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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

I am going to patiently watch without judgment because I am invested in the show from around 30-35th episode so I am curious about how it goes. Let's see.

Exactly! Just enjoy what the writers planned without complaining much😋❤🙌🏻

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

I totally agree! Like there is no other way to story a love angle then this🙌🏻❤

I don't know about you guys but I am definitely up for this😋


Not saying this angle is wrong or shouldn't be done.


My main issue is in the maaner it's done. Both the characters are behaving very out of range, that's what I didn't like

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guneet80

Hello everyone! I'm back again after a hiatus and look at what we have here : rushed story and bad dialogues.

It's clear they want to start the love story as soon as possible due to the trp being stuck at 1.2 only. What's worrying is : they're willing to sacrifice the storyline and the build up for it.


Just compare last week and this week, can you relate both of them? It seems like the episodes of these weeks have a leap in between them.

Shaurya was moody but sensible when the buildup was natural but now, in the pursuit of trp, they've turned him into a typical angry ITV male lead. I'm so disappointed in CVs.


Episode starts and ends with Shaurya celebrating his birthday with the family : at home and at college. Shaan is bitter about Devi manipulating him to divorce Aastha. I think it's high time he grows a spine and does something about it. Otherwise his character arc would go waste.


After a lot of filler scenes in between, Anokhi makes way to Shaurya's cabin. She puts up the flowers along with a handwritten note, to show it's from Aastha. Now I can't even begin to comprehend how BADLY this scene is written. It feels like a recycle of all the trash scenes we've seen on ITV.

Shaurya throws away the flwoers, which end up hurting Anokhi. Shaurya gets riled up, in a way absolutely obtuse to his character. Anokhi makes some ghisa pita dialogue of Shaurya not forgetting her after hurting her and no birthday of his would be celebrated without her ( this was more of foreshadowing but I swear, saath nibhana Saathiya does better foreshadowing scenes than this). If this is the Anokhi I saw till last week, she would NEVER say something like this. God knows what the dialogue team is doing.


Anokhi is Shaurya's student. She knows and respects the boundaries but such dialogues literally ruin the slow buildup of the show.


The episode ends with the birthday celebration at the college with Shaurya being guilty about hurting Anokhi. He tries to talk to her but Anokhi constantly ignores him.


PRECAP : Devi looks off as Shaurya rants irritated about Anokhi avoiding him. She wonders what's going on between the two. I think Devi will be the one to cause the fire. There's enough foreshadowing.



MY RATING : 4.5/10, I expect better execution from the writing team. Atleast better dialogues if not authentic storyline.


WAITING TO HEAR YOUR THOUGHTS!

Episode was mediocre 🤢

Anokhi ‘s dialogues were

In btw I was wondering did he throw the vase too or just the flowers 🤪

Coz if the vase had hit her he could have a huge guilt trip carried her to the hospital and cared for her and immediate romance 😆

I just can’t connect to last week episodes to today’s episode

Did it take a leap and I missed it 🤔?

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Exactly! Just enjoy what the writers planned without complaining much😋❤🙌🏻


??? I think we're allowed to show our disappointment in the execution of the track.

Nobody is "complaining"

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Karan looking so hot today 😘😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guneet80


I think you contradicted yourself.


My main issue is characters being completely out of the range they're written in along with the dialogues.

No I partly agree with you. The character's pitch has changed a bit and the pace has picked up after slow build up after the channel's intervening. The dialogues needed a lot of work. But I also kind of understand that under the deadline given by the channel the CVs are trying their best to keep them as real as possible. For example before last week we could never have imagined Shaurya physically picking up Anokhi but they did because of the FD demand 9f more Shakhi scenes after grabbing audience attention. ITV audience are very fickle and they loose attention if they are not given what they crave. It's called catering to the masses.
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indulatha

Karan looking so hot today 😘😍


He always does but I agree, today I was swooning 😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

No I partly agree with you. The character's pitch has changed a bit and the pace has picked up after slow build up after the channel's intervening. The dialogues needed a lot of work. But I also kind of understand that under the deadline given by the channel the CVs are trying their best to keep them as real as possible. For example before last week we could never have imagined Shaurya physically picking up Anokhi but they did because of the FD demand 9f more Shakhi scenes after grabbing audience attention. ITV audience are very fickle and they loose attention if they are not given what they crave. It's called catering to the masses.


Well, unfortunately it's ITV. Hence we should always keep our expectations low but the starting of the show was soo good, I couldn't help but expect more.


Never said, I don't understand the burden of trp specially on a trp focused channel like star plus.


I think star plus is struggling with content as of now. This is why it's producing so many remade shows, this is why I guess they didn't have much expectations of SAKK but the fandom came alive after SaKhi hug. Star plus saw an opportunity and decided to capitalise on it. This is why so many changes in the show.


I've been an ardent viewer of star plus shows, this is why I understand what they're doing and why. This is why I'm voicing out my disappointment here.


But still SAKK has tons of potential left. I'm still not keen on losing hope. I'm just disappointed.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guneet80


Well, unfortunately it's ITV. Hence we should always keep our expectations low but the starting of the show was soo good, I couldn't help but expect more.


Never said, I don't understand the burden of trp specially on a trp focused channel like star plus.


I think star plus is struggling with content as of now. This is why it's producing so many remade shows, this is why I guess they didn't have much expectations of SAKK but the fandom came alive after SaKhi hug. Star plus saw an opportunity and decided to capitalise on it. This is why so many changes in the show.


I've been an ardent viewer of star plus shows, this is why I understand what they're doing and why. This is why I'm voicing out my disappointment here.


But still SAKK has tons of potential left. I'm still not keen on losing hope. I'm just disappointed.

Sorry to be the voice of disappointment but I think we are staring at another "Intense/ Passionate " love story so you can expect more of these. I think the channel is trying to capitalize on the surprise popularity it gained overnight. And they will do their best. SP right now is trying to milk every slot possible from 6 pm to 11:30 pm. Almost 6 hours of programming. They'll definitely axe shows which they feel won't do well financially. I would have been hopeful if it was a Sony show but I am not with a SP show. I am just focused on enjoying the lead chemistry and their on screen presence. I am not expecting them to take it slow now after the promo build up and SP using that to promote it. SP only promotes show when they see potential and usually their attention means the shows essence getting diluted. The biggest example was of Shaadi Mubarak which started strong but quickly turned downhill after TRP pressure.
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Posted: 5 years ago
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It could have definitely been slower, he could have been sorry and they could have had little talk and Shaurya sharing his pain and all after hurting Anokhi...


See I always worried that CVs won't be able to handle this student teacher boundaries ethically or professionally. It's sad... But DJs are also known for having 360 degree turns of characters and storyline as it suits them and trps.. But when they make such mess, it's difficult to clean it up later on. Inconsistencies and chaos make me lose interest too...


Now that they have done it here too.... I just hope they maintain it now... Rather than toggling more between different emotions...

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