🏏India tour of England, 2026: England vs India, 1st ODI,🏏
SHOCKING! Aplha collects only 5cr in 2nd weekend.
It’s official, aloo in Tumbbad ❤️
Jennifer Winget is Getting married 🎉🎉🎉
Whose Marriage will happen first in show?
Vringad FF: Pyaar Ke Do Pal
Thank you for your kind words. I'll try my best to write another part if inspiration strikes me. Do stay turned.Originally posted by: deepshiii
Gosh☺️☺️This was so mesmerising
The confusion of not remembering anything for Anokhi and the bitter sweet guilt post everything that happened for Shaurya was so well written😳
Please continue this one♥️♥️
Hey thank you for your feedback. If you could just pin point at the thing you weren't happy with that would be a great help. Was the length? The length description? Anything specific?heheheheactually it's good but something inside me wasn't happy
thank you for such amazing review. I am glad you liked it and I can't make promises but will try to write another part.Originally posted by: MeeraWrites
Mind blowing
I really loved the way you described each and everything; from the emotions to the tiny details.
It was really nice reading positive bebo-kitty-Anmol ....
Coming to Shaurya and Anokhi..... kya batau main
Kaash yeh OS na hota. 🥺
Would love to read further.
He was annoyed at her for endangering her life and she was about to slip on the rocks. So when he rescued her she tried to get off so he spanked her. I will try and write another part if inspiration strike. But thank you for such amazing and detailed review.Originally posted by: mahiaana
Noooo khatam kyu huya??? Shaurya ki dard 😭😭😭😭😭 bechara ...nikki to at least bol payi kuch ...yeh bechara nah seh pah raha hein na keh paa raha hein
Please don't end this like this...please if its ok with you continue this one 😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏
Anyway love the story...dude i got a shock after reading that spanked part 😂😂😂 i was like nooooo he didn't! But he did...even you know i had to read that part again just to confirm I'm reading it right 😂😂😂😭😭 spanked kyu kiya out of nowhere 😂😂😂 but jis liye bhi kiya ho...spanked woh bhi prof shaurya ki taraf se 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
And that kiss.... bechara feel bas kar hi raha tha but khatam hotey hi guilt trip mein chala gaya 🥺
Nice one. Thanks for writing this beautiful Os. Please continue this if possible. 🙏
Awww i am absolutely melting reading your kind words so thank you for that. And yeah somehow that's how their characters will pan out. Shaurya feeling guilty for having feelings but not getting a grip on them.Originally posted by: krazykaju
Damn!! You create chemistry with your words🔥
This possessive, jealous, guilt mix Shaurya is totally hot stuff.
Aww... Anokhi is such a sweatheart. She wants to be assured that she belongs, that he cares.
Ofcourse he does darling!!😚
Really loved the inner battle Shaurya had.
His guilt of kissing a student, that also a drunk one. But the other part of him still liked that feeling.
Totally loved it.
The sparks here are flying out everywhere. Your words feels soo charged with sizzling chemistry.😍
You really can create fire with your words only.
Thank you for your feedback. Do stay tunedOriginally posted by: Cherrydreamsxx
Really nice written. Poor Shaurya, he is so confused. I think it will be similar in the show, it will be hard for him to accept that he loves her.
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