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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aquaHP

Meera, I love you!!❤️ (Also, clarity!)

Also, hate you a little bit because you make me emosh🙈 but then, it's achha waala emotional so it's all love.

So much validation in life!! To tell you the truth, when I read your message, I couldn't believe what you wrote. My dad was sitting in the room and I asked him to describe my personality and he said, I'm kinda straightforward (which is basically a nicer way of saying blunt which is how my mom would describe me). So, I was like this comment can't be how I seem to people in real life and as mentioned that I was on a video call and I asked my friend the same question and she basically said very similar stuff to what you said and now, I am sitting here in utter disbelief and trying not to shed tears.

Also, she made me realise that we all have different personalities depending on the environment or the people we interact with and even though I don't like the person I become when I stay at home, I couldn't agree more and then think about how Kuhu behaves when Mishti is thrown in the equation around her.

Okay, I'm gonna take deep breaths and get back to the conversation that has been going on in my absence.

I love you too 💕

Your friend is right. We're not the same all the time and that's totally alright. You're funny, kind and smart. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. We just are different versions of ourselves based on the situation we're in.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: PureDrivenSnow

Meine shuru se shuru kiya. Anyone care to continue...


Kuhu sees the ‘this time last year’ notification on social media - it’s her graduation pic with all her friends and classmates.

Fed up with everything at home and to take her mind off it all she has an idea to plan a get together including partners. She creates a group page on social media advertising her idea and gets everyone in her batch to join including Mishti (somehow?). Kuhu gets busy preparing this event and is super excited. Kunal is obviously curious, even more so, after Mishti makes a remark about how Kuhu was hugely popular with the boys; the typical girl-next-door.


We can have Kuhu being so excited that on the day of the event that she leaves home early to see the preparations. She forgets to tell Kunal this so that when kunal enters the venue with MA, he sees Kuhu is already chatting and laughing away with one of her ex-aashiqs.

Of course karenge continue 😉


"Alumni Night", read the big banner outside the hall. As he shut the car door, Kunal sees people milling about, chatting, laughing and generally having a jolly good time. The balloons, the banner and the decorations have Kuhu's trademark all over them. "Wow, Kuhu ne kitni achchi decoration kari hai na?" says Mishti excitedly. Abir agrees, "Of course, Mishti, koi shaq? Meri bro ki Kuhuness ko koi beat nahi kar sakta. Kyun Kunal?" Kunal smiles, "Of course, bhai, yeh toh hai." Truth be told, Kunal is slightly miffed that Kuhu forgot to tell him that she was going to leave early but despite that, he can't help but feel proud when he sees how amazing the decorations are. "That's my wife," he thinks.

Mishti and Abir walk in, looking every bit a handsome couple and Kunal follows. Just as he steps in, he hears a familiar tinkling laughter and his eyes are inexorably drawn to its source


To be continued...

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Posted: 6 years ago

For one second, Kunal is sure he has forgotten how to breathe. The source of the familiar laughter stands 20 feet away from him. He watches as Kuhu throws her head back and laughs.

Kuhu is wearing a navy blue mermaid gown. The gown hugs her form, as if it was made exclusively for her. A sweetheart neckline compliments her swan-like neck. Her hair is in a low chignon with loose tendrils framing her face. When Kuhu turns slightly, Kunal's breath hitches. The dress is backless. His jaw goes slack. Kunal Rajvansh is speechless.

His Kuhu is so beautiful that it hurts. The air around her is electric. She is like a queen, holding court: the crowd around her is enraptured as she tells yet another tale. It's like the world has stopped to stare at her. So has Kunal Rajvansh.

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Posted: 6 years ago

AT waalo!!

The therapist story just got updated on Wattpad. The link's below so that you don't have to go back.

https://my.w.tt/XCmEQrKht5


@Clarity: 🥰🥰🥰

Thank you!!!😘


@Sam: I like the look you've described for Sheetal. It oozes power, authority and elegance. I think the scene I had described with Kuhu thanking her and cutting all the ties would fit right in with what you've described #bestofbothworlds (Cue Hannah Montana music🤭).


Also, I loved the jealous chhokro discussion and the scene Sam described was so perfect!! I had thought of one after the scene where all the 4 characters are discussing MA's sangeet. It involves all 4 of them and if anyone is interested, I'll describe it. Or maybe I should write an OS.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: clarity

OMG love it! 👏

I adore the idea of Mishti acquainting Kunal with Kuhu ke aashiqs. I can just imagine how the conversation would go.

Mishti goes, "Aur tumhe toh pata hai na Kunal ki Kuhu kitni romantic hai. Toh yeh ladke itni crazy harkate karte the usse impress karne ke liye. Ek ladka tha Ritvik, jo hamari balcony mein chadke aaya Kuhu ko propose karne ke liye kyunki Kuhu likes Romeo and Juliet. Can you believe it?". Mishti laughs heartily as Kunal looks like someone just told him that Uma Patel has resigned. He tries to maintain a neutral expression as he thinks, "Iss Ritvik ke bachche ko toh main..."


Yes, perfect! 😆


@bold: I can see it clear as day 🥺🤣


Kunal goes to the bar, orders a drink and starts to sulk. Kuhu is busy with her friends and admirers so she isn't really paying attention and Mishti starts a long, jargon-y conversation with her old econ. professor so Abir comes over and joins Kunal. Kunal asks him, "bhai did you know that Kuhu was this popular in college?" Abir's like, "of course, she talks about it all the time. 😆 But you know what?..." And he tells him what she said on that hotel rooftop -- that she had all these admirers in college but Kunal was the only one she ever fell for.


Kunal sighs and looks at her across the room as she talks and laughs with her friends (imagine those heart-melty eyes Ritvik does so well). Just then she looks up and they lock eyes, she gives him the tiniest wink, and he feels his heart try to leap out of his chest as a flush creeps up his cheeks. He can feel her dancing eyes on him as he smiles shyly and lowers his gaze. When he looks up again, she's totally engrossed in the coversation around her as though there was no interruption at all, but there's a little tinge of pink on her cheeks that only he can see.

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Posted: 6 years ago

"Mooh toh band karo, uncle," says Abir as he closes Kunal's mouth. Mishti giggles conspiratorially. "Woh bhai...main...woh..main" stutters Kunal as he looks everywhere but at Abir. "Haan Nanko, kya excuse dega tu apni biwi taadne ke liye? Yeh ki tu jaw exercise kar raha tha?" teases Abir. Mishti laughs. Kunal gives them a dirty look,"Haha, very funny, bhai, Mishti." "Kunal, jaa aur apni biwi se mil. Main bhi teri bhabhi ke saath thoda alone time guzarta hoon," says Abir, elbowing him towards Kuhu. Mishti and Abir sneak away and Kunal starts walking towards Kuhu, in a trance. The world seems to have slowed down. The journey to Kuhu seems so long. At five feet, Kunal's eyes glaze over, he seems to have forgotten how to walk. "Kunal, you're so funny," laughs Kuhu. Kunal feels a warmth wash over him at this. His Kuhu can clearly sense his presence. He is about to smile when he notices that Kuhu isn't looking at him. With one hand over her mouth, she is laughing, her other hand on a tuxedoed chest. Kunal's eyes dart upward to see a well-dressed young man, smiling at Kuhu and gazing at her.

Instantly, Kunal feels like that one time Parul Maasi doused him with cold water while throwing out the laundry's dirty water. "Who the fu...?" he mutters when Kuhu looks at him. "OMG, Kunal. Tum aa gaye," she rushes to him, hold his hand and pulls him into the centre of the circle. "So guys, tum log pooch rahe the na ki mera husband kaun hai? Well, here he is, Kunal Rajvansh. #MyBetterHalf" she announces proudly. Kuhu's friends greet Kunal and then it's that...villain's turn. Kunal looks into a face with a boyish charm. The man passes him his perfect smile (Probably got it at the dentist, thinks Kunal) and grasps his hand (Hmph, strong grasp. Yeh probably sirf gym jaata hai. All brawn, no brain) "Hi, Kunal. I am Kunal, Kuhu ka classmate aur uska kya--kehti hai Kuhu-- #lifetimefan. You know bro, you're very lucky. Tumne hamari college ki sabse khoobsurat ladki se shaadi ki hai. Yeh hi nahi, she's a gem. Par seriously, watch out huh? I mean, ideally, iss Kunal ke saath hona chahiye tha Kuhu ko. Kahi main uda ke na le jaaun," he laughs as everyone, including Kuhu join him. 'Uda toh main tujhe doonga, Kunal' thinks Kunal. He tightens his grip suddenly and the other Kunal flinches. "Oh sorry, woh haste haste maine galti se thoda tight pakad liya," apologises Kunal, as he curses Kunal 2 mentally. "It's okay, man. Main hoon hi itna funny," Kunal 2 shoots back without missing a beat. "Kunal, are you okay?" comes Kuhu's concerned voice. "Haan" ring out two voices in unison and the two Kunals look at each other. Laughter breaks out. "Arre #ladakuchhokro, main tumhe kyun poochhungi yeh. Bechare Kunal ka haath marod diya tumne," says Kuhu as she holds Kunal 2's hand, tilting it to see any damage. Kunal sees red at the sight of his wife holding another man's hand.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aquaHP

AT waalo!!

The therapist story just got updated on Wattpad. The link's below so that you don't have to go back.

https://my.w.tt/XCmEQrKht5


@Clarity: 🥰🥰🥰

Thank you!!!😘


@Sam: I like the look you've described for Sheetal. It oozes power, authority and elegance. I think the scene I had described with Kuhu thanking her and cutting all the ties would fit right in with what you've described #bestofbothworlds (Cue Hannah Montana music🤭).


Also, I loved the jealous chhokro discussion and the scene Sam described was so perfect!! I had thought of one after the scene where all the 4 characters are discussing MA's sangeet. It involves all 4 of them and if anyone is interested, I'll describe it. Or maybe I should write an OS.


Uff, this chapter of the therapist story was heavy 😭 I am amazed at how well this person is writing the sessions and the slow unravelling of Kuhu's issues. It's both painful and cathartic, which I guess is the whole point of therapy!


Yay! I imagine Sheetal to have very 80s/90s Shabana Azmi aesthetic.


Yeah sure, the point is, she doesn't really speak to her after the divorce/shaadi 2.0 day, until they reconnect after the resort fiasco.


Please do share your HC/OS about the sangeet! The more the merrier 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago

@Sam- OMG I didn't read that at first.

I love it. This is great. Please continue. We'll get two stories out of this exercise. 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago

@Snow and Clarity: Oh teri! You guys made it a whole story and I am loving it! Everything from Kuhu organising it and forgetting to communicate with Kunal in her enthusiasm, to her look and Kunal's reaction. ☺️ But @clarity, her ex-aashiq being named Kunal has to take the cake. 🤣 What an idea, sirjee! 👏


We can just place my little contribution some time later in the night!

Edited by Samanalyse - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Kunal's hand ball into fists as Kuhu and Kunal 2 laugh and joke, all while Kuhu holds Kunal 2's hand. "Ladies and gentleman..." booms the announcer's voice over the speakers. Kunal snaps out of his reverie, feeling annoyed at having to disengage himself from imagining putting itching powder down Kunal 2's perfect, perfect tuxedo. The emcee declares that the dance floor is now open! "Kuhu, may I?" asks Kunal 2, flashing a sheepish smile as he bows and holds his hand out. "Wait. Actually, Kunal, mujhe tumhe bhi poochna chahiye. May I please dance with your gorgeous wife? Main aur Kuhu college mein dance partners the." What a jerk he is to put me in this position. Main na kahunga toh lagunga ki main ek typical, possessive husband ho. Nahi, main iski saazish nahi poori hone doonga, thinks Kunal. "Sure," Kunal bites out, putting on a fake smile. The music starts and Kunal 2 and Kuhu start dancing. Kunal heads to the bar. "One coke please, on the rocks." He turns around with the glass and takes a swig as Kunal 2 twirls Kuhu around and she laughs. Kunal remembers a film Ketki had showed him, where the guy stares at his beloved with another man as he downs alcohol. "Don't be dramatic, Kunal. Tum coke pi rahe ho aur Kuhu dance hi kar rahi hai. Bewde aasqhiq mat bano," he breathes out. The music is reaching its crescendo. Kunal's grip tightens. His Kuhu is in that scum Kunal's hands, his hands are on his waist. "Tod na doon main tumhare haath, Kunal," he says as Abir approaches him. "Nanko, tu apne hi haath todne ki baatein kyun kar raha hai," asks a shocked Abir. Kunal's eyes are trained on Kuhu. Kuhu laughs again and Kunal 2 brings her closer. "That's it!", Kunal grinds out, slamming the glass on the counter. "Ek minute, bhai." He walks towards Kuhu and Kunal 2 with a purpose, like a tiger stalking towards its prey. "May I cut in, Kunal?" he says, with a light smile on his lips. Kuhu and Kunal 2 look at him and Kunal 2 smiles, letting Kuhu's hand go. The lights dim further and the song changes: Ek ho gaye hum aur tum, toh udd gaye neende re...

Kuhu squeals excitedly. "That's our song, Kunal!"

"True, it is our song" he says, his eyes darkening.

He pulls Kuhu in and she crashes into his chest. She looks up at him, surprised. He twirls her around and brings her in, Kuhu's back is to his chest. The song picks up. Kunal nuzzles Kuhu's neck and Kuhu feels his stubble prick her skin. She blushes. "Kunal, yeh kya kar rahe ho tum?"

"Wahi, jo uss din poora nahi ho paaya tha,"Kunal whispers. Kuhu's eyes widen and her mouth forms a perfect O but Kunal doesn't give her time to react. He twirls her back around and traces his finger down her cheek. She shudders. His hand deliberately ghosts across her back and he grasps her waist firmly. Kuhu gasps, blushing prettily. The music continues and everyone dissolves into the background. Kuhu and Kunal only have eyes for each other. Kuhu smiles sneakily as she decides to not let Kunal have all the fun. She looks at him sultrily, running her hands up his chest to lock them firmly around his neck. Kunal realises he doesn't want to dance anymore. He just wants to take her home.

He twirls her one final time as the song ends, only to pick her up in his arms. They gaze at each other, Kuhu's hand on his cheek.

Tonight no other people exist.

It's only Kuhu and Kunal.

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