Analysis 1 March : Push and Pull

Hello everyone! I'm back again after a hiatus and look at what we have here : rushed story and bad dialogues.

(PSA : I'm not saying this current track is wrong or anything. I'm more of against the execution of it, in terms of screenplay and dialogues. So please just don't assume anything.)

It's clear they want to start the love story as soon as possible due to the trp being stuck at 1.2 only. What's worrying is : they're willing to sacrifice the quality of content over it.

Episode starts and ends with Shaurya celebrating his birthday with the family : at home and at college. Shaan is bitter about Devi manipulating him to divorce Aastha. I think it's high time he grows a spine and does something about it. Otherwise his character arc would go waste.

After a lot of filler scenes in between, Anokhi makes way to Shaurya's cabin. She puts up the flowers along with a handwritten note, to show it's from Aastha. Now I can't even begin to comprehend how BADLY this scene is written. It feels like a recycle of all the trash scenes we've seen on ITV.

Shaurya throws away the flowers, which end up hurting Anokhi. Shaurya gets riled up, in a way absolutely obtuse to his character. Anokhi makes some ghisa pita dialogue of Shaurya not forgetting her after hurting her and no birthday of his would be celebrated without her ( this was more of foreshadowing but I swear, saath nibhana Saathiya does better foreshadowing scenes than this). If this is the Anokhi I saw till last week, she would NEVER say something like this. God knows what the dialogue team is doing.

The episode ends with the birthday celebration at the college with Shaurya being guilty about hurting Anokhi. He tries to talk to her but Anokhi constantly ignores him.

PRECAP : Devi looks off as Shaurya rants irritated about Anokhi avoiding him. She wonders what's going on between the two. I think Devi will be the one to cause the fire. There's enough foreshadowing.

MY RATING : 4.5/10, I expect better execution from the writing team. Atleast better dialogues if not authentic storyline.

WAITING TO HEAR YOUR THOUGHTS!

He recognizes Anokhi handwriting too. When did he saw Anokhi handwriting 🤔

I agree with the rush but I think they already took sweet time establishing the characters. But they needed to do something for them to become close if she didn't get involved in his matter otherwise I can't see any other scenario where they both could have any romantic moment. I agree about the dialogue and screenplay writing at some places. I think the channel gave them 2 week deadline to satisfy impatient fan base they amassed overnight. The channel was may be running out of patience. That's why we saw the channel shooting the promo.

Originally posted by: Indulatha

He recognizes Anokhi handwriting too. When did he saw Anokhi handwriting 🤔

Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

In her admission form.

Iska matlab pehle din se hi Shourya ka nazar Anokhi par thi😃😉

Originally posted by: Indulatha

Iska matlab pehle din se hi Shourya ka nazar Anokhi par thi😃😉

Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

I agree with the rush but I think they already took sweet time establishing the characters. But they needed to do something for them to become close if she didn't get involved in his matter otherwise I can't see any other scenario where they both could have any romantic moment. I agree about the dialogue and screenplay writing at some places. I think the channel gave them 2 week deadline to satisfy impatient fan base they amassed overnight. The channel was may be running out of patience. That's why we saw the channel shooting the promo.

I totally agree! Like there is no other way to story a love angle then this🙌🏻❤

I don't know about you guys but I am definitely up for this😋

Watching just glimpse of it, I can't make myself agree to watch today's episode.

Too much interference from student side, too much mixing of personal and professional life, bad acting and dialogues from Anokhi's side.

"Apne mujhe maara kaise" kind of made me cring.

Expected better from this show.🙄

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

I totally agree! Like there is no other way to story a love angle then this🙌🏻❤

I don't know about you guys but I am definitely up for this😋

Originally posted by: Nomadic_Vibe

I agree with the rush but I think they already took sweet time establishing the characters. But they needed to do something for them to become close if she didn't get involved in his matter otherwise I can't see any other scenario where they both could have any romantic moment. I agree about the dialogue and screenplay writing at some places. I think the channel gave them 2 week deadline to satisfy impatient fan base they amassed overnight. The channel was may be running out of patience. That's why we saw the channel shooting the promo.

I think you contradicted yourself.

My main issue is characters being completely out of the range they're written in along with the dialogues.