AsYa SS: The Heart And The Mind *DISCONTINUED* - Page 10

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Posted: 4 years ago
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you are so good! I read the whole thing all at once. Asad totally sucked with his actions and apologies in the show. I am happy he is a changed for better man in our stories. Excited for you to continue this story

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Quick note: Hey guys!! This one's been on hold for a while, and out of nowhere I just decided to re-read it. And, I found out that I don't really like the way the story has progressed. Granted that this was my first work, so it basically had everything I wanted to happen in QH. But it didn't uphold the integrity of the characters. So I've decided to discontinue this one and...

wait, don't leave!

Re-write it! I've decided to revisit the overall plot and re-write the whole story, with a better experience, better maintenance of the characters and better plot. So, I need YOUR help, for a title! Plsss PM me your ideas!!😃😃


P.S: If you don't recognise this account then I'll just let ya know that it's Meg! I had to stop using the old account due to an error :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waiting for this new version now :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Here is the link to the rewritten version of this story! The prologue has been posted already, hope you guys like it!

Undecided (The Heart And The Mind... rewritten)

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