ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Felicie

Hey there, stingy me has finally decied to drop in an appreciative comment instead of greedily lapping up the chapter and rushing off 😛

I loved how you've shaped up the story and this chapter was very gripping, you've definitely got a talent for capturing emotions and making readers empathize with the characters!

Personally, I didn't like how fast shivi became a thing but that's just my personal opinion and nothing to do with your writing, I'm always looking for stories where they're a proper slow burn.

Apart from that minor detail derailing me a bit, I was completely hooked with the first couple chapters and now I'm eagerly waiting to know what's going to happen - you always leave us off on cliffhangers, you clever, evil writer ❤️

Dear reader mine,

Thank you so much for dropping a comment. Your words are appreciated and very heartwarming. As for ShiVi falling so soon, then in my mind I see Raavi as falling for him slowly through his words and memories in two years. She has got plenty time to think and compare according to me and only when he cane before her did she realise that she was in fact in love. It didn’t happen just in some days. And you will get Shiva’s perspective too where u could see his point of view about Raavi.

Thank you once again🍫🍫🍫🍫 have a choc from me😅

Originally posted by: kavya12345

hey...just read all the parts in one go...

nice ff

shiva and shiv bonding is nice👏

my fav part is raavi facing her struggles with the help of imaginary shiva...this is the proof of true love...even after going far from him she couldnt forget him

i just wanted to kill vaidehi😡

raavi raised a good point...even though vaidehi is a widow she didnt follow any rituals..the y should raavi follow it😡

shiva and raavis fight took an ugly turn....he could have waited in the house

i am sure shiva will save raavi now

and adhiraj...like mum like son😡

the way u described each of the emotions is awesome

do continue soon

will be waiting for ur update

love

KAVYA

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. And thank you for your kind words

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

😲 Oh thr twist!! What an amazing update!! I'm literally at the edge of my seat. I want to know what happens! God I really hope that Shiva answered the last call and heard everything!! Bring the police!!

Amazing update! Like wow!

That is really sweet of you to say. Thank you so much for appreciating. 🌷

They are so cruel 😢

Poor raavi she had seen so much in past ,

N when she was about to start afresh , they are here to give her pain once again .

Everyone wanna help her , but they can't do anything 😪😪.

Update 2nd part soon❤

My heart is reaching out for poor Raavi.

This Thakurain n her son Adhiraj is going to pay for all their deeds. Bas Shiva ko aane do. 😡

I have to say this, you wrote the chapter amazingly as always. Your dialogues are so perfect and deep. Raavi's flashback part was so emotional. She has gone through a lot.

I want the women gang in the pandya niwas to thrash that Thakurain. Such a rutheless woman!

Do update soon.

I'm eagerly waiting.....

I was waiting for thissssss so much! Yet another cliffhanger 🙈

I loved how you conveyed Shiva’s reaction to everything he hears on the phone!

And Shiva ka tandav! That was best! 😍

Cliffhanger again ! Kyun phuspa kyun ? 😭😭😭

😝

Originally posted by: virmantaarey

Cliffhanger again ! Kyun phuspa kyun ? 😭😭😭

😝

Pushpa likes to torture

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

I was waiting for thissssss so much! Yet another cliffhanger 🙈

I loved how you conveyed Shiva’s reaction to everything he hears on the phone!

And Shiva ka tandav! That was best! 😍

I wanted a connect between both the scenes. So I did this.😋