Little things - OS - Abhir Kunal - UPDATED PART 3 - Page 3

Originally posted by: F.R.I.E.N.D

Laugh? Was it funny?

No it was just so childish

You really portrayed kunal's character very well

Kunal ne jab aise dialogues show mein bole the, tab bhi Mujhe bahut hasi aayi thi 😅😅

Originally posted by: vssdp

No it was just so childish

You really portrayed kunal's character very well

Kunal ne jab aise dialogues show mein bole the, tab bhi Mujhe bahut hasi aayi thi 😅😅

Yeah...you are right.

By indian TV standards it's normal though :P May be that's why we just skip over that.

But in reality, it is pretty childish.

Hi all,

Thanks for all the comments and likes. They help me push myself to write better and update quicker.

I wasn't able to complete the OS today as I had planned :(

But, I wanted to give you all something. So, here is a short update -

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Abhir woke up smiling, like he did the day before, and the day before that, and the day before that and a few more before that. Late night calls with Mishti were the best parts of his days now. They both slept tired and woke up dreamy. They shared little things. Nothing of importance, but, every moment spent together was priceless. So valuable that they didn't dare let the rest of the world know about it. Last night's conversation was still lingering on in his mind. He told her about his day. He didn't tell her about his accident though.

"The accident"

His eye shot open.

"Oh no! Wo aati hogi. Uska cycle chupana padega."

He woke up with a jerk and

"aaahhhh!!"

He laid back, pursed his lips and rolled his eyes.

"Kal tho koi dard nahi tha iss mein" he said rubbing his right shoulder.

He grabbed his phone from the side table.

Mishti:
Good morning

Best.

Message.

Ever.

He was smiling by now. Laughing, almost.

He sent a reply

You:
tamanna hain tumhe jinki
wo khushiyan saari mile
jo sapne tumne hai dekhi
wo sab hakikat me mile

Obviously, not as good as Mishti's message, but, this'll do. Still smiling he got off the bed, this time slowly, and went into the bathroom. And after a while someone was knocking at the door and he came to open it.

"Hello bro"

"nanu?"

"yo"

"YO!?" Abhir raised his eyebrows and smirked.

Nanu entered the room puffing and coughing and sat down on the bed.

"nanu, aap upar tak kyon aaye? mujhe call kar diya hota".

He went and sat next to nanu.

"kiya tha. tum dono bhai ekdam gadhede ho gaye ho. koi reply hi nahi kartha hai".

"nanuuuu..." he pouted

"what nanuuuu...?? mujhe laga tu use samjhake wapis ghar le aayega. par nahi. ulta tu bhi uski tarah out-of-service ho gaya hai"

"sorry nanu"

nanu smiled at him and traced his had on Abhir's forehead.

"yeh chot kaise lagi?"

"kuch nahi. bas cycle par se gir gaya. aap yeh batao, ghar pe kya haal hai".

"same-to-same. No improvement. aur yahan ki sitiation kya hai?"

"same hi hain"

they both sighed.

"no...actually, kal raat usne mere saath dinner kiya and bohot samay bhi bitaya"

"hmm.... teri chot ke wajah se?"

"may be"

Just then kuku appeared at the door panting.

"ABHIR! wo...mishti" she stopped to catch her breath

"Mishti? kya hua Misthi ko?"

"wo...Kunal aur Mishti ka jhagda ho gaya hai.... #hugefight"

Even before she could finish he started running out of the door calling for Mishti.

"wo tho chali gayi"

He turned around with a questioning glare

"kunal ne use bohot kuch kaha.... aur wo ro rahi thi...and ... "

"That's it. I am putting an end to this nonsense" he walked away feeling like there was a dragon inside him that was ready to spit fire anytime now.

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Part 3 on page 6

Originally posted by: F.R.I.E.N.D

Hi all,

Thanks for all the comments and likes. They help me push myself to write better and update quicker.

I wasn't able to complete the OS today as I had planned :(

But, I wanted to give you all something. So, here is a short update -

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Abhir woke up smiling, like he did the day before, and the day before that, and the day before that and a few more before that. Late night calls with Mishti were the best parts of his days now. They both slept tired and woke up dreamy. They shared little things. Nothing of importance, but, every moment spent together was priceless. So valuable that they didn't dare let the rest of the world know about it. Last night's conversation was still lingering on in his mind. He told her about his day. He didn't tell her about his accident though.

"The accident"

His eye shot open.

"Oh no! Wo aati hogi. Uska cycle chupana padega."

He woke up with a jerk and

"aaahhhh!!"

He laid back, pursed his lips and rolled his eyes.

"Kal tho koi dard nahi tha iss mein" he said rubbing his right shoulder.

He grabbed his phone from the side table.

Mishti:
Good morning

Best.

Message.

Ever.

He was smiling by now. Laughing, almost.

He sent a reply

You:
tamanna hain tumhe jinki
wo khushiyan saari mile
jo sapne tumne hai dekhi
wo sab hakikat me mile

Obviously, not as good as Mishti's message, but, this'll do. Still smiling he got off the bed, this time slowly, and went into the bathroom. And after a while someone was knocking at the door and he came to open it.

"Hello bro"

"nanu?"

"yo"

"YO!?" Abhir raised his eyebrows and smirked.

Nanu entered the room puffing and coughing and sat down on the bed

"nanu, aap upar tak kyon aaye? mujhe call kar diya hota".

"kiya tha. tum dono bhai ekdam gadhede ho gaye ho. koi reply hi nahi kartha hai".

"nanuuuu..." he pouted

"what nanuuuu...?? mujhe laga tu use samjhake wapis ghar le aayega. par nahi. ulta tu bhi uski tarah out-of-service ho gaya hai"

"sorry nanu"

nanu smiled at him and traced his had on Abhir's forehead.

"yeh chot kaise lagi?"

"kuch nahi. bas cycle par se gir gaya. aap yeh batao, ghar pe kya haal hai".

"same-to-same. No improvement"

"aur yahan ki sitiation kya hai?"

"same hi hain"

they both sighed.

"no...actually, kal raat usne mere saath dinner kiya and bohot samay bhi bitaya"

"hmm.... teri chot ke wajah se?"

"may be"

Just then kuku appeared at the door panting.

"ABHIR! wo...mishti" she stopped to catch her breath

"Mishti? kya hua Misthi ko?"

"wo...Kunal aur Mishti ka jhagda ho gaya hai....huge fight"

Even before she could finish he started running out of the door calling for Mishti.

"wo tho chali gayi"

He turned around with a questioning glare

"kual ne use bohot kuch kaha.... aur wo ro rahi thi...and ... "

"That's it. I am putting an end to this nonsense" he walked away feeling like there was a dragon inside him that was ready to spit fire anytime now.

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To be continued...

Abir ko mishti ka good morning apne msg se accha lag raha hai, Aww 😆

Cute update

But you can't stop like this, aise cliffhanger is not good for fan's health

Please jaldi update do

I want kunal to see the do not mess with me side of abir

Nice update.Cliffhanger hai.I am eagerly waiting for Abir to knock some sense in Kunal.Continue soon please.

Originally posted by: F.R.I.E.N.D

Hi all,

Thanks for all the comments and likes. They help me push myself to write better and update quicker.

I wasn't able to complete the OS today as I had planned :(

But, I wanted to give you all something. So, here is a short update -

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Abhir woke up smiling, like he did the day before, and the day before that, and the day before that and a few more before that. Late night calls with Mishti were the best parts of his days now. They both slept tired and woke up dreamy. They shared little things. Nothing of importance, but, every moment spent together was priceless. So valuable that they didn't dare let the rest of the world know about it. Last night's conversation was still lingering on in his mind. He told her about his day. He didn't tell her about his accident though.

"The accident"

His eye shot open.

"Oh no! Wo aati hogi. Uska cycle chupana padega."

He woke up with a jerk and

"aaahhhh!!"

He laid back, pursed his lips and rolled his eyes.

"Kal tho koi dard nahi tha iss mein" he said rubbing his right shoulder.

He grabbed his phone from the side table.

Mishti:
Good morning

Best.

Message.

Ever.

He was smiling by now. Laughing, almost.

He sent a reply

You:
tamanna hain tumhe jinki
wo khushiyan saari mile
jo sapne tumne hai dekhi
wo sab hakikat me mile

Obviously, not as good as Mishti's message, but, this'll do. Still smiling he got off the bed, this time slowly, and went into the bathroom. And after a while someone was knocking at the door and he came to open it.

"Hello bro"

"nanu?"

"yo"

"YO!?" Abhir raised his eyebrows and smirked.

Nanu entered the room puffing and coughing and sat down on the bed.

"nanu, aap upar tak kyon aaye? mujhe call kar diya hota".

He went and sat next to nanu.

"kiya tha. tum dono bhai ekdam gadhede ho gaye ho. koi reply hi nahi kartha hai".

"nanuuuu..." he pouted

"what nanuuuu...?? mujhe laga tu use samjhake wapis ghar le aayega. par nahi. ulta tu bhi uski tarah out-of-service ho gaya hai"

"sorry nanu"

nanu smiled at him and traced his had on Abhir's forehead.

"yeh chot kaise lagi?"

"kuch nahi. bas cycle par se gir gaya. aap yeh batao, ghar pe kya haal hai".

"same-to-same. No improvement"

"aur yahan ki sitiation kya hai?"

"same hi hain"

they both sighed.

"no...actually, kal raat usne mere saath dinner kiya and bohot samay bhi bitaya"

"hmm.... teri chot ke wajah se?"

"may be"

Just then kuku appeared at the door panting.

"ABHIR! wo...mishti" she stopped to catch her breath

"Mishti? kya hua Misthi ko?"

"wo...Kunal aur Mishti ka jhagda ho gaya hai....huge fight"

Even before she could finish he started running out of the door calling for Mishti.

"wo tho chali gayi"

He turned around with a questioning glare

"kual ne use bohot kuch kaha.... aur wo ro rahi thi...and ... "

"That's it. I am putting an end to this nonsense" he walked away feeling like there was a dragon inside him that was ready to spit fire anytime now.

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To be continued...

i'm excited to see how you play that scene

Originally posted by: vssdp

Abir ko mishti ka good morning apne msg se accha lag raha hai, Aww 😆

Cute update

He he he ....he is totally crazy in love 🤪

Originally posted by: vssdp

But you can't stop like this, aise cliffhanger is not good for fan's health

Please jaldi update do

I want kunal to see the do not mess with me side of abir

Yeah....before that he need to send a message that "you are messing with me."

Kunal has no idea about the Abhir-Mishti equation. Even in the show. I was hoping they had just told him before it gets out of control.

Thanks for the reply. I am trying to finish it asap.

LOved that little glimpse at besotted ABir- him thinking that her Good morning is the best message ever😃. Too sweet. Luking forward to Abir putting some sense into Kunal brain. I feel for poor Kunal too but he does need to hear it from Abir too.

Originally posted by: F.R.I.E.N.D

Hi all,

Thanks for all the comments and likes. They help me push myself to write better and update quicker.

I wasn't able to complete the OS today as I had planned :(

But, I wanted to give you all something. So, here is a short update -

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Abhir woke up smiling, like he did the day before, and the day before that, and the day before that and a few more before that. Late night calls with Mishti were the best parts of his days now. They both slept tired and woke up dreamy. They shared little things. Nothing of importance, but, every moment spent together was priceless. So valuable that they didn't dare let the rest of the world know about it. Last night's conversation was still lingering on in his mind. He told her about his day. He didn't tell her about his accident though.

"The accident"

His eye shot open.

"Oh no! Wo aati hogi. Uska cycle chupana padega."

He woke up with a jerk and

"aaahhhh!!"

He laid back, pursed his lips and rolled his eyes.

"Kal tho koi dard nahi tha iss mein" he said rubbing his right shoulder.

He grabbed his phone from the side table.

Mishti:
Good morning

Best.

Message.

Ever.

He was smiling by now. Laughing, almost.

He sent a reply

You:
tamanna hain tumhe jinki
wo khushiyan saari mile
jo sapne tumne hai dekhi
wo sab hakikat me mile

Obviously, not as good as Mishti's message, but, this'll do. Still smiling he got off the bed, this time slowly, and went into the bathroom. And after a while someone was knocking at the door and he came to open it.

"Hello bro"

"nanu?"

"yo"

"YO!?" Abhir raised his eyebrows and smirked.

Nanu entered the room puffing and coughing and sat down on the bed.

"nanu, aap upar tak kyon aaye? mujhe call kar diya hota".

He went and sat next to nanu.

"kiya tha. tum dono bhai ekdam gadhede ho gaye ho. koi reply hi nahi kartha hai".

"nanuuuu..." he pouted

"what nanuuuu...?? mujhe laga tu use samjhake wapis ghar le aayega. par nahi. ulta tu bhi uski tarah out-of-service ho gaya hai"

"sorry nanu"

nanu smiled at him and traced his had on Abhir's forehead.

"yeh chot kaise lagi?"

"kuch nahi. bas cycle par se gir gaya. aap yeh batao, ghar pe kya haal hai".

"same-to-same. No improvement"

"aur yahan ki sitiation kya hai?"

"same hi hain"

they both sighed.

"no...actually, kal raat usne mere saath dinner kiya and bohot samay bhi bitaya"

"hmm.... teri chot ke wajah se?"

"may be"

Just then kuku appeared at the door panting.

"ABHIR! wo...mishti" she stopped to catch her breath

"Mishti? kya hua Misthi ko?"

"wo...Kunal aur Mishti ka jhagda ho gaya hai....huge fight"

Even before she could finish he started running out of the door calling for Mishti.

"wo tho chali gayi"

He turned around with a questioning glare

"kunal ne use bohot kuch kaha.... aur wo ro rahi thi...and ... "

"That's it. I am putting an end to this nonsense" he walked away feeling like there was a dragon inside him that was ready to spit fire anytime now.

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To be continued...

It's amazing... specially the way you described abir's mornings...

And she sends good morning he replies by a shayari😂❤️

Loved your word play. Abir is soooo in love, and the last line completely got me - spitting dragon inside him. I could soooo picture Abir there.

Pls update soon