Aaj zindagi meri bahon mein- a Virat poem - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

This is so beautifully written 😍 😍

Cheeku you really are amazing 🥰🥰 just loved how you wove Virat's feelings into a poem it's really brilliant 🤩🤩

Thankyou❤️❤️

Bold: Ab tum kehti ho to maan leti hu😳😆

Thankyou for the kind words Kashish🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

What?!

Again...?

Cheeku! 😭❤️😭


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Aaj zindagi meri bahon mein chali aayi

The very first line slayed me. End of discussion.

Zimmedari, became companionship, became friendship, became trust, pride and joy, and now she is his very life.

Virat ki dhadkan, wajood, aur guroor uski Sai hi hai.


Nothing exists for him beyond her.

In the middle of the big Chavan family, he had his own little world, him and his Aai, and his far away Jeeva, both busy with their own problems and life, even thought the love was unconditional. But now, there is this girl, who will fight the world for her Virat Sir, and his happiness, when he himself doesn't know what he needs.


She is his entire world now.

Sach me duniya se bekhabr hai, jab dono sath hote hai, ek dusre se pare koi duniya hi nahi rahe, jab dono sath hote hai.

Woh bechain hai uske liye.

And her fear, her concern, her trembling lips and moist eyes give him something to run back to, to fight for, to be alive.

Kal ka kal dekha jaayega, aaj toh Virat ki zindagi uske baahon me hai!


Cheeku... the love that flows from your words have engulfed me, and I'm so very grateful for the tag!

I myself am in love with the first line😆 sometimes I surprise myself🤣

You are so right about Virat and his feelings for Sai. Another thing that I think makes her special to him is that he can truly be himself in front of her. Even those emotions he cannot show to his mother or Jeeva, he shows it to her. He is himself.

I have heard it. When a human being has to earn something they cherish it but if they get something without having to work anything, they dont really care for it. The reason why Virat cherishes Sai and why it was so easy for him to let go of Patralekha was this perhaps.

Bold: ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I wish he gifts something like this on her bday… simply priceless!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amor_fati

I wish he gifts something like this on her bday… simply priceless!

You mean recite a poem for her.
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Posted: 4 years ago
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I meant your poem is priceless and I wish he writes and recites something like this💕

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