PreRish Fictions | Pg19 (To Win and To Lose) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Monali5

“Don‘t compel me to accuse you of sensitivity, Ms. Sharma” "It's not permissible by the clause".Loved Bajaj's humour. Loved your take on Bajaj . The characters were well emoted.

Glad you liked that!

Thank you so much :D

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

arrey waah you wrote one for PreRish , loved it specially the characterizations ⭐️

and this deffo needs Part 2 , waiting ...

I'm feeling lucky now😆

Big fan of yours Munni and this really means a lot 😃

Thank you so so much!

I'm yet to think about Part 2 😆

Originally posted by: Jodha_Rani

This is just so beautiful❤️ one awesome OS. You have kept the essence of the character which I loved👏

And don’t enter my room ever again", he told her, as she ticked off the apology in her list and he smiled to her retreating form. ( This is ek dum Bajajishmy favorite line)

We need part two of this please🤗

Thankyou!

Bajajish😆

Thanks a lot dear!

Originally posted by: opsora2090

It is just amazing and unique plt darling. u should write 2/3 part as well as ... pls come up with it's saga

Thank you very much!

I'll try to, not sure though

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

She hadn’t been to see him, the very sight of that room and it’s ‘contents' flinched her skin. She felt incapable of witnessing what he possibly was going through

This has to be one of the best lines that explains pain and mental agony that I have read till now

He stirred unconsciously, responding to her sudden arrival. Cautiously, she sat on the edge of the bed, not to disturb him. As she turned back to adjust a pillow, the water jar came crashing down the floor, it’s voice echoing through the empty Bajaj Mansion.

He woke up shaking with sweat and anxiety, a gun pointing towards her vague figure.

Within a moment, he put it down. He winced his eyes in pain and rested backwards, his head felt like stone.

THIS THIS THIS. I COULD SO SEE BAJAJ DOING THIS. best way to describe his insecurities and he then asks about his daughter in that state made me alll ---

“Don‘t compel me to accuse you of sensitivity, Ms. Sharma”, he said. "It's not permissible by the clause".

She could feel him smirking while lying down yet, even with her back towards him.

it was definitely worth the wait

THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!

What have I done to deserve this love 😭

Thanks a LOTTTTT!

So happy that you liked all of it.

I have to thank you to mould my perception of Bajaj and also that gun insecurity credit goes to you 🤗

What an amazing roller coaster of emotions!!! Superb❤️

Prerna ki nafrat, uska gussa, uska darr, uski fikr aur phir...uska chupa hua pyaar❤️

Beautiful

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

What an amazing roller coaster of emotions!!! Superb❤️

Finally, thank you 🤗

Have edited, pura review padho😭

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

What an amazing roller coaster of emotions!!! Superb❤️

Prerna ki nafrat, uska gussa, uska darr, uski fikr aur phir...uska chupa hua pyaar❤️

Beautiful

❤️

Thank you! Means a lot :)

Kaise tera pyaar kaisa gussa hai tera,

Tauba sanam

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

❤️

Thank you! Means a lot :)

Kaise tera pyaar kaisa gussa hai tera,

Tauba sanam

🤗