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Posted: 4 years ago

Thank u so much . Its a grear boost to get ferdback from my co writers .

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Posted: 4 years ago

waiting for the next part egarly

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Posted: 4 years ago

Love it, β€οΈ

Sampada is Just jealous of Kalma, she can't bear that he has moved on, she is so disgusting

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow, such a romantic first part. I could imagine kalyani in saree and malhar drooling  I just loved their conversation, they are too cute. Party would hv been fun as they would've danced together. But this sampada, she is such a disgusting soul. Poor kalyani, please makeup for this second part in next part.

I loved your story, amazingly written and delicate style of expressing.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Benedict989

Love it, β€οΈ

Sampada is Just jealous of Kalma, she can't bear that he has moved on, she is so disgusting

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Posted: 4 years ago

AWESOME...πŸ˜ƒ

Malhar was drooling over Kalyani...

I loved his cute gesture of gifting necklace.

Sampada...😑...She was a damn mean...Didn't leave a chance to hurt Malhar...🀬

See how Kalyani make up his mood...☺️

Update Soon...πŸ˜ƒ