me kai baar aappar gussa Hui hu..naraaz Hui hu ..sharminda Hui hu par uncomfortable kabhi nahi hui.

Azlan:isse ye pata chal raha hai ke aap siwaay khushi ke sabkuch hui hai.


Azlan sad si smile deta hai

Azka:aapko pata hai me jab kabhi aapki personality ko lekar sochti hu to aap mujhe har baar alag nazar aate hai

Azlan:kya matlab me samjha nahi?

Azka:wo ye ke aap ka kuch pata nahi chalta aap kabhi bina baat ke gussa kar jate the to agale hi pal zarurat se jayada caring.

Azlan:dimaag jo kharaab tha

Azka hasti hai.

Azlan:to aapko lagta hai me unpredictable hu?

Azka:me ye kaise bata sakti me aapko janti hi kitna hu.

Azlan ek sec ke liye rukta hai and than azka ki taraf bend hota hai aur uski aakho me dekhkar bolta hai

Azlan:To aap mujhe jaane na kisne roka hai?

Azka ye sunkar use dekhne lag jati hai.aur azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:kuch nahi aap aise khush Raha kare acche lagte hai.

Azlan:kisko aapko?

Azka:Mariam …..

Azlan confused ho jata hai

Azlan:kaun Mariam?

Azka:wo aunty jo ghar aayi thi mera rishta lekar

Azlan:WO HARRIS Ki mom

Azka:AAHISTAA..….peeche na dekhiyega wo yahi dekh rahi hai.

azlan:me kyu dekhuga usko?

Azka:par wo aapko hi dekh rahi hai seriously

Azka hasti hai ye bolkar aur azlan usko ghoorne lagta hai.

Mariam:Hey azka kaisi ho aap?

Azka: Asalam alaikum me thik aap kaisi hai?

Mariam:sab thik hai aap log bhi lunch karne aye hai.

Azka:jee

Mariam:well us din jo kuch bhi hua i m really really sorry par sach me hume nahi pata tha.

Azlan:it's ok misunderstanding thi aap logo ki clear kar dee mene

Mariam:aap ko tab bahot gussa aa gaya tha.

Azlan: ofcourse meri biwi ke liye koi rishta lekar aayega to me uska ISTAQBAAL to nahi karuga.

Azka Azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai,aur Mariam ko bhi.

Mariam:ok than have a nice day Allah hafiz.

Azka: Allah hafiz.

Mariam waha se chali jati hai.

Azka:waise aap rude hue bina bhi bat kar sakte the.

Azlan:R U serious ?

Azka:wo aapse kitne pyaar se baat kar rahi thi.

Azlan:Aur aapko usse koi problem nahi hui.

Azka:mujhe kyu problem hogi?

Azlan kuch der ke liye azka ko dekhta rahta hai.Azka pehle kuch nahi bolti but phir Azlan ka aise dekhte rahne se wo apni aakhe jhuka leti hai.Azlan still use dekh raha hai aur phir wo Mariam ko awaaz deta hai.

Azlan:Mariam

Azka Apna face upar kar ke azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.Azlan Azka ko dekhte hue apni chair se uthta hai aur Mariam ke paas jata hai.azka wahi bethi hui hai.Azlan Mariam se baate kar raha hai aur uska dyan azka par hi hai.Azka ko distance hone ki wajah se pata nahi chal raha ke wo kya baat kar rahe.

Azlan:aapki job ka kya bana?.

Mariam:wo bas Interviews diye hai ek do jagah but kuch samjh nahi aa raha.

Azlan:good all the best.

Azlan smile karta hai and Mariam bhi

Azlan:koi bhi kaam ho aap batana

Mariam: Awww thank you so much Azlan.

Azka dekh rahi hai ke Azlan smile karte hue baat kar raha hai.wo unki side nahi dekhna chahti but phir bhi kuch kuch der baad wo wahi dekh rahi hai.azlan notice this and he smirk

Azlan:ok take care

Wo waha se wapas aa jata hai aur Aise behave karta hai jaise wo bahot khush hai

Azka:kya hua?

Azlan:nothing u r right Mariam bahot sweet hai.me aise hi rude baat kar raha tha.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur chupchaap khana khane lag jati hai.Azlan azka ko aise dekhkar enjoy karta hai.

After lunch both are in car Azka notice karti hai ke Azlan ghar ki taraf nahi jaa raha

Azka:hum ghar jaa rahe hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:bore ho gayi hai mere saath

Azka:aisi baat nahi hai.

Azka window ki taraf dekhne lag jati hai.azlan samjh jata hai ke wo baat nahi karna chahti.after a minute

Azka:aap Mariam se kya baat kar rahe the?

Azlan(with smile):as kuch khaas nahi kyu?

Azka:nahi aise hi bas.

Azlan:aapko mera usse baat karna accha nahi laga?

Azka:nahi to aisa nahi hai.mujhe kyu bura lagega aap jisse marzi baat kare.

Azlan:ha wahi to aapko kyu problem hogi

Azka:matlab?

Azlan:matlab phir kabhi!!! abhi mene ice cream khani hai

Azlan stop the car

Azlan:chale aaye.

Azka:mujhe bhi aana hai?

Azlan:haa to kya me akela ice cream khata hua accha laguga.

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha ke aap jo marzi le aaye.

Azlan:aur meri pasand aapko acchi nahi lagi to

Azka:koi baat nahi me adjust kar lugi

Azlan:jaise abhi kar rahi hai.

Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai.Azlan kuch nahi bolta aur chala jata hai

After sometime

Azlan:here u go me Chocolate Chip for u and brownie with coffee and vannila for me.

Azlan azka ko dono icecream deta hai aur drive karne lag jata hai.

Azka:aap kahi gaadi rok de na, drive karte hue ice cream kaise khayege?

Azlan:kyu aap hai na aap khila de apne haatho se

Azka ye sunkar azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai with wide eyes Azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:relax me mazaq kar raha tha.bas kuch der meri ice cream pakad to sakti hai na.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur azlan drive karne lag jata hai.after sometime azlan gaadi rokta hai aur azka ko waha lekar aata hai jaha usne Shanaya ko shaadi ka bola tha

Azka:ye kaunsi jagah hai?

Azlan:hum hamesha yaha aaya karte the

Azka:Hum???

Azlan:Shanaya aur me.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo dekhti hai ke azlan kuch soch raha hai.wo samjh nahi paati wo kya soch raha hai.sayad wo udas hai ya phir kuch aur baat hai.wo janna chahti hai ke azlan kya soch raha hai

Azlan:aapko koi problem to nahi hogi na .i mean bas thodi si walk hai

Azka:aap hai na saath phir kaisi problem

Azlan ye sunkar azka ki aakho me dekhne lag jata hai.he feel happy.azlan azka ke saath us jagah aata hai aur azka ko bithata hai.dono ice cream khaa rahe hai.

Azlan:ice cream kaisi lagi..?

Azka:bahot acchi.aapko ye pasand hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:par aapne to kaha tha ke aapko jo pasand hai wo khilayege.

Azlan:ha kaha tha but mujhe laga aapko pasand na aayi to.i don't want ke aap mere saath adjust kare.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.

Azka:aur aisa kyu laga aapko?

Azlan:pata nahi may be aapko meri choice na pasand aati. mujhe laga aap mere saath comfortable nahi hai

Azka:aisa aapko isliye laga kyu ke me ice cream parlor nahi aayi ?

Azlan kuch nahi bolta azka use dekhkar smile karti hai.

Azka:agar me aapke saath comfortable nahi hoti to yaha bhi nahi aati.jab ke yaha dur dur tak hum dono ke alawa koi nahi hai.mujhe bas jayada logo me Jane ki aadat nahi hai mujhe nahi pasand sab mujhe dekhe aur...

Azka ruk jati hai.

Azlan:aur ???

Azka:aap mujhe aise haath pakad kar le jate to log aur jayada dekhne lag jate.

Azlan hasne lag jata hai.

Azlan: seriously Azka...aap is wajah se nahi aayi.aap mujhe bol sakti thi.

Azka:mujhe Darr laga pata nahi aap kya sochte

Azlan:aapke darr ki wajah se aapne itni acchi ice cream khane ka chance Gawaa diya.

Azlan phir se hasne lag jata hai azka use kuch der dekhti rahti hai.aur phir wo uske haath se uski ice cream le leti hai.

Azka:jee nahi me abhi bhi khaa sakti hu.ye dekhe

Azka azlan ki ice cream taste karti hai.azlan ne socha nahi tha ke azka aise uski ice cream taste karegi.he was surprised plus happy.

Azka:hhmmmmm ye to bahot tasty hai.chale aap ye saari mujhe de de.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:kya…ap ye meri wali lele.

Azlan happily take it her ice cream aur wo khane lagta hai.wo soch raha hai ke usne kuch to azka ke dil me jagah banayi hai.

End of part 12

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Part 1 51

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Part 3 55

Part 4 63

Part 5 69

Part 6 72

Part 7 75

Part 8 77

Part 9 78

Part 10 79

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Part 12

Azlan pov

Azlan:Azka ki aakho me jo mujhe abhi nazar aaya kya wo sach tha ya mera wahem..? Kya me azka ke dil me apni jagah bana paya hu..ya aaj bhi me wahi hu jaha aaj se 5 saal pehle tha..ye 5 saal ki duriya me 5 dino me nahi teh kar sakta.me janta hu aur waise bhi jaisa mera behaviour tha past main ,me azka se ye expect kar hi nahi sakta ke wo mujhe…

Tabhi Kanwal aur Khalid Azka se milne aate hai.wo enter hote hai aur unko Azlan drawing room me nazar aata hai.azlan unhe dekhkar unke paas jata hai.

Azlan: Asalam alaikum Aap log aaye na.

Khalid: Walekum assalam

Kanwal bahot ajeeb sa mehsoos karti hai as usual azlan ki ye new side use still digest nahi ho rahi.

Azlan:bhabhi aaye na bethe.

Kanwal:wo Azka kaisi hai ab?

Azlan:jee Allah ka bahot sukar hai.

Kanwal:wo kamre me hai.

Azlan:aap bethe me use lekar aata hu.

Kanwal:AAP..nahi nahi .me aati hu.

Azlan door pehle knock karta hai.

Azka:aa jaye.

Azlan:aap jaye me bahar hi hu Khalid Bhai ke paas.

Kanwal again shocked hoti hai.wo room me jati hai.

Azka: ASALAM ALAIKUM bhabhi.

Kanwal: walekum assalam mashaallah aaj to bahot fresh nazar aa rahi hai.

Azka:accha bas abhi change kiya.bacche nahi aaye?

Kanwal:nahi bas me aur Khalid hai.

Azka:wo waha bahar akele bethe hai.aap chale mujhe lekar unke paas.

Kanwal:nahi wo azlan saab hai unke paas.

Azka ye sunkar khush hoti hai.

Azka:accha

Kanwal:ha wo khud mujhe bole ke me tumhre paas aa jau wo Khalid ke paas bethte hai.

Azka:chale acchi baat hai.

After sometime Azlan room me azka ko bahar lene ke liye aata hai.use Kanwal ki awaaz aati hai to wo wahi ruk jata hai.

Kanwal:Khalid bahot pareshan the Tera sunkar.wo Amma ka bhi itna hi khyaal rakhte hai.

Azka:aap bahot lucky hai bhabhi.me jab bhi aap dono ko ek saath dekhti hu dil khush ho jata hai.itna pyaar karne wala shohar naseeb walo ko milta hai.

Azlan ye sab sun raha hai.use azka ki baat me uska dard mehsoos hota hai

Kanwal:azka tu yahi hai kal se.

Azka:jee kal se yahi hu.

Kanwal:Aur azlan saab

Azka:aaahh bhabhi wo ..wo bhi.

Kanwal: kyaa tere saath ek hi kamre me?

Azka:jee

Kanwal:sote kaha hai?

Azka:bhabhi ye kaisa sawaal hai ?

Kanwal:Azka mera wo matlab nahi tha.par Azka unke liye ye koi badi baat nahi hogi par tere liye hai.

Azka:kya matlab hai is baat se?

Kanwal:azka wo to tujhe talaq dekar apni purani zindagi me wapas chale jayege Mard hai .par Tera kya..Teri zindagi bhi to hai..kal ko teri shadi honi hai.agar tere hone wale shohar ko tujh par ya tere qirdaar ko lekar Shaq hua to.

Azlan ko ye sunkar bahot bura lagta hai.wo Azka ke jawaab ka wait kar Raha hai.

Azka:bhabhi mujhe pata hai aap kya kehna chahti hai par sach to yahi hai na ke mere talaq ke baad sabki soch to yahi hogi jo aap bol rahi hai.kaun yaqeen karega ke mere aur Azlan saab ke beach koi rishta nahi tha.

Kanwal:tune kyu kiya azka ye?.kyu apni puri zindagi barbaad kar dee.wo bhi us shakhs ke liye jo ke samjh hi nahi saka ke tune kitni badi qurbani dee he.

Azka:ehsaan the bhabhi utaarne to the na.

Azlan ye sunkar bahot bura mehsoos karta hai.

Azka:chode ye sab.koi aur baat kare.

Kanwal:meri duaa hai azka tujhe ek bahot pyaar karne wala shohar mile..dekhna tujhe milega.

Azka:mujhe meri kismat par yaqeen nahi raha bhabhi.mene ab sab Allah par chod diya hai.

Azlan ko ye sab sunkar accha nahi lagta.use Azka ke dard ka ehsaas hota hai.wo dard jiski wajah wo khud hai.

Kanwal:sab accha hoga dekhna Allah ne tere naseeb me bahot si khushiya likhi hai bas wo tere darwaaze par khadi hai.

Tabhi Azlan darwaaze par knock karta hai.Azka aur kanwal dono use dekhte hai.Azka ekdum se apna face neache kar leti hai she don't want ke azlan use aise kamzor dekhe.

Azlan:Wo Khalid Bhai ne aapse milna tha.

Kanwal:jee me azka ko lekar aati hu

Azlan waha se chala jata hai but uske dil se azka aur kanwal ki baate nahi jaa rahi.Azka Kanwal ke saath bahar aati hai

Azka: Asalam alaikum Khalid Bhai

Khalid: walekum assalam Azka beta kaisi ho?

Azka:bahot behtar.

Khalid: mashaallah bas jaldi jaldi thik ho jao.

Azka:jee ek do din ki baat hai bas.

Khalid:Azlan bahot pareshan hai aapke liye.mene dekha hai iski aakho me.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai than Khalid ki taraf aur smile karti hai

Azlan:kaise nahi pareshan hu after all meri zindagi me Mom aur azka ke alawa hai kaun? Aur waise bhi as a husband ye meri duty hai ke me azka ka har tarah se khayaal rakhu.Azka is se bhi jayada deserve karti hai.

Azka ye sab sunkar nervous feel karti hai wo Kanwal ko dekhne lag jati hai.kanwal bhi ye sunkar heran hoti hai.

Khalid:bahot Khushi hui aapse milkar.me sach kahu nikaah ke time dil me darr aaya tha aapse milkar.par ab saare darr dur ho gaye. azka Allah tumhe aur Azlan dono ko bahot khushiya de.

Azlan azka ki taraf dekhta hai aur muskura kar kehta hai.

Azlan:Ameen

Kanwal:chale hum ab chalte hai

Azlan:are aise kaise raat ka khana khaa kar jayiye ga

Kanwal:nahi itna sab to liya humne.bas ab ijazat de

Khalid:Azka kisi din Azlan ko lekar aana humari taraf.

Azka:jee ..

Azlan: inshallah hum bahot jald aayege.

Kanwal aur khalid dono chale jate hai.Azka waha bethi hui Azlan ko hi dekhti rahti hai.

Azlan:aapki bhabhi mashaallah se bahot khush hai apni nayi zindagi me.

Azka:jee Allah ka bahot shukar hai.khalid bhai bahot acche hai.Bhabhi pehle dusri shadi ke liye mana kar rahi thi par Amma ne bilkul sahi faisla liya tha bhabhi ke liye.

Azlan:ha zindagi ke kuch faisle hume pehle galat lagte hai par kuch waqt ke baad hume ehsaas hota hai ke wo humare liye kitne sahi hai.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo kuch sochne lag jati hai

Azlan:Azka aap bore to nahi ho rahi.

Azka:nahi kyu?

Azlan:kyu ke me bore ho Raha hu aap baat hi nahi kar rahi

Azka:sorry me bas kuch nahi aise hi kuch soch rahi thi.

Azlan:kya ?

Azka:kuch nahi.

Azlan kuch nahi bolta wo janta hai ke azka nahi batayegi.

Azlan:chale aaj lunch bahar karte hai.

Azka:hum....

Azlan:ha kyu ?

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha aapki mom aa jaye phir unko bhi saath.

Azlan:unko bahar ka khana abhi allowed nahi hai doctor AZKA AZLAN AHAMAD.

Azlan se ye sunkar Azka use dekhne lag jati hai.but azlan bilkul bhi hesitate nahi hai ye bolkar.

Azlan:ab chale??

Azka node

Azlan:come

Azlan use apna haath deta hai aur phir Azka ko waist se pakad ke chalne lagta hai Azka thoda sa uncomfortable ho rahi hai b/c aaj se pehle kisi ne use aise nahi pakada tha azlan notice this aur wo usse baate karne lag jata hai.

Azlan:aapki favourite ice cream kaunsi hai?

Azka: favourite aise koi bhi nahi hai par ha mujhe PISTA flavour nahi pasand.

Azlan:kyu ?

Azka:bas nahi pasand.

Azlan:accha accha me samjh gaya bas nahi pasand.

Azlan muskurata hai aur azka bhi

Azka:aapne mom ko bata diya ke hum ghar nahi he.

Azlan:nahi kyu?

Azka: nahi wo aise hi mujhe aadat hai suru se kabhi bhi bahar jati thi to Amma ko batakar jana

Azlan:don't worry guard hai na wo bata dega..aur waise bhi aap mere saath hai so wo kyu pareshan hogi.

Next scene

Azlan Azka dono lunch kar rahe hai.Azlan baar baar azka ki taraf dekh raha hai but azka ka face neache hai.

Azlan:Azka can I ask u something?

Azka:jee puche.

Azlan:me aise aapko achanak yaha le aaya aapko bura to nahi laga?

Azka:aap ye sawaal kyu kar rahe hai?

Azlan:i mean to say kahi aisa..i mean.mera aise aapko lunch par Lana pasand na aaya ho

Azka:Azlan saab mere aur aapke beach aajtak jitni bhi mulaqate hui hai us me ,me kai baar aappar gussa Hui hu..naraaz Hui hu ..sharminda Hui hu par uncomfortable kabhi nahi hui.

Azlan:isse ye pata chal raha hai ke aap siwaay khushi ke sabkuch hui hai.


Azlan sad si smile deta hai

Azka:aapko pata hai me jab kabhi aapki personality ko lekar sochti hu to aap mujhe har baar alag nazar aate hai

Azlan:kya matlab me samjha nahi?

Azka:wo ye ke aap ka kuch pata nahi chalta aap kabhi bina baat ke gussa kar jate the to agale hi pal zarurat se jayada caring.

Azlan:dimaag jo kharaab tha

Azka hasti hai.

Azlan:to aapko lagta hai me unpredictable hu?

Azka:me ye kaise bata sakti me aapko janti hi kitna hu.

Azlan ek sec ke liye rukta hai and than azka ki taraf bend hota hai aur uski aakho me dekhkar bolta hai

Azlan:To aap mujhe jaane na kisne roka hai?

Azka ye sunkar use dekhne lag jati hai.aur azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:kya hua?

Azka:kuch nahi aap aise khush Raha kare acche lagte hai.

Azlan:kisko aapko?

Azka:Mariam …..

Azlan confused ho jata hai

Azlan:kaun Mariam?

Azka:wo aunty jo ghar aayi thi mera rishta lekar

Azlan:WO HARRIS Ki mom

Azka:AAHISTAA..….peeche na dekhiyega wo yahi dekh rahi hai.

azlan:me kyu dekhuga usko?

Azka:par wo aapko hi dekh rahi hai seriously

Azka hasti hai ye bolkar aur azlan usko ghoorne lagta hai.

Mariam:Hey azka kaisi ho aap?

Azka: Asalam alaikum me thik aap kaisi hai?

Mariam:sab thik hai aap log bhi lunch karne aye hai.

Azka:jee

Mariam:well us din jo kuch bhi hua i m really really sorry par sach me hume nahi pata tha.

Azlan:it's ok misunderstanding thi aap logo ki clear kar dee mene

Mariam:aap ko tab bahot gussa aa gaya tha.

Azlan: ofcourse meri biwi ke liye koi rishta lekar aayega to me uska ISTAQBAAL to nahi karuga.

Azka Azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai,aur Mariam ko bhi.

Mariam:ok than have a nice day Allah hafiz.

Azka: Allah hafiz.

Mariam waha se chali jati hai.

Azka:waise aap rude hue bina bhi bat kar sakte the.

Azlan:R U serious ?

Azka:wo aapse kitne pyaar se baat kar rahi thi.

Azlan:Aur aapko usse koi problem nahi hui.

Azka:mujhe kyu problem hogi?

Azlan kuch der ke liye azka ko dekhta rahta hai.Azka pehle kuch nahi bolti but phir Azlan ka aise dekhte rahne se wo apni aakhe jhuka leti hai.Azlan still use dekh raha hai aur phir wo Mariam ko awaaz deta hai.

Azlan:Mariam

Azka Apna face upar kar ke azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.Azlan Azka ko dekhte hue apni chair se uthta hai aur Mariam ke paas jata hai.azka wahi bethi hui hai.Azlan Mariam se baate kar raha hai aur uska dyan azka par hi hai.Azka ko distance hone ki wajah se pata nahi chal raha ke wo kya baat kar rahe.

Azlan:aapki job ka kya bana?.

Mariam:wo bas Interviews diye hai ek do jagah but kuch samjh nahi aa raha.

Azlan:good all the best.

Azlan smile karta hai and Mariam bhi

Azlan:koi bhi kaam ho aap batana

Mariam: Awww thank you so much Azlan.

Azka dekh rahi hai ke Azlan smile karte hue baat kar raha hai.wo unki side nahi dekhna chahti but phir bhi kuch kuch der baad wo wahi dekh rahi hai.azlan notice this and he smirk

Azlan:ok take care

Wo waha se wapas aa jata hai aur Aise behave karta hai jaise wo bahot khush hai

Azka:kya hua?

Azlan:nothing u r right Mariam bahot sweet hai.me aise hi rude baat kar raha tha.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur chupchaap khana khane lag jati hai.Azlan azka ko aise dekhkar enjoy karta hai.

After lunch both are in car Azka notice karti hai ke Azlan ghar ki taraf nahi jaa raha

Azka:hum ghar jaa rahe hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:kyu?

Azlan:bore ho gayi hai mere saath

Azka:aisi baat nahi hai.

Azka window ki taraf dekhne lag jati hai.azlan samjh jata hai ke wo baat nahi karna chahti.after a minute

Azka:aap Mariam se kya baat kar rahe the?

Azlan(with smile):as kuch khaas nahi kyu?

Azka:nahi aise hi bas.

Azlan:aapko mera usse baat karna accha nahi laga?

Azka:nahi to aisa nahi hai.mujhe kyu bura lagega aap jisse marzi baat kare.

Azlan:ha wahi to aapko kyu problem hogi

Azka:matlab?

Azlan:matlab phir kabhi!!! abhi mene ice cream khani hai

Azlan stop the car

Azlan:chale aaye.

Azka:mujhe bhi aana hai?

Azlan:haa to kya me akela ice cream khata hua accha laguga.

Azka:nahi mera matlab tha ke aap jo marzi le aaye.

Azlan:aur meri pasand aapko acchi nahi lagi to

Azka:koi baat nahi me adjust kar lugi

Azlan:jaise abhi kar rahi hai.

Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hai.Azlan kuch nahi bolta aur chala jata hai

After sometime

Azlan:here u go me Chocolate Chip for u and brownie with coffee and vannila for me.

Azlan azka ko dono icecream deta hai aur drive karne lag jata hai.

Azka:aap kahi gaadi rok de na, drive karte hue ice cream kaise khayege?

Azlan:kyu aap hai na aap khila de apne haatho se

Azka ye sunkar azlan ko dekhne lag jati hai with wide eyes Azlan hasne lag jata hai

Azlan:relax me mazaq kar raha tha.bas kuch der meri ice cream pakad to sakti hai na.

Azka kuch nahi bolti aur azlan drive karne lag jata hai.after sometime azlan gaadi rokta hai aur azka ko waha lekar aata hai jaha usne Shanaya ko shaadi ka bola tha

Azka:ye kaunsi jagah hai?

Azlan:hum hamesha yaha aaya karte the

Azka:Hum???

Azlan:Shanaya aur me.

Azka kuch nahi bolti wo dekhti hai ke azlan kuch soch raha hai.wo samjh nahi paati wo kya soch raha hai.sayad wo udas hai ya phir kuch aur baat hai.wo janna chahti hai ke azlan kya soch raha hai

Azlan:aapko koi problem to nahi hogi na .i mean bas thodi si walk hai

Azka:aap hai na saath phir kaisi problem

Azlan ye sunkar azka ki aakho me dekhne lag jata hai.he feel happy.azlan azka ke saath us jagah aata hai aur azka ko bithata hai.dono ice cream khaa rahe hai.

Azlan:ice cream kaisi lagi..?

Azka:bahot acchi.aapko ye pasand hai?

Azlan:nahi

Azka:par aapne to kaha tha ke aapko jo pasand hai wo khilayege.

Azlan:ha kaha tha but mujhe laga aapko pasand na aayi to.i don't want ke aap mere saath adjust kare.

Azka Azlan ki taraf dekhti hai.

Azka:aur aisa kyu laga aapko?

Azlan:pata nahi may be aapko meri choice na pasand aati. mujhe laga aap mere saath comfortable nahi hai

Azka:aisa aapko isliye laga kyu ke me ice cream parlor nahi aayi ?

Azlan kuch nahi bolta azka use dekhkar smile karti hai.

Azka:agar me aapke saath comfortable nahi hoti to yaha bhi nahi aati.jab ke yaha dur dur tak hum dono ke alawa koi nahi hai.mujhe bas jayada logo me Jane ki aadat nahi hai mujhe nahi pasand sab mujhe dekhe aur...

Azka ruk jati hai.

Azlan:aur ???

Azka:aap mujhe aise haath pakad kar le jate to log aur jayada dekhne lag jate.

Azlan hasne lag jata hai.

Azlan: seriously Azka...aap is wajah se nahi aayi.aap mujhe bol sakti thi.

Azka:mujhe Darr laga pata nahi aap kya sochte

Azlan:aapke darr ki wajah se aapne itni acchi ice cream khane ka chance Gawaa diya.

Azlan phir se hasne lag jata hai azka use kuch der dekhti rahti hai.aur phir wo uske haath se uski ice cream le leti hai.

Azka:jee nahi me abhi bhi khaa sakti hu.ye dekhe

Azka azlan ki ice cream taste karti hai.azlan ne socha nahi tha ke azka aise uski ice cream taste karegi.he was surprised plus happy.

Azka:hhmmmmm ye to bahot tasty hai.chale aap ye saari mujhe de de.

Azlan:Azka

Azka:kya…ap ye meri wali lele.

Azlan happily take it her ice cream aur wo khane lagta hai.wo soch raha hai ke usne kuch to azka ke dil me jagah banayi hai.

End of part 12

Do comments

Finally I am commenting😆 It was very refreshing update❤️ Liked it ..loved it❤️

Azlan is thinking right ki 5 saal ki bitterness and distance vo 5 days mei cover nahi kar sakta...Kanwal bhabhi ko itni jaldi digest bhi nahi hogi Azlan ki sweet side and she was like aap kyun bahar layenge😆unhe kya pta ki Azlan toh Azka ko Pick drop service de raha hai in his arms😆

Azka is very happy that Azlan is treating her family well❤️ and kanwal jo Azka ko kehti hai regarding living with Azlan in same room..it is true but vo na bhi rahe tab bhi log yahi sochenge and Azlan sun leta hai sab...kitna dukh ho raha hai Azlan ko yar par contract kiya bhi toh usne hi tha..and ji bilkul Khushiya darwaze pe hi khadi hain in the form of Azlan❤️ aur Azka ko bhi bahut mohabbat karne wala shohar mila hai...she is gonna realise it soon❤️

Azka is really happy to see this caring side of Azlan...vo kafi khush ho rahi hai..and Khalid bhai ki baat sach hai ...preshan hona banta thai about how Azlan behaved in their wedding...Plus Azlan kahin kanwal ko heartattack na dede...ye dialogues pe dialogues..but on serious note that is what he is feeling and that's how he is now...Azka impress huae ja rahi hai❤️...Khalid bhai bahut achhe hain vaise❤️

Azka Azlan Ahmad❤️..it sounds really good...Azlan is too much caring...Azka ko ab aadat dalni padhegi uske touches ki...aise nahi chalega😆 Azka is right Azlan kuch bhi kare Azka kabhi uncomfortable nahi ho sakti uske sath...dono ka relation shuru se aise hi raha hai...fighting...bickering but still thinking about each other....aur Azlan khush ho vo hame bhi accha lagta hai not only Azka❤️

And Azlan mariam ko...apni deewani ko... bhul bhi gya...kaun mariam😆..Azka Azlan ko mariam ke naam se chhed rahi hai😆 and Azlan sach mei rudely jawab deta hai...usko apni biwi ka rishta yaad aa jata hai😆...Aur fir Azlan ka shaitani dimag jaga and usne Azka ko jealous kiya...Poor Azka aur kaho Azlan ko rude na hone ko..vo sweet hua kisi aur ke sath toh Azka bardasht nahi kar payi😆 .Aur ye mariam... ye kya flat ho rahi hai...usko samjhado uska koi scene nahi hai...And my dear Azka jealous ho gayi...Azlan knew that...tabhi itna khush ho raha tha😈...

Azlan yar flirt karna ka mauka nahi chhodta...but vo waqt bhi ayega jab Azka apne hathon se khilayegi❤️ and Azlan Azka ko wahan leke gya jahan vo shanaya ke sath jata hai...it says a lot about his feelings now...he has moved on in every sense ...aur Azka uske sath ice cream parlour nahi jati just because log unhe dehkte ki Azlan is holding her...how cute and conscious she is,,,even when he is her husband...and now the ease between them like she took his icecream and gave him hers...kind of bonding moment for me❤️

Overall the whole update has a great feel❤️..for Azka ..it is transition of her feelings...she is happy...surprised.. jealous.. content.... She is going through too many emotions.. i dont know what is gonna happen next because she knows she has to go from here..usko toh nahi pta na ki Azlan loves her and will not let her go..but it will be interesting to know how all this will fall in place for her❤️ For Azlan..Kya kaha jaye..he is too sweet..too caring..lovable...he has changed for the better and obvioiusly he is going to be all out for getting Azka❤️.

Loved the update❤️ waiting for the next one and keep writing dear❤️ Love you❤️

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Originally posted by: la_Reine

Ufff now this umair is getting annoying already...i am sure yeh dobara phir entry maarega😆...feel bad for azlaan...but azlaan needs to stop being so insecure and act like a man

Yeh azlaan azka ko uthaane ka koi mauka nahi chorta🤣 i loved the bathroom scene...and she knew ke he likes the white dress

Of course umair ne phir se entry maarni hai 😆Azlan ne past me jitna kuch sunaya tha azka ko so uska ab thoda bahot jealous hona banta hai.

Yes bathroom scene is a highlight of this update ❤️thx for liking

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: la_Reine

Pakistan mein maine kabhi pda nahi dekha...uk mein to sab chalta hai but Pak mein to hum public mein haath bhi nahi pakarte isi waja se😆

I don’t know which place u talking about but yaar me to yahi rahti hu and har time me apne hubby ka haath pakad ke chalti hu.and I m not the only one here 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: la_Reine

This part was full of AzKaan..i loved their convo and Azlaans dialogues especially

Hamesha bechare azlaan ko jalna parta hai...finally we get to see him making azka jealous😆 but itna khaas maza nahi aaya...i want to see her feeling more jealous😛

and finally inn dono mein frankness aana shuru hui hai...azka is also opening up slowly

Story unki hai so unpe jayada focus kiya hai warna show me to AZKAAN bas last episodes me hi Mile hai wo bhi Itna acche se nahi.

Yes I agreed Mariam se jealous hone wala part small tha but azlan ne bas check karna tha ke wo jealous feel karti hai ke nahi..azlan not a young boy jo ye sab se enjoy kare.usko jo jan na tha wo jan liya.but aage aayega don’t worry

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Wonderful update.. Loved Azkaan lunch date Good to see Azka developing feelings for Azlaan..Looking forward to the next one.. thank you for the dm..Do continue soon

Yes azka azlan ke charm me aane lagi hai after all azlan jis tarah uski care kar raha hai wo aur kar bhi kya sakti hai😳

Thank you so much for comment 😊

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Originally posted by: kamleshmehra

Finally I am commenting😆u r gajini hamesha yaad Dilana padta hai It was very refreshing update❤️ Liked it ..loved it❤️Thank you Colored Text

Azlan is thinking right ki 5 saal ki bitterness and distance vo 5 days mei cover nahi kar sakta.of course tumhri Meri zindagi me koi hesiyat nahi hai se tum meri zindagi ho ye sab me waqt lagega azlan saab ko papad belne hai abhi 🤣..Kanwal bhabhi ko itni jaldi digest bhi nahi hogi Azlan ki sweet side and she was like aap kyun bahar layenge😆bhabhi is like ABBA here tum kyu haath lagaoge😆unhe kya pta ki Azlan toh Azka ko Pick drop service de raha hai in his arms😆 ye to humko pata hai azlan kaisa hai 😃usko ye service Dene me maza aa raha hai

Azka is very happy that Azlan is treating her family well❤️ and kanwal jo Azka ko kehti hai regarding living with Azlan in same room.yahi baat to azka ne kahi ke wo saath na bhi rahe but log to yahi sochege society aur uski thinking hum badal nahi sakte.it is true but vo na bhi rahe tab bhi log yahi sochenge and Azlan sun leta hai sab...kitna dukh ho raha hai Azlan ko yar par contract kiya bhi toh usne hi tha.now azlan love her and ab wo azka ko kisi aur nazar se dekhta hai now he just want ke azka ko kisi bhi cheez ki taklif na ho.and ji bilkul Khushiya darwaze pe hi khadi hain in the form of Azlanbas ab khushiyo ne azka ki dil ke darwaze Se andar aana hai❤️ aur Azka ko bhi bahut mohabbat karne wala shohar mila hai...she is gonna realise it soon❤️mohabbat to bahot hai tumko dikh hi jayegi filtered aur unfiltered bhi🤣

Azka is really happy to see this caring side of Azlan...vo kafi khush ho rahi hai..and Khalid bhai ki baat sach hai ...preshan hona banta thai about how Azlan behaved in their wedding..of course itne nakhre jo kar raha tha nikaah wale din khalid bhai ka worried hona banta tha.Plus Azlan kahin kanwal ko heartattack na dede..bhabhi ko pata nahi hai azlan saab pyaar me hai.ye dialogues pe dialogues..but on serious note that is what he is feeling and that's how he is now.pyaar me hai na so ab line par aa Gaya ..Azka impress huae ja rahi hai❤️...Khalid bhai bahut achhe hain vaise❤️yes khalid bhai is a gem

Azka Azlan Ahmad❤️..it sounds really good..azlan ye bolkar six Maari thi waise azka ke dil me .Azlan is too much caring...Azka ko ab aadat dalni padhegi uske touches ki...aise nahi chalega😆azlan touching me bahot aage hai 🤣 Azka is right Azlan kuch bhi kare Azka kabhi uncomfortable nahi ho sakti uske sath...dono ka relation shuru se aise hi rahaazlan is accha baccha. Yaar thoda sadu tha but ladki ko kabhi uncomfortable nahi kiya hai...fighting...bickering but still thinking about each other....aur Azlan khush ho vo hame bhi accha lagta hai not only Azka❤️aapse jayada kaun khyaal rakhta hai is baat ka 🤣

And Azlan mariam ko...apni deewani ko... bhul bhi gya.tumhe lagta hai azlan yaad rakhega Mariam ko are usko to Harris yaad hai bas 🤣..kaun mariam😆..Azka Azlan ko mariam ke naam se chhed rahi hai😆 and Azlan sach mei rudely jawab deta hai..uski biwi ko apni bhabhi bana ne aayi thi ab azlan rude na ho to kya date ka puche 🤣.usko apni biwi ka rishta yaad aa jata hai😆...Aur fir Azlan ka shaitani dimag jaga and usne Azka ko jealous kiya...azka ko abhi extremely jealous nahi kiya bas demo diya haiPoor Azka aur kaho Azlan ko rude na hone ko..vo sweet hua kisi aur ke sath toh Azka bardasht nahi kar payi😆 .Aur ye mariam... ye kya flat ho rahi hai...usko samjhado uska koi scene nahi hai...And my dear Azka jealous ho gayi...Azlan knew that...tabhi itna khush ho raha tha😈...

Azlan yar flirt karna ka mauka nahi chhodta...look who’s talking are tumko hi to azlan flirting chahiye tha ab de rahi hu to aisa Bol rahi ho😆but vo waqt bhi ayega jab Azka apne hathon se khilayegi❤️ ha g azka ke haatho se khana azlan ke naseeb me bahot jald aayega and Azlan Azka ko wahan leke gya jahan vo shanaya ke sath jata hai...it says a lot about his feelings now...he has moved on in every sense he is moved on and usne azka ko dil se accept kar liya hai❤️...aur Azka uske sath ice cream parlour nahi jati just because log unhe dehkte ki Azlan is holding her...how cute and conscious she is,,azka kabhi kisi ladke ke contact me nahi aayi na so uske liye ye sab new hai,even when he is her husband...and now the ease between them like she took his icecream and gave him hers...kind of bonding moment for me❤️usne Azlan ki fav ice cream khaa hi lee

Overall the whole update has a great feel❤️..for Azka ..it is transition of her feelings...she is happy...surprised.. jealous.. content.... She is going through too many emotions.yes azka ko har time ek new Azlan aur ek new feeling ka ehsaas ho raha hai . i dont know what is gonna happen next because she knows she has to go from here..clever azlan bahana pehle se hi soch betha hai so tension not 👍🏼usko toh nahi pta na ki Azlan loves her and will not let her go..but it will be interesting to know how all this will fall in place for her author ne kuch socha hua hai aapko pasand aayega thoda wait kare❤️ For Azlan..Kya kaha jaye..he is too sweet..too caring..lovable...he has changed for the better and obvioiusly he is going to be all out for getting Azka❤️.Azlan humara Hero hai and uske andar hero ki sab qualities hogi kyu ke mere hero sach me hero hote hai🤣

Loved the update❤️ waiting for the next one and keep writing dear❤️ Love you❤️inshaallah sat tak ho jayegi update love u more 🤗Thank you so much for comment ❤️

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