MiNeil FF "Forever....in your heart" Epilogue on pg 165 uptd 22/08/202 - Page 108

It's mineil mistakes also . They acted stupid 😈😈😈

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Mickey arya cheers to them .

first time they are not acting like kebab mein haddi and actually helping mineil😆

Originally posted by: Krithzz

But MiNeil💔💔💔 they are shattered. They lost everything because of this Yash . How are they going to face each other now ?

Yash did what he wanted but miniel are equally at fault. The truth has made them face their worst fear ie what if the other was not wrong, what if he/she was right all along. Now they have to deal with it.

Originally posted by: Krithzz

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How will they face each other ?😳 poor souls💔

They have so far away. Now even if they realize their mistake, its not going to be easy for them

Originally posted by: Krithzz

It's mineil mistakes also . They acted stupid 😈😈😈

yes both were stupid enough to trust every other person around them except each other

This MiNeil are idiots Thank god this time Mickey arya took things to their hands. Now waiting for their confrontation.. And it's going to be 💔

Originally posted by: su_94

This MiNeil are idiots Thank god this time Mickey arya took things to their hands. Now waiting for their confrontation.. And it's going to be 💔

Yes they are certified idiots. But both of them were already like this, emotional, reckless somewhat edgy. In normal case opposite attracts but here I guess they pulled each other close with those striking similarities🤣it was loke they knew they were doomed but got together inspite of that.🤣

It was difficult writing this ff. Over emotional characters. I dont know if i did justice with them. I think i am not good at writing this kind of stuff. The ss of bechari mini was not liked by many and here both were becharas😆 khushi is excellent in all this emotional, broken kind of characters.

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Yes they are certified idiots. But both of them were already like this, emotional, reckless somewhat edgy. In normal case opposite attracts but here I guess they pulled each other close with those striking similarities🤣it was loke they knew they were doomed but got together inspite of that.🤣

It was difficult writing this ff. Over emotional characters. I dont know if i did justice with them. I think i am not good at writing this kind of stuff. The ss of bechari mini was not liked by many and here both were becharas😆 khushi is excellent in all this emotional, broken kind of characters.

I agree completely .This is one tough story to write this MiNeil are emotional ,idiots Seeing MiNeil as bechare is tough to digest for fans. We has fans will not like bechari Mini specially🤣 Image of strong Mini is very strong and it's tough to imagine her being bechari Sati Savitri types 🤣

You are brilliant at writing MiNeil we love That balanced MiNeil from show . This story was different one and you above done very good job Anjali and you have done justice .we could imagine them throughout. I think this is the one story where we discussed a lot 🤣 There was different views also .. dissection also done.

Originally posted by: su_94

I agree completely .This is one tough story to write this MiNeil are emotional ,idiots Seeing MiNeil as bechare is tough to digest for fans. We has fans will not like bechari Mini specially🤣 Image of strong Mini is very strong and it's tough to imagine her being bechari Sati Savitri types 🤣

You are brilliant at writing MiNeil we love That balanced MiNeil from show . This story was different one and you above done very good job Anjali and you have done justice .we could imagine them throughout. I think this is the one story where we discussed a lot 🤣 There was different views also .. dissection also done.

Ya this story was discussed many times, dissected, even changed by me🤣. And you guys might have non agreement about few things but nevertheless you showered love on this one.

I understand in ss of bechari mini its difficult to digest specially after strong independent mini is so deeply rooted in our minds (thanks to ashnoor's performance for that) but i wanted to play a little with different characterisation, altogether opposite of what we had seen or imagined...to be honest, i realized the character had become too cliche dukhiyari 80's ki heroine types😆 but then i thought neil's character and his confusion and charm will maintain the interest of readers and it did too with all that devil vs angel side convo😆 but it didn't have that impact like embrace neil or like sordid neil.

Well, guess some stories are not that upto the mark or come out as they were imagined. Same thing happened to this ff also. As it was copied from the old story meant for another forum, another couple, the elements, the emotions were different. It suffered a lot due to frequent changes, halts....when i go through some parts now they feel childish, stupid and hinder the continuation. If I would have wrote it again today on mineil then it would have turned out much better...but what is done, done..

Will keep changing few things though even after completion so that if there is any new reader then they can get better understanding😆

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Well, guess some stories are not that upto the mark or come out as they were imagined. Same thing happened to this ff also. As it was copied from the old story meant for another forum, another couple, the elements, the emotions were different. It suffered a lot due to frequent changes, halts....when i go through some parts now they feel childish, stupid and hinder the continuation. If I would have wrote it again today on mineil then it would have turned out much better...but what is done, done..

Will keep changing few things though even after completion so that if there is any new reader then they can get better understanding😆

This always happens with writers ,actors ,singers or say even with us in any matter 🤣we feel we would have done it better now . With age , experience we grow may be that's one reason