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Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

No yaar, dont be disheartened, the only reason people see Mini in Anamika is because it’s similar to Bondi - Ani - Mini story. And also because how Mini also keeps reminding Ani of their relationship before, Anamika is doing the same.

I think you should be more clear about her feelings for Anmol, like maybe dedicate a whole paragraph towards her love for Anmol so people start to notice.

And also, about the story going towards the end, even I think it should. Because from next week, I will get busy too.

@underlined: Agree Shrishti. The storyline is similar to Rudhita and Mini.

Thank you Shrishti 🤗It's a good idea 😊❤️

Yeah yaar life is back on track. We need to progress towards end.

Let's plan an proper storyline and end ki taraf badhte hai.

Originally posted by: Prit_007

@underlined: Agree Shrishti. The storyline is similar to Rudhita and Mini.

Thank you Shrishti 🤗It's a good idea 😊❤️

Yeah yaar life is back on track. We need to progress towards end.

Let's plan an proper storyline and end ki taraf badhte hai.

Yeah I want that too. But for that everyone has to agree to it and work together to make a proper story for this.

Personally, this is how I want it to go:

Anmol and Pooja start working on the case together. They manage to get justice to Pooja’s parent and sister. Abir and Pooja have a talk regarding Abir’s feelings towards Pooja (I don’t like how Pooja is avoiding talking about it while I am trying to clear things out). They decide on having friendship between them. It starts if as hi hello and gradually, their friendship gets stronger and they get to know about each other’s past. Abir will give advices to Anmol and Pooja about their marriage. Abir stars getting closer to Aditi and actually stars sharing Dad - Daughter relationship with her. Anamika realizes that she is just wasting her time on Anmol and leaves them alone, going to start her own life by herself (somewhat like lavanya from IPKKND. I loved how she wasn’t the typical vamp there). Vasundhara bua gets more closer to everyone in the family and tones down her superstitions. Sahil and Arushi should have a nice happy ending with Arushi realizing Sahil’s worth and respecting him.

In the last episode, I would love for everyone to gather around, and talk regarding their life. And at the very end, everyone should write a line or two of poetry describing their journey.

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Give me some time to think Shaheen

And I really want it to end soon as now I am really busy days and I can't participate wholeheartedly.

Aaj to I am completely tired. To ab story ko end ki taraf le chalte hai as I signed up so don't wanna quit in middle par mere liye ab time manage karna thoda mushkil hoga.

Anamika is not Mini re... People are saying this only because it matches with Ani - Mini childhood friendship... That's it. Don't get tensed.

Yess, the life is returning to it's normal. We need to get back to our routine again..

I respect and appreciate your words... We will end it soon.

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Yeah I want that too. But for that everyone has to agree to it and work together to make a proper story for this.

Personally, this is how I want it to go:

Anmol and Pooja start working on the case together. They manage to get justice to Pooja’s parent and sister. Abir and Pooja have a talk regarding Abir’s feelings towards Pooja (I don’t like how Pooja is avoiding talking about it while I am trying to clear things out). They decide on having friendship between them. It starts if as hi hello and gradually, their friendship gets stronger and they get to know about each other’s past. Abir will give advices to Anmol and Pooja about their marriage. Abir stars getting closer to Aditi and actually stars sharing Dad - Daughter relationship with her. Anamika realizes that she is just wasting her time on Anmol and leaves them alone, going to start her own life by herself (somewhat like lavanya from IPKKND. I loved how she wasn’t the typical vamp there). Vasundhara bua gets more closer to everyone in the family and tones down her superstitions. Sahil and Arushi should have a nice happy ending with Arushi realizing Sahil’s worth and respecting him.

In the last episode, I would love for everyone to gather around, and talk regarding their life. And at the very end, everyone should write a line or two of poetry describing their journey.

Nice one Shrishti 👏

I would love to go with this storyline 😳👍🏼

Originally posted by: AnonymouslyS

Yeah I want that too. But for that everyone has to agree to it and work together to make a proper story for this.

Personally, this is how I want it to go:

Anmol and Pooja start working on the case together. They manage to get justice to Pooja’s parent and sister. Abir and Pooja have a talk regarding Abir’s feelings towards Pooja (I don’t like how Pooja is avoiding talking about it while I am trying to clear things out). They decide on having friendship between them. It starts if as hi hello and gradually, their friendship gets stronger and they get to know about each other’s past. Abir will give advices to Anmol and Pooja about their marriage. Abir stars getting closer to Aditi and actually stars sharing Dad - Daughter relationship with her. Anamika realizes that she is just wasting her time on Anmol and leaves them alone, going to start her own life by herself (somewhat like lavanya from IPKKND. I loved how she wasn’t the typical vamp there). Vasundhara bua gets more closer to everyone in the family and tones down her superstitions. Sahil and Arushi should have a nice happy ending with Arushi realizing Sahil’s worth and respecting him.

In the last episode, I would love for everyone to gather around, and talk regarding their life. And at the very end, everyone should write a line or two of poetry describing their journey.

Originally posted by: Home786

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Originally posted by: Home786

Agree Prit. We will end up the story with this week or maximum by next week.

Anamika is not Mini re... People are saying this only because it matches with Ani - Mini childhood friendship... That's it. Don't get tensed.

Yess, the life is returning to it's normal. We need to get back to our routine again..

I respect and appreciate your words... We will end it soon.

Thank you for understanding Shaheen. Shrishti gave a nice idea and I loved that idea. Check that please.

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