Wow, Mind blowing chapter! Beautiful piece of writing! Take a bow! 👏👌👍
Loved the progression of scenes from the maze to the suite to the night tableau! ❤️
It’s amazing how you combined some of their best scenes from the birthday tent scene to Aiber scene to shower scene and Shivratri scene. The maze scene was fire! Aag laga dee! 🔥
The shower scene was 😍Love and tenderness a deadly combo! 🔥
Could totally visualize Abir and Mishti playing out these scenes of intense emotional upheaval. Loved how Abir unleashed his pent up emotions and poured his heart out to a stunned Mishti.
Drunk Aiber is the best Abir! 😆Thank goodness he was drunk that’s why he opened the floodgates of his suffering heart! Mishti was shocked and overwhelmed to discover his love and longing for her. Mark played Cupid to the lovers.
I hope Abir wakes up before her and at least partially remembers what happened the night before. If Mishti wakes up first she will escape and probably hide what happened. I hope she also blurts our her real feelings for him.
Liked the twist you gave of only one sided confession that too in drunken state. Now if Mish doesn’t reciprocate then his misconceptions might continue if he has no recollection of previous night.
Mark please play Cupid again and at least tell your boss that Mishti stayed the night to take care of him.
Loved this line Lol
“Mishty didn't know whether to laugh or cry at his idiocy and selflessness.”.
Perfectly sums up the stupidly noble guy who suffers from a mountain of misconceptions about the girl of his dreams.
Please continue and thanks for the pm and for this awesome chapter! 🤗
Edited by pallavi25 - 5 years ago