"You Are My Hell" part 4 (Final) page 15

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Show wala Ajinkya is such a sweet baccha, aur yeh.... Amma I am scared😰

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Originally posted by: Devikadish

Show wala Ajinkya is such a sweet baccha, aur yeh.... Amma I am scared😰

I have yet to form an opinion about the show's Ajinkya🤣

I'm glad you're scared😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Hey everyone! Just a small piece. I request you to take it as an OS and not to weigh it in terms of moral/immoral; right/wrong.


This is not what I wanted. This is not what Aaba would've wanted for me.

A teary eyed Sai looked at her hands helplessly that were tied with a rope that had made several cuts in her skin symbolising the several attempts she had made to free herself.

She tried to adjust herself and her whole body ached. A tear escaped her eyes. She was too scared to cry lest it should wake him up.

She looked at him sleeping in a chair in a half lying position. She couldn't believe that the same guy used to make love to her so gently that she often wondered if she were a flower. The same man used to laugh at her antics that he found cute once upon a time. Now the same man is disgusted even if she breathes.

She sobbed despite herself and then shut her mouth tightly but it was too late.

"Umm..." The man woke up with tired eyes and looked around. His eyes fell on her and his face contorted in disgust. He picked up a glass lying on the floor beside his chair and threw it in her direction. The glass hit her right leg and cut right through it. A stream of fresh blood appeared on her already wounded leg and she yelped.

"SHUT UUPPP!!!" He shouted and covered his ears with his hands, "Kitna shor karti ho tum? Thodi der Shanti se Insaan so bhi nahi sakta?" He gritted his teeth and closed his eyes again. Soon, the features became relaxed as he fell asleep again.

She bit her lip to keep herself from weeping or crying in pain. Though she managed to keep silent, her body kept shaking as she sobbed.

She herself had no clue when she had fallen asleep.

"Ye! Mere liye?" Sai's eyes twinkled as she happily took the pendant in her hands.

Virat rolled his eyes, "nahi, padosan ke liye."

Sai pouted and Virat chuckled.

She immediately tried to tie it around her neck but couldn't do so.

A hand came around her neck, "Main pehnata hu," Sai smiled as she looked at their reflection in the mirror.

Soon the hold of his hand got stronger.

"Virat Sir, kya kar rahe hain," she smiled. But soon her smile evaporated as the hold for stronger and stronger.

"Vi..." She couldn't utter further and violently opened her eyes and found Ajinkya smirking before her but the pain didn't go away while he choked her.

Virat Sir, mujhe le ke jaiye. Mujhse galti ho gayi. Mujhe le ke jaiye.

Sai thought as everything became dark.


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I know it's a little different. But thankyou for tolerating🤣

OMG😲


Plz continue soon... I m bit confused what happening

Edited by Fruitcustard_9 - 4 years ago
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What have you done?!

Cheeku!!!

I would have loved the Virat saving Sai track par Sai cheated?!

You should be happy that I love you and won't kill you 😒

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fruitcustard_9

OMG😲


Plz continue soon... I m bit confused what happening

It was meant to be an OS. I might or might not continue😆

Maybe I will. But Appu will kill me🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

What have you done?!

Cheeku!!!

I would have loved the Virat saving Sai track par Sai cheated?!

You should be happy that I love you and won't kill you 😒

Before this, I had made Devyani cheat on Pulkit🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

It was meant to be an OS. I might or might not continue😆

Maybe I will. But Appu will kill me🤣


No I will save u pakka Pinki promise.


Bas thoda confuse hu iss OS isiliye continue karne ko kaha.


Appu don't kill her , if she don't continue then u r free 2😈

Edited by Fruitcustard_9 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fruitcustard_9


No I will save u pakka Pinki promise.


Bas thoda confuse hu iss OS isiliye continue karne ko kaha.


Appu don't kill her , if she don't continue then u r free 2😈

Haawwww!!!

Pehle bola I'll save you.

Then gave her the reason to kill me🤣

Continue karun ya nahi karun, I'm dead for sure🤣

She is going to kill me anyway🤣

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🤣🤣

Am I supposed to laugh cuz I know this is never gonna happen or am I supposed to laugh that how did Viru didn't give special importance and dhamki to "kya"🤣

What is wrong with you Shristhi, I swear I am laughing lile an idiot, what on earth is happening🤣

But, Sai bahan, kaa kami thi ruby ke design mein(okay,I agree it was theek theek and it's cost on online apparently showed 1396 rs. to me) ki yeh harkat kiya

Naak kataadi😕

I need part two, or I'll die of some respiratory choking due to laughing like mad cap🤣

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