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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sometimes I wonder you get so high trp without actually putting an effort in the writing department, adding depth to characters and the story... So it got me wonder, do you guys just go forward due to Harshad, Pranali and their chemistry as AbhiRa?


I mean Imagine if you guys really put your time and effort in writing a story, how your TRPs gonna be? I mean it will be much much more but aao log sochte kahan hai. Like I can write so much about Goenkas but you made them this shallow who puts Aarohi over everything else. Changed Aarohi overnight without she reflecting *on her behaviour* with Akshara all the years. Abhi and Akshara love story, Kairav and Anisha love story, Anisha backstory... I mean guys... Time to wake up.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am so disappointed with makers today. Kaishas love story have zero chemistry and because of that all other characters looked weak today. Harsh says he loves daughters, man who never respected women. Hope they take the story seriously and give us some good content.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Sometimes I wonder you get so high trp without actually putting an effort in the writing department, adding depth to characters and the story... So it got me wonder, do you guys just go forward due to Harshad, Pranali and their chemistry as AbhiRa?


I mean Imagine if you guys really put your time and effort in writing a story, how your TRPs gonna be? I mean it will be much much more but aao log sochte kahan hai. Like I can write so much about Goenkas but you made them this shallow who puts Aarohi over everything else. Changed Aarohi overnight without she reflecting *on her behaviour* with Akshara all the years. Abhi and Akshara love story, Kairav and Anisha love story, Anisha backstory... I mean guys... Time to wake up.


*Will add later*


Noor, i am disappointed big time... Abhi to they could have developed Akshara and Abhimanyu's relationship.. They can show so much in their love story, abhi to family maani hi nahi he.... And itne me achanak another complication and wo bhi internet wala love... Usme bhi mili to Birla ki ladki.. And because she is a Birla, Kaira broke up.. I mean, kya yaar

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Mera itna dimag kharab ho rha hai yeh sab padh ke, that I can't even make myself watch the episode.

This is what I was trying to point out a few days back, these people have no storyline. They're not thinking. They created so much drama around Anisha for what? Reduced Kairav to something not even teens do anymore? Fall in love on the internet? Seriously?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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They are so many track opened without proper closure... The thing is called story development and it is completely forgotten by writers... Everything is so sudden. Anisha track is like asmaan se tapka Khajoor.

They didn't even show Kairav talking to Anisha in single scene. Vicks ki add Anisha Kairav se karwa lete 😂 ... Koi story toh dikhti.

Makers need to focus on story part....strong backstory is needed at this point.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Only few episodes are left for 100 episodes and the plot is lost.

IMO, the producer is under tremendous trp pressure. Impressions only increase after a good dose of drama.

As of now after confession the makers do not how to take the storyline forward.

Two adults have taken responsibility to convince their respective family members.

It is impossible for Abhimanyu. He does not get along with his dad. He has to mend broken relationships within the family. Harshavardhan past, Anant's strained relationship with his son. Politics between sisters. The Birla scion has to rectify everything before he puts forward Akshara.

Manish has formed a certain image about the Birlas. He hates Harshvardhan and dislikes Abhimanyu's guts.

The writers took the easier route. Kairav Bhaiya

For me it is history repeating itself. Humsafars had to go through a similar fate.

There is still time to plug in the loopholes.

The writers have to check the Bengali original and should use the copy paste function.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Sometimes I wonder you get so high trp without actually putting an effort in the writing department, adding depth to characters and the story... So it got me wonder, do you guys just go forward due to Harshad, Pranali and their chemistry as AbhiRa?


I mean Imagine if you guys really put your time and effort in writing a story, how your TRPs gonna be? I mean it will be much much more but aao log sochte kahan hai. Like I can write so much about Goenkas but you made them this shallow who puts Aarohi over everything else. Changed Aarohi overnight without she reflecting *on her behaviour* with Akshara all the years. Abhi and Akshara love story, Kairav and Anisha love story, Anisha backstory... I mean guys... Time to wake up.


*Will add later*

I wanted a solid reason for Kairav and Anisha break up and there is no chemistry absolutely between the couple. They look more like elder sister and brother for me. What are they even trying to do??? At least if they are aware of it I am happy. Internet and online pyaar???? Like seriously??? Kis zamaane hai yaar Tum log??? Aur wahan pe bhi Birla ladki hi mili kya??? Okay fine. Still you broke up because she was a Birla. What type of a love is this?

Abhi and Akshara are still strangers for each other from a lot of aspects and there is no development on that front. Neil was supposed to be sent out but nothing has moved forward. What happened to that newly formed trust? And why is Abhi not made aware of it?
the weirdest part is Harsh who is shown to humiliate women likes girl child more and he loves Anisha more.. wah!!!


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Winnertakesital

Only few episodes are left for 100 episodes and the plot is lost.

IMO, the producer is under tremendous trp pressure. Impressions only increase after a good dose of drama.

As of now after confession the makers do not how to take the storyline forward.

Two adults have taken responsibility to convince their respective family members.

It is impossible for Abhimanyu. He does not get along with his dad. He has to mend broken relationships within the family. Harshavardhan past, Anant's strained relationship with his son. Politics between sisters. The Birla scion has to rectify everything before he puts forward Akshara.

Manish has formed a certain image about the Birlas. He hates Harshvardhan and dislikes Abhimanyu's guts.

The writers took the easier route. Kairav Bhaiya

For me it is history repeating itself. Humsafars had to go through a similar fate.

There is still time to plug in the loopholes.

The writers have to check the Bengali original and should use the copy paste function.

Well said!!!!

So many loop holes and they are lost. They do not know which one to fill first. Abhimanyu should be shown mending his family differences before getting Akshara. It’s a long journey. Abhimanyu himself is so confused as he doesn’t know what he wants to do.

Akshara on the other hand has no one to support her in working out the differences.
like you said, there’s still time and before things go out of hand, hopeful that they do something

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khayali_pulao

Well said!!!!

So many loop holes and they are lost. They do not know which one to fill first. Abhimanyu should be shown mending his family differences before getting Akshara. It’s a long journey. Abhimanyu himself is so confused as he doesn’t know what he wants to do.

Akshara on the other hand has no one to support her in working out the differences.
like you said, there’s still time and before things go out of hand, hopeful that they do something

Thank You.

I saw a few episodes of the Bengali serial. I wish to state that all leads have a detailed character graph. No defective family relationships. The regional writer penned down the tracks between 3 characters and weaved in the others.

Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata has a legacy. The first generation was sorted out. The second apart the love story had plenty of rotten apples. 3rd generation is dysfunctional.

New additions to the show are far more complex than the original characters

For displaying complexity, the actors have to be competent enough. Karishma is doing a neat job.

Mayank is not giving the right expressions.

Kairav has no spine. Pranali has to prove herself in faceoffs. She need not shout and scream.

Abhimanyu has to undo his own tangles. As per ethics he does not have any say.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Winnertakesital

Thank You.

I saw a few episodes of the Bengali serial. I wish to state that all leads have a detailed character graph. No defective family relationships. The regional writer penned down the tracks between 3 characters and weaved in the others.

Agreed!!! I am not sure about the original show though I know the story. What’s irking me is the characters of even the leads is not defined properly. We know their basic nature but after al lthat’s happening with them, the transition phase has to be shown. There is no connect.

Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata has a legacy. The first generation was sorted out. The second apart the love story had plenty of rotten apples. 3rd generation is dysfunctional.

All of them are doing what they feel is right and they do it to sort it out at the moment. I still agree with this because that’s how the current gen people are. But that doesn’t mean that every single person present pulls the rope to their direction and expect it not to break. They have their own personal problems amongst their families which needs to be sorted out. The story isn’t going that way.

New additions to the show are far more complex than the original characters

For displaying complexity, the actors have to be competent enough. Karishma is doing a neat job.

The old tracks which are hanging needs to be given a proper play even if not a closure. All are hanging loosely. The story is not creative at all and they introducing characters to divert the attention from the original tracks and problems.

Mayank is not giving the right expressions.

Mayank needs to work on his expressions. One person can’t run the show. Anisha is fine but I don’t like her outlook. Why are good looking actors made to look like dumbos.

Kairav has no spine. Pranali has to prove herself in faceoffs. She need not shout and scream.

Characters / actors esp Pranali and Karishma can concentrate more on their part than bringing in More characters occupying the screen time.

Abhimanyu has to undo his own tangles. As per ethics he does not have any say.

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Pranali is somewhere lagging nowadays. I am unable to connect and also the scenes are so miplaced. The editing sucks. Why is there a rush I don’t understand??? Why can’t things be taken one at a time??

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