ShaKhi OS: Crime of Passion - Page 4

Shrut !!!!🤗

What a beauty this was ! I don't even know how to put this in words but this was certainly too pretty and so them.❤️

Also, how do you write this beautiful Shrut?! You are absolutely measured and so good with words that I really learn a lot when I read something from you. The balance, the emotions, the vibe, you paint it all on the canvas of ShaKhi and your words further makes them glow amidst the shades which are already too strong !

About the shot, I absolutely loved how the scene played out, with an evident pain and physical need in them to just hold each other close !

God, I am going to sleep a happy person 🤗

Love❤️

Akanksha

Loved it. ❤️

Anokhi's hostel room is the ShaKhi shipping adda.

Loved the way they cleared their misunderstandings.

Shaurya's saaf safaai consciousness is making it hard for ShaKhians. 😆

Just one word beautiful ❤️ story loved it

Hayoooo rabbbaaaa kya piece hei yeh! Ufffff!

Now I wish ki yeh main jama rakh deti and actual MU sequence shuru hone ke baad ake padhtie. It was so emotional at the same time freaking hot!

Shit that vase 🌚 tujhe abhi hi tutna tha kya????? Yeh vase nahi actually devi hei jo vase bankar agayi cookblock karne. Pura feel mei chali gayi thi and vase ne feelings ki poput bana di.

Anyway it was beautiful 😍😍😍 maine tumhari aur bhi ff/os padha hei shakhi pe. So as usual you did an outstanding work ❤❤❤❤

Originally posted by: deepshiii

Unres

This was amazing Sruthi🤩 Too high on emotions and passion. You’ve no idea how much I enjoyed reading it and was happy with the build up💓
The way they cleared their misunderstandings and the confession was too dreamy

The longingness these two had for each other and the pain they bore finally ended on such a sweet note😳

Also, loved how the saaf safai in the story ended up with real saaf safai with Shaurya helping Anokhi clean the mess😂 He’s really such an adorb and a real keeper🥺💓

Looking forward to read more from you Sru🤗❤️

Loads of love💖

Deeps ❤️❤️❤️ I feel like these two are so passionately in love with each other I can't imagine them staying away for too long. And when things reach a boiling point, all their truths come spilling out. They are quite good at clearing up their own MUs without needing anyone else which I love about them so I hope that they do this in the show as well!

hahahaha we're lucky that the vase is the only thing that broke according to Shaurya 😉😉 but honestly our man is such a gem 🥺🥺🥺

Now that everything is going into lockdown I'll definitely try and put out some other pieces/update my other work! Thank you so much for reading 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Sruthiiiii

God what to say about this OS You just killed it with your imaginations❤️

i badly wanted it to be true

Finally they confessed their feelings❤️ But yeah i loved how Anokhi raised question about Shagun.

You are writing so well please keep writing🤗

Bhavi thank you so much for reading and I'm so glad that you've enjoyed it 🤗 I really wish that they clear their MUs in an intense/emotional way and I cannot wait to see the way they confess to each other on screen given their chemistry!! In this OS Anokhi couldn't hold back after what she considered as a mistake! I will definitely write some other things as soon as time permits! Thank you again 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Vistaa

TBH, I am hoping the inevitable angst is written well, in a manner that doesn't stretch our incredulity. Both KV and Deba are such good actors that I am sure they will do those scenes heartbreakingly well and make us cry with them and make the reunion that much sweeter

I also hope that they don't make it illogical and keep to the essence of the show that made us fall for it. The realism and subtle emotion is what drew me to it. And of course ShaKhi chemistry. As long as they stick to what works, I am sure that even the worst tracks will be beautiful!! Even in heartbreak we will find the growth ❤️

Originally posted by: AvneilShakhi

mind-blowing 😍😍😍😍

Thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: glowgetter

I am with you about avoidance to the pain.

I am that person who loves living in denial for smetime..

THIS genuinely gives me HOPE.

It is so beautiful.. The passion came right across.. Can we please get this in the show SOOON?

It is BRILLIANT ❤️❤️

Loved it..

xx

hahahaha honestly I'm just going to pretend whatever is happening on screen isn't happening! I'll just stick to my KP world that will let me live in denial 🤣 Thank you so much for reading and I am so glad that you enjoyed 🤗 I really had this going around my head thinking about the upcoming MUs so I had to just write it and get it out of my head 😆

Originally posted by: minamma

Saaf safai mere dil o dimag pe chadh gyi h ab

Mere ghar me agar koi muje saaf safai krne ko bolta h to mere dimag me ye sb aata h

Shakhi as always killing us with their intense hot chemistry

Waah aur saaf safai wale os aane do

PS make sure Sare saaf suthre ho

Lol🤣🤣

hahahah saaf safaai is what I love 🤣 if only shakhi focused only on the saaf safaai then we would all be the happiest!!! Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a hilarious comment! I had a good laugh reading this 🤣