Little things - OS - Abhir Kunal - UPDATED PART 3 - Page 4

Originally posted by: F.R.I.E.N.D

Hi all,

Thanks for all the comments and likes. They help me push myself to write better and update quicker.

I wasn't able to complete the OS today as I had planned :(

But, I wanted to give you all something. So, here is a short update -

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Abhir woke up smiling, like he did the day before, and the day before that, and the day before that and a few more before that. Late night calls with Mishti were the best parts of his days now. They both slept tired and woke up dreamy. They shared little things. Nothing of importance, but, every moment spent together was priceless. So valuable that they didn't dare let the rest of the world know about it. Last night's conversation was still lingering on in his mind. He told her about his day. He didn't tell her about his accident though.

"The accident"

His eye shot open.

"Oh no! Wo aati hogi. Uska cycle chupana padega."

He woke up with a jerk and

"aaahhhh!!"

He laid back, pursed his lips and rolled his eyes.

"Kal tho koi dard nahi tha iss mein" he said rubbing his right shoulder.

He grabbed his phone from the side table.

Mishti:
Good morning

Best.

Message.

Ever.

He was smiling by now. Laughing, almost.

He sent a reply

You:
tamanna hain tumhe jinki
wo khushiyan saari mile
jo sapne tumne hai dekhi
wo sab hakikat me mile

Obviously, not as good as Mishti's message, but, this'll do. Still smiling he got off the bed, this time slowly, and went into the bathroom. And after a while someone was knocking at the door and he came to open it.

"Hello bro"

"nanu?"

"yo"

"YO!?" Abhir raised his eyebrows and smirked.

Nanu entered the room puffing and coughing and sat down on the bed.

"nanu, aap upar tak kyon aaye? mujhe call kar diya hota".

He went and sat next to nanu.

"kiya tha. tum dono bhai ekdam gadhede ho gaye ho. koi reply hi nahi kartha hai".

"nanuuuu..." he pouted

"what nanuuuu...?? mujhe laga tu use samjhake wapis ghar le aayega. par nahi. ulta tu bhi uski tarah out-of-service ho gaya hai"

"sorry nanu"

nanu smiled at him and traced his had on Abhir's forehead.

"yeh chot kaise lagi?"

"kuch nahi. bas cycle par se gir gaya. aap yeh batao, ghar pe kya haal hai".

"same-to-same. No improvement"

"aur yahan ki sitiation kya hai?"

"same hi hain"

they both sighed.

"no...actually, kal raat usne mere saath dinner kiya and bohot samay bhi bitaya"

"hmm.... teri chot ke wajah se?"

"may be"

Just then kuku appeared at the door panting.

"ABHIR! wo...mishti" she stopped to catch her breath

"Mishti? kya hua Misthi ko?"

"wo...Kunal aur Mishti ka jhagda ho gaya hai....huge fight"

Even before she could finish he started running out of the door calling for Mishti.

"wo tho chali gayi"

He turned around with a questioning glare

"kunal ne use bohot kuch kaha.... aur wo ro rahi thi...and ... "

"That's it. I am putting an end to this nonsense" he walked away feeling like there was a dragon inside him that was ready to spit fire anytime now.

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To be continued...

Loved the update! Abir's shayari and Nanu's presence! Cliffhanger hai... will be waiting for the next update!

Originally posted by: Dotslover22

Nice update.Cliffhanger hai.I am eagerly waiting for Abir to knock some sense in Kunal.Continue soon please.

Thanks :)

I'll try to update soon.....may be after the weekend

This is refreshing.

In the first part of the OS, you very depicted the thoughts of Kunal. I believe, Kunal never been handled better than this ever. Also, his emotions were well layed out. His concern for his brother, his confused stated, his pain of being hurt by the one person he trusted the most.. by his mom. And lastly, his final thought at the end of the chapter. He really hates Mishti. And he loves Abir way too much.

The second part, I am all about Abir. He was very true to his character, which I loved. I think it's amazing how he can love her so much to as much find her simple Good morning text better than his shayari. Like that has me. I want a guy like that. *Scratch that* Forget that I ever said that.

Nanu is like a whip fresh air during the stormy daytime. Wait a minute, did Kuhu, by any chance, come rushing to Abir for Mishti and indirectly complain about Kunal? Like her sports car? This is a different Kuhu. But I like her better 😛

I like the way he is off, about to put an end to the shit that's going around.

I need to know how this ends and I wish to know about it soon. 🙈

Originally posted by: meen123

thanks for the update. dont do cliffhangers. they make antsy in a good way , LOL

i'm excited to see how you play that scene

angsty in a good way? ....hmmmm....then there should be more cliffhangers.....😈😈

Originally posted by: JALK2000

LOved that little glimpse at besotted ABir- him thinking that her Good morning is the best message ever😃. Too sweet.

❤️😉

I loved writing that too.

Originally posted by: JALK2000

Luking forward to Abir putting some sense into Kunal brain. I feel for poor Kunal too but he does need to hear it from Abir too.

Yeah...I am waiting for that too :)

Writing that part is proving to be more difficult than I imagined. 🤔

Originally posted by: Onyourface

It's amazing... specially the way you described abir's mornings...

And she sends good morning he replies by a shayari😂❤️

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: mridhu

Loved your word play. Abir is soooo in love, and the last line completely got me - spitting dragon inside him. I could soooo picture Abir there.

Pls update soon

Thank You :)

... working on it ...

Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Loved the update! Abir's shayari and Nanu's presence! Cliffhanger hai... will be waiting for the next update!

Thank you :)

I'll update soon

Originally posted by: ShenzK

This is refreshing.

In the first part of the OS, you very depicted the thoughts of Kunal. I believe, Kunal never been handled better than this ever. Also, his emotions were well layed out. His concern for his brother, his confused stated, his pain of being hurt by the one person he trusted the most.. by his mom. And lastly, his final thought at the end of the chapter. He really hates Mishti. And he loves Abir way too much.

@bold: Wow! Thanks for saying that

Originally posted by: ShenzK

The second part, I am all about Abir. He was very true to his character, which I loved. I think it's amazing how he can love her so much to as much find her simple Good morning text better than his shayari. Like that has me. I want a guy like that. *Scratch that* Forget that I ever said that.

He he he 😳 Don't we all 😳

Don't hate me, but...that doesn't happen in real life. 💔 Sorry for adding to your high hopes .

Originally posted by: ShenzK

Nanu is like a whip fresh air during the stormy daytime. Wait a minute, did Kuhu, by any chance, come rushing to Abir for Mishti and indirectly complain about Kunal? Like her sports car? This is a different Kuhu. But I like her better 😛

Yeah...you are right....she doesn't seem like the real character. Hmm....may be, I am not able to imagine Kuhu very well..... 😕

Originally posted by: ShenzK

I like the way he is off, about to put an end to the shit that's going around.

I need to know how this ends and I wish to know about it soon. 🙈

I am trying to finish it soon. For me, it's hard to do endings 😒

Thanks again for the lovely comment :)

Originally posted by: F.R.I.E.N.D

@bold: Wow! Thanks for saying that

He he he 😳 Don't we all 😳

Don't hate me, but...that doesn't happen in real life. 💔 Sorry for adding to your high hopes .

Yeah...you are right....she doesn't seem like the real character. Hmm....may be, I am not able to imagine Kuhu very well..... 😕

I am trying to finish it soon. For me, it's hard to do endings 😒

Thanks again for the lovely comment :)

Well, you deserve every bit of it.

@bold: I know. The harsh reality of life.

Kuhu isn't . Her character seems a little too clumsily put in the show. Here, I thought she had more sense in two sentences that she uttered compared to her stupid self throughout the show.

I get it. There's always something that seems difficult to be put up. But you will. Try, try till you succeed. 😂