Junooniyat(Obsession)RiKara AsHlok FF - Page 10

CORRECTION:

They cut the cake together.He feeds her cake.She cuts the cake o feed him.But her finger gets injured because of the knife.

Asha:Ah…

Shlok:Asha! (Not Asha but Gauri, he never knew she's Asha)

He holds her hand and looks at her finger.

Exactly.I had found the mistake n was going to edit it.But b4 that itself u found it.Thank u

Originally posted by: salley145

CORRECTION:

They cut the cake together.He feeds her cake.She cuts the cake o feed him.But her finger gets injured because of the knife.

Asha:Ah…

Shlok:Asha! (Not Asha but Gauri, he never knew she's Asha)

He holds her hand and looks at her finger.

Right decision by Shlok. Its time to move on and set things right.

Poor Gauri doesn't knows that Asha was pregnant even before she left the house

Now RiKara are parents

Which child is that? (Both the baby girl and grown up)

I love that chand sifarish song

It suits well on RiKara

Shlok video called

And now Gauri misses Asha

She's right that Asha has suffered enough

Good that everyone decided to bring back Asha

Waiting for next update

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Part 16

Fabulous Update

Thanks a lot.Baby girl is the baby Shivika Rikara n Ruvya looked after for some days on IB.The grown up girl is Kavya from IPKKND2.I think in your Rikara Ashlok ff also she is there

Originally posted by: salley145

Poor Gauri doesn't knows that Asha was pregnant even before she left the house

Now RiKara are parents

Which child is that? (Both the baby girl and grown up)

I love that chand sifarish song

It suits well on RiKara

Shlok video called

And now Gauri misses Asha

She's right that Asha has suffered enough

Good that everyone decided to bring back Asha

Waiting for next update

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Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 17

Shlok enquires about Asha and comes back with disappointment.
Gauri runs to him:Shlok...did you get to know about Asha?
His face is dull.
SHLOK:No Gauri.
She becomes upset.
SHLOK's tears fall downn:Maybe we are not destined to live together.I only pushed her out of my life.So God won't return her to me that easily.

Omkara:Don't be a pessimist bro.I promise you..I will find out Asha for you.

Shlok is happy.
SHLOK:Really Omkara?
OMKARA:Don't you trust your brother?
Shlok smiles:I trust you more than myself.I am sure that you will do that for me.
Omkara smiles:Yes..I promise..I will bring Asha to you.
SHLOK:Thank you so much bro.
He hugs Omkara.Omkara smiles.
Shlok goes inside.
Gauri can't believe Omkara's promise to Shlok:Omkara!Why did you promise him that you will find Asha?Last 7 years we tried our best.But we did'nt get any news about her.Shlok tried a lot to find her.Still he could'nt find her.Then how will you find her?
Gauri is upset.
OMKARA:Gauri...trust me.I will find her.Shlok's come back itself is a good sign.So I am sure that God will show us a way to find Asha.
GAURI:Now Shlok is excited about our promise..I am scared whether Shlok will get depressed again.
Omkara:Nothing like that will happen Gauri.I have hope about finding Asha.

Gauri:Asha…where are you?


Nainital...
A 6 year old boy is about to play football.His mother

wishes him "Best of luck" with her thumbs.She is none other than Asha.

He is playing football with other kids.Asha is enjoying watching him play.That boy wins the game.Asha jumps with joy and claps her hands.

The boy receives the prize.Asha watches it emotionally with a cute smile.

The boy runs to Asha with the trophy.
He:Mumma..I won it.
Asha hugs him.
ASHA:My Arush is the best.

Arush:Did you like how I played?

ASHA:I truly enjoyed it beta.You were too good.

He smiles.

ASHA:See...Like I promised you I came here to watch you play.Happy?

Arush:I am happy.But I would have been more happier if my dad was also there with me.

Asha becomes dull.She is upset.

Asha hugs him tearfully:But mumma is there for you.Right?

Arush:But I want Papa also.

Asha becomes sad.But she hides her pain.

Asha:Come...we will go.

Kavya is looking at them.
She:Mumma!How come mumma is here?How does she know that boy?

Asha walks towards the car with Arush.

That little girl runs after the car calling"Mumma!"
The car moves away.She becomes dim.

She:Why did mumma ignore me and go with that boy?

Omkara and Gauri are in the school.
The school bus arrives.The kids come out of the bus.Kavya also comes out.
Omkara and Gauri smile.
GAURI:Kavya!
Kavya comes running towards them.
Omkara and Gauri hug her.

OMKARA:How was your Nainital tour?
KAVYA:Cool.I enjoyed lot with my friends and teachers.

Gauri:Good.

Kavya:But I am angry with mumma.
GAURI:Why?
KAVYA:You came to Nainital.And you did'nt even inform me?You did'nt mind me even though I called you.

Omkara:Mumma in Nainital?

GAURI:What?I did'nt come to Nainital.What are you saying?

KAVYA:I saw you there.
GAURI:No Kavya.it's not mumma.
OMKARA:Wait..wait..Kavya..you saw mumma there?
KAVYA:Yes papa.
Omkara is excited.
Omkara;Gauri...I told you..God will show us a way to find out Asha.Kavya saw Asha there.
GAURI:What?
OMKARA:Yes.That was Asha.

Gauri is surprised.
GAURI:Omkara..are you sure?
OMKARA:Yes.
GAURI: Asha is in Nainital?
OMKARA:May be.I think God wanted us to reach Asha through Kavya.That’s why this year the school tour was to Nainital.

Gauri becomes very happy.
GAURI:Kavya..that was mumma's sister Asha.She looks exactly like me.
Kavya is surprised:That means your twin sister?
GAURI:Yes.
KAVYA:Wow!You have a twin sister?That is cool.

Gauri kisses Kavya:Thank you so much Kavya.Because of you I came to know about my sister’s whereabouts.

Kavya and Omkara smile.

Omkara and Gauri tell this to Shlok and others.Jhanvi,Tej and Harshwardhan,Surbhi are overwhelmed.
Shlok is excited.
SHLOK:Omkara.I can't wait to see Asha.

GAURI:Me too.
OMKARA:We will go to Nainital.

SHLOK:Yes..now itself.
OMKARA:Kavya..how is Nainital?
KAVYA:It's a beautiful place.
OMKARA:Then we will go there once again.
GAURI:But Kavya has to go to school.
OMKARA:Oh!
Jhanvi:You all go.Let Kavya be here.
Kavya feels sad.
KAVYA:Papa!

OMKARA:Kavya..you can't bunk your classes.You have to study well and be a good girl.Right?
KAVYA:Yes.
She smiles.

Due to over excitement Shlok skips break fast.

Jhanvi:Eat and go to Nainital.

Shlok:No mom.I can't wait to see Asha.

Jhanvi:Anyway you will see her there.but don't go there with empty stomach.

Tej:Exactly.

Shlok:But...

Jhanvi:Shut up and eat.

Rishab:Ok ok.

Omkara and Gauri smile seeing it.

Gauri:Shlok is so excited.Can't wait to see my Asha.

Omkara smiles.

Suddenly Shlok sees Asha near him.

Asha:Lazy to eat food?Then I will feed you.

Shlok's face blossoms.

Asha starts feeding him with her hand.

He also feeds her food.

When she got up he pulls her closer romantically.

Suddenly she disappears breaking his dream.

Shlok:Oh no…but this dream will become true soon.

He smiles.

A handsome man gets out of the car.He goes inside his house.
He tells himself:Today I will propose to Asha.
Asha comes out of her room.
Asha:Hi Kabir..I will bring tea for you.

KABIR:No.
Asha:No?Why?
KABIR:I am not in a mood to drink tea.

Asha:Then what do you want?

He looks at her deeply.
He takes out a rose.

KABIR:This is for you.
Asha smiles:For me?

He nods his head with a smile.
She takes it from him.

Asha has a son. They did have some divine help in finding her.

interesting update. well written