Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 50

Originally posted by: drnidsur

u just picked it girl

smart writing on your part

“Jo pyaar pehle se hi nafrat ke aag se guzar chuka ho, vo pyaar itni aasani se tutega nehi,” she said.- this is so truee

they can never leave each other

they would die but not live without the other

Thanks a lot🤗

RaghVi, both are phoenix. Itni bar jal chuke hain ki ab koi aag unnko mita nehi sakta. Ab toh aag unnke andar bas chuki hain

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I liked that inverted commas.😆 "Farz"

That flow was flawless. Didn't feel like other person continuing. Just smooth. 👏

Loved that small bit between R, P and M.

So finally his face is clear, and he got slapped too. Too good deserving one. 👏

So divorce.... His words to Pallavi made sense, hence I said smooth. ❤️

And that usage of last line was done well too. ❤️

Thank you, thank you soooo much😃

I had some more things planned but word limit ne band bajadi😭

Originally posted by: MsPrez

Thank you, thank you soooo much😃

I had some more things planned but word limit ne band bajadi😭

You are most welcome. ❤️

You can write again, have two more chances, just wait for two drabbles from two writers.... 😆

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Hey MsPrez,

Wow my lady, you are awesome 😎. This ws exactly the way I wanted to continue the story!!!! Awesome, your expressions (Infamous don attitude, Mandaar's true colours) wow, just wow!! I think we are telepathic 😁. But you have written exponential nicer than me 😂. I loved the way you took my line and made it more intense by making it the last line. 🤗

Awesome 👍🥳

I forgot to mention, Iearned how to distinguish dialogues from rest of the story!!

Vera 💜

Hey! Hi, Vera🤗

When I read your drabble, I knew exactly the way I wanted to continue it😆 Glad to know that you wanted the same.

That's great! Even I started writing from IF and matured as a writer here only. Happy to help more writers

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You are most welcome. ❤️

You can write again, have two more chances, just wait for two drabbles from two writers.... 😆

Usi ka hi wait kar rahi hoon😆

Originally posted by: MsPrez

Thanks a lot🤗

RaghVi, both are phoenix. Itni bar jal chuke hain ki ab koi aag unnko mita nehi sakta. Ab toh aag unnke andar bas chuki hain

Woahh you also have love for phoenixes 🤗

U know I have a thing for phoenix 😆😆

I wrote my bit abt pallavi with phoenix in disguise title for the 150th epi write up a 😆

Originally posted by: drnidsur

sama ek aur plan

kyaaa

tumahra khuarafati plan ka hint dedo yahaan

Farhad woh Pallavi Raghav Rao hai woh zaroor ayega- this she is PRR

she and ayi are the strongest women out there - you just lifted them even more

amazing job sama 🤗

She's PRR after all plan toh hona hi tha 😂😂

Also got my much wanted trio that i know they're never gonna give me onscreen

Raghav - Pallavi - Ved 🙂😗

Thank youu ❤❤

Ri is up next, excited to read

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Ved 😲

Sama, that was an exciting one, loved it

Thank you ❤

yes my favorite person is here

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

That was long. How many words was there? Just curious? 😛

I usually get bored reading lengthy ones and with Hindi mixed too (I'm a south Indian) but that was well written. Didn't feel like first time TBH.

Liked how you made Pallavi hear what Raghav had to say. And she is understanding too. Nice one.

If possible keep writing, you will improve much much more. 🤗

Thanks @LoveHopeMagic. Maybe around 950 words 😅!!!. Thanks, that was very nice of you, your comments have made me cognizant that I should write anything thats readable to everyone. So I am thankful to you 😍!!! I hope to improve too.