ArHi || Boundless; (Of poets and poetry) - Page 20

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Aap aaye tou baharien laut aaien..

Gul mehkey, baad e saba chali.. Warm Up Routine

Warna tou qafas ke gherey mein..

Dum ghutne laga aisi Hawa chali..

Don't think these r lines..

This lock down is damaging my heart in more than one way..

Welcome back, Naam mein kya rakha Hai..

"Warna tou qafas ke gherey mein..

Dum ghutne laga aisi Hawa chali.. "

Are these your own lines? Beautiful! A damaged heart always does well for a poet :)

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Badalte mausam ne hans kar kaha

Jo aaj hai khila vo kal murjhayega

Jo aaj hai murjhaya vo kal phir khilega

Hain ye niyam prakruti ka sadiyon purana

Dosh na de tu chanchal havaaon ko

Vo hai manmauji jhoomti hai ithlati gungunati

Hai vo ek lekin usske rukh anek

Na kar faraq tu ki gul hai kaunsa

Samet le mehek jo hai saugaat usski

;)

Beautiful :) Iss 'saugaat' ka bohot shukriya.

"shukriya teraa nigaah-e-naaz teraa shukriya

muntashir is tarah apne dil kaa shiiraaza na thaa"

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Each sher you choose is simply sublime <3

Me after reading your posts...

Yun toh jhoom lete hai nashe mein peenewale

Magar har nashe ka naam sharaab nahi hota

- Gulzar

❤️❤️

"Zahe-naseeb mera fann maqaam pa hi gaya

Haseen hont mere geet gungunane lage"

Oh my gosh. I just realized I haven’t commented on your thread 🤦🏻‍♀️

Sorry.. personal life was/is a mess and I had lost track of things I was reading..

So here I am with my thoughts and borrowed shayari.

“Justujoo jis ki thi uss ko to na paya hum ne

Iss bahane se magar dekh li duniya hum ne”

I have an intuition that this might fit our dear Payaliya as the story progresses?!

‘Gar baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chahe laga do darr kaisa,

‘Gar jeet gaye toh kya kehna, haare bhi toh baazi maat nahin

I think all your characters seem so fiercely passionate and this sheir kinda reinforces everyone to take that plunge.

So apne aap ko, barbaad karke dekhte hain!!!

Damn it. I think I just shivered... you’ve spun MAGIC!

Originally posted by: kizh72

Beautiful!

Thank you, P <3

The credit goes to the one who inspires the thoughts :)

Originally posted by: Whats-in-a-name

Beautiful :) Iss 'saugaat' ka bohot shukriya.

"shukriya teraa nigaah-e-naaz teraa shukriya

muntashir is tarah apne dil kaa shiiraaza na thaa"

Thank you for this delightful world you have opened up <3

Regarding the teaser, is this the moment Arnav Singh Raizada breaks the promise he had made to his six year old self, and makes a foray into "the farce that was love"?

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Oh my gosh. I just realized I haven’t commented on your thread 🤦🏻‍♀️

Sorry.. personal life was/is a mess and I had lost track of things I was reading..

So here I am with my thoughts and borrowed shayari.

“Justujoo jis ki thi uss ko to na paya hum ne

Iss bahane se magar dekh li duniya hum ne”

I have an intuition that this might fit our dear Payaliya as the story progresses?!

‘Gar baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chahe laga do darr kaisa,

‘Gar jeet gaye toh kya kehna, haare bhi toh baazi maat nahin

I think all your characters seem so fiercely passionate and this sheir kinda reinforces everyone to take that plunge.

So apne aap ko, barbaad karke dekhte hain!!!

Damn it. I think I just shivered... you’ve spun MAGIC!

Thank you so much. You've been missed here :)

‘Gar baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chahe laga do darr kaisa,

‘Gar jeet gaye toh kya kehna, haare bhi toh baazi maat nahin

- Kya kehna! Ishq ki baazi aur chaal ki baat hai toh,

Abhi kuchh aur karishme ghazal ke dekhte hain,

'Faraz', ab zara lahja badal ke dekhte hain

Na tujh ko maat hui hai na mujhko maat hui,

So abki dono hi chalein badal ke dekhte hain.

Originally posted by: Whats-in-a-name

Thank you so much. You've been missed here :)

‘Gar baazi ishq ki baazi hai jo chahe laga do darr kaisa,

‘Gar jeet gaye toh kya kehna, haare bhi toh baazi maat nahin

- Kya kehna! Ishq ki baazi aur chaal ki baat hai toh,

Abhi kuchh aur karishme ghazal ke dekhte hain,

'Faraz', ab zara lahja badal ke dekhte hain

Na tujh ko maat hui hai na mujhko maat hui,

So abki dono hi chalein badal ke dekhte hain.

Let me just admit that I feel ridiculously emotional when someone tells me that they’ve missed me.. so give me a couple of minutes to get over it! Thank you :)

Lahja se yaad aaya...

apne lahje kī hifāzat kījiye

sher ho jaate haiñ nā-mālūm bhī

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Let me just admit that I feel ridiculously emotional when someone tells me that they’ve missed me.. so give me a couple of minutes to get over it! Thank you :)

Lahja se yaad aaya...

apne lahje kī hifāzat kījiye

sher ho jaate haiñ nā-mālūm bhī

♥️

As for the sher - hashtag plagiarism 😆

Originally posted by: Whats-in-a-name

"Warna tou qafas ke gherey mein..

Dum ghutne laga aisi Hawa chali.. "

Are these your own lines? Beautiful! A damaged heart always does well for a poet :)

😔