ShaKhi OS: Crime of Passion - Page 5

Originally posted by: -Fedex-

This was absolutely beautiful! Honestly the writing and the passion was simply superb! Your such an amazing writer! Keep writing more 🤗I tend to stop watching and start skipping when the drama becomes unbearable. I hope the amazing writers on the forum like yourself, can shower us with these amazing write ups on the lovely couple in the future weeks as the drama and misunderstandings increase exponentially. Lots of love ❤️

Thank you so much for your words🤗 I'm really so happy to see that you've enjoyed it! I'm very much like you, I also start to get detached when the drama starts. But I think these two have captured my heart so much that I'm unable to stop thinking even when we are getting something painful! I will definitely keep writing other things as I can!!

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Im going awww..... I think its both because of ShaKhi's chemistry & your really cool writing. This felt so classic, the stories with repeat reading value ❤️

I was super engrossed since the start of the OS & went through myriad emotions, feeling sad, excited, happy, surprised & what not! If this is what you call a mess, then what would you wanna call an actual mess? 😆

I personally felt the way that they were being possessive of eo within themselves & showing their sadness with bitter words was the best part. The misunderstandings & thought process they had of eo was adorable once the problems were resolved. Omg, the kiss was gold 🤗🔥 I could totally see Anokhi clinging to Shaurya's neck & him holding her tightly. That's chemistry

Totally enjoyed this romantic OS, do write more!

omg I'm so honored that this is worth another read! I ended up just rambling whatever came to mind without necessarily having a sense of where this OS was going to end and this was the end result. I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it!

Dude I swear I experience every single emotion you listed so I'm a total mess too!! That's just the impact that Shakhi has on me!!

I think though these two are deeply protective, they are insecure as to whether or not they really have that haq on each other during this time. They will still feel it but they also will be scared to show it in the same way they have in the past! These past few episodes have showed me that Anokhi would definitely be equally passionate and I'm quite excited to see their post-confession phase and how they both act on their desire!

Thanks so much again and I'll definitely try and write to entertain further ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Rozy77

Hey Sruthi🙋‍♀️

Damn.. what an amazing piece u have weaved here for us😍👏

I absolutely loved it💕... It was such a beautiful read

Been waiting to read a OS from you since ur first story and I'm glad it finally happened😃

Hi Rozy!! Thank you so much for reading and I'm so glad that you've enjoyed it 🤗🤗🤗

hahahaha I have been dragging my feet on my FF these days because I don't have time to craft the longer updates so I just decided to write something shorter on them! I see the appeal of OSes now 🤣

Originally posted by: rumi_dee

Ayy Sruthi!! That was so hot! 🔥🔥🥵.. I love how you show what exactly is running in their minds, minus the drama of MUs. Looks like I’ll turn to the forum to get my fill of Shakhi KPs when winter finally arrives! 😁❤️

Dee thank you so much!!! They are so hot that I could only try and capture the chemistry they share! And LOL I'm glad you noted that I didn't want to dwell too much on the actual MUings and rather just wanted to focus on their emotion, the buildup and the patchup. The two of them had been stewwing for weeks that it was bound to become an intense confrontation when it came to it! Yes the forum will have to keep us warm through the winter!

Originally posted by: Akanksha29100

Shrut !!!!🤗

What a beauty this was ! I don't even know how to put this in words but this was certainly too pretty and so them.❤️

Also, how do you write this beautiful Shrut?! You are absolutely measured and so good with words that I really learn a lot when I read something from you. The balance, the emotions, the vibe, you paint it all on the canvas of ShaKhi and your words further makes them glow amidst the shades which are already too strong !

About the shot, I absolutely loved how the scene played out, with an evident pain and physical need in them to just hold each other close !

God, I am going to sleep a happy person 🤗

Love❤️

Akanksha

Akanksha ❤️

omg come here you gorgeous human being 🤗 thank you so much for the extremely high praise!! Dude the control you have over words and the way you are able to weave them to touch emotions, I feel like I'm always blown away by you! I'm working with characters who are so beautiful on their own and you know how much I love them. I can only hope that my pieces can do some justice to the layered characters we have all fallen for.

I'm desperately waiting for the day that these two cling to each other and stake their claim to each other! They are so intensely connected to each other that I just can't imagine them staying apart for too long and not just sorting everything out.

Thank you so much for your comment and for showering me with so much love, seriously love you so much ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: sree07

Awesome.....

Thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: Abhavi0821

Lovely ♥️♥️♥️♥️

Thank you thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: infinitie

Bhavi thank you so much for reading and I'm so glad that you've enjoyed it 🤗 I really wish that they clear their MUs in an intense/emotional way and I cannot wait to see the way they confess to each other on screen given their chemistry!! In this OS Anokhi couldn't hold back after what she considered as a mistake! I will definitely write some other things as soon as time permits! Thank you again 🤗🤗

Please take time and write more OS on ShaKhi🤗

I just loved it❤️

I am so excited to read your work Sru 😳 Pehle I thought "crime " Matlab its ShauHir 😳 (Kidding)

Lets start with Live review because i love doing that 😎

OMG Shaurya is at her door 😎 *excited*

Anokhi isn't opening... the door... hmm ... I know that wont be for long.

Oh .. God.. 🤣 he really started knocking like that ?🤪 He is such a baby!!!!

I loved their bickering. Both of them made valid points and its so obvious that they have mutual feelings for each other but both are trying to hide it. 😆

Ooooo he grabbed her 😎

I loved how he hovered his lips close to her and waited for her approval...THAT IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

Aahhhhhhhh THAT KISS!

Okay.. HE WANTS TO KISS HER ON MORE PLACES!! ☺️ I am so excited!

Omg her nails ☺️ her moans and his arousal ☺️ I can never get enough of kissing against the wall bits 😎☺️

If I had one wish, I would have not allowed that 🤬 Vase to be made 😡 😡

God! That was such an intense argument and reconciliation ❤️

Shaurya confessed

Loved Anokhi's reaction! ❤️ cutie pie

I loved distracted Shaurya in the end It would have been pretty messy had they not stopped 😎

I absolutely loved the OS 🤗

So beautiful!!!!

I wish their misunderstanding gets resolved like this .Quick and Smooth. With no third party involved.

Their emotional conversation and cofession ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you for writting!