ShaKhi OS: Crime of Passion - Page 3

Originally posted by: shaylini

Wow Sruthi....

This was just love❤❤❤

I can imagine Anokhi ignoring him definitely like this if she finds out about Shagun and him being all angry young man.

🤗

Thank you so much Shay 🤗 I seriously needed some positive Shakhi in my life as we are headed into this week because I know we are in for a world of pain 🤣 She will most certainly ignore him which will trigger all his insecurities but at the end, I cannot wait for them to just clear all of it up! That's why I'll just be here, waiting for everyone at the end of the MU track 😆

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This was amazing Sruthi🤩 Too high on emotions and passion. You’ve no idea how much I enjoyed reading it and was happy with the build up💓
The way they cleared their misunderstandings and the confession was too dreamy

The longingness these two had for each other and the pain they bore finally ended on such a sweet note😳

Also, loved how the saaf safai in the story ended up with real saaf safai with Shaurya helping Anokhi clean the mess😂 He’s really such an adorb and a real keeper🥺💓

Looking forward to read more from you Sru🤗❤️

Loads of love💖

Sruthiiiii

God what to say about this OS You just killed it with your imaginations❤️

i badly wanted it to be true

Finally they confessed their feelings❤️ But yeah i loved how Anokhi raised question about Shagun.

You are writing so well please keep writing🤗

Originally posted by: infinitie

Thank you so much for reading!! I am already dreading the MUs track so I am just gonna sit here and pretend like it's not coming 😅😅 hopefully winter will pass soon and if not, hopefully we'll see something really good between Shakhi during this track!!

TBH, I am hoping the inevitable angst is written well, in a manner that doesn't stretch our incredulity. Both KV and Deba are such good actors that I am sure they will do those scenes heartbreakingly well and make us cry with them and make the reunion that much sweeter

I am with you about avoidance to the pain.

I am that person who loves living in denial for smetime..

THIS genuinely gives me HOPE.

It is so beautiful.. The passion came right across.. Can we please get this in the show SOOON?

It is BRILLIANT ❤️❤️

Loved it..

xx

Saaf safai mere dil o dimag pe chadh gyi h ab

Mere ghar me agar koi muje saaf safai krne ko bolta h to mere dimag me ye sb aata h

Shakhi as always killing us with their intense hot chemistry

Waah aur saaf safai wale os aane do

PS make sure Sare saaf suthre ho

Lol🤣🤣

This was absolutely beautiful! Honestly the writing and the passion was simply superb! Your such an amazing writer! Keep writing more 🤗I tend to stop watching and start skipping when the drama becomes unbearable. I hope the amazing writers on the forum like yourself, can shower us with these amazing write ups on the lovely couple in the future weeks as the drama and misunderstandings increase exponentially. Lots of love ❤️

Im going awww..... I think its both because of ShaKhi's chemistry & your really cool writing. This felt so classic, the stories with repeat reading value ❤️

I was super engrossed since the start of the OS & went through myriad emotions, feeling sad, excited, happy, surprised & what not! If this is what you call a mess, then what would you wanna call an actual mess? 😆

I personally felt the way that they were being possessive of eo within themselves & showing their sadness with bitter words was the best part. The misunderstandings & thought process they had of eo was adorable once the problems were resolved. Omg, the kiss was gold 🤗🔥 I could totally see Anokhi clinging to Shaurya's neck & him holding her tightly. That's chemistry

Totally enjoyed this romantic OS, do write more!

Hey Sruthi🙋‍♀️

Damn.. what an amazing piece u have weaved here for us😍👏

I absolutely loved it💕... It was such a beautiful read

Been waiting to read a OS from you since ur first story and I'm glad it finally happened😃

Ayy Sruthi!! That was so hot! 🔥🔥🥵.. I love how you show what exactly is running in their minds, minus the drama of MUs. Looks like I’ll turn to the forum to get my fill of Shakhi KPs when winter finally arrives! 😁❤️