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Leo

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Posted: 4 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ssoujanya
Beautiful....Awesome..... 😍

Thanks❤️

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Leo

@Asur

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Posted: 4 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

AAAAAAAAA

Cheeks!!! Maro mujhe, maro... I just read the first line and had to react!
Abhi baaki padhke aati hu!
Girl, check your DM too, please..

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Cheeku, I'm stumped! and it doesn't happen often. This one struck deep and as an author myself, I can imagine how deep from within your heart these words must have come.
Incredibly touching and poignant words, Cheeku... I'm truly stumped. I might be able to articulate better once I read it a couple of more times.
Much love to you and your words..❤️

nahi marungi😆

Checked😳

Thankyou so much for the kind words❤️

I'm amazed that you could see that the words came from deep within. Yes, they did. I was feeling her.

When I started writing, the words took a life of their own. I was trying to think from Sai's POV. I have seen her journey in this show. And when I saw the hand holding scene and how vulnerable her heart allowed her to be in front of him, I could see that she had come a long way. I had to write this❤️

Thankyou once again for such a heartwarming reply🤗

Edited by cheekukabeej - 4 years ago

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Leo

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Posted: 4 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nja91
Oh this was SO beautiful! I so wish that they showed Sai keep a diary and one fine day Virat comes across it and reads her feelings that she struggles to express in words.

I also wish the same. That she keeps a diary. I don't mind Virat reading that. But I would like it better if he doesn't. You know. Din mein, nok jhonk, raat mein diary mein apna dil nikal kar likh dena. Apne aap mein hi bahut achcha lagega. And she can gradually be more and more open with him and life❤️

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AparnaRenu

@AparnaRenu

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Posted: 4 years ago

#14

Cheeks! Good morning!

Thank you, for writing such an awesome piece! Dil se nikli shabd dil choo lete hai hamesha.

Even though I'm fluent in Hindi, I'm not a native speaker and unable to write all dialogues in Hindi.

That was another thing i LOVED in this one... i could hear Sai's inner voice in my head in the exact tones she speaks.

❤️

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Leo

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Posted: 4 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu
Cheeks! Good morning!
Thank you, for writing such an awesome piece! Dil se nikli shabd dil choo lete hai hamesha.
Even though I'm fluent in Hindi, I'm not a native speaker and unable to write all dialogues in Hindi.
That was another thing i LOVED in this one... i could hear Sai's inner voice in my head in the exact tones she speaks.
❤️

Good morning🤗

Understandable

I was also hearing Sai's inner voice as I was writing❤️😆

Thankyou so much for being thoughtful enough to comment again to let me know😳😳

I'm so touched.

Edited by cheekukabeej - 4 years ago