Shaurya Anokhi OS: Guilt and Temptation (+16) - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

They kissed, n nw Shaurya can't tell. 😆 U'v shown his dilemma quite well. N Anokhi duffer can't remember anything. So Shaurya bechara did some chance pe dance. 🤣 Do keep writing. 😃

Thank you so much for the review. Glad you liked it.😊
Posted: 5 years ago
#32

This right here was so good 👏 The emotions, hidden feelings & neglecting of one's thoughts. Everything was on point & I also wished to see a part where Shaurya would confess to Anokhi about what happened that night but nvm 😆

Enjoyed this a lot!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

This right here was so good 👏 The emotions, hidden feelings & neglecting of one's thoughts. Everything was on point & I also wished to see a part where Shaurya would confess to Anokhi about what happened that night but nvm 😆

Enjoyed this a lot!

Thank you so much for your positive feedback 😊 I am elated that you enjoyed reading it .
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Posted: 5 years ago
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OMG! Please continue, this was sooo hot and cute. Also, today ACP mentioned that Anokhi is not a kid, she's an adult. I think that was also a hint for the people that if something were to happen, shes an adult and a consenting one at that. So def they have to thread carefully but Shaurya doesn't need to feel so guilty (if careful). I would love to read a continuation of this!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: prs_725

OMG! Please continue, this was sooo hot and cute. Also, today ACP mentioned that Anokhi is not a kid, she's an adult. I think that was also a hint for the people that if something were to happen, shes an adult and a consenting one at that. So def they have to thread carefully but Shaurya doesn't need to feel so guilty (if careful). I would love to read a continuation of this!

Hey. Thank you so much for the lovely reviews. I have written two more parts of this. So may be if interested you can check them out


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/shaurya-aur-anokhi-ki-kahani/5212328/she-is-my-ex-shaurya-anokhi-os


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/shaurya-aur-anokhi-ki-kahani/5212729/ill-stand-by-you-shaurya-anokhi-os-mature-18-long-post

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhavi0821

Loved it !!❤️

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
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After reading ur all three OS, I guess I read this whole OS thread in a reverse order! 😆 Anyways I loved how u wrote every scene. ❤

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

After reading ur all three OS, I guess I read this whole OS thread in a reverse order! 😆 Anyways I loved how u wrote every scene. ❤

Ha ha you did. But I hope you enjoyed reading them as stand alone too as they are designed to be read as stand alone too. So that the reader doesn't feel he didn't get a closure. Thank you for the lovely comments on all three. If you are interested do check out the other works on Forum. I am hopeful you'll enjoy them too.
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

Ha ha you did. But I hope you enjoyed reading them as stand alone too as they are designed to be read as stand alone too. So that the reader doesn't feel he didn't get a closure. Thank you for the lovely comments on all three. If you are interested do check out the other works on Forum. I am hopeful you'll enjoy them too.

You r wlcm. Yes I did enjoy reading them as stand alone too! And I've been reading ShaKhi stories since 2-3 days now. If u have written more about ShaKhi leaving these 3, would u mind sharing the link of those with me?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank you 😊🙏

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