"You Are My Hell" part 4 (Final) page 15 - Page 8

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Posted: 4 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

LOL ! This reminded me of Shakti Kapoor's role in a movie and his famous dialogue - Mein ek chota sa pyaara sa nanha sa bachcha hu 🤣🤣

It's from there only. I often say this🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#73

Yes!!!!!

Ye huyi na baat!

Sai is young, and can make errors, ye expected hai... and accepted hai.

Par endgame toh Virat air Sai hi honi chahiye! ā¤


Beautifully written, so that I felt sorry for Ajinkya as well... his confused state comes across very well!

Waiting for IPS Chavan's entry now!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Yes!!!!!

Ye huyi na baat!

Sai is young, and can make errors, ye expected hai... and accepted hai.

Par endgame toh Virat air Sai hi honi chahiye! ā¤


Beautifully written, so that I felt sorry for Ajinkya as well... his confused state comes across very well!

Waiting for IPS Chavan's entry now!!!

I tried to give a character sketch to Ajinkya and incorporated him and his motives. I am happy his character came out exactly how I had conceived it.

Thanks Appuā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
#75

Wow

Very interesting

Please continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#76

Interesting updateā¤ļø


I want to know how sai fall 4 Ajinkya ?


Continue soon...

Edited by Fruitcustard_9 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Deevu

Wow

Very interesting

Please continue soon

thankyou

Will surely continue soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Fruitcustard_9

Interesting updateā¤ļø


I want to know how sai fall 4 Ajinkya ?


Continue soon...

Thankyou Deepikaā¤ļø


This is a four part story. And you might get a suggestion of it.


Will surely continue soon Deepu😳. Can I call you Deepu😳

If not, please let me know😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful update. Ajinkya is a confused soul. Waiting for IPS Virat Chavans entry.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Well now I have decided to not murder you .......yet 😼😼

Sai is young and Virat's silence and reluctance to clear everything made her think that he still loves didi and don't see her anymore than a responsibility that's why she made this mistake and now she realised it too 😌😌

I still hate that douchebag beetle boy šŸ¤¬šŸ¤¬šŸ”ŖšŸ”Ŗ

And you better make Sairat endgame if you want to live a long peaceful life cheeku * Mwahaha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha * 😈😈

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