Okay this is actually disappointing - Page 9

Originally posted by: Suvika.

@bold - this cracked me up! BTW, the Abba Dabba Jabba in your posts got me ROFL a lot of times. Your friends and you have found a great way to lash out at the wayward behaving characters - through humor. 😆

@blue - And you are absolutely right. Sisters are alike in a lot of ways. They team up and hide things from the rest of the family / world. Sirat's promise makes Arohi use Akshara as her shield and the same promise makes Akshara face the bullets with nary a second thought.

Those hiding traits are from her mother naira. She used to keep things to save someone. Here it's wrong person akshu saves and is struck always.

Originally posted by: Baarish_Sim

But how does making Akshu a part of the kaand make the audience more sympathetic towards Aaru? For example, having Akshu in the car accident doesn’t make people more sympathetic towards Aaru as most recognize how irresponsible driving under the influence was and how she showed criminal intent whereas Akshu never did. The mistakes Akshu made are mostly different than Aaru, so any overlapping blame is minimal.

nobody wants to understand how autotuned akshara is made to brhavr and ifshe wants to move ahead and tell anyone arohi giver her kasam mujhsr pyaar hai to bla bla or put guilt of her mom’s death.

Originally posted by: Mehersudha

Hey thanks. Abadabajaba our friend DiamondLife started it. When she said i reminded Telugu movie where the character speaks that only .it's remade in Hindi as judai later and character is keot same. We love all characters and write unbaised always. But the episodes were not enjoyable and we happily chatted on page with some humour everyday.

Those hiding traits are from her mother naira. She used to keep things to save someone. Here it's wrong person akshu saves and is struck always.

Oh! Meeru Telugu aa!! Nenu kooda! Born, brought up in Guntur, married and living in Bangalore. :)

Originally posted by: Suvika.

I think after 10 novels and 2 movie scripts, I know how character growth is written, my dear. :)

My issue is with the story line and tracks that seem to have lost connect with the characters. Maybe because of multiple writers handling things, I don't know. Leads of the story need not be perfect. That would make a boring story, IMO.

And the way this story is going, I can see Akshara's character growth going in either one of the two ways:

1. She would be torn and wanting to choose the sister yet unable to, for whatever reason, until the adoption track or whatever comes out. Maybe writers are keeping her in this - dola re dola state so that it would give max impact on the audience when she chooses Abhi in that moment.

2. If there is no adotion track, this will continue and slow change after marriage will be shown.

Neither option appeals to me - not as a writer, not as a viewer.

All that aside, this accident track has completely put me off the show for one simple reason - FL crossed the line in her love for her sister and her desire to protect her.

@Bold - I have no issues with her thinking. But in all that thinking, never once the thought popped into her head - he could have lost his mom because of Aru and me. What he is asking is fair. It hurts me but it's the least I could do. Or... oh why didn't I stop and check!

Instead there is hope that once he cools down, he would forgive Arohi and let her be a part of the wedding. She, who has lost not one but two mothers, to get that thought or even think in that direction does not make any sense to me.

Now, I bid adieu to you all. My editor is after me and if she comes to know I'm roaming around in the forum, she'll have my head.

Take care.

oh wow, not at all teaching.

Just thought you'd be open to discussing character growth seeing as we both have knowledge of the craft.

Adieu.

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Definitely a writer.

A writer can be a student too because the concept of learning never stops. :)

I agree 💯 with her here

Originally posted by: Suvika.

@Green - even if she hadn't done any of those things, gone to him singing that song and then told him - I'm so sorry for what happened, I understand your feelings, I shouldn't have done what I did, thank you for asking for so little in return - I would have been more than happy. The behaviour that is showing that Abhi is the one being harsh on both the sisters is what is not sitting well with me. But anyway, as you said - amnesia seems to be the common problem for the writers. Wish they gave that ability to us too, so we can forget the previous day's episode and watch the new one with a fresh mind 😆

@Blue - Of course!! Conflicting thoughts are what give out the best results. My partner / editor and I, while writing a story fight like crazy. Each of us has a point and neither willing to let go. And that's when we get to find the best middle ground. So please don't worry about it.

Very well said.

@bold that cracked me up 😂😂