FF// Untold Stories; Chapter 26 updated; (Dec 29) - Page 16

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wow. I am liking the pace of this story. So unlike of what you usually write.

Arnav is way too observant that we give him credit for. I loved reading his introspection.

So many small things in this chapter,I loved. And the last part, Khushi's past. I don't know what to write about it. This story has a slow impact.

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Posted: 6 years ago

I love how under the humor, you address stuff like the emotional blackmailing that women undergo in the name of doing what is right, what is good, and unfortunately from one's own family many a time.

One could laugh at her ideas or stupidities, but its sad to think from where they come from. You should write this at your own pace.

Posted: 6 years ago

There is something very liberating about being able to make your own choices and decisions after having them imposed on you for years. I feel that has been the case with Khushi. With her parents and with her "psychopath" husband. You see her wanting to follow her will in all that she does now.

It's strange how the most mundane and irrelevant thoughts come to mind in moments of extreme fear. The mind's way of protecting itself maybe?

Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Zaidi

No she works with ASR before getting divorced .. remember she emails arnav to get leave from office because of her ongoing divorce

Hi,

I got mixed up between Khushi's association with Lavanya and her work with ASR. Thanks for the reminder.

Cheers.....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Wonderful update. I wonder how the fear of bikes came to Khushi on the first place. Maybe something to do with her psychopath husband who just can't leave her alone. This trip in all its might is trying to get Arnav and Khushi closer. Lets see if this trip will have any effect on her decision to resign once she is back.

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Posted: 6 years ago

What a wonderful chapter. It has your signature humor peppered with more than a few life lessons.

The situation you create 😍 Bicycle ride was so totally unexpected. Plus somehow I never imagined Mr. Proper on a bike...Not complaining 😊 the two women in their lives talked to them what had transpired at brekfast point and both are affected by each other.

It is true right that folks draw a wrong conclusion that if one is an introvert one also cannot perceive or observe ; An angry friend once rightfully said that "just because if one is quiet in a social gathering do these folks think you are stupid and they will get away with any BS " 😋 Anyway glad Arnav has a treasure trove of useful/useless information about Khushi.

Plus what can one say the absurd reasons to get married. Glad Khushi is out of the situation and is master ( well mistress) of her universe.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice and quirky story just like your style though in a different genre. As my type of reading is generally silent, and for some reason the LIKE button doesn't work in both the ffs, I wanted to let you know that your ffs are being read and appreciated.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67

There is something very liberating about being able to make your own choices and decisions after having them imposed on you for years. I feel that has been the case with Khushi. With her parents and with her "psychopath" husband. You see her wanting to follow her will in all that she does now.

It's strange how the most mundane and irrelevant thoughts come to mind in moments of extreme fear. The mind's way of protecting itself maybe?

Very true. As Khushi Kumari Gupta (original) would say, if you try to contain all batter within one cloth, it will find the tiniest hole to rebel its way out, unapologetic of the crazy circles it draws in the process.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Savera84

Mr ASR and Ms Gupta would want to keep few things to themselves. They don't want to share with best friend and sister respectively. They don't know why they are feeling this way, but it seems they are liking it.

Lavanya is a best friend and guide to Khushi. She will be there with Khushi in every step of her life to guide her. On the other hand Anjali barges into her brother's privacy but, she only had his best interest at heart.

Lavanya and Anjali both missed out extracting some crucial information from them.

I loved Lavanya as soon as she said she hired motor bikes. I was envisioning Khushi travelling with Arnav.

Khushi chose bicycle instead of motor bike. What happened afterwards tho hona he tha!

Can we see this next?

Shyam is getting desperate and he can strike at any time. Hope Khushi is ready with her army of well wishers to deal with him.

Thanks for an early update.

I thought Khushi started working with ASR only after her divorce.

This chapter is as hilarious as others and at the same time very realistic.👍🏼 I have seen people stabbing the pedestrian crossing button.

Cheers........

Raji, your image procurement skills are excellent 😄

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: p4peppa

Nice and quirky story just like your style though in a different genre. As my type of reading is generally silent, and for some reason the LIKE button doesn't work in both the ffs, I wanted to let you know that your ffs are being read and appreciated.

Thank you! Trust me it's always good to hear back from a reader :)

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