FF// Untold Stories; Chapter 26 updated; (Dec 29) - Page 49

And the rest of the chapters.. here we go!!! I apologise beforehand, my review might be totally random and not be the most articulate but I will try and portray my thoughts as they came?? ☺️

I absolutely LOVVVVVVE LAVANYA AND KHUSHI’s friendship so, so much!!! Their bond is EVERYTHING!!!! They are just so good for each other and I love their scenes.. also what am I reading???? AKAASH AND LAVANYA??? THEY’RE A THING !!?? OH MY GOD LOL YAY !!!! (Altho I felt for Akaash so much at La’s comments. The boy is 100% smitten)..

Arnav saving Khushi from falling, the hand hold, the way they look over @ the party - this whole interaction.. the writing of this entire was spectacular! LOVED it.. I have to say this line made me so soft - Failing to notice (or perhaps in deliberate refusal to notice) - It made me think of how flustered Khushi is.. or perhaps how scared she is of thinking Arnav might potentially like her and find her attractive. She’s just dismissing the idea before it can even start to form.. if only she knew.. (although I feel she would lose it and not know how to respond. Bless her😆) - this idea was also heightened by her interrupting Arnav’s compliment. I’m pretty sure she knew he was going to compliment her.. it’s like she guards herself from hoping he might find her attractive.. or even give her a second look. Argh, I love this story so much.

YAYYYYYYYY ANJALI CONTENT !!!! I’ve missed my baby.. wait I should have said Anjali-Khushi content LOL!!!! Nevertheless, I’VE MISSED MY BABIES !!! So, so cute !!! Anjali stumbling😆 - such a ditz. A cute ditz, mind you!!? The “Apologies if my back hurt your knife,” Arnav muttered drily” gave me such FRIENDS vibes!!!! Argh I love that show..

The description of nani was brilliant.. I have to be honest, it reminded me of a different actress for some reason (an actress who played a granny before but I cannot for the love of me, remember her name. Dammit, sorry LOL!!) - if i do, i will be sure to post!! Not until she spoke did i picture the IPKKND nani😳 - the bit where Khushi talks about the negatives of Soya.. omg !!!! 😆 - I had the biggest grin. It was just SO ADORABLE LOL !!!! I also love how Nani noticed the chemistry between ArHI - the wandering eye, the “discomfort”, the smiles. She is one clever lady !!! (i was going to add this later but I will just say it now since I was talking about nani but I love how she didn’t judge Khushi for being divorced. It’s such great forward-thinking but it was a gesture I really liked😒)

Okay so when I reached the end of this chapter, I became a little stressed.. and kind of annoyed @ myself as I completely forgot that there would be other families from Lucknow here! The way you worded Khushi’s fear was fantastic (yet so heartbreaking @ the same time). Arnav’s timing was great.. but I also like how he told her to refuse things that make her uncomfortable. As someone who finds it difficult to refuse things myself, it gives a sense of validation that i’m okay to do this or feel like this, you know!! I’m sure Khushi appreciated it because I sure as hell did !! ❤️

The scene with ArHi watching Anjali and her guy friend - the way he called him a mongoose 🤣.. this made me laugh so hard!!! Typical Arnav type insult.. and the whole description of the scene was so apt !!!!! LOVED IT.. i find it so sweet how the both of them were @ the sidelines of the party.. all the commentary and then Khushi imagining life if Arnav was beside her instead of Shyaam. I have to admit I was ecstatic when I read this scene.. so, so ecstatic !!! I’ve been waiting for a scene like this and boy, did you deliver. It broke my heart @ the same time but it just banged so hard LOL :(

THE ENDING OF THIS CHAPTER 23/24 itself deserves another review and I will be back because I have so much to say and it was so hard to read (i can’t imagine how you wrote that - hats off) .. but after reviewing the above, i can’t bear to write about the rest atm!!!!! Once again Sabi, you absolutely KILLED IT 👏

You guys, Chapter 25 - Que Sera, Sera is up on the blog. Padh lo :)

Everyone is embarrassed with the turn of events. Nani, Khushi, Arnav. How will they get past it?

Love nani in this chapter. She made a mistake but owned up to it. She knows now that Khushi is nothing like the person she imagined. You can see her being a supportive friend in the future.

Dear Saucechips,

I am a silent reader. This is my 2nd post to you. My 1st post was related to continuing your "Unpredictable.." story but did not receive any response. I understand your busy schedule. Do you have any plan to continue this?

I must say that you are an exceptionally genius and excellent writer. I loved and enjoyed all your write up/stories.

Regarding your "Prescribed insanity" story, I was not able to open it in your WordPress, I was able to read it in Wattpad though. Would appreciate highly if you continue updating this story asap.

Thanks.

JBH

Originally posted by: JBH

Dear Saucechips,

I am a silent reader. This is my 2nd post to you. My 1st post was related to continuing your "Unpredictable.." story but did not receive any response. I understand your busy schedule. Do you have any plan to continue this?

I must say that you are an exceptionally genius and excellent writer. I loved and enjoyed all your write up/stories.

Regarding your "Prescribed insanity" story, I was not able to open it in your WordPress, I was able to read it in Wattpad though. Would appreciate highly if you continue updating this story asap.

Thanks.

JBH

Hey!

Saucechips has updated a chapter right this week! And she has been giving consistent updates currently. You might have missed them... check her Wordpress. :)

She has already informed that considering the current scenario (Pandemic) she is unable to write humor and is focusing on Untold stories for now. Prescribed Insanity will be continued at a later date.

And since she is putting up the updates for Prescribed Insanity on Wattpad, they have been removed form Wordpress currently. Once all the existing chapters are updated on Wattpad, she will reopen their access on Wordpress too and continue writing (*fingers crossed*).

Till then, go ahead and read Untold Stories. Since you seem to be already aware of her Wordpress, I'm not leaving instructions on the same.

Happy Reading 🥳

Love,

Stuti

What a heartfelt conversation between nani and khushi ..nani could not have been more honest with her words .. i see her gladly accepting khushi as her daughter in law in future

And how adorable is the siblings bond .. arnav and anjali are too cute ❤️

I loved the way arnav feels for khushi ..he has been so protective about how she feels and so caring .. khushi totally deserves a guy like him ..

I m wondering how will their relation progress from here .. how will they feel for each other next time they meet ..

Hey what about shayam ? Actually dont really want to know just asking aiwi 😆

It was a beautifully written chapter focusing on the gamut of emotions and feelings of Anjali ,Nani and Arnav and kushi after the incident that took place during Anjali’s birthday party.

Loved the brother sister bonding, Arnav is a very loving and caring brother who is ready to do anything for his sister and enjoyed their banter about the party and the way he was pulling Anji’s leg regarding her friends. But at the same time both were guilty and sorry for what happened in the party and Anji tried to pacify Arnav by telling him that Nani did not hurt kushi intentionally.

Of all the members of the Raizada family Nani was feeling more guilty, she felt it was because of her everything happened. She going personally to visit kushi and admit her fault and apologize speaks volumes of the character of the matriarch. Her parting advice to kushi uplifted kushi’s spirits and she indirectly guided kushi to think about her future and not to dampen her spirits by thinking of what happened at the party . By now Nani has realized that kushi is a gem of a girl and I am sure she’ll be the one to welcome kushi as her bahu with open arms.

Eagerly waiting for Arnav and kushi’s meet. Hoping Arnav comes to kushi’s home after not seeing her at office.

Originally posted by: Miss.Zaidi

Waiting

She has left an entertaining note on the blog about what is causing the delay. Have a look in case you haven't 😛.

Love,

Stuti

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

She has left an entertaining note on the blog about what is causing the delay. Have a look in case you haven't 😛.

Love,

Stuti

Nice promotion for authkr s note 😆❤️ checking now