Riansh ts- Our small family. Chapter 1&2 page 1 complete.

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This request is by Akkusharma77, and i am keeping Uma dead in this. Sorry for that🙈🙈and my own changes.



In Siliguri


A man was telling his life's adventures to a baby boy and girl. And they were listening very carefully, Riddhima came inside her father in law's room and smiled at the scene before her. Both of the little devils were listening to their grandfather, it is only she they didn't listen to,

R- Babies chalo, Dadaji ka sone ka time ho gaya hain and aapka bhi. Chalo.

Ri- Oo Mom, abhi story mein interesting twist aane wala hain na.

Va- Han Mom..please.

R- No babies. Saari story abhi sun lo gaye then what will you hear next?

R- Chalo jaldi jao and brush your teeth. Dad aapne medicine le li.

A- Han beta, Mujhe teri aur Vansh ki daant nahi suni hain.🙊🙊.

R- Good night Dad.

A- Good night dear.


Riddhima went to the children's room, they were already in the bed, and fallen asleep courtesy of all the naughtiness they did with their grandpa. She placed a soft kiss on their forehead and went back to her room keeping the beautiful night light on.


She was sitting on the bed, waiting for Vansh. She also looked into her patients case file. Yes, she had decided to work again, she didn't want to rely always on Vansh's money. And too supported her, still she feels that deep down he still misses his family. She remembers the day he decided to leave them like it was yesterday.


Flashback


Sia was showing Riddhima her old photo books and it had everyone's birthday party pictures, except Vansh. She looked at Sia and asked,

R- Sia, Vansh ke birthday ki koi pictures kyun nahi hain.?

S- Bhabhi, bhai ko aapna birthday hi celebrate karna aacha nahi lagta hain.

R- Really? But why?

S- Aare Bhabhi mujhe kuch kaam hain. I will talk to you later.

R- Aare Sia wait..


Vansh was in the secret room he had brought the blackcurrant icecream for the man, he had kept in the room,

M- Vansh..tum mujhe kab yahan rakhne wala ho. Your a bad boy. I will not talk to you.

V- Bas thoda time aur i promise. Yeh lo aapke liye icecream.

M- No, he throws the icecream away. You are bad. I won't talk to you. He scoots to the corner and looks outside and pouts like a little kid.


Vansh felt suffocated, and angry he went outside only to find Riddhima coming towards the secret room with a cake,

V- What are you doing here.?

R- Sia ne bataya ki kal tumhara birthday so i wanted to surprise you with this cake.

V- I don't like to celebrate my birthday.

R- But why? Tumhe pata hain ki mere ko pata hi nahi tha ki mere birthday kab aata hain. So i decided to chose a date and celebrate my birthday every year on that particular day.

V- Bas, he flicks the cake away. I don't want anything.

R- But i want to Vansh. Me and our baby want to celebrate your birthday issme galat kya hain.?


Vansh didn't say anything just went away from there, he forgot to close the door of the secret room properly, the person inside came and pointed his toy gun at Riddhima,

M- Hands up.🙌🙌. Tumko pakad liya mene.

R- Aap kaun hain?

M- Aare woh khadus Vansh hain na uska dost. He looks down at the cake, and tries to eat it.

R- Aare don't eat that. It's not good.

M- But i want food. Woh Vansh mereko bas dal chawal deta hain.

R- Aacha theek hain, i have an idea. She takes him quietly to her other room and makes him sit there. She calls Angre and tells him that if Vansh ask tell him she is sleeping with Sia today.


Riddhima took care of the man, she ordered pizza for him and he ate like a little child. In the morning, she locked him in the room and went to get breakfast for him, she also saw Vansh looking panicked searching for someone,

R- Vansh kya hua?

V- Riddhima tell me the truth, did you take this man out of the room. He shows her the photo of the man.

R- Tum chalo mere saath i know where he is.

M- Riddhima...tum..oh..he hid behind Riddhima and it was hilarious to see since he was the same height as Vansh.

M- Tum khadus ko kyun lekar aayi.

R- Aise nahi bolte. He was worried about you.

M- Tum mujhe yeh khana do.


He sat on the bed and ate like a little child. Riddhima looked at Vansh who was looking at him with pain, love and affection. Who is this person, she had to ask now?

R- Vansh who is this?

V- My Dad. Ajay Raisinghania.


Ps- Hey guys hope you like it and the next chapter will be about Ajay accident and flipper budhiya's death. Please do comment.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Fantastic

Update Soon

Really Interesting

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just a random doubt i didnt really get time to watch these episodes i just read the written updates... who was the person in the room , like in the show?

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Originally posted by: thunderbird

just a random doubt i didnt really get time to watch these episodes i just read the written updates... who was the person in the room , like in the show?


As much as i remember there was no one. Vansh had kept it as room or rather a shrine of memories of his father. But the last few episodes were all hotch potch..so we don't know wht exactly they wanted to show.

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There are so many loopholes in the last few episodes....😔😔😔


Amazing start Raveena 😘😘😘


Vansh ko Khadus bola🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Fab and amazing update dear well done

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Chapter 2


Ajay had eaten the breakfast and was playing in the balcony, Vansh was looking at him. Riddhima was still in shock that her father- in- law is still alive, but she wanted to know why he didn't tell anyone about this,


R- Vansh tumne family walo ko kyun nahi bataya iske baare mein?

V- Because they all think ki he is dead, only i know ki unhe head injury hui thi and he has alzheimer's he doesn't remember anything. Sometimes he remembers Mom.

R- But hua kya tha?

V- It is the reason why i hate my birthday.


Flashback


After Uma's death Ajay had become a complete workaholic, and slowly Vansh too had started helping him. Ajay married Anupriya so that she can take care of his children, he was a loving husband and father.


It was Vansh's birthday when that horrible incident happened, a deal which was difficult and death threat were given but still he went out for it, even Vansh tried to stop him,

V- Dad atleast take me with you.

A- Nahi, Vansh it is your birthday stay here and celebrate with the family.

D- Ajay, mein kahe rahi hun na, it's dangerous don't go.

A- Mom, i will be fine.


It was midnight Ajay hadn't returned and then suddenly rang the bell, Vansh along with few bodyguard went and opened the door only to see Ajay's body laid out by the door.

V- DAD!!!🥺🥺🥺

D- AJAY!!!


Not believing he was dead he ordered his bodyguard to take him to the hospital and some of them stayed at the mansion for protection as well. While he was going to the hospital, Ajay had grasped his hand.


With the help of the doctors he had saved and fabricated a story that he is dead. And he had kept him in Goa, away from others. He would visit whenever he can, it was recently only that he had started walking around.


Present


He was crying by the time he told the truth to Riddhima, he went to take a shower and Riddhima called Ajay inside and told him to take some rest. Vansh came out with puffy eyes, changed his clothes and sat on the sofa,

R- Vansh, do you know who wanted to kill Dad?

V- No. Funny thing i couldn't find my mother's and father's attackers for so long. I really feel so incompetent.

R- Vansh, look at me. You are not incompetent okay. You have taken care of this family for so long. I am proud of you. We will find the person who attacked your together. Okay.

V- Thank you. For everything.

R- Tum aaram karo. Okay.

V- Kahan ja rahi ho?

R- Pizza order karne. Humari deal hain, dinner mein only Pizza😋😋

V- Sahi hain.


Riddhima had gone out to give the message directly to the chef, when he saw Vyom going into Dadi's room, afraid for Dadi's safety she too went inside and hid, she could hear them talking.

Vy- Dadiji, aap woh black box mujhe de do and no one has to know the truth behind Ajay's death.

R-(thinks)- What the..i have to record this conversation.

D- Yeh kya mujhe dhamki dete rhethe ho? Don't forget you killed Ajay.

Vy- And who gave the order? It was you? And why because he didn't listen to you and went to do the deal himself.

D- Han i gave the order because i was angry that he didn't listen to me. And you killed him to avenge your family.

Vy- Han, because that Vansh killed my wife and daughter. And this black box is the ultimate key to your destruction. Give it to me.


He struggled with the box and when Indrani refused to give him the box he pointed a gun at her, but Riddhima quickly took a vase and hit him, and took Dadi with her,

R- Chaliye yahan se. She took her to the room where Ajay and Vansh were waiting for her.

V- Riddhima tum.. Dadi.

D- Ajay. Mere bacha kaise hai tu.

Aj- Aye dur raho. Nahi toh i will shoot.

V- Riddhima hua kya hain..

R- Aap bolengi Dadi ya mein recording sunao Vansh ko.

Vy- Vansh. He came inside pointing a gun. Aare wah puri family yahi hain.

D- Vyom leave them. Vansh i am so sorry it was me who ordered the hit on Ajay. I am so sorry.


Vyom fed up with drama shoots Vansh but Indrani came in between, Riddhima took the gun from night stand and shot Vyom. Everyone had came into the room hearing the commotion,

V- Dadi aapko kuch nahi hoga..

D- I am so sorry Vansh. Fo.for everything i did..she breathes her last.


Everyone is shocked, they got Ajay back only to lose Indrani. Vansh was tried of all the manipulation so he decided to leave the family, 50 percent of his property was distributed in between the family and rest went to Angre.


With the help of a good doctor, Ajay was slowly recovering but still had memory problems. Riddhima soon gave birth to twins and they were spoiled by Ajay a lot. Vansh still did Mafia business but he tried to be more careful.


Present


Riddhima was still thinking when she felt a kiss on her cheek, she blushed seeing Vansh. He smirked and sat next to her on the bed,

V- I love it when you still blush because of the small things i do.

R- Vansh, do you think we did right in leaving the family. I know that sometimes you feel sad..

V- Yes, i miss them Riddhima but do think what our would have been always solving their problems or they trying to hurt our babies. The more we stay far is better.


They hugged each other, thankul that they got second chance at life, that Riddhima received a father's love, scolding and grateful for their two little children who are the apple of their eyes.


The End


Hey guys the last chapter hope you like it. Please do comment...and i will try to update my other stories as well.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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First of all sorry late replying and reading the update very late, sorry for that 🙏🙏

And Thank You So Much for writing on my suggestion 🙏🙏🙏

It's so awesome and amazing 👌👌👌

Really loved the starting of chapter 1 and then their cute kids 👫

And the way you portray the pain and then the climax was mind boggling 👌👌👌👌

Loved it ♥️♥️

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Originally posted by: Akkusharma77

First of all sorry late replying and reading the update very late, sorry for that 🙏🙏

And Thank You So Much for writing on my suggestion 🙏🙏🙏

It's so awesome and amazing 👌👌👌

Really loved the starting of chapter 1 and then their cute kids 👫

And the way you portray the pain and then the climax was mind boggling 👌👌👌👌

Loved it ♥️♥️


Thank you. Ab aapka ss bhi likhna hain na...

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Originally posted by: raveena0605


Thank you. Ab aapka ss bhi likhna hain na...

Oh yaar mujhe chod do 😫😫

I can give suggestion only

U guys can write 🙏🙏🙏

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