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Chapter 18

Superb update…. terrifically written

can understand Maan's restlessness

so he avoids Pari as she knows him very well

Maan even controls himself from calling Brij

however Maan's patience was giving him

Gosh Maan heard Geet and Yash's entire convo

good Maan confronts Geet and holds her

her confusion is justified

great that she reminded him she a fresher for him

not surprised that Geet refused to tell Maan about her family's condition

her thoughts are reasonable

she did have valid points considering how he treats her

she handled Maan's question smartly

of cos Maan is angry with her reluctance

well he tells her that she was the cause of whatever happened

but then again he fails to acknowledged that Geet is a completely changed person

of cos Maan has resources and will find out everything

Geet also knows this

hate seeing Geet in pain

sad that she feels that she is not part of his family

she is indeed alone

seems like Geet and Yash share a wonderful bond

oh she accepted that she was the cause of whatever happened

eager to know why>?

pleased that both Maan and Geet were affected by their close encounter

liked that Geet is determined to be strong and face Maan

she will only as he wants

at least Maan saw the pain in Geet's eyes

no matter how much he denies, Maan loves her so much

he is afraid of Geet hurting him and will prove that she has no meaning in his life

despite what Mohinder did to Maan, he ensures that he is respected

finally Maan gets to know everything

Maan was clearly shocked, hurt and felt guilty

as expected Maan is going to India

loved Maan's concern for Geet

nice that he told Adi to take care of Geet

he smartly covered this up

he now knows that Geet is managing everything alone

oh Maan justifies his actions towards Geet as responsibility

the Handas will always be family for Maan

now Maan is on his way to India to help them

hoping he will get to know what Geet went through

update soon

Chapter 18

Captivating Chapter

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I waited for this chapter , to see what Maan does

Such an emotional update.. I was literally waiting for this so desparately. So finally Maan knows. I want to know how much he knows? Does it only include the financial part of the Handas or Geet’s personal life as well???

It was so so well written.. So emotional. So happy Maan overheard Geet’s conversation with her jiju.. he got a lot of info. He is not restraining himself this time & showed ownership on her.. I’m do so glad with the way Geet held herself. She didn’t fall weak, nor did she taunt him & make it negative… she was so gentle & replied back to him like a professional.. can’t understand why Maan blamed her even now.
the next scene wth Geet wS sad.. she is venting out all her feelings only in pvt. Maan is no less. When he wanted to know what’s going on, i too felt is it only abt that family for him? Where does Geet or her role matter here to him? But I was satisfied to see it looked like more than that, at that moment, Geet and her beautiful vulnerable painful eyes mattered to him more❤️ Why do I feel Geet loved/s him more than he ever did😭 when will he realize this. I cried buckets with this update as well. This was so touching. You’re writing it so well.
He has decided to go to Bombay, but yet again he only tnks of her & calls Adi to check on her. It was painful to get to know through Adi abt how she’s all alone & settling. One side he’s making sure his sister has the best, & the one he grew up with & spent most prt of his childhood has become ‘just another employee’ to him now. I’m deeply disappointed with Maan this time. Geet made mistakes but has held herself and behaved with such dignity. She didn’t waver, didn’t cry, didn’t show any kind of disappointment on Maan about this. Now that he knows the main part of the story, I hope he’ll get closer to the truth abt Geet. And this time he shd make up to her. While she feels he is not separate from her.. he needs to feel the same or atleast cross the bridge & meet her at a common point where they’re both equal this time…. Pls pls update this soonest.. I’ve gone crazy abt the ff & tnking wt next for sure every chapter. Hope to see some Maaneet scenes next time which I doubt since he’s leaving to India.

Thanks for the tag..

Finally he got an inkling of the truth.

Am happy Geet didn't disclose much. Inspite of being careful, Maan did taunt her that everything that happened the cause was only she.. Why!!

She is a changed Geet now. Slowly Maan you'll get to see. Her struggles, her penance. He ought to see. And Geet need to push him away as this is not the Maan she loved.

So, Maan is going to Mumbai. Wahaan jaake kya karoge?? Ulta Geet par hee Sara ilzaam daloge...

I hate this Maan. He is being irrational the moment he has to confront Geet. Bas uppar uppar se concern dikha raha hai...

Waiting for next...

Love, Cia!!!

Ok everyone.. Will try tonight EST.
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Originally posted by: tellyme

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thank you! already waiting 😊

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