Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 48

u just picked it girl

smart writing on your part

“Jo pyaar pehle se hi nafrat ke aag se guzar chuka ho, vo pyaar itni aasani se tutega nehi,” she said.- this is so truee

they can never leave each other

they would die but not live without the other

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Let's go to the celebration thread and fill it up!!! Wahan bhi kuch karenge!! Lagta hai some serious discussion is going on there 😄

Oo yes!! Tag me there I seem to have lost that thread 😃

Originally posted by: drnidsur

So, you came." He had missed her voice too.

"I was obviously going to come. It was just a question of when."

just so beautiful lines

i loved themmmmm

he is staying thereeeee

you wrote really wellllll

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: drnidsur

Biwi hai, aur aakri saans tak tumhi rahogi. Jab tak zinda hoon, mein sirf tumhara husband hai, Ardhamayindha.

thisssss you killed it with this

i loved the way you dropped hint with this one

Thanks!!! It was kind of you to give your comments!!!❤️

Your words mean a lot of me. This encouragement will go a long way. Thanks from my heart to you all the forum members who have commented. You all are sweethearts 💜

Vera

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Not this time, Hinna. Way too much to finish already. Plus, the show is annoying these days, so I don’t feel the pull 😆

Miss your stories😭

sama ek aur plan

kyaaa

tumahra khuarafati plan ka hint dedo yahaan

Farhad woh Pallavi Raghav Rao hai woh zaroor ayega- this she is PRR

she and ayi are the strongest women out there - you just lifted them even more

amazing job sama 🤗

That was long. How many words was there? Just curious? 😛

I usually get bored reading lengthy ones and with Hindi mixed too (I'm a south Indian) but that was well written. Didn't feel like first time TBH.

Liked how you made Pallavi hear what Raghav had to say. And she is understanding too. Nice one.

If possible keep writing, you will improve much much more. 🤗

I liked that inverted commas.😆 "Farz"

That flow was flawless. Didn't feel like other person continuing. Just smooth. 👏

Loved that small bit between R, P and M.

So finally his face is clear, and he got slapped too. Too good deserving one. 👏

So divorce.... His words to Pallavi made sense, hence I said smooth. ❤️

And that usage of last line was done well too. ❤️

Ved 😲

Sama, that was an exciting one, loved it

Aai + Pallavi==new deadly combo...ab sabki shamat aayegi...or sabse pehle to BAKE ki

Ye lo..most loved villain ki entry bhi ho gayi

Another plan...ab to VD+BAKE ka hoga tay tay phiisssss

Kya twist laayi ho Sama 👏👏