Be Mine ff P8 on PG25 updated 15th june - Page 13

Originally posted by: JDTKP

Aww😳😳😳

🤗

Awesome update

Mahima is nice character and the conversation between Drishti and Mahima was very clear and mature.

Rakshit misunderstood Drishti after listening conversation aww it is sad.

Rakshit is affected by Drishti tears and hope he comes back soon

Originally posted by: Chit15

Awesome update

Mahima is nice character and the conversation between Drishti and Mahima was very clear and mature.

Rakshit misunderstood Drishti after listening conversation aww it is sad.

Rakshit is affected by Drishti tears and hope he comes back soon

Mahima is nice or not time will tell lol

Yes he will be back bt mu kaise door hotehai wo to waqt hi bateyaga

Thanks for the lovely comment sweetie

Wow...wonderful update 👏

There were too many things I loved about this part. Rakshit is calling Drishti's name in his sleep and his friends heard him 😆. Divya's operation was successful and Mahima convinces Rakshit to marry the girl of her choice.

Oh so Mahima had a stroke and Drishti took care of her. Is that why Mahima liked her enough to get her married to her grandson? Yeh waali Mahima toh poori alag hai...Drishti pe meherbaan 😆

The whole marriage scene refreshed the memories of the show But I'm glad they are officially Mr and Mrs Shergill. I guess Rakshit won't be making things easy for Drishti *sigh*

Thanks a lot for the PM

Sorry for the late comment

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Wow...wonderful update 👏

There were too many things I loved about this part. Rakshit is calling Drishti's name in his sleep and his friends heard him 😆. Divya's operation was successful and Mahima convinces Rakshit to marry the girl of her choice.

Oh so Mahima had a stroke and Drishti took care of her. Is that why Mahima liked her enough to get her married to her grandson? Yeh waali Mahima toh poori alag hai...Drishti pe meherbaan 😆

The whole marriage scene refreshed the memories of the show But I'm glad they are officially Mr and Mrs Shergill. I guess Rakshit won't be making things easy for Drishti *sigh*

Thanks a lot for the PM

Sorry for the late comment

Sam.my dear as i said i missed u here

Im glad u liked it .. thank you so much

Mahima ka character open hona abhi baaki hai..lol

And yes coming to last line

Dialogue marne se Kya hoga.🤣 kaun kispe bhari padega yeto dekhna padega

My bet will be on sherni ❤️😛

No dont be sorry dear i hope ur health is ok now

Part 5:

Awesome update 👏

I loved it a lot more than I should have. Mahima asked Drishti to marry Rakshit because she thinks Drishti is the one who can change her grandson for good. Yeh ulti ganga kahan se behene lagi? 😆

Haye...Drishti likes Rakshit and her shyness while saying yes to the marriage 😳

Rakshit's friends are as strange as him. Advising him to marry the girl of his grandma's choice and then divorce her 😡

Oh God, Rakshit misunderstood the conversation between Drishti and Mahima and assumed her to be a gold digger. And he even hurt her on the very first night saying that he is soon going to apply for divorce. Mr. Shergill bohot pachhtane waale hain baad mein

Finally DriKshit's tashan is going to start. I can't wait for it.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please update the next part soon

Sorry for the late comment

Originally posted by: Aquabutterfly

Part 5:

Awesome update 👏

I loved it a lot more than I should have. Mahima asked Drishti to marry Rakshit because she thinks Drishti is the one who can change her grandson for good. Yeh ulti ganga kahan se behene lagi? 😆

Aww thank you sam. Wo to waqt hi bateyga ki kaha se aur kyun behene lagi🤣 kaisi waat lagegi uski🤣

Haye...Drishti likes Rakshit and her shyness while saying yes to the marriage 😳

Hayeee hayee kash show mein dri sharmati aisi😉

Rakshit's friends are as strange as him. Advising him to marry the girl of his grandma's choice and then divorce her 😡

Haina🤬but aisi frnds hote to hai par achee wale jyada hote hai kash rakshit ko aise dost milthe btwn show mein raks ka ek dost bhi nahi😭

Oh God, Rakshit misunderstood the conversation between Drishti and Mahima and assumed her to be a gold digger. And he even hurt her on the very first night saying that he is soon going to apply for divorce. Mr. Shergill bohot pachhtane waale hain baad mein

He is in two minds .. he wants to stay with her at the same time he cant. And assuming her as a gold digger and hurting her is a result of hearing their convo without knowing the context and that happens with everyone. Bina sar pair jaane log jaldi react karthe ..haina??

Finally DriKshit's tashan is going to start. I can't wait for it.

Thanks a lot for the PM

Please update the next part soon

Sorry for the late comment

Thanks once again sam.. ur comment as always make me smile. Will update today

Love

Saru.

Part 5 -

I like the mahima of your ff than the one on tv.

Im glad you didn't make Ra the complete hateful jerk of typical Tv serials with hate track.

Drishti here feels a completely diff person than zhiwn on Tv. In the sense she seems a little weak willed. The tv one is self-assured not your typical tv serial beti.

The way you added descriptions in everything made it easier for me to picture the scene.

So kudos to that !

I only read part 5 sorry didn't have more time.

Keep writing

Originally posted by: Hallyumint

Part 5 -

I like the mahima of your ff than the one on tv.

Thanks

Im glad you didn't make Ra the complete hateful jerk of typical Tv serials with hate track.

Thanks

Drishti here feels a completely diff person than zhiwn on Tv. In the sense she seems a little weak willed. The tv one is self-assured not your typical tv serial beti.

That u cant judge by reading one part dear..

The way you added descriptions in everything made it easier for me to picture the scene.

So kudos to that !

Thanks dear

I only read part 5 sorry didn't have more time.

So read n then comment again when ur free..

Keep writing

This thread is lost somewhere lol