ShiVi TS: Leap of Faith - Page 4

Part 2 updated on Pg.1. Please leave your likes and comments!

I would very much like to know if the characterization of ShiVi here was somewhat true to canon!

Thank you all for reading and the support! 🤗

Just tagging you in case you feel like reading! 😳 No pressure, but would love to know your thoughts!

It was hot and lovely😍😍❤🔥🔥

Loved the last part❤❤

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was hot and lovely😍😍❤🔥🔥

Loved the last part❤❤

Thank you! I was more than a little apprehensive to post this, but was assured you guys would like it! 😆❤️

The last part- you mean when they talked?

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Thank you! I was more than a little apprehensive to post this, but was assured you guys would like it! 😆❤️

The last part- you mean when they talked?

You wrote it so well....❤❤

Yes, their conversation😍❤

Originally posted by: Kfof

You wrote it so well....❤❤

Yes, their conversation😍❤

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

I'm new to the fandom and don't know many people here.

I'd be grateful if you guys can tag your friends if you think they'd like to read.

It will help motivate me to write more ShiVi! 😳

I am just amazed. This is hands down the best work of yours (that I have read).

It was exhilarating to read this. The concept was incredibly exciting and fresh! Bungee jumping - how did you imagine this? 😆 It scares the beejeezus out of me 🤣

Oh man, the fire 🔥 when Shiva pulls Raavi against him on the platform! Then they tumble down and you captured the whole scene like a freakin pro. I think you are one of those people who don’t realise how good you actually are.

I can’t read badly written stuff, unless I am forced to (eg. in You Know Who’s case). Often I can’t read even the average stuff. But your pieces have me hooked ❤️ This one was right up my alley with its unique concept, perfect description and flow of feelings, the right blend of passion and restraint (or what is termed as “thehrav” in Hindi. Only good writers know how to write scenes like that and I am very relieved that you are one of them 😆

I was just mesmerised when Raavi and Shiva kiss. Found myself cheering when Raavi initiated it Shiva, of course, took charge like a boss man and I was just so caught up in the passionate description ☺️ Could picture them entirely and you wrote the scene like you write this kind of thing everyday 😆 I was transported back to my hormone riddled time as a teenager. That thrill of a passionate kiss, the teeth marks, the swollen lips, the feeling of time stopping around you… Okay, I am getting carried away in nostalgia 🤣

I need more of such stuff from you. Need. Need. Need. You seem to have got the hang of Shiva and Raavi, and I can’t wait to read more of your work on them.

Feel free to tag me. I won’t say it if I didn’t mean it. You only have to read my profile description to know this 🤭

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Just tagging you in case you feel like reading! 😳 No pressure, but would love to know your thoughts!

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

I am just amazed. This is hands down the best work of yours (that I have read).

It was exhilarating to read this. The concept was incredibly exciting and fresh! Bungee jumping - how did you imagine this? 😆 It scares the beejeezus out of me 🤣

Oh man, the fire 🔥 when Shiva pulls Raavi against him on the platform! Then they tumble down and you captured the whole scene like a freakin pro. I think you are one of those people who don’t realise how good you actually are.

I can’t read badly written stuff, unless I am forced to (eg. in You Know Who’s case). Often I can’t read even the average stuff. But your pieces have me hooked ❤️ This one was right up my alley with its unique concept, perfect description and flow of feelings, the right blend of passion and restraint (or what is termed as “thehrav” in Hindi. Only good writers know how to write scenes like that and I am very relieved that you are one of them 😆

I was just mesmerised when Raavi and Shiva kiss. Found myself cheering when Raavi initiated it Shiva, of course, took charge like a boss man and I was just so caught up in the passionate description ☺️ Could picture them entirely and you wrote the scene like you write this kind of thing everyday 😆 I was transported back to my hormone riddled time as a teenager. That thrill of a passionate kiss, the teeth marks, the swollen lips, the feeling of time stopping around you… Okay, I am getting carried away in nostalgia 🤣

I need more of such stuff from you. Need. Need. Need. You seem to have got the hang of Shiva and Raavi, and I can’t wait to read more of your work on them.

Feel free to tag me. I won’t say it if I didn’t mean it. You only have to read my profile description to know this 🤭

AHHHHHH! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!! 🤗🤗🤗

I can't remember the last time my work was read and appreciated with meaningful comments. (It was a looong time ago! 😆) and I guess the author in me was kinda laying dormant, resigned, learning not to expect much.

But you have re-instilled my faith in my writing and I cannot tell you how incredibly grateful I am to you for that!

I like writing passionate scenes, especially the ones with 'thehraav' like you call them. It leaves one with a delicious feeling of anticipation and wanting more. I feel this when I read too, and I read a LOT of romances. These scenes get me all hot and bothered - more than the actual consummation scene!

As for the bungee jumping, I confess I did not think up of it specifically for Shiva and Raavi. It was written for my OCs in my novel and it seemed to suit them because my FL was an inhibited person and she needed this to let go of her fears and take the plunge. But after your character sketch on ShiVi I felt like the concept would do them justice.

FYI, Bungee jumping scares the bejesus outta me too, I frankly admit I'm a darpok. 😆

Thanks once again for all the encouragement ❤️- you were the one to suggest I adapt my angsty Lagaan story into a ShiVi fic and now you seem to have unleashed a monster! 😆😆

You’re always welcome. It’s a pleasure to read some well written stuff here 🤗

Someone told me once that writing is a lonely job. I am so grateful that we are in the Internet world, where there are enough avenues to have our work read and appreciated ❤️

Being in the IF FF section must have been a tiring thing. I am so glad your work is now more visible, even if you have to tweak some bits. You could even change characterisation completely and fandoms are kind enough to accept it.

I love thehraav too. It’s so important in all the novels I like to read. This is one of the reasons I don’t like erotica much. I have read all the popular ones like 50 shades, Bared To Me, Twist Me etc., but it’s really not my scene. I found myself rolling my eyes so hard. Most authors are too point blank with sexual chemistry and it bores me to read sex scene after sex scene with little story in the book.

Damn girl, you adapted such a perfect little scene. I loved it to the core and the way you brought it alive was just mindblowing. My orbs fell out of my sockets wala good 🤭

I cherish this monster and cannot wait to read more of such thehrav wala sexy romance

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

AHHHHHH! Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!! 🤗🤗🤗

I can't remember the last time my work was read and appreciated with meaningful comments. (It was a looong time ago! 😆) and I guess the author in me was kinda laying dormant, resigned, learning not to expect much.

But you have re-instilled my faith in my writing and I cannot tell you how incredibly grateful I am to you for that!

I like writing passionate scenes, especially the ones with 'thehraav' like you call them. It leaves one with a delicious feeling of anticipation and wanting more. I feel this when I read too, and I read a LOT of romances. These scenes get me all hot and bothered - more than the actual consummation scene!

As for the bungee jumping, I confess I did not think up of it specifically for Shiva and Raavi. It was written for my OCs in my novel and it seemed to suit them because my FL was an inhibited person and she needed this to let go of her fears and take the plunge. But after your character sketch on ShiVi I felt like the concept would do them justice.

FYI, Bungee jumping scares the bejesus outta me too, I frankly admit I'm a darpok. 😆

Thanks once again for all the encouragement ❤️- you were the one to suggest I adapt my angsty Lagaan story into a ShiVi fic and now you seem to have unleashed a monster! 😆😆

I loved loved loved part 2! Beautiful!❤️‍🔥