Akdha FF- l A Jewel That Almost Gone... l COMPLETED! - Page 17

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Awesome update dii๐Ÿ’–

So now jalal and jo got married and jalal is treating her like a village girl๐Ÿ˜กand showing his attitude

Really like to know how will jodha bring him back to reality and crush his attitude

Will like to know abt Salima and the other man who was with her

Will wait eagerly how jodha has done her makeup and also who won the betโ“

Continue it soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Take care๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Love u๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

Thank you sweety๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaJA

You are making us more and more curious about their first meeting

Soo good update
marriage is done

Jalal showing attitude haa....jo will teach him good lesson

Cant wait more for next update, pls update soon.

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you didi๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ParijatGirl

Thank you sweety๐Ÿ˜Š

Didi u will update today??

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: SayaniSharma

Didi u will update today??

No sweety... next week i will update๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ParijatGirl

No sweety... next week i will update๐Ÿ˜Š

Ok didi will wait for it eagerly โ˜บ๏ธ

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Posted: 5 years ago

Sorry I'm so late sweety. Life and job it's quite hectic at this time.

Enjoyed your update very much

finally they married. Jodha taught him a good lesson ๐Ÿคฃ

let's see if Jalal loose his Porsche to Mirza and who is Salima. What did she made in past to Jodha...

I'm looking forward for next part

Take care little sis ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Soso70

Sorry I'm so late sweety. Life and job it's quite hectic at this time.

Enjoyed your update very much

finally they married. Jodha taught him a good lesson ๐Ÿคฃ

let's see if Jalal loose his Porsche to Mirza and who is Salima. What did she made in past to Jodha...

I'm looking forward for next part

Take care little sis ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

Take your time sissy... thank you sissy๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 5 years ago

CHAPTER 9- PART 1



A girl stood there shyly wearing a dull colour ragged salwar with a long messy braid and wearing a nerd glasses.

"hello.... i m Jodha ....." smiling at Mirza and Jalal, Mirza was still stunned at the creature in front of him.

When Mirza was about to shake Jodha's hand but Jodha greet him by folding her both hands make Mirza nervous and immediately follow as her greetings. Jalal, who looked at the two people in front of him greeting each other, was only able to open his eyes and mouth widely , a sign that he was shocked to death! while Jodha wanted to laugh out loud seeing Jalal and Mirza's expressions.

"let's have breakfast together, sorry if there is only bread with jam and coffee I don't know that you will come to visit this early" Jodha's words made Mirza bow his head shyly.

While Jalal is still a little shaken by the figure of his wife who just married a day ago. they sat at the dining table, Jodha sat opposite to Jalal, and Mirza sat beside Jalal. that morning they only had bread with jam and a cup of coffee.

"This is the most delicious bread I have ever eaten. In my village, the bread is not this goodโ€ฆ" said jodha breaking the silence between them, Jodha ate the bread greedily while Mirza and Jalal did not touch the food in front of them. they only pay attention to how Jodha eats.

" sir... why you didn't eat the bread ??? You don't like it ... if you don't like it, can i have it??" Jodha asked Mirza.

"Of course ... go ahead. I'm not hungry and please don't call me sir just call me mirza "said mirza while handing his bread to jodha.

After finish eating jodha burp loudly..."Oooops ... sorry..." said jodha while grinning at Jalal and Mirza who were staring at Jodha in disbelief.

Immediately Jalal stand up leaving the dining table followed by Mirza just after saying goodbye to Jodha. as soon as they disappeared from the door Jodha immediately ran to her room, she could not bear to laugh, remembering Jalal's face that was shocked to see her behavior.

"Hahaha.. feel my punishment for your insult to me Jalal ... this is just the beginning, now you just enjoy your new car, consider it a wedding gift from me. hahaha ... mirza ... this punishment for you because you dare to make women a bet !!!! " Jodha knew all what Mirza and Jalal were talking about at the cafe, Jodha was the beautiful woman who smiled at Mirza at that time.

"There will be many surprises for you Jalal ... just wait and watch" Jodha said to herself.

***************

"oh ... my gosh ... mirza am I having a nightmare?!?! tell me what kind of alien creature is that village girl..?!?! this is really a big disaster for me.. . !!! "

"I am sorry for your fate, bro ... be patient ... according to our bet I will give you my car" said mirza while handing the car keys to Jalal.

"Your car can't make me happy in the least Mirza, if only I could do magic I would have change the village girl to something!!!"

"hahaha ... don't be so cruel, jalal, after all, now she is Mrs Jalalludin Akbar hahaha ..." mirza teased Jalal which made Jalal annoyed even more.

"Jalal sorry so I can't stay here long, actually I still want to be here to help you get rid of your surprise hahaha... but I have to go as i have an important work"

" where are you going?" asked jalal.

"I have to leave now, I want to pick up my cousin at the airport ..."

"why did you never tell me that you have a cousin? a boy or a girl"

"hahaha I know what's in your mind jalal ... but sorry ... my cousin is a handsome man not a woman hehehe ... his name is SURYA, he works as a professional photographer in a fashion magazine in Paris, he just lost his wife because she was sick, he came here looking for someone to fulfill his wife's last request. "

"who is he looking for?"

"I don't know ... he hasn't had time to tell me much, I feel sorry for him, he has a complicated love story"

"how complicated?"

"He was engaged and almost married to a girl who was one of his models, but suddenly a week before his wedding day he broke off his fiancรฉ and chose to marry his fiancรฉ's best friend. And finally his ex-fiancee went somewhere without anyone knowing where she is now"

"Wow ... how could your cousin dump his fiancรฉ and marry her best friend, it's a shame that his fiancรฉe is betrayed by 2 of her closest people at once."

"The story is not what you think jalal ... Surya married that her best friend because at that time the woman was dying from cancer ... she loved Surya, she begged Surya to accompany her in the last moments of her life even though she knew it would hurt her best friend's heart.. but thinking at least she could feel a little happiness in the last moment of her life. Unfortunately her friend had disappeared before knowing the real story"

"a complicated love triangle ..." jalal commented and continue "Use your car to pick up your cousin if your taxi will take too long ..."

"thanks bro ... as soon as I finish picking up my cousin I will immediately return it to you ..."

"yeah.. yeah.. just relax ... now go ..."

After Mirza went away, Jalal was still standing in the car park he didn't know what to do at this time. He want to go back into his apartment but he don't want to look jodha's ugly figure again. finally he decided to go for a walk around his apartment complex.

************

Jodha was getting ready to go back to work again. she has to leave early from now on..so it doesn't get too late to reach her village.

She stand in front of the mirror looking at her appearance which has now returned to its original form, a beautiful woman, graceful, full of confidence and exuding an aura of divine beauty, she wore black denim with peach shirt, wearing her sandal, Jodha walked beautifully while carrying her oversized bag as a doctor.

Jodha thinks that Jalal might have left with Mirza because it's been 30 minutes since his departure, Jalal hasn't come back. Tanmai has been waiting for Jodha in the lobby of Jalal's apartment, he is now assigned by Hamida to deliver and pick up Jodha to work.

*********

While jalal was walking back to his apartment, he saw Tanmai (driver) was chatting with a security then Jalal approached tanmai.

"What are you doing here Tanmai?"

"Ja... Jalal sirโ€ฆ actually I was ordered by Hamida ma'am to take Mrs. Jodha to her village." Tanmai replied a little surprised when Jalal suddenly appeared.

"Oooohhh ..." Jalal replied briefly then walked away without saying anything ...

.

"Tanmai... your boss is very arrogant, seeing the way he looks at us as if we are not considered anything" said the security who had been talking to Tanmai.

"Its not like that.... Jalal sir's attitude may seem arrogant but he's actually a good person ..."

********

Jalal was waiting for the lift door open in ground floor while Jodha punched the "G" button to ground floor,

**************

EXCUSE ME FOR SPELLING AND GRAMMATICAL MISTAKES...

THANK YOUUU๐Ÿ’•

Edited by ParijatGirl - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Waiting for their face off

Nice update

Next update soon plzz

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