Aaj zindagi meri bahon mein- a Virat poem - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So beautiful and perfect.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

What?!

Again...?

Cheeku! 😭❤️😭


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Aaj zindagi meri bahon mein chali aayi

The very first line slayed me. End of discussion.

Zimmedari, became companionship, became friendship, became trust, pride and joy, and now she is his very life.

Virat ki dhadkan, wajood, aur guroor uski Sai hi hai.


Nothing exists for him beyond her.

In the middle of the big Chavan family, he had his own little world, him and his Aai, and his far away Jeeva, both busy with their own problems and life, even thought the love was unconditional. But now, there is this girl, who will fight the world for her Virat Sir, and his happiness, when he himself doesn't know what he needs.


She is his entire world now.

Sach me duniya se bekhabr hai, jab dono sath hote hai, ek dusre se pare koi duniya hi nahi rahe, jab dono sath hote hai.

Woh bechain hai uske liye.

And her fear, her concern, her trembling lips and moist eyes give him something to run back to, to fight for, to be alive.

Kal ka kal dekha jaayega, aaj toh Virat ki zindagi uske baahon me hai!


Cheeku... the love that flows from your words have engulfed me, and I'm so very grateful for the tag!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

What?!

Again...?

Cheeku! 😭❤️😭

😆😆

Check your dm😉

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Again wonderful❤️

Dew drop Sai will sound more beautiful because of

'subah ki masoom si shabnam muskurayi'

Thank you.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: JhalliAnjali

Again wonderful❤️

Dew drop Sai will sound more beautiful because of

'subah ki masoom si shabnam muskurayi'

Thank you.

Again thankyou❤️

That's exactly why I wrote that line for dewdrop Sai❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Wow...that's stunning❤👀🤩

Your poems always remind me of my Dad for some reason...very similar sort of vibes cuz he has this poetic kinda thing in him😆(Does this make sense🤣)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Justasuperbgirl

Wow...that's stunning❤👀🤩

Your poems always remind me of my Dad for some reason...very similar sort of vibes cuz he has this poetic kinda thing in him😆(Does this make sense🤣)

Thankyou so much Ishani❤️❤️

I don't know😆 Maybe it does.

But tell me one thing they say girls look for their father in their would be partner. Are you hinting at something🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Thankyou so much Ishani❤️❤️

I don't know😆 Maybe it does.

But tell me one thing they say girls look for their father in their would be partner. Are you hinting at something🤣🤣

No... i mean... I got reminded of the times when we were given Hindi poem writing assignments in school... so I used to take my dad's help for them... and he used to come up with really good stanzas😆

@bold

Hints? Is it a crossword game going on🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Justasuperbgirl

No... i mean... I got reminded of the times when we were given Hindi poem writing assignments in school... so I used to take my dad's help for them... and he used to come up with really good stanzas😆

@bold

Hints? Is it a crossword game going on🤣

Maybe. Who knows😉

🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Maybe. Who knows😉

🤣

@bold

I don't at least🤣

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