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Posted: 5 years ago

Plzz update the next part soon didi

Can't wait for their face-off

Overall it is an amazing chapter

Continue it soon ๐Ÿ™‚

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Posted: 5 years ago

Oh wow soo good update
Jo's new avtar lol

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jalal is gone totally๐Ÿ˜†

Cant wait more for next update

pls update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Siva_RAnjani_P

Waiting for their face off

Nice update

Next update soon plzz

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Plzz update the next part soon didi

Can't wait for their face-off

Overall it is an amazing chapter

Continue it soon ๐Ÿ™‚

Thank you sweety๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaJA

Oh wow soo good update
Jo's new avtar lol

๐Ÿคฃ

jalal is gone totally๐Ÿ˜†

Cant wait more for next update

pls update soon

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ParijatGirl

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

Update soon dear..can't wait

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Posted: 5 years ago

Splendid how Jodha tricked Jalal with her "village girl" avatar and behaviour ๐Ÿคฃ

Can't wait for their next face off

New entry of Surya. Interesting plot

Awesome chappie sweety ๐Ÿ’–

Waiting for next part

Take care little sis ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜˜

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Soso70

Splendid how Jodha tricked Jalal with her "village girl" avatar and behaviour ๐Ÿคฃ

Can't wait for their next face off

New entry of Surya. Interesting plot

Awesome chappie sweety ๐Ÿ’–

Waiting for next part

Take care little sis ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜˜

Thank you sissy๐Ÿค—.. i will try to update soon sissy

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Posted: 5 years ago

CHAPTER 9- PART 2



"Damn... why did he come back now, i hope he have not see me in this state..."

She saw large trash can, immediately Jodha went near trash can and pretended to be looking for something in the trash, fortunately Jalal did not have time to see Jodha because when the lift door opened Jalal was busy with his phone.

Jalal saw a girl who was searching something in trash can then Jalal approached the girl.

"Did you lose something Miss? What are you looking for in that trash? Maybe I can help you find something you are looking for?" Jalal said to Jodha.

Jodha just gave a gesture by waving and showing her thumbs a sign there was no problem ... Jalal also left Jodha who was still busy pretending as searching something in trash.

"Ohhh....thank god... it's not time for you to see me in my true form Jalal, I still haven't finished teaching you a lesson hahaha .." but suddenly Jodha feel something wet on her left hand, she lifted her hand from the trash can and was so shocked he saw something dirty on her finger.

"aaaahhhโ€ฆ damnโ€ฆ eeewwwโ€ฆ what is this.... this is so disgusting !!!" with a face that felt like crying Jodha cleaned her fingers and washed them with antiseptic liquid.

************

Meanwhile Jalal who just came in his apartment saw the brown envelope that he gave to Jodha on the table.

He open the envelope and read...

"MARRIAGE AGREEMENT"

1. This marriage only applies on paper and in front of my parents only.

2. This marriage is only valid for 6 months.

3. After 6 months. the second party received compensation of 500 million from the first party.

4. No physical contact except any require.

5. Both parties must not interfere with the other's private affairs.

6. This agreement can be changed at any time depending on the conditions.

1st party Jalalludin Akbar signed

2nd party Jodha Sharma signed

A satisfied smile appeared on Jalal's lips ...

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9pm

Jodha has just finished taking a shower after she came home from work, luckily she arrived when Jalal was not there, immediately Jodha rushed to her room and turned into a village girl again.

She was feeling hungry. She went to the kitchen to try to make food for herself, he opened the fridge and found various kinds of vegetables.

Jodha finally decided to make vegetable porridge to warm her body. She usually don't like to eat rice in night time to maintained her body shape.

Jalal came inside his apartment, and was about to move....

"Welcome Mr. Jalalโ€ฆ nice to see you again.โ€ฆ" said Jodha to Jalal without looking at Jalal, she was more busy eating the porridge in front of her.

Jalal was silent and did not reply to Jodha's greeting, he only watched the village girl enjoying the food in front of her. Suddenly Jalal sat in front of Jodha while still staring intently at Jodha.

"You village girl....you have no manners huh ...?!?!?"

"What do you mean sir?!?! Just say what you want to say ....." said jodha and continue to eat her good.

"Hey ... can't you talk by looking at the face of the person you're talking to ??? and can't you offer me that food" said Jalal irritably.

"oh .. so you want to eat??? I purposely didn't offer you this porridge because I thought you were a city person who couldn't eat village food like this ... but okay for the sake of courtesy I'll get a bowl for you" Jodha took a bowl of porridge and placed it in front of Jalal.

"Here you go.. enjoy ..."

"what food is this .."

"I thought you just wanted to insult me through eating this right ??? if you don't want to eat it ... don't eat !!! said Jodha irritatedly while taking the porridge in front of Jalal.

But before jodha can take the bowl, jalal stop her by grabbing her hand. For a moment they are stunned by what just happened. Their eyes lock with each other. this is their first touch as husband and wife and it has a tremendous effect on both of them, their hearts are beating fast. Slowly jalal leave jodha's hand.

"I.. i will eat it" said jalal while covered his nervousness, they ate in silence.

"How is the porridge??" said jodha trying to make the atmosphere free.

"Not badโ€ฆ did you cook it?!?!"

"Yes ... I didn't expect that you like to eat village food like this.."

"I didn't say if I like it I just said it was okay, I mean it's still pretty decent to eat ... even though the taste is not too special it tends to be bland but it's still better ... if I may advise, next time you cut the carrots in round shape not like this, i like the way janu ma (cook/maid) cut the potatoes into large cubes, not this small " says jalal.

"Whats the different ... if the carrots are cut slanted with the ones in round slices ?? then what's the difference too if the potatoes are cut into small cubes and those that are cut into large pieces ???" said jodha annoyed at Jalal's criticism.

"yaaa ... not that different...but if you cut like janu ma, the vegetables look beautiful" said Jalal.

"Alright... from tomorrow I will bring the vegetables to SALON so that it will look beautiful !!!" Said jodha making jalal shock.

"That's not what I mean ... I'm just giving advice to you... if you don't like my advice, just ignore it ... clean it up ... !!!"

"heuft ... be patient jodha... only him... must be patient ... later there will be a chance for you to shut his big mouth" jodha thought holding back her anger.

"ooohhh yes ... what do you work in the village?"

"not a big job just taking care of the sick people"

"ooooohhh ... so you're a baby sitter of sick people?!?!" Jodha remain silent hearing jalal who has start insulting her again.

"Didn't you find another job that is cooler and enough salary. What if people find out that Jalalludin Akbar's wife only works as a nurse for sick people whose salary is not enough even to care for manicure your nails" Jodha could not hold back her anger anymore with her fierce gaze she replied to jalal's words.

"So what if I only work as a nurse for the sick people?!?! I'm not ashamed of my job, even though my salary is small, at least I can support myself with that salary without asking my parents even for a cent.... you yourself are Mister JALALLUDIN AKBAR what a great job you do?!?!?!? how much salary have you ever earned from your own sweat?!?!? " Jodha said calmly but jalal was just silent, he could not answer because in his life he never worked even once.

"Embarrassing right!!! so all this time what you are boasting about is all the sweat of your dad?!?!? I bet even the innerwear you are wearing right now was bought with the hard work of your dad's money right?!? !? Punish me if what I say is not true "said Jodha firmly.

Jalal was speechless his mouth was tightly locked. what Jodha said was trueโ€ฆ this was the first time anyone dared to speak to him openly.

"So as long as you haven't been able to produce a money from the sweat of your hard work, don't ever boast in front of me. I'm just a village girl but at least I don't make myself a parasite for other people even though it's my own parents.โ€ฆ"

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SORRY FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES...

THANK YOUUU๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’•

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