Akshan SS : Jeene ka tu zariya hai updated pg 20 - Page 6

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Posted: 6 years ago
#51

Awesome update

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Posted: 6 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Update badeya hai but cherry tum chottu chottu updates kyun kar rahe ho bada wala karo😛

Office main itne chote chote update hi likh paati hun

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Posted: 6 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Aww that was hot...

But chotusa tha...

Not fair...

Next mujhe bada Wala chahiye...

Yeh halwa Wala scane kahase Aya😜

I just realized k yeh tumhari story main tha, i'll change it if you want

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Posted: 6 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

I just realized k yeh tumhari story main tha, i'll change it if you want

Hahahaha...

Let it b ..

Accha tha....

Koi jarurat nahi hai change karne ki....

Waise kamarbandh was gift na?? Paheli rasoi ka??

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shona1991

Hahahaha...

Let it b ..

Accha tha....

Koi jarurat nahi hai change karne ki....

Waise kamarbandh was gift na?? Paheli rasoi ka??

Ik toh you hv bht sawal

Yes it is

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

Ik toh you hv bht sawal

Yes it is

To sawal puchna gunah hai Kya???😔

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shona1991

To sawal puchna gunah hai Kya???😔

Nahi ji

Ask as many as you want

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Posted: 6 years ago
#58

Part 5

Antra wore a dark green gown whereas guddan wore a dark blue dress, she was looking breath taking with her innocence shining out. Akshat and Antra were standing talking to guest when she came down , he was lost in her beauty , unconcious of his surrounding " guddan ko kisi ki nazar na lage " he came back from his dreamland hearing his mother's comment.

All the couples were called for dancing, " main nhi roun gi , Antra aur Akshat married hain, its their reception, main kaun hoti hun unke beech aane wali, aisi shaadi ka koi matlab nhi koi wajood nhi jo kisi ne dekhi hi na ho" she was pep talking herself but didnt realize that her hand was over candle and it was burnt. All the while he was looking at her, he could see her shivering lips even in dark but he missed her burning hand.

She hid her hand splendidly and everything went smoothly dinner was served, guest left and everyone retired to

their room.

" Antra i'll be sleeping in guest room from today onwards till i am ready for taking this relationship ahead." He said leaving the room without hearing her out.

Guddan was sitting with her feet dip in pool, she was crying due to physical and emotional pain , she looked at her burnt hand " yeh hum kahan phas gaye hain, kyun hume itni takleef horahi hai" .

Akshat was looking for her when he found her sitting near the pool, he came and sit back hugging her , he kissed on her shoulder where he bit earlier " guddan tumhare shoulder pe yeh nishan kaise" " woh kal raat ko jab hum gire thay tab yahan bhi lag gaya tha " she lied to antra , she came out of flashback " main tumhe kab se dhund raha tha" he said running his knuckles on her arms " dur rahe humse , ab toh apko tasali hogyi na k hume farak nhi padhta , hum aek baar bhi" she screamed when he held her hand.

" kya hua dikhao" he said examining her hand " ye kaise jala guddan, bilkul sach bolna" " candle se jal gaya mera haath" he stood up and picked her up and took her to room , he bought haldi paste and some food he knew her well. He bolted room and pulled curtains. He gently applied paste on her hand " guddan, sirf meri kahi hui baat ko galat prove krne k lye tum ne apna haath jala liya, tumhe is tarhan dekh k mujhe kitna dard hota iska ehsaas hai tumhe, bs antra ko bura na lage iski fikar hai" he blows soothing her pain. He calmed himself and wipe her tears and kissed her forehead " did you had anything for dinner" she nodded her head in negation , he feed her with his own hands.

He helped her change clothes and got her settled on bed, he laid beside her spooning. " akshat" " antra thinks i am in guest room" . They laid in silence when she turned to hug him " thankyou for being there for me even when i push you again and again" . Her black orbs were glistening , kissing both her lids he placed feather light kisses on her face, tempting her by placing kisses at corner of her lips, he glanced towards her lips and claim them. Rolling over he pinned her under him , breaking apart he moved towards her neck sucking , kissing. Opening buttons , her cleavage was visible, raining wet kisses all over visible skin , her healed hand was tangled in his hairs pulling him back locking their mouth into sensous kiss. They pulled apart due to air. He kissed her forehead , resting her head on his chest knowning well that she cant take more than what happened.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Itna chota update😒

Khair update mast tha

Continue asap😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Itna chota update😒

Khair update mast tha

Continue asap😃

Chote chote update ayein ge because itna hi time milta hai

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