ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 18

Omg I am going to cry! This was so powerful and amazing, very well written 👏 The way Raavi has used this manifestation of Shiva as a source of her strength is so pure ❤️

Please don't leave us at this point 😭 Update soon!

Oh nooo 😭😭😭😭 Please make Shiva come back sooooon!

You did dirty, here! Hope Shiva steps in asap. My heart is thudding. You just can't end it here. Please tell me you plan on updating part 2 of this today itself. Otherwise, I need an OS on this ff. The feeling here is just like those when episode airs and we have mixed emotions. It's good, but we don't like the way it's headed.

On a different thought, it was good to see Shiva being her guide, a light, that led her to the end of tunnel. Now, we just need that brightness to shine and blind the monsters of the cave.

Please update it today.

Whyyyyyyyyyyy😡

WHERE IS SHIVAAAAA....😭😭😭😭😭

Get him back fast please.....

She shouldn't go in that hell again....😭😭😡

Update soooooooon...

You are so cruel, at least you should have given shiva's entry 😁 waiting for the drama in next update.

Hey there, stingy me has finally decied to drop in an appreciative comment instead of greedily lapping up the chapter and rushing off 😛

I loved how you've shaped up the story and this chapter was very gripping, you've definitely got a talent for capturing emotions and making readers empathize with the characters!

Personally, I didn't like how fast shivi became a thing but that's just my personal opinion and nothing to do with your writing, I'm always looking for stories where they're a proper slow burn.

Apart from that minor detail derailing me a bit, I was completely hooked with the first couple chapters and now I'm eagerly waiting to know what's going to happen - you always leave us off on cliffhangers, you clever, evil writer ❤️

I don't know why but this made me cry.. I am actually not an emotional person but the way you describe the feelings is beyond everything..

Lovely update as always..

I felt the tension in meee, poor Raavi...

What a cliffhanger 😭

Where is Shivaaaa??

Loved this chapter! Hope shiva comes to save the day soon ❤️

I really hope shiva come soon pliz update soon ❤❤❤