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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thank u so much friends 4 supporting me.This story is ending.Plz do give a detailed comment.Plz write your favourite scene,your favourite character and why you liked this character the most


Bawri Piya Ki...Mad about her beloved... Part 6

Thank you Reena and PriyankaShaurya for the sweet edits.

Shekar and his partner in crime went to the location.The partner had covered the whole body including the face to hide her identity.The blackmailer came.They were shocked to see the blackmailer as it was Shravan.

Shekar:You?

Shravan smirked:Yes,it’s me.You thought that by wearing the mask you can make me believe that it’s Mr.Inder who was threatening me to do smuggling?

Shekar boiled with anger.

Shravan:Are you giving me money or should I reveal the truth to Mandakni?

Partner:Stop it.You cannot reveal anything to Mandakni.

Shravan thought:This person has covered the face.I should make this person unveil theface.Otherwise how will we know who Shekar’s partner is?

Shravan lied:Hey …no need of hiding your face from me.I know who you are.

Shekar’s partner removed the covering from the body and unveiled the face too.

Shravan was shocked to see the person.

It was Savitri.

Shravan:You?

She:Yes..me.

Flash back(From Part5)

Shekar met his crime partner Savitri.

Shekar:He knows about you also.

Savitri:How is it possible?How did he come to know about us?

Shekar:I don’t know.He is demanding 2 crores to hide the truth.

Savitri:He thinks that he can blackmail us?Fool.His life will get over today.Like we killed Inder’s wife Swati,we will kill him also.

Shekar smirked.

Present...

Shravan thought:I can’t believe that the woman Mandakni loved as her own was cheating her.

She took a gun with a smirk.

She:You thought that you can blackmail us?Bloody Blackmailer!

She pointed the gun at him.Shravan was stunned.

He thought:I never thought that this motherly figure would try to kill me.

Before she could shoot him,somebody pulled the gun away from her.

It was a Police officer.

Shekar and she were shocked.

The police officer:You guys are exposed.

Mandakni came there with a painful face.

Shekar and Savitri were unable to face Mandakni.

Mandakni:I knew that you were the real culprit bade papa.The arrest of Inder chachu was only a drama played by us to trap you.

Shekar was shocked.

Mandakni looked at Savitri tearfully:I never thought that you could be the killer of my chachi.I trusted and respected you so much.Why did you do that?

Inder and Sharmishta came out of the police jeep.

Shravan:The cops and Mandakni had brought Inder uncle and Sharmishta aunty too to show the true colour of the people they trusted blindly.

Sharmishta was broken.Shekar-Savitri could not face her.

Sharmishta:How come I did’nt know your true colour even after living with you both so long?I am the biggest fool on this earth.

Shekar:Sharmishta!

Shekar held her hand.

Sharmishta raised her hand against him shocking everyone.

Sharmishta looked at Savitri:I can’t even slap you as you nurtured me.You are so disgusting.

Savitri felt ashamed to face her.

Inder:I thought that only Shekar bhaiyya was cruel.I never thought that you could be so cruel.Why did you kill my Swati?

Savitri:Because she came our way.I was into smuggling.When Shekar came to Munbai,we met.He also joined me.But Sharmishta was not aware of it.Before her,we were clean business partners.I made Shekar marry Sharmishta as he was my partner in crimes.When you all were not home we had come to your palace to take away the gold Idol.But Swati woke up from her sleep and caught us red handed.

Flash back…

Swati stared at Shekar and Savitri.

Swati:Never thought that an innocent looking lady like you is a criminal.But I am more shocked about Shekar bhaiyya.You are a part of this palace.Instead of protecting this palace you want to destroy it?

Shekar:Because I never felt that this palace was mine.I was never given importance.Only my brother got importance.He became the King of this palace in every sense.Even after his death only his daughter Mandakni got importance.I am not like your husband who is living like a caretaker of this palace and the Princess Mandakni.

Swati:Such low level thoughts!I will never let you loot this palace.Get lost.Otherwise I will call the police.

Savitri:Shekar…this woman is an obstacle on our path.We need to remove her from our path.

Shekar was stunned:But…

Savitri:Don’t have any sentiments towards your sister in law.Otherwise you will rot in jail.

Swati got scared and tried to run away.She took the phone to contact Police.But Shekar pulled her away.Savitri took the gun and shot her.

Present….

Hearing this Mandakni burst into tears.Inder roared in anger.

Inder:I will kill you both.

But Shravan held him tight to control him.

The police:You can’t take law in your hands.We are there to handle them.

The cops pushed them to the police jeep.

Sharmishta fell down crying.Mandakni hugged her and wept.

Later Shravan and Mandani got engaged.

Shravan held her closer:Mandy,this is our real engagement.

Mandakni:Yes.

Mandakni:But I became your beloved the moment I thought that you love me.From then onwards you are my beloved too.I am mad about you my beloved.

Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Kaase kahe jaake piir jiyaki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki

Shravan looked at her emotionally cupping her face in his hands.

Shravan:Your mad love for me only made me fall in love with you unknowingly.I am blessed to be your beloved.I will be always yours till my last breath.


Piyu rang man ki chunar rangaai
Piyu rang man ki chunar rangaai
Piyu piyu rath ke piyu mein samaai

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Ban gayi chhaayaa
Ban gayi chhaayaa
Chhal baliyaa ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki

Mandakni-Shravan got married in the presence of Inder,Sharmishta and the orphanage people.

Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki

Shravan said in excitement:Finally we are married Mandy.

Mandakni was looking upset as she was lost in some thoughts.

Mandakni:I am sad that my parents are not with me on this auspicious occasion.

Shravan caressed her.

Shravan:But they will be watching you from the sky.

She rested her head on his shoulders shedding tears.

Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki

Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki

Time passed…

Mandakni sat closer to Shravan.

Mandakni:Shravan,we will go to your toy shop together.

Shravan:Why?

Mandakni blushed:Because I think that very soon we will need lots of toys for our baby.

Shravan was surprised:You mean you are pregnant?

Mandakni blushed:Yes.

Shravan:O Mandy…

He embraced her in excitement.

Itha utha dekhe panth nihaare
Itha utha dekhe panth nihaare
Har din palchhin naam pukaare
Sud nahin bisare sud nahin bisare sud nahin bisare
Man basiyaa ki

Shravan:This is the sweetest moment of our life.So let us cherish this moment.

They took their selfie.

Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Kaase kahe jake peer jiyaaki

Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki
Baawri piya ki, baawri piya ki(Baabul).

The end


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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

They got married, and the baby is coming too.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Sorry for late response


Part 5


Interesting and so Fabulous

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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Read all the parts. Mandakini finding Shravan in her room & the latter professing his love towards her was shocking. Mandakini saving Shravan from Inder (Shekar) was unusual. No one would generally save an unknown person. Shravan-Mandakini departmental store scenes & dating scenes were romantic. Shravan revealing his truth to Mandakini was shocking. Glad to know that Mandakini's love for Shravan didn't fade even after he got arrested. Glad to know that she found out the reality & saved his orphanage. For one moment, I thought about why Inder was against Shravan-Mandakini's marriage. Inder's innocence & Shekar-Savitri's crimes were a shocking twist. Shravan pushing Abhay & slipping the engagement ring to Mandakini's fingers looked like the groom swapping. Nice to see Shravan & Mandakini catching the real culprit. ManVan engagement & marriage was romantic. Mandakini telling Shravan to get the toy for their baby was cute.

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