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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumaiya27

Thank you for the PM Surya 🤗

The cycling and lakeside meeting was so cute. So happy to see abir finally opening up and sharing his worries with mishti. I hope mishti doesn't hide the fact that mehul was a cheat for too long as it might create an MU

Mah sisters are so chant, loved how planned their cycle and jogging sessions to meet their respective BFs 😉


Heina...😆!!


Mishti-meenu's heartfelt convo was so emotional. Thank you so much for showing a different side of meenu


Yeah.. MeenMish was such a bond that should have developed for Rajvansh's betterment..

Even being adversaries they complemented each other well...

I totally love Meenu inspiring Mishti in Varun track...


Your reply to my previous comment about piya causing a damage is worrying me..please don't do that to mishbir 😭

Kya yaar..! Kuch toh dramatic hone de.😉



The curiosity goes up every chapter..I'm really excited to learn more about Neerav's daadi. Mishti is right, they need Meenu to give takkar 😆

Eagerly waiting for neerav-ananya's roka in london and wedding in India!!

Roka and wedding..both in India..😊



and nanu is so smart, he asked mishku to stay with them while varsha and shaurya are away 😆

yaar you stopped at such a cliffhanger..I was so excited about abir sneaking into mishti's room 💔


Thank you dear🤗

Do continue to support and comment ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Awesome chapter! ❤️👍🏼


THANK YOU 😊


Poor Kunal sulking at the girls leaving the house 😆

Windflower Lane, nice name 👌


🤗


Daily Cycling and lakeside meeting, Abir’s planning is perfect! ❤️

Beautiful lakeside park! Can totally imagine Mishbir romancing there

Abir is certainly a punctual devoted boyfriend dropping her off at college every morning 😳

BM’s astute mother’s eyes can see Mishti’s happiness and longing, when will she guess the reason?


Let's see..😉


Aww Mishti’s back hug, and Abir lying on her lap with her stroking his silky hair to soothe his tension ...

Loved how Abir confided in Mishti about his past memories of his parents fight! ❤️

Aww Abir misses her at home and work, he should bring her permanently into his life, it’s really quite simple, confess to his family, propose to her, then marry her! Problem solved! 😆


Toh wind up kardoo FF😃!!


Oh No, Mehul is hacking their company in India, but how? With whose help? 😱

Someone on the inside must be helping him 😰

Piya’s radio silence is a bad sign, she’s getting ready to attack 😱

Meenu’s renewed coldness towards Abir, is it because Mehul is back? And Abir reminds her of Mehul?

Poor Meenu (cannot believe I’m saying this) but this version of Meenu certainly deserves sympathy, she’s so tensed about Mehul’s release from prison and the earthquake he can cause in their lives! 🥺

Hmm..!!


So heartwarming to see Mishti -Meenu closeness and understanding. Meenu confided her secrets to Mishti, she really thinks of Mishti as her child! ❤️
Meenu is feeling guilty for not asking Mishti before fixing her match with Nihaal as she should be!

Meenu gave some valuable advice to Mishti, not to trust anyone blindly and not to love anyone beyond oneself- Mishti will find this useful when disaster hits her life😭


Yup..!!.


Nobody, not even nanu knew that Meenu divorced Mehul?😲 Chalo, at least Mishti and nanu know this now

Oh no, Mishti will hide Baba’s truth from Abir? Bad idea again! But at least she now knows Mehul was a fraud .


Yes!!


Lol Meenu’s presence required in Punjab to give takkar to Rana boys dadi - Great plan! Loha hi Lohe ko kaat sakta hai 😆


Just a Shaadi ka mahol creation...!!!😆


Great that shaurya has finally mellowed towards Abir

Wow A-N Roka in Punjab during Holi! That will be fun! And destination wedding in Udaipur, that will be a truly Royal experience! 😍


Hope I can give you guys a virtual experience..!!


Hope Mehul won’t attack them while they’re in India! 😰

I wonder if Saksham will pursue Mishti again, if Abir sees that he will kill him

Kuhu deciding to do Master’s in London, will KuKu break up now?

Why is BM talking in a fatalistic way? Does she feel her end is near?

I hope Mishti wouldn’t move to London even though BM wants her to. She won’t leave BM behind for sure!

Why isn’t Shaurya taking BM to London? Because of her treatment in NY?


He plans to take her but she had been taking decisions for herself and he doesn't have the clout to pressurize her...

Chapter ending is great, Abir climbed the magnolia tree to Mishti’s room. The tall burglar tackled his fiery girlfriend well, looking forward to their midnight/all night romance! ☺️😜


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Thanks for the pm! Cannot wait for Mishbir moments and dhamakedaar Holi/Roka in Punjab! 🥳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Hello2020

Beautiful update...but a bit worried for mishbir..so many things happening together in abir's life..I don't know how he will tackle the situation.. Piya.. Mehul sab ekvsaath ready to strike...he doesn't know anything about Piya.. hope he finds out the truth soon about her.. really like their cycling part..and Minakshi and mish.. love their bonding.. hope naanu can help mishbir in future...and really enjoyed the last part...... really appreciate your story.. hope u give us some romantic update soon on new year as our New year gift...


Thank you dear..🤗

So here comes the new year gift..

Hope you like it..

And ups and downs are needed for a story na...😃

Love your support and interest in TBNLMM..

Thank you so much..❣️

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Thank you all for your Views Likes and Comments 😊❤️❤️❤️☺️


A very happy new year to all my dear readers..!

Be Proud ..

Be Gentle..

Be Kind..

Be Strong...


May this year bring less pain and more cherishable memories...


Tere bin na lage Mera Mann


Chapter 53



Mishti took in the silence and tiptoed aiming her flask ..ready to strike...


And just as a figure moved by the door she charged ..


Only to end up in a tangled bear hug... Someone holding her captive in his strong arms...a palm cupping her mouth...


" My fiery girlfriend...!!!"


Mishti was about to elbow the man and stopped short at this whisper by her ear...


She now noticed that his hold was sloppy... giving her room to turn...


But she needn't turn to know who that was..


His scent ...was unmistakable..

His voice... resonated with her heart beats..

Abiir...!!



"Abiiirrrr..Tum.!. OMG ..ped se kaise upar aagaya..!"


Mishti asked him in an exclamatory whisper...


" Tum se Milne ko Mann kiya aur aagaya.. simple"


Abir replied with a shrug... picking away the flowers struck on him...


"Wow.. attitude toh bade dikha rahe Hein aajkal.. Acha ..woh...Shourya uncle yahaan nahi Hein isliye attitude dikha rahe ho....ab jao ..koi dekhliya toh. This is too much a risk..."


Mishti looked around.. whispering... and moved to her door..


"Mishtii..."


His voice held all the longing he had for her and her step faltered to a stop...


The sweet musky scent of the flowers were creating an entirely arousing ambience and the slight brushing of his fingers along her breasts as he hugged her tight from behind.... ignited the simmered embers of her need for him...


" Abir..."


" Mishti..I missed you..."


She layed her head on his shoulder...as he nuzzled the crook of her neck... planting tiny kisses all along..


His frenzied fingers now slid inside her buttoned top tracing doodles on her flat waist... inching up ward...


Mishti could not resist responding to the arderous torture...her body lit up in a flame oblivious to the cold ...as she arched to his touch ..


The faint moonlight seeping through the thick canopy of magnolia leaves and flowers...gave an ethereal look to their blissful hug...


Her thin night shirt fluttered in the cool wind.. pricking her skin and instinctively she turned to press herself onto the thick layered warmth of his body...


He pulled her onto him tightly and in a flip pulled her up... letting her wrap her legs around him as he walked inside... closing the door..

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Her room was dimly lit by the thin bluish flames of the fire place..and the moonlight seeping through the window...


Mishti cupped his face as he slowly slid her alone his length.....and kissed his forehead...


" Abirr...some one will come ..if they hear us.."


Mishti said half-heartedly...her hands still around his neck...and his around her waist..


"Well.. let's make sure that no one will hear 'us,'...


Abir moved to her music system..and checked her playlist..his face lit up in a smile as he put on a song filling the room with a low bass.


Mishti had closed the balcony door..and she shiveringly went to stand near the electric fireplace.... rubbing her hands...


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Hearing the song beats her eyes flew to him...as the naughty grin widened at his lips when their eyes met...


He walked to her and hugged her from the back... warming her up in more than one way...... swaying gently to the beats..and then twirling her lightly..




She looked like sin in her night attire and he couldn't resist pulling in front of the mirror and admire her in his arms....


Her eyes glinted in anticipation as his fingers traced her cheek... moving down to her neck..


His palm felt the top button... popping it open..


And their eyes connected through the mirror..


Fire igniting in both pairs as his fingers skimmed her soft skin as he went on till the last one was out of it's hole.. revealing her comfy sleep bralette.



"Mishtiii.. Mishtiii ..."


Abir chanted her name in reverence as his eyes took in her ever mesmerizing beauty in the mirror and her shy lowering of eyes..as his fingers ..skimmed along her beauty bone..... her deep valley .. contouring her.. invoking visible sensual changes in her..


His voice was gruff at her ears..


" You can't even imagine how I missed you....my emotions were haywire this week...kuch bhi acha nahin lagtha...."


Mishti turned to him...


" I too missed you... tumhein pata hei na tumhare Bina Mera Mann bhi kahin nahi lagtha..."


Her voice sounded sultry due to her emotions and it flipped something inside him... snapping his control on his desire...


The kiss that ensued was fire...!


Both claiming their prize impatiently... swallowing the delicious moans and sighs of each other.. drinking in the nector..as if only a single drop was left to lick..not ready to let go..


By the time their frenzy simmered and the kiss turned to nibbling and laving at the soft lips..Abir had swiftly divested himself of his jacket and the flannel Tshirt.. Mishti helped pulling them off him..


Both were flushed with urgency as they helped each other undress...


Her palms glided along his hard planes ... enticing him...

Her lips doing the teasing...and her tongue tasting him...all of which was pushing him to the brink....


He gently flipped her on her back... holding her arms captive with one hand hold... unleashed the sensual assault on her...in reply to her own actions...


Mishti writhed in pleasure and the sweet pain he inflicted on her sensitive nubs...her palms fisting on the duvet...his hand joined them entwining and bringing her hands above her head in his hand hold...his captive.....


His. .. binding love spilled over her ethreal beauty .


With Some moments of urgency....

Some moments of savoury...and

Several moments of ecstastic bubbles and pleasure...


His hold on her relaxed as he looked into her half closed eyes seeking the permission...


Her shyness and boldness as she pulled him on to her.... brightened his eyes....


***



Later as they cuddled under her duvet.. Mishti unwittingly remembered her talk with Chotima...and the bitter truth that will undo Abir if he got any inkling.. about the past.


She held him close...as if to ward off any evil befalling on him ..


" Mishti...sorry..I rushed you...."


Mishti ssshhed him and kissed him lightly...


" Sorry bilkul mat kehna...I needed you ..I missed you too....and never ever say sorry for loving me..!"


Abir pushed up on his elbow... looking at her face...


His fiery...bold .. fiesty ...shy ... love.!


His world...!


And his heart ached at there thought of being away from her for a week...as he lightly caressed her lips..


" Mishti...I need to go overseas for a week..may be more..."


Abir's words registered slowly in Mishti.. through the haze of love making ...


Her face dimmed but she tried to smile...


Abir continued stroking her absently as he gave her a rundown of what was happening in India..


Mishti listened and understood the importance and she squeezed his hand ...in support.


" You can find the person's responsible...I think you should consult a senior law official at first... I've heard Kethu talking about the law and order there..may be asserting some clout will work in favor..."


Abir nodded.. smiling in appreciation..


" I have already asked Mamu to secure an appointment with the city commissioner...and someone know some details about Indian law and order...how about that..?"


Mishti masked the fleeting emotion on her face...


She had done a cursory search for Abir's Baba now knowing he had a dubious life and had gone through some articles that popped up regarding irresponsibility and negligence in the system..


" So you'll be coming back after a week..?"


Her question was answered with another worry line on his forehead..


" Before India I need to make a pit stop at Toronto..seems like Piya is having some problem..and it's time for a monthly appraisal too..

So first to Toronto and then to India...and I'll join you at Neerav's..."


Mishti''s heart dropped at the prospect of not being close to him for days and sensing her heart sickness..he sat up leaning on the headboard and pulled her onto him.... kissing away her gloom...


She clinged to him..and slowly the kisses.. meant to reassure each other.. deepened ...and Abir and Mishti, reiterated how they love each other...unconditionally and infinitely...


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Abir looked on as she slept serenely on her back...as he put on his hoodie jacket..


The childish innocence in her face and the sinfully sexy abandonment of her sleeping ..,. tempting him beyond...


He tucked her properly and folded her dress neatly beside her... along with a love you note...


Lastly he made sure that the room is locked so that in the morning kuhu won't barge in to see Mishti... like this..


His eyes still lingered on her form...


Planting a peck on her forehead he smiled widely to himself shaking his head and headed to the balcony door.. pulling on his hoodie....into the cold freeze of early morning...



****



" What..Abir is here??!!"


Piya was stunned by the news her secretary gave her in the evening ..


"Yes ma'am he has landed at Pearson's.. and I think this is meant to be a surprise visit..but one of our staff in logistics spotted him there and passed on the information.."


Piya's frown intensified as she thought how Abir was being spontaneous now a days... becoming unpredictable...she had counted on him coming but not this soon... that too with out informing before hand..


Now she has to make her moves with what little time she got before he comes to meet her..


It irritated her that she had an elaborate plan in place and now she has to improvise..


" Call Jaques here .! Now..!"


Her secretary swiftly passed the message to the kitchen where Jaques was monitoring the preparations..


Piya then listed out the person's in her inner circle..her staff..and ordered them to meet her ASAP...


After schooling a mildly confused Jaques what to say if Abir ask about her she waited for her staff..


As they arrived they found their boss in an agitated state...


" I am going to assign you some specific duties for the time being Abir Sir is here...


Her staff looked at her with confusingly as she gave directions to each one and dismissed them once they got their role...


The last person was a sturdy man working as a floor manager...and his face was an epitome of confusion as all others were given instructions and dismissed instantly...


His confusion turned to fear..as Piya stood before him .. pinning him down with her authoritative eyes and spelled out his role...


" Ma'am.. but... this is...but why...?"


His stammering was met with a cocky smile from Piya...


" You are not getting paid for the Why's...Do it and you get to keep the job and some perks.."


He nodded agreeably and Piya exhaled..


All her moves were in place..


Abir won't be able to know what hit him for a long time...


Mishti...

Today I am taking my Abir back..!


Now it was time for her to act her part..!


****

Same evening.


Mishti and Kuhu reached Rajvansh mansion ..


Nanu was in the study and Mishti was told to meet him..as soon as she came..


Mishti signalled Kuhu to go and meet Kunal..and walked to the study..


Nanu seemed aged all of a sudden and Mishti was concerned as her eyes took in the droop of his shoulders...


""Aah.. Mishti beta...Tum aagayi..?..baitho.."


" Nanu..aap theek toh Hein..? Chotima aur massi kahaan Gayi? Dikhayi nahin de Raha.."


Mishti went to him and he held her hand..


" Mein theek tho nahin Hoon...beta lekin jitna theek Hoon woh tumhari wajah see Hoon.. Meenu aur Parul mandir Gaye hue Hein...der lagega"


He said with a smile...


Mishti looked at him confused but what he said next cleared her confusion.


" Maine Kal tumhari aur Meenu ka baat suna tha.."


Silence fell between them... Mishti looked at Nanu with sympathy...


" Aap poori baat..."


"Haan meine poori baath sunli...aur mujhe jhatka bhi laga... lekin phir Socha toh .. Meenakshi aur Mehul ki Shaadi ke 15 saal baad woh ekdum se toh Mehul ko nahi chod degi..aisa toh nahi hoga...Kuch toh gambheer baat Hein Jo use yeh kadam lene keliye majboor Kiya..."


Mishti nodded.


" Abir bohot pareshaan tha Chotima ke liye...and I thought I should put an effort to understand her ..but what she said was ... even without disclosing the reason ... terrible...Abir...he would be shattered...heina Nanu..?!"


Nanu looked grim..


" Abir se Tum Kuch mat kehna...pata nahin Konsi buri wajah Hein Jo Meri beti ko yeh faisla Lena pada ..woh bhi sabse chupkar...itne saal woh yeh sab apni ander hi band karke rakha ...toh koi gambheer wajah hi hogi...hum aur janne ki koshish karenge toh bhi kaise Kare..."


Mishti too was thinking the same...



***


Later she walked to the hall and her eyes went up...


Kunal was briskly walking to the stairs followed by a harrowed Kuhu..


His face dull and hers desperate...


Kunal stopped midstairs as he saw Mishti waiting..


His face darkening at the school ma'am look she donned seeing his petulant face..


Kuhu signalled a 'no way' at Mishti...and she winked at her in assurance..


" Well...what are you two 'guests ' doing here...you two were in a big hurry to get out of this mansion...ab kyun peeche pade Ho mere..!"


Kunal mocked them...in hurt and anger.. walking to the hall.


" Acha...now we are guests...pehle Kya tha BFF...GF...aur bhi Kai names the na humare..."


Mishti mocked him in return as Kuhu sat down dejected..


" Mishti is se kuch bhi bolne se koi fayda nahin Hein..agarr Kethu hoti tho us see help maangthi ise samjhane ka...woh Mami use jaldi India bulayegi kise pata tha."


" I don't want any samjhana...and FYI..it's you who need that...you know very well that I can't possibly have a long distance relationship with you with such a tough program to complete...you could have done your master's here too...but no! She doesn't care what I would have to go through if she left..."



He turned to Mishti and his agonizing eyes melted her heart..


" Kunal...sambhalke... don't say mean things . You too know she is suffering ...it is never easy to choose between you and family and a career..and if she has taken a decision you should at least listen to her ..."


Kunal sat down opposite to Kuhu..who was now tearing up..


He seemed to have had a slight change of heart looking at her as he rubbed his face with both hands..


" Mishti...I promised you I will be with Kuhu my whole life and I am ready to face anything..but tell me ..did you get any promises from her regarding my feelings..?"


Mishti shook her head in desperation and gave him a slap on shoulders...


" I don't need verbal confirmation of the promises she made to me regarding you...moron.!.Think.!.She is just taking a few months out of your togetherness ...she deserves to be with her parents and instead of considering this as a tug of war situation why don't you try to find a solution or midway..??!"


Kunal looked at Kuhu now looking at him pleadingly...


" What midway Mishti..in three months she'll be away from me...for 2 yrs...you think it's months..?..it's freaking 24 months..I will be interning somewhere for 12 of that months and then she will be interning somewhere after that..."


" But you can go to her na?.. Neerav Jijus firm can take interns in corporate finance ...and your internship is in a matter of months... we'll talk to di and jiju..if necessary we'll tell them everything."


Kuhu and Kunal now sat up straight and looked at Mishti as if she uttered gospel...as if she did a miracle...


" OMG OMG Mishti,.. what an idea..!! . That's right...Jiju can totally induct Kunal there ...and Kunal...that would look so meaty in your resume...!"


Kuhu was now overjoyed and Kunal was looking at Mishti as if she was an apparition...


" Wow... Mishti...what - are - you .?!"


" Whatever I am ..tell me?... both of you.. will this be a compromise for you guys... Later she can opt for internship here if you both want ....."


Kuhu hugged Mishti...


" You know...you go on doing miracles for me and now I am getting a complex that I am not a good enough sister for you...may be one day I will get a chance to be a best sister to you...."


Kunal stood in front of her .. shaking his head .. still in disbelief..


"Oh God...I wish you be with me my whole life... solving my problems ..My Angel...if it had been in my hands I will never let you to get married and go away from me..... better than that ..I would have you married to Bhai if you both weren't combustible together....as you are.."


Kuhu clamped her mouth not able to handle this...as her laughter spilled over...


Kunal looked at Kuhu lovingly and turned to her ecstatically.. not noticing the lovely blush that now adorned Mishti''s face...and her mortified yet shy smile..


But that smile froze as she saw Parul and Meenakshi looking at Kuhu and Kunal who were now in a tight embrace...


****


"I fell in love..!"


Piya was standing by the tall glass window... facing the city..


"What ..!!"


Abir looked at Piya incredulously,...


" Repeat please...did my workaholic career minded friend just said she was in love...!!! but that's a good..I mean happy news..!"


Abir looked at her confusedly...


****


Piya was puzzling him from the moment he entered Rajvansh's hotel complex..


He enquired about her and all people including Jacques was univocal in informing him that she was working hard but something happened and she was Ill and now she was kinda depressed.


Jacques told him half-heartedly that he tried talking to her..but she was not receptive to his attempt to help her with her problem..


Abir was now bewildered at this news..


Piya who preferred head-on tackling with problems was sulking..??! He couldn't even imagine her depressed...!!


He texted Mishti and told her the situation and he smiled at her reply..


At her attitude and answering his questions before asking as if she could read his thoughts..


Help your friend...and KUKU situation diffused here...Chotima is okay.. Nanu cool as ever and your Massima is being tough as usual..

You go on..take rest..you didn't sleep yesterday!


The last line made him blush though..!!


Doing a cursory review and ordering the finance team to complete the audit by tomorrow he went to penthouse to freshen up.


Mishti''s thoughts always kept the smile on his face as he relived the day Mishti and Mark made fool of him... pushing him to his limits ....


Now to solve the problem at his hand.


Abir had called Neil and left him a voicemail of what he learned and that he'll manage Piya..


And when he looked at Neil's reply he was puzzled again.


" She's now your responsibility BIL...all the best!"

What..??! BIL..!


Piya had promised him that she'll clear all the lies .. with her family..but seeing Neil's reply Abir had felt uneasy..



And his entire perception about Piya took a hit when he saw her...


He was having difficulty in accepting the fact that the lady he found in her room..sans make up and prim and proper attire with matching accessories...wearing a simple nightshirt was Piya.!!


As far as he knew she wouldn't Donn that outfit till midnight...and to find her in her room in evening itself was an anomaly..


And her expression was surprised and shocked when she saw him...


" Abir...ohh.. when did you ..why didn't you call ..ohh.."


Abir stood there taking in the unkempt look she spotted and raised his eye brows at her mention of calls... that her voice trailed...


" So tell me what's going on...what is so important that you suddenly doesn't need your brother or friends and live here like you had a personality transplant..?!!"


Piye turned away as Abir took stock of the scenario...


She looked different, vulnerable and actually depressed .he hadn't seen her like this after that incident...and she was going to drown whatever her sorrow was in drinks by the looks of it...


Piya poured out a generous measure into her glass and walked to the window...and dropped the surprise..


That she is in love..!


And Abir for whom being in love was the most happiest thing that happened to him couldn't understand why falling in love would push someone like Piya towards depression..


"Well...it happened for me in a blink of an eye..I saw him...and I was ...in love .."


Piya looked outside... gritting her teeth at the remainder of her unrequited attraction to Abir..


"Then..we had some moments...I got to know he cared for me...and then on a very fine day I bumped into him at a private party and he introduced me to his fiance ..."


Piya being a master in manipulation had no problem in inflicting the right pathos into her sob story....tearup....and take a long swig of the drink...


Abir now understood her problem...


Heartbreak..


And he could relate to her situation ..


His bad patch due to his foolish thoughts that Mishti loved Kunal...


Piya was now going through the same depression..


"Piya .. listen to me "


He pulled her hand and made her sit ...


And advised her about her own importance ..just as Mark did for him months ago...


Piya smiled in mind ..

Abir is such an easy person to fool...next to Neil...both have emotional blindspots when it comes to her..

But she didn't even want one brother and not one more !

If Abir marry Mishti.. she will be thrown out of his life... Ending up just as an employee..


And she can't allow that to happen..



"Thank you Abir...now I know...I shouldn't have wallowed in my desperation..i should have reached out to you and let you help me ...he was not meant for me and that's it...."


She said and Abir exhaled..


" Yeah..great...! You just had to call me or Neil..or even Mishti..I think you both did gel well..."


Piya gritted her teeth and smiled...


" May be..but I wanted to lash out at my loss then and therefore decided to do it in solitude"


"So take away all this and get back to old self Piya..."


Abir stood up and extended his hand for her glass...as she evaded his arm...


" No Abir...since you decided to crash into your friend's last pity party I suggest you join in... company sake ...I promise you the old Piya from tomorrow morning..I"ll order your favorite..."


She rang the bell..


Abir shook his head..but Piya tried her emotional blackmail again that she had no one to share her thoughts and succeeded in making him agree.


" A small only ..just for company's sake..now tell me about what you are going to do to better yourself..I am all for you taking a vacation...to boost your morale."


The floor manager came in with the bottle and glasses...his eyes meeting with Piya's.. passing the communication..


Abir checked his phone..as it pinged..his eyes skimming through messages ...actually looking at the wallpaper of her eyes......his eyes shining bright with a smile.. involuntarily..


Piya looked at Abir's face ...her hatred bubbling up for Mishti..


" Tell me Abir..have you reconsidered your thoughts on love...I got a feeling that you ...you know..."


.She distracted Abir as the drink was mixed...and Abir closed his phone...and shrugged innocently..guarding his expressions...


Their talks then veered to business and Piya's eyes glinted in satisfaction as her prey fell comfortably in her trap...


****


Next morning..


Abir woke up in his bed in the penthouse..


Wondering how he had no memory of coming back to his room..


" Oh God ..I really need to put a stop on this..but.."


He was only a bit lightheaded.. not indicating a serious hang over..


Totally mortified he got up and freshened up..his cognizance sharpening...


He looked at his phone...

Seeing Mishti''s message he sat down in shock..!


Kuku..busted..! Chotima and Parul massi saw them yesterday..and they are coming to talk with Badimaa..

Wish you were here.. Miss u..


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Mishti Kuhu and Kunal stood silently like culprits caught red handed in front of Meenakshi, Rajshri and Parul...


Yesterday Chotima had told them to go home and Kunal to his room.. after witnessing Kunal and Kuhu's intimacy...!


Kunal called them and informed later that his two Maa's are coming to meet Massima.. regarding this development...


He was tensed and Mishti had asked both of them to be optimistic...


She had earlier sent a message to Abir ...that everything was fine..Not wanting to tense him amidst his problems..but as the uncertainty loomed she wished he was near her..and texted him...


He haven't seen it yet and now as they stood before the elders.. Mishti knew she was being overtly optimistic...


" Dekha Rajshri behn..aapka laadla yeh Kya Kar Raha tha..?"


Meenakshi prompted Rajshri..


Rajshri donned her angry face and looked at Kuhu...


" Aap Kunal ko kyun daant rahe ho..zaroor Kuhu hi use behkaya hoga...aur yeh iski behn...isko koi kuch kyun nahi bol rahi....mujhe pakka pata Hein ki Mishti yeh sab pehle hi jaanti thi.."


" Ismein Mishti ko kyun kheench rahe ho Rajshri behn...baat Kunal aur Kuhu ki ho rahi Hein na..pata nahi kitne dinse yeh chal Raha hein...donon ne humse yeh baat itne dinon see chupaya .. kitne...din ..see..!?"


Kunal looked up at Parul's question...


Stammering "one month nahin hua.."


" Acha ..ek mahine see chal Raha Hein yeh sab mere Ghar mein.."


Meenakshi's voice was loud and both Mishti and Kuhu pressed their eyes tight and held their hands together... Kuhu involuntarily sought Kunal's hand too and the elders noted this and signalled with eyes...


" Kab Shaadi karne ka plan Hein..?"


Meenakshi asked in the same vain and the three chorused in terror..


" After studies" Mishti and Kuhu!

" After job".. Kunal..!


Rajshri looked at Meenakshi and they shared a smile...


"Ab hum badon ko kuch discussion karni Hein...tum donon ander jao aur Kunal tum Bahar..apne apne punishment ka wait Karo.."


Parul told the trio in a Stern tone..


Mishti dragged Kuhu..who looked at Kunal with sad eyes...as he signalled her to go...


Mishti turned as they went up and winked reassuringly at Kunal... bolstering his confidence..




Three ladies looked at each other and exhaled...


Then with widening smiles hugged each other..


" Badhai ho Rajshri behn...aapki ek beti toh Meri hi Ghar bahu ban ne wali Hein...sapna kisi aur ke bare mein dekha tha...lekin Kuhu is such a sweet girl..."


Meenakshi smiled widely as she congratulated Rajshri..


" Mujhe kaise pata nahin Chala...!"


Parul said amusedly...


"Kunal toh har waqt Mishti ke hi saath tha na...Sach mein...Bache bade shatir nikle..."


Rajshri's forhead was lined though she smiled and Meenakshii picked up her turbulent mind..


" Kya baat Hein Rajshri behn..Aap Shourya aur Varsha ki reaction ko leke pareshaan toh nahin heina.."


Rajshri brushed off the matter..." Kuhu agar ek decision leti Hein toh Shourya aur Varsha ko Kya aithraz ho saktha Hein...woh..mein... Mishti ko leke pareshaan Hoon..."


Meenakshi and Parul looked at each other in confusion...


"Mishti..! Mishti ko leke pareshaan..! Lekin Kyun.."


Meenakshi voiced hers and Parul's astonished question.


" Maa Hoon...thoda toh pata lagega hi na ki beti mein kuch badlav ho toh....Kuhu aur Kunal toh abhi Bache Hein..Shayad unki bachpana ki wajah see mein unki baat nahin dekh payi.... lekin Mishti mein ekdum alag si ek Khushi Hein..."


Meenakshi was thinking about that now...in her traumas she had failed to notice what Rajshri was implying...but definitely Mishti seemed more happy and confident..


Parul said innocently..


" May be she is actually happy..for all the efforts she put she is getting the best results na...Kuhu is happy...you are happy Rajshri behn..."


Meenakshi smiled at Parul's comment..


" Parul.. hum donon is bare mein kuch nahin keh sakthe ..ladkon ki maa hei na.... lekin ladkiyon ki maa ko kuch baat pehle pata lag jaati Hein... Rajshri behn aap ab us se kuch mat poochiye ...hum bhi dekhe ki humari princess humse kitne baatein chupa rahi Hein..."


Rajshri nodded with a smile as Meenakshi and Parul... looked out...


" Ab inko good news de hi dete Hein....Kal se bohot dare hue Hein Bache...bapuji ka bas chaltha toh Kal hi party rakhthe...humne thoda time maanga tha unse.."


Parul said and others nodded happily..


"Bhagwan humare khushiyon ko buri nazar se bachaye...yehi ek minnath Hein unse.."


Rajshri's voice held all the feelings for the lost happiness in the past..


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Posted: 5 years ago

Loved reading Mishbhir part as always and this time cherry on the cake was KuKu part and the drama at Rajvansh Mansion and new house!

So the villain is back in action now... God knows what has she planned.... Hope she gets caught red handed this time and no more BIL msgs by N....

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Guys...

On to physical classes from now on..

Means daily interactions with people be it collegues or students..

Will take utmost care but do include me in your prayers..

Already many of you are working in this situation...

But getting out of the safety of your home and constantly exposing yourself to uncertainty is a bit frightening..

It's been 9 months...

And everything there is a mess..

Will have to start from the scratch..

Do wait if my updates are a bit late...

I truly enjoy writing Mishbir and will update regularly..but if I delay more feel free to poke me..

Praying that you guys too are safe and healthy..

Surya.

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Posted: 5 years ago

First of all, all the best for the in-person classes Surya, take care and be safe 🤗 I pray that everything goes smoothly


Coming to the update: thank you for the pm.

Mishbir's night scene was soooooo amazing and hot and the VM was cherry on the top ❤️

So piya's evil plan has already started 😭 I'm so scared..hope abir gets out of her trap asap and mishbir don't get separated for too long

All the elders agreed with kuku rishta so easily..I'm pleasantly surprised but also very happy for kuku 🥳

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you so much for this update and even bigger thanks for the Mishbir VM with my current favorite song “Senorita”😍👌🔥🤗

I had a big grin watching the sizzling VM 🤩

The Mishbir night scene perfectly matches the song and VM, both incredibly hot and scintillating! Literally Aag laga dee 🔥☺️😜

Abir ka daring attitude now that Shaurya uncle isn’t there 😆

When the cat’s away the mice will play 😛

I hope Mishti remembered her contraceptives and doesn’t get pregnant 😰

Then she will be in much worse trouble

Loved the photo of Mishti’s room and her silky night suit! Aah Mishbir mirror scene is always enchanting ☺️😳

Mishti is such a smart girl, advising Abir to take the help of higher authorities to find the culprit in their Indian office 👍🏼

Oh No, why did Abir go to Toronto? Now Piya has trapped him in her devious plan! Neil still calling him BIL should have warned Abir 😰

So she told the floor manager to spike his drink! 😡

Now what’s her plan? To claim Abir was intimate with her? Taking pics with him to blackmail him? All her fake sob story about being ditched by her imaginary lover, what was that for then? She set the stage well for her nautanki in night clothes, pretending to be depressed and heartbroken, that manipulative witch!🤬 She doesn’t even care for her own brother!🤢


Poor Nanu is overwhelmed with the burden and tension of Meenu-Mehul past

Meenu wants to protect Abir from knowing about his father’s terrible crimes so she’s hidden the truth even from nanu

Mishti the school ma’am looking at petulant Kunal - can totally imagine their expressions😆

Kunal calling MishKu guests and Mishti mocking him 😆

Wow, Mishti is really Kuku’s savior/ guardian angel, kya mast idea diya hai! ⭐️

Kunal doing internship at Neerav’s company in

London will solve Kuku’s long distance problem! 👌

Uh oh KuKu got caught red-handed by the elders! 😲Chalo achha hi hua, at least KuKu relationship is out in the open now. They won’t have to play hide and seek like Mishbir 😔

Glad that KuKu decided to wait till graduation and job before getting married 👍🏼

Kuhu’s promise to Mishti to be the best sister to her someday, why do I get a feeling that involves KuKu helping Mishti when tsunami hits her life?

Kunal ne Mishti ke mann ki baat keh dee, wishing for her to marry Abir and stay with them forever, Kunal would be the happiest to know about Mishbir

Little does Kunal know that his brother and Mishti are indeed combustible together but in a different way ☺️😳😛

The elders gave the youngsters quite a scare. Made them damn nervous before accepting KuKu as a couple 😆

So BM has noticed the changes in Mishti, of course a mother can tell the difference when daughter is in love 😳

So Rajshri and Parul probably thought Kunal and Mishti have something going on🤔

Meenu still wishes for Mishti as her bahu...if only Mishbir had confessed😒

Haha Nanu wants to party for Kuku’s Rishta, typical Nanu 😆

Wish BM found out about Mishbir before tragedy strikes them! She won’t be able to bear the shock if she finds out later.

I love it how both Meenu and Kuhu are positive characters here. All the enemies are outsiders, Piya and Mehul and perhaps Saksham....❓


Thanks for the pm! Please take care of yourself and don’t stress about updates! We will wait! 🤗

Please be careful going back to work! My best wishes and prayers are with you! 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thank you so much for this update and even bigger thanks for the Mishbir VM with my current favorite song “Senorita”😍👌🔥🤗

I had a big grin watching the sizzling VM 🤩

The Mishbir night scene perfectly matches the song and VM, both incredibly hot and scintillating! Literally Aag laga dee 🔥☺️😜

Abir ka daring attitude now that Shaurya uncle isn’t there 😆

When the cat’s away the mice will play 😛

I hope Mishti remembered her contraceptives and doesn’t get pregnant 😰

Then she will be in much worse trouble

Loved the photo of Mishti’s room and her silky night suit! Aah Mishbir mirror scene is always enchanting ☺️😳

Mishti is such a smart girl, advising Abir to take the help of higher authorities to find the culprit in their Indian office 👍🏼

Oh No, why did Abir go to Toronto? Now Piya has trapped him in her devious plan! Neil still calling him BIL should have warned Abir 😰

So she told the floor manager to spike his drink! 😡

Now what’s her plan? To claim Abir was intimate with her? Taking pics with him to blackmail him? All her fake sob story about being ditched by her imaginary lover, what was that for then? She set the stage well for her nautanki in night clothes, pretending to be depressed and heartbroken, that manipulative witch!🤬 She doesn’t even care for her own brother!🤢


Poor Nanu is overwhelmed with the burden and tension of Meenu-Mehul past

Meenu wants to protect Abir from knowing about his father’s terrible crimes so she’s hidden the truth even from nanu

Mishti the school ma’am looking at petulant Kunal - can totally imagine their expressions😆

Kunal calling MishKu guests and Mishti mocking him 😆

Wow, Mishti is really Kuku’s savior/ guardian angel, kya mast idea diya hai! ⭐️

Kunal doing internship at Neerav’s company in

London will solve Kuku’s long distance problem! 👌

Uh oh KuKu got caught red-handed by the elders! 😲Chalo achha hi hua, at least KuKu relationship is out in the open now. They won’t have to play hide and seek like Mishbir 😔

Glad that KuKu decided to wait till graduation and job before getting married 👍🏼

Kuhu’s promise to Mishti to be the best sister to her someday, why do I get a feeling that involves KuKu helping Mishti when tsunami hits her life?

Kunal ne Mishti ke mann ki baat keh dee, wishing for her to marry Abir and stay with them forever, Kunal would be the happiest to know about Mishbir

Little does Kunal know that his brother and Mishti are indeed combustible together but in a different way ☺️😳😛

The elders gave the youngsters quite a scare. Made them damn nervous before accepting KuKu as a couple 😆

So BM has noticed the changes in Mishti, of course a mother can tell the difference when daughter is in love 😳

So Rajshri and Parul probably thought Kunal and Mishti have something going on🤔

Meenu still wishes for Mishti as her bahu...if only Mishbir had confessed😒

Haha Nanu wants to party for Kuku’s Rishta, typical Nanu 😆

Wish BM found out about Mishbir before tragedy strikes them! She won’t be able to bear the shock if she finds out later.

I love it how both Meenu and Kuhu are positive characters here. All the enemies are outsiders, Piya and Mehul and perhaps Saksham....❓


Thanks for the pm! Please take care of yourself and don’t stress about updates! We will wait! 🤗

Please be careful going back to work! My best wishes and prayers are with you! 🤗

your comments are as interesting as the story..I always read your comments
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Posted: 5 years ago

I really enjoyed the story and the start was really interesting. wonderful start of new year. Abhi is going out for one week I think it is the start of the storm. Is there piya in Canada. And see spiked his drink

abir is in serious trouble now. After that he is going to India where I think he will meet his father and he can use himin his favour..one week will change mishbir life.. happy for kuku..

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