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Bawri Piya Ki...Mad about her beloved... Part 1

Thank you my dearest friends Reena, Priyanka Shaurya and Samikshafan for the lovely edits.

I dedicate this story to my dearest sweetest friend Priyanka Shaurya as she wants a Pearl Tejasswi story from me.

Thank u so much Priyanka Shaurya for the beautiful banner.

A beautiful modern palace…

A beautiful girl entered her room.She is Princess Mandakini.

She closed the door of her room.

Suddenly she saw a young man in her room.She was shocked to see him.He also panicked seeing her all of a sudden.She was about to scream.But the young man closed her mouth with his palm.

He:Please don’t scream and call people.I am not here to harm you.Please believe me.

She removed his hand off her lips.

Mandakini:Then why are you here?

He:I..I…Mandy..I…

Suddenly Mandakni became emotional.

Mandakni:You called me Mandy?This is how my late parents used to call me.

He did not know how to react.

He:I….

Mandakni:But tell me who are you.Why are you here?

He:I am Shravan.I have seen you many times.

Mandakni:But why are you in my room?

Shravan:Actually since a long time I have been loving you silently.

Mandakni was stunned:What?

Shravan:You may be thinking that it’s infatuation which every man feels for a Princess.But I really love you.I suppressed my emotions.But I could not do it anymore.So I came to your room to see you secretly.Because if others see me,they will kill me.

Mandakni was shocked.

Mandakni:Really you love me?

Shravan:Look at my eyes.Do you think that I am lying to you?

Mandakni became emotional.

Shravan:I know that a Princess like you cannot love a common man like me.But it’s ok.I will not threaten you to love me.You can believe me.But I can love you.Right?

Mandakni was touched by his words.

Shravan:Now let me go.

Mandakni:Ya.But can I ask you something?How did you manage to enter my room?

Shravan:I came here through the balcony.

Mandakni:But how did you enter the palace compound ?I mean how come the guards did not see you?

Suddenly she heard somebody’s footsteps.

Shravan got tensed and whispered:See you Mandy.Let me leave now.

He got out through the balcony.

Somebody knocked at the door.

“Mandakni!”

Mandakni opened the door.

A middle aged man was standing there.He was Inder Kumar who was Mabdakni’s late father’s brother as well as Mandakni’s guardian.

Inder:Are you alright?

Mandakni:Yes chachu.Why?

Inder:I felt that somebody was here.

Mandakni sweated.

Mandakni:No chachu.You simply felt so.

Inder:Ok beta.Good night.

Mandakni:Good night.

Inder left.

Mandakni thought:Why did I try to save Shravan from chachu?Whenever somebody was after me with stupid love proposal ,I complained to chachu and chachu punished them.But why I hid about Shravan from chachu?

Mandakni thought about Shravan love confession and unknowingly a smile appeared on her face.

Days passed….

Mandakni started missing Shravan.

Mandakni:I saw him only once.Still I am longing to see him.I wish I could see him.But guess he will never come to see me as I didn’t give him any hope.

Mandakni went to a mall.

Shravan was also there.Seeing her he walked away and hid in the males clothes section.

Suddenly somebody touched his shoulder.He turned back.He was stunned to see Mandakni.

Shravan:You?

Mandakni:Yes.I saw you.But you walked away.I guess you walked away as you were scared whether I will get you arrested for coming into my room at night.

Shravan was embarrassed.

Shravan:To be frank yes.But how did you understand what I was thinking in my mind?Because you don’t know me at all.

Mandakni smiled:I don’t know.May be because we have some connection.

Shravan was stunned:Connection?

Mandakni smiled.

She thought:May be our hearts are connected.

Mandakni:I followed you as I wanted to tell you that I am not angry with you and you don’t have to be scared.

Shravan smiled.

Mandakni:Can I get your phone number?

Shravan was again shocked.

Shravan:What?

Mandakni:You heard it right.I want your phone number.

Shravan:But why?

Mandakni:Usually why do you take other’s phone numbers?

Shravan:To talk.

Mandakni:Even I took your phone number to talk to you.

Shravan was surprised.

Mandakni:Now will you give me your number?

Shravan smiled.

He gave her his phone number.She took his phone and did something.

Shravan:What are you doing?

Mandakni:I saved my number in your phone.

Shravan was again surprised.She returned him the phone.

Mandakni stood near him with the phone camera on.

Mandakni:Now smile.

Shravan became nervous:But what is the need of it?

Mandakni:Don’t worry.I will not show this photograph to anyone.

He was relieved.

They both posed for the selfie with a smile.

She clicked their selfie.

Mandakni:Bye.

She walked away.

Shravan kept looking at her.She turned back and smiled at him.He also smiled at him.

Mandakni was looking at their selfie and smiling.She rang up Shravan.

Mandakni:Hi Shravan!

Shravan was unable to believe that Mandakni rang him up.

Shravan:Mandy!

Mandakni:Why did’nt you call me?I was expecting your call.I know that you were nervous to call me.But don’t be nervous.Be free with me.

Shravan asked her in disbelief:Really?

Mandakni:Yes.By the way what do you do Shravan?

Shravan:I have a small toy shop.

Mandakni:Toy shop?That’s amazing.

He smiled.

They kept chatting.

Mandakni:Shravan,shall we plan our first date?

He was absolutely shocked:Date?Do you know what you are saying?

Mandakni:Yes.

Shravani:I am lower middle class boy and you are a Princess.How can a Princess go on a date with ordinary guy?

Mandakni:Because by heart I am an ordinary girl who prefers to live a simple life.

He smiled.

He thought:She is so innocent.

Mandakni:Come to Blue star restaurant.Let our first date be there.

Shravan:Ok.

Shravan-Mandakni met at the restaurant.

Mandakni:Why are you looking dull Shravan?

Shravan:Mandy…this restaurant is too much for me.I can’t afford the bill.

Mandakni:Don’t worry about the bill.I will be paying the bill.

Shravan:I feel ashamed.

Mandakni:Don’t be.Relax.

She held his hand.He smiled at her.

They shared an eye lock.

They enjoyed eating food and chatted.

After some days…

Shravan came to the place Mandakni called him.

Flower petals fell over them.

Shravan-Mandakni smiled enjoying it.

Mandakni:How is my surprise?

Shravan:Beautiful.I loved it.

Mandakni:But the real surprise is coming up.You will love it.

Shravan:Again a surprise?Wow.What is the surprise.

She cupped his face looking at his eyes intensely.

Mandakni:I love you Shravan.

He became dull.

Aaj agar milan ki raat hoti
Jaane kya baat hoti
Toh kya baat hoti

Sunn te hai jab pyar ho to
Diye jal uthte hai
Tan mein man mein aur nayan mein
Diye jal uthte hain

He moved backward.

Shravan:What is this Mandy?Are you playing prank on me?

Mandakni:No Shravan.I am saying the truth.I really love you.


Aaja piya aaja, Aaja piya aaja ho..
Aaja piya aaja tere hi tere hi liye
Jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein saaye mein
Zindaghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Shravan looked at her emotionally:But…

Mandakni:I don’t care about your background.But after my parents left I really felt alone.Though my chachu loves me a lot I felt that something was missing in my life.Then I met you.You are the only person who called me Mandy apart from my parents.That touched my heart and that moment I felt that you are my own.As I came closer to you I realized that I also love you just like you love me.

She held his hand:I really love you Shravan.I mean it.

Shravan was stunned.He became emotional.


Kabhi kabhi, Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag hai jaati aag bhi
Dhule dhule se anchalon pe
Lag hai jaate daag bhi
Hai veerano mein badal te
Dekhe man ke baag bhi

Shravan:But will your chachu accept me?

Mandakni:He will.I am sure.So don’t hesitate to accept me.

She embraced him.He was so shocked that he did not how to react.She felt heavenly in his arms.

Kabhi kabhi, Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag hai jaati aag bhi
Dhule dhule se anchalon pe
Lag hai jaate daag bhi
Hai veerano mein badal te
Dekhe man ke baag bhi

They met another day.

Mandakni stood near Shravan.He became nervous.

She thought:He is so scared.I have to make him comfortable.

She leaned against his back.He was frozen with a dull face.

Sapnon mein shringar ho toh
Diye jal uthte hain
Khwahishon ke aur sharam ke
Diye jal uthte hain

Another day….

Mandakni moved closer to his cheek to kiss him.

Aaja piya aaja
Tere hi, tere hi liye jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindaghani bitaani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Shravan had a weird expression on his face.

Mandakni noticed it.She felt hurt.

Mandakni:What happened Shravan?You did’nt like me kissing you?

Shravan:Actually before marriage…I think it’s wrong.

She smiled:You are a gentle man Shravan.I am proud of you.

He smiled slightly.

Mera nahin, Mera nahin hai woh diya

Jo jal raha hai mere liye
Meri taraf kyun yeh ujaale
Aaye hai inko rokiye
Yun beghani roshni mein
Kab talak koi jiye

Another day….

Mandakni surprised Shravan with movie tickets.

Shravan:Wow..I love watching movies.

Mandakni:Me too.Let us watch the movie together.

They sat together in the theatre.In darkness she cuddled closer to him.Unknowingly he blushed.

Saanson mein jhankar ho to
Diye jal uthte hain
Jhanjhron mein kanganon mein
Diye jal uthte hain

Both Shravan and Mandakni imagined themselves romancing each other.

Aaja piya aaja, Hmm jalte diye
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Saaye mein saaye tere


Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani


Saaye mein saaye tere
Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani(
Prem Ratan Dhan Payo).

Suddenly Shravan came back to senses.

He thought:What am I doing?I can’t betray her anymore.I have to tell her my secret.

After a few days somehow Shravan managed to get the courage to tell the truth to Mandakni.

Shravan:Mandy…I want to tell you something.

Mandakni:About what?

Shravan:About myself.Whatever I told you were pure lies.What I am going to tell you is the truth.I have a big secret.

Mandakni became dull:What?What lies did you tell me?What secret?

Shravan:My secret is….

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Bawri Piya Ki...Mad about her beloved... Part 1

🔵Beautiful title, I loved it from the time you told me about it

Thank you my dearest friends Reena, Priyanka Shaurya and Samikshafan for the lovely edits.

I dedicate this story to my dearest sweetest friend Priyanka Shaurya as she wants a Pearl Tejasswi story from me.

Thank u so much Priyanka Shaurya for the beautiful banner.

🔵Lovely Banner

A beautiful modern palace…

A beautiful girl entered her room.She is Princess Mandakini.

🔵Mandakini? Teju?

She closed the door of her room.

Suddenly she saw a young man in her room.She was shocked to see him.He also panicked seeing her all of a sudden.She was about to scream.But the young man closed her mouth with his palm.

He:Please don’t scream and call people.I am not here to harm you.Please believe me.

She removed his hand off her lips.

Mandakini:Then why are you here?

He:I..I…Mandy..I…

Suddenly Mandakni became emotional.

Mandakni:You called me Mandy?This is how my late parents used to call me.

🔵Awww, guess she is teju only and he pearl...Waise Mandakini? Any reason for name?

He did not know how to react.

He:I….

Mandakni:But tell me who are you.Why are you here?

He:I am Shravan.I have seen you many times.

Mandakni:But why are you in my room?

Shravan:Actually since a long time I have been loving you silently.

🔵Awww, Pehle hi pyaar mein 😍😍

Mandakni was stunned:What?

🔵Haha, simple style of proposing

Shravan:You may be thinking that it’s infatuation which every man feels for a Princess.But I really love you.I suppressed my emotions.But I could not do it anymore.So I came to your room to see you secretly.Because if others see me,they will kill me.

🔵haha...So he isn't a prince? And also, Room mein kon aata hai secretly dekhne ke liye...window ke bahar khad jate haha

Mandakni was shocked.

Mandakni:Really you love me?

Shravan:Look at my eyes.Do you think that I am lying to you?

🔵Apt pic and awwww

Mandakni became emotional.

🔵She is so innocent, sweet and emotional types awww

Shravan:I know that a Princess like you cannot love a common man like me.But it’s ok.I will not threaten you to love me.You can believe me.But I can love you.Right?

🔵Awww, Thats sweet

Mandakni was touched by his words.

🔵She also already seems in love with him

Shravan:Now let me go.

Mandakni:Ya.But can I ask you something?How did you manage to enter my room?

Shravan:I came here through the balcony.

Mandakni:But how did you enter the palace compound ?I mean how come the guards did not see you?

🔵Yup valid question

Suddenly she heard somebody’s footsteps.

Shravan got tensed and whispered:See you Mandy.Let me leave now.

🔵Annn...Cliffhanger *pouts* or is it just like that?

He got out through the balcony.

Somebody knocked at the door.

“Mandakni!”

Mandakni opened the door.

A middle aged man was standing there.He was Inder Kumar who was Mabdakni’s late father’s brother as well as Mandakni’s guardian.

Inder:Are you alright?

Mandakni:Yes chachu.Why?

Inder:I felt that somebody was here.

Mandakni sweated.

Mandakni:No chachu.You simply felt so.

Inder:Ok beta.Good night.

🔵Wow, Him as Chachu...I love your choice, so Mandakini lied for him

Mandakni:Good night.

Inder left.

Mandakni thought:Why did I try to save Shravan from chachu?Whenever somebody was after me with stupid love proposal ,I complained to chachu and chachu punished them.But why I hid about Shravan from chachu?

🔵Because you seem to be already in love girl

Mandakni thought about Shravan love confession and unknowingly a smile appeared on her face.

Days passed….

Mandakni started missing Shravan.

Mandakni:I saw him only once.Still I am longing to see him.I wish I could see him.But guess he will never come to see me as I didn’t give him any hope.

🔵Awww, poor girl

Mandakni went to a mall.

Shravan was also there.Seeing her he walked away and hid in the males clothes section.

🔵🤣🤣Par aisa kyun?

Suddenly somebody touched his shoulder.He turned back.He was stunned to see Mandakni.

🔵Oops 🤣

Shravan:You?

Mandakni:Yes.I saw you.But you walked away.I guess you walked away as you were scared whether I will get you arrested for coming into my room at night.

🔵Oh, haha but abb toh bohot time hogaya shravan

Shravan was embarrassed.

Shravan:To be frank yes.But how did you understand what I was thinking in my mind?Because you don’t know me at all.

Mandakni smiled:I don’t know.May be because we have some connection.

🔵Awww, They both seems flattened on each other

Shravan was stunned:Connection?

🔵Haha, he is confused how princess fell for him

Mandakni smiled.

She thought:May be our hearts are connected.

Mandakni:I followed you as I wanted to tell you that I am not angry with you and you don’t have to be scared.

Shravan smiled.

Mandakni:Can I get your phone number?

🔵Itni fast Mandy? Haha

Shravan was again shocked.

🔵Bechara, She is too fast

Shravan:What?

Mandakni:You heard it right.I want your phone number.

Shravan:But why?

Mandakni:Usually why do you take other’s phone numbers?

🔵Haan nahi toh, Kya dumb banda hai yeh

Shravan:To talk.

Mandakni:Even I took your phone number to talk to you.

Shravan was surprised.

Mandakni:Now will you give me your number?

Shravan smiled.

He gave her his phone number.She took his phone and did something.

Shravan:What are you doing?

🔵🤦‍♀️ Give him some brain please 🤣

Mandakni:I saved my number in your phone.

Shravan was again surprised.She returned him the phone.

Mandakni stood near him with the phone camera on.

Mandakni:Now smile.

Shravan became nervous:But what is the need of it?

🔵Itna shy? Abb toh I am pakka doubtful, Yeh room mein gaya kaise uss din?

Mandakni:Don’t worry.I will not show this photograph to anyone.

He was relieved.

They both posed for the selfie with a smile.

She clicked their selfie.

🔵Nice edit

Mandakni:Bye.

She walked away.

Shravan kept looking at her.She turned back and smiled at him.He also smiled at him.

🔵Awww aww aww

Mandakni was looking at their selfie and smiling.She rang up Shravan.

🔵She is to head over heals...sachi ki bawri

Mandakni:Hi Shravan!

Shravan was unable to believe that Mandakni rang him up.

🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

Shravan:Mandy!

🔵Yeh kya insaan hai? He isn't shy to givd her a nickname and enter her room secretly at night but in everything else, he is shy and Shocked...haha, Is there some gadbad kya?

Mandakni:Why did’nt you call me?I was expecting your call.I know that you were nervous to call me.But don’t be nervous.Be free with me.

Shravan asked her in disbelief:Really?

Mandakni:Yes.By the way what do you do Shravan?

Shravan:I have a small toy shop.

Mandakni:Toy shop?That’s amazing.

He smiled.

They kept chatting.

Mandakni:Shravan,shall we plan our first date?

He was absolutely shocked:Date?Do you know what you are saying?

Mandakni:Yes.

Shravani:I am lower middle class boy and you are a Princess.How can a Princess go on a date with ordinary guy?

Mandakni:Because by heart I am an ordinary girl who prefers to live a simple life.

He smiled.

He thought:She is so innocent.

Mandakni:Come to Blue star restaurant.Let our first date be there.

Shravan:Ok.

Shravan-Mandakni met at the restaurant.

Mandakni:Why are you looking dull Shravan?

Shravan:Mandy…this restaurant is too much for me.I can’t afford the bill.

Mandakni:Don’t worry about the bill.I will be paying the bill.

Shravan:I feel ashamed.

Mandakni:Don’t be.Relax.

She held his hand.He smiled at her.

They shared an eye lock.

They enjoyed eating food and chatted.

After some days…

Shravan came to the place Mandakni called him.

Flower petals fell over them.

Shravan-Mandakni smiled enjoying it.

Mandakni:How is my surprise?

Shravan:Beautiful.I loved it.

Mandakni:But the real surprise is coming up.You will love it.

Shravan:Again a surprise?Wow.What is the surprise.

She cupped his face looking at his eyes intensely.

Mandakni:I love you Shravan.

He became dull.

Aaj agar milan ki raat hoti
Jaane kya baat hoti
Toh kya baat hoti

Sunn te hai jab pyar ho to
Diye jal uthte hai
Tan mein man mein aur nayan mein
Diye jal uthte hain

He moved backward.

Shravan:What is this Mandy?Are you playing prank on me?

Mandakni:No Shravan.I am saying the truth.I really love you.


Aaja piya aaja, Aaja piya aaja ho..
Aaja piya aaja tere hi tere hi liye
Jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein saaye mein
Zindaghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Shravan looked at her emotionally:But…

Mandakni:I don’t care about your background.But after my parents left I really felt alone.Though my chachu loves me a lot I felt that something was missing in my life.Then I met you.You are the only person who called me Mandy apart from my parents.That touched my heart and that moment I felt that you are my own.As I came closer to you I realized that I also love you just like you love me.

She held his hand:I really love you Shravan.I mean it.

Shravan was stunned.He became emotional.


Kabhi kabhi, Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag hai jaati aag bhi
Dhule dhule se anchalon pe
Lag hai jaate daag bhi
Hai veerano mein badal te
Dekhe man ke baag bhi

Shravan:But will your chachu accept me?

Mandakni:He will.I am sure.So don’t hesitate to accept me.

She embraced him.He was so shocked that he did not how to react.She felt heavenly in his arms.

Kabhi kabhi, Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag hai jaati aag bhi
Dhule dhule se anchalon pe
Lag hai jaate daag bhi
Hai veerano mein badal te
Dekhe man ke baag bhi

They met another day.

Mandakni stood near Shravan.He became nervous.

She thought:He is so scared.I have to make him comfortable.

She leaned against his back.He was frozen with a dull face.

Sapnon mein shringar ho toh
Diye jal uthte hain
Khwahishon ke aur sharam ke
Diye jal uthte hain

Another day….

Mandakni moved closer to his cheek to kiss him.

Aaja piya aaja
Tere hi, tere hi liye jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindaghani bitaani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Shravan had a weird expression on his face.

Mandakni noticed it.She felt hurt.

Mandakni:What happened Shravan?You did’nt like me kissing you?

Shravan:Actually before marriage…I think it’s wrong.

She smiled:You are a gentle man Shravan.I am proud of you.

He smiled slightly.

Mera nahin, Mera nahin hai woh diya

Jo jal raha hai mere liye
Meri taraf kyun yeh ujaale
Aaye hai inko rokiye
Yun beghani roshni mein
Kab talak koi jiye

Another day….

Mandakni surprised Shravan with movie tickets.

Shravan:Wow..I love watching movies.

Mandakni:Me too.Let us watch the movie together.

They sat together in the theatre.In darkness she cuddled closer to him.Unknowingly he blushed.

Saanson mein jhankar ho to
Diye jal uthte hain
Jhanjhron mein kanganon mein
Diye jal uthte hain

Both Shravan and Mandakni imagined themselves romancing each other.

Aaja piya aaja, Hmm jalte diye
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Saaye mein saaye tere


Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani


Saaye mein saaye tere
Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani(
Prem Ratan Dhan Payo).

Suddenly Shravan came back to senses.

He thought:What am I doing?I can’t betray her anymore.I have to tell her my secret.

After a few days somehow Shravan managed to get the courage to tell the truth to Mandakni.

Shravan:Mandy…I want to tell you something.

Mandakni:About what?

Shravan:About myself.Whatever I told you were pure lies.What I am going to tell you is the truth.I have a big secret.

Mandakni became dull:What?What lies did you tell me?What secret?

Shravan:My secret is….

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Mandakni:Why did’nt you call me?I was expecting your call.I know that you were nervous to call me.But don’t be nervous.Be free with me.

🔵Arey toh tum karleti...waise such, tumne kar toh li...hehe

Shravan asked her in disbelief:Really?

🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

Mandakni:Yes.By the way what do you do Shravan?

Shravan:I have a small toy shop.

Mandakni:Toy shop?That’s amazing.

🔵Aww its sweet

He smiled.

They kept chatting.

Mandakni:Shravan,shall we plan our first date?

🔵This is a beautiful Pic

He was absolutely shocked:Date?Do you know what you are saying?

🤦‍♀️

Mandakni:Yes.

Shravani:I am lower middle class boy and you are a Princess.How can a Princess go on a date with ordinary guy?

🔵Yeh love confession se pehle sochte na

Mandakni:Because by heart I am an ordinary girl who prefers to live a simple life.

🔵Awww best answer

He smiled.

He thought:She is so innocent.

🔵Ek minute...why this is giving me doubtful vibes? Like he spoke this in guilt?

Mandakni:Come to Blue star restaurant.Let our first date be there.

Shravan:Ok.

Shravan-Mandakni met at the restaurant.

Mandakni:Why are you looking dull Shravan?

Shravan:Mandy…this restaurant is too much for me.I can’t afford the bill.

Mandakni:Don’t worry about the bill.I will be paying the bill.

🔵Thats sweet , of course she should pay bill since she arranged the the date

Shravan:I feel ashamed.

🤦‍♀️

Mandakni:Don’t be.Relax.

She held his hand.He smiled at her.

They shared an eye lock.

🔵Aww, Finally he is opening up but mere doubts ka kya?🤔

They enjoyed eating food and chatted.

After some days…

Shravan came to the place Mandakni called him.

Flower petals fell over them.

Shravan-Mandakni smiled enjoying it.

🔵Lovely edit

Mandakni:How is my surprise?

🔵 I am really enjoying this role reversal in theur story...thats sweet

Shravan:Beautiful.I loved it.

Mandakni:But the real surprise is coming up.You will love it.

🔵Wow, Aur bhi

Shravan:Again a surprise?Wow.What is the surprise.

She cupped his face looking at his eyes intensely.

Mandakni:I love you Shravan.

🔵Oops thats a sweet surprise

He became dull.

🔵Abb I am feeling my doubt intensying...itna samjhane ke baad bhi dullness toh nahi hona chahiye warna

Aaj agar milan ki raat hoti
Jaane kya baat hoti
Toh kya baat hoti

Sunn te hai jab pyar ho to
Diye jal uthte hai
Tan mein man mein aur nayan mein
Diye jal uthte hain

He moved backward.

Shravan:What is this Mandy?Are you playing prank on me?

🤦‍♀️

Mandakni:No Shravan.I am saying the truth.I really love you.

Aaja piya aaja, Aaja piya aaja ho..
Aaja piya aaja tere hi tere hi liye
Jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein saaye mein
Zindaghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Shravan looked at her emotionally:But…

Mandakni:I don’t care about your background.But after my parents left I really felt alone.Though my chachu loves me a lot I felt that something was missing in my life.Then I met you.You are the only person who called me Mandy apart from my parents.That touched my heart and that moment I felt that you are my own.As I came closer to you I realized that I also love you just like you love me.

🔵Aww but mujhe last three words pe doubt horaha hai abb

She held his hand:I really love you Shravan.I mean it.

Shravan was stunned.He became emotional.

Kabhi kabhi, Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag hai jaati aag bhi
Dhule dhule se anchalon pe
Lag hai jaate daag bhi
Hai veerano mein badal te
Dekhe man ke baag bhi

Shravan:But will your chachu accept me?

🔵Haan sach but I still am apprehensive of him now

Mandakni:He will.I am sure.So don’t hesitate to accept me.

🔵Chalo, Thankfully

She embraced him.He was so shocked that he did not how to react.She felt heavenly in his arms.

Kabhi kabhi, Kabhi kabhi aise diyon se
Lag hai jaati aag bhi
Dhule dhule se anchalon pe
Lag hai jaate daag bhi
Hai veerano mein badal te
Dekhe man ke baag bhi

They met another day.

Mandakni stood near Shravan.He became nervous.

She thought:He is so scared.I have to make him comfortable.

She leaned against his back.He was frozen with a dull face.

🔵Abb toh pakka doubt horaha hai, I hope I don't up hating him...she loves him so much

Sapnon mein shringar ho toh
Diye jal uthte hain
Khwahishon ke aur sharam ke
Diye jal uthte hain

🔵Beautiful Edit

Another day….

Mandakni moved closer to his cheek to kiss him.

Aaja piya aaja
Tere hi, tere hi liye jalte diye
Bitaani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindaghani bitaani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Shravan had a weird expression on his face.

Mandakni noticed it.She felt hurt.

🔵Now open the raaz soon Jasmine, I am gettinf impatient

Mandakni:What happened Shravan?You did’nt like me kissing you?

Shravan:Actually before marriage…I think it’s wrong.

She smiled:You are a gentle man Shravan.I am proud of you.

🔵Evn though thats sweet but am not able to believe him now

He smiled slightly.

Mera nahin, Mera nahin hai woh diya

Jo jal raha hai mere liye
Meri taraf kyun yeh ujaale
Aaye hai inko rokiye
Yun beghani roshni mein
Kab talak koi jiye

Another day….

Mandakni surprised Shravan with movie tickets.

Shravan:Wow..I love watching movies.

Mandakni:Me too.Let us watch the movie together.

They sat together in the theatre.In darkness she cuddled closer to him.Unknowingly he blushed.

🔵Awww, Dusri baar no awkardness but...

Saanson mein jhankar ho to
Diye jal uthte hain
Jhanjhron mein kanganon mein
Diye jal uthte hain

Both Shravan and Mandakni imagined themselves romancing each other.

Aaja piya aaja, Hmm jalte diye
Bitani tere saaye mein, saaye mein
Zindghani bitani tere saaye mein
Saaye mein

Saaye mein saaye tere


Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani

🔵Nice edit and sweet scene
Saaye mein saaye tere
Saaye mein tere bitaani zindagani(Prem Ratan Dhan Payo).

Suddenly Shravan came back to senses.

He thought:What am I doing?I can’t betray her anymore.I have to tell her my secret.

🔵Ohk, The revelation

After a few days somehow Shravan managed to get the courage to tell the truth to Mandakni.

Shravan:Mandy…I want to tell you something.

Mandakni:About what?

Shravan:About myself.Whatever I told you were pure lies.What I am going to tell you is the truth.I have a big secret.

😱 Sab Kuch jhooth tha? Matlab sabh kuch?

Mandakni became dull:What?What lies did you tell me?What secret?

Shravan:My secret is….

🔵*pouts*

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Another beautiful story with a nice start jasmine...I specially loved the title...So Mandakini is a princess whose parents are dead and she lives with her chachu( nice choice for chachu, what about chachi?) Shravan a commoner confesses his love to her and she too falls for him seeing his simplicity and sweetness, Loved their scenes and won't deny, even as I laughed at Shravan's awkardness initially...I felt doubtful too since Mandakini's question about entry in palace was also left incomplete and he was too awkard for someone who came to her room last night but yes ,sweet scenes and specially loved the role reversal everywhere, Shravan finally can't hide his secret from her seeing her sincerity( Or is he also in lovr with her?) I am truly excited to see what is secret? Can it an enemy trying to take Mandy's property? Or Wildest guess but her Chachu who showed love to her for her wealth and now hired a commoner for marrying her and taking her wealth? Guessing since he came at the time she asked valid question, Wondering and really excited for next part, update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Also, Any reason for name Shravan? Just wondering

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Posted: 5 years ago
#7

Thanks a lot.Actually I gave the spelling Mandakni instead of Mandakini for a change.I wanted to give her a traditional name and I don't know how this name came into my mind.I chose a random name like Shravan for Pearl.Actually after Mandakni lost her parents it's the first time somebody called her Mandy n expressed love.That's why she is taking every step to woo Shravan,thats why she is so fast also.Your guesses are partially correct.


Originally posted by: .Piyali..

Another beautiful story with a nice start jasmine...I specially loved the title...So Mandakini is a princess whose parents are dead and she lives with her chachu( nice choice for chachu, what about chachi?) Shravan a commoner confesses his love to her and she too falls for him seeing his simplicity and sweetness, Loved their scenes and won't deny, even as I laughed at Shravan's awkardness initially...I felt doubtful too since Mandakini's question about entry in palace was also left incomplete and he was too awkard for someone who came to her room last night but yes ,sweet scenes and specially loved the role reversal everywhere, Shravan finally can't hide his secret from her seeing her sincerity( Or is he also in lovr with her?) I am truly excited to see what is secret? Can it an enemy trying to take Mandy's property? Or Wildest guess but her Chachu who showed love to her for her wealth and now hired a commoner for marrying her and taking her wealth? Guessing since he came at the time she asked valid question, Wondering and really excited for next part, update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#8

Wonder what his secret is. Will it get between them?

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Posted: 5 years ago
#9

Congratulations on your new


Title is Interesting


Part 1


Fabulous Start

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks a lot.Actually I gave the spelling Mandakni instead of Mandakini for a change.I wanted to give her a traditional name and I don't know how this name came into my mind.I chose a random name like Shravan for Pearl.Actually after Mandakni lost her parents it's the first time somebody called her Mandy n expressed love.That's why she is taking every step to woo Shravan,thats why she is so fast also.Your guesses are partially correct.


Oh, I actually didn't notice the spellings 😛, asked about names since you usually take actors character name na so...Ohk, Partially? You have got me curious Abb jaldi update karo

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