Arshi FF: Chaahat. *Chapter-9* (updated)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi people, I'm new to this forum & to writing field as well & this is my very 1st story ever attempted. this plot flashed in my mind after reading wonderful FFs based on Payash & Arshi wedding track written by various talented writers,so being inspired by them I'm trying to write.
I started writing few days back & posted it on other sites to which I received very good response. So I'm here to try my luck. hope you all will like it as well. the ones who have already read it on other sites can skip it.
Do let me know your views about it, positive and negative both are welcomed including suggestions too.
Note: This Plot is my original, if any other story line matches with mine then its pure coincidence.




Prologue :

A girl in mid of twenties roamed around well decorated spacious hall of a big mansion instructing workers around for impending function that evening which seems like a wedding...

While walking past the corridor she was pulled with a great force and slammed against something hard yet warm, when her eyes met the thing that pulled her or rather say the person that pulled her...

Girl: "what r u doing?" (glancing left & right ) " What if someone sees us together like this?"

person: "relax nothing will happen, I'm there na... I'll take care if something goes wrong, don't worry babe. why fear when I'm here ." he said boasting about him self.

Girl: "that's what I'm worried about". she murmured.

person: "u said something?"

Girl: (shaking her head side ways) "No...by the way why did you corner me like this? do u wanna say something?"

person: "Oh ya...please don't get mad okay , well the thing is..due to some emergency I need to leave for Agra right now will be back by wedding time ..." he explained.

By hearing this her face falls.

Girl (in low voice): "but u said you'll my side today right? how will I sustain alone? This is not done yaarrr." she pouted.

Seeing her pouting cutely, he smiled & said..

person: "don't worry Shona I'll never leave you alone, not till eternity atleast, now smile ok...pleaseee." he pleaded.

Girl: (hugging him tightly) "But if something happens this time also? and if they all blame me once again? Then???" she asked him like a lost kid.

person: "Like hell they will, I'll rip them apart if they even lay their eyes on you. No one messes with..." he started aggressively only to be cut by her.

Girl: "ya ya I know I know, now cut it & tell me buy when will u be back...?" she asked changing the topic immediately.

person: "Oh ho, missing me now itself?? so desperate for my return even before I leave??" he waggled his brows teasingly.

Girl: "tell naaa." she whined.

person: "Ok , I'll be back by wedding time, if possible a bit earlier it self. & don't stress your self too much everything will be fine, I'll be back as soon as possible". he assured.

Girl: "ok come back soon". she softly ordered.

person: "ok my shona".

Saying so he kissed her on her forehead and left from main door. She kept staring at his restraining figure till he disappeared & continued with her work.


Here goes the Prologue guys . Please excuse if any spelling errors found ...waiting for your precious comments and feed back...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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What is she always getting blamed for? Looking forward to reading more.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

What is she always getting blamed for? Looking forward to reading more.


thank you for commenting..😊 u will get answers soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting
Not arshi but someone else is getting married
And welcome to the forum
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome start. continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadhnasoumya

Interesting

Not arshi but someone else is getting married
And welcome to the forum


thanks for reading...hope u liked it.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHUNNU99


awesome start. continue soon.


thanks for reading...I'm glad u liked it😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi guys I'm back with next part, but first of all thanks to ones who commented, trust me it really means a lot even if the number if less...Okay enough of my ranting...So here I present Character sketch and story synopsis...hope you will like it as well...please comment every one, positive and negative both are welcomed.

Character sketch:



Arnav Singh Raizada aka ASR (male protagonist)

A shrewd business man owns AR industries. He is a "Harvard grad." Handsome, Rude & arrogant to world, but a lost kid from inside. Badly carving for love & loved ones as he lost his parents when he was 14. Earns billions per day for his family(maternal family) who never considered him anything but their money making machine...he has only one anchor for his life now, which is very precious to him, has hidden some secrets. lives in Delhi currently. - Age: 27




Khushi Gupta (female protagonist)

A simple girl with simple life style...acts cheerful & tries to spread happiness everywhere but herself is a broken soul, always sacrificed for her so called family . Faced life's harsh reality of world very early. Lost her biological parents when she was 12 in a car accident. Was adopted by "Guptas" who never considered her as their own, always thought her to be burden except her babuji (Foster father). she too has some secrets. Lives in Delhi currently. -Age:26


Raizada Family :


Devyani Raizada

Head of Raizada family, Nani(maternal grand mom) of Arnav and Anjali and Dadi (paternal grand mom) of Akash. she is strict at a times, yet sweet and fun loving, she is traditional yet has adapted herself to modern ways. Loves her family a lot. -Age:75



Manohar Raizada

Son of Devyani, mama of Arnav and Anjali, & dad of Akash. He is kind of sleeping partner in family, involves less in family matters, but very kind n jovial person. -Age:58



Manorama Raizada

Wife of Manohar, Daughter-in-law of Devyani, mother of Akash & mami of Arnav & Anjali, loves to spend time & money in shopping along with her niece, always boasts about her status n wealth in front of others, murders everyone with her pathetic attempt of speaking English. -Age:50



Akash Raizada

Son of Manohar & Manorama, cousin of Arnav & Anjali. Younger to Arnav in months. He is a bit self-centred kind of person , works in AR under Arnav, but wants to have his own company as he doesn't like working under him n receiving his orders, is all set to tie knot with his love interest Payal Gupt. -Age:27



Anjali Jha

Elder sis of Arnav, & cousin of Akash. Selfish & dominating personality, she foolish too, easily gets manipulated, fragile glass doll of Raizada clan, very pampered & stubborn in nature, starts her water works & melodrama if something isn't her way. Married to Shyam Jha. -Age:31



Shyam Jha

He is Anjali's husband. Very cunning, greedy & unfaithful person. Married Anjali for wealth & luxury. He is an excuse of lawyer, always acts as he is very busy, though he has no cases under him to fight, fakes official trips & disappears for months. He is an Orphan and stays as 'Ghar Jamai' at raizada mansion, enjoying it's luxury. Is smitten by Khushi's beauty, wants to get her by hook or cook. -Age:35



Nikhil Khurana aka NK

Cousin of Akash, Anjali & Arnav. Born & brought up in Sydney, Australia. Always goofs up while speaking Hindi. A funny, lunatic, jovial guy, yet very good soul. -Age:26



Kaya Mehta:

Anjali's friend, better be addressed as Anjali's puppet, listens every word of Anjali to please her & remain in her good books. very greedy n cunning person, she is an orphan, Lives in Raizada Mansion enjoying its luxury coz of Anjali. Wants to become Mrs ASR, always behind Arnav, tries to gain his attention but fails every time. -Age: 25


Gupta Family



Shashi Gupta

Head of the family, father of Payal n (Foster father)Khushi. Loves both his daughters equally, is a middle class man had a sweet shop in Lucknow, moved to Delhi along with his family due to some financial crises. Is paralyzed and bedridden currently. -Age:57



Garima Gupta :

Wife of Shashi, mother of payal & (foster mother) Khushi. Very Selfish women, is partial towards her own daughter(payal) loves payal a lot, isn't fond of Khushi, consider her to be burden. -Age:49



Payal Kumari Gupta

Daughter of Shashi n Garima, Step-sis of Khushi. Daughter like mother, isn't fond of Khushi much, she always envies Khushi coz of the attention she receives form everyone, and coz of her innocence, wit and beauty. She is a college drop-out, as she wasn't much interested in academics, she quit in her 2nd year of graduation. She is tying Knot with Akash Raizada hence forth. -Age:26



Madhumati Mishra

Bua or paternal aunt of Payal and Khushi. Elder Sister of Shashi. A widow lives with Gupta family. Loves Payal a lot. Isn't much fond of Khushi, has same opinion about her as other Gupta women. Always curses her and consider her as burden upon them. Age:60

Additional characters:


Lavanya Kashyap

She is just another employee of AR, tries to charm Arnav but couldn't manage to get a single glance from him till date, she is a big bully and rags interns n new employs with her minion gang, which is unknown to office higher authorities.



Aman Mathur

He is Arnav's PA, Manager, Arnav's right hand man, as well as his best friend and his well-wisher.

HP,OP,JP : Prakash brothers, house helps of Raizada mansion.

  • Rest of the characters will be introduced in further chapters as the story progresses.


So this was CS, do let me know how it was. desperately waiting for your comments.



Edited by Periwinkel_98 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Story synopsis:

So the story starts from payash's wedding scene, but there is a slight change here, Arnav dint force Khushi into contract marriage, nor did he witness exchange of words between Shyam & Khushi @ the terrace, but instead of him the conversation was heard by someone else.

There is no Sheesh Mahal fashion show drama in this story and Arshi's first meet dint happen in Lucknow, though Guptas where from Lucknow, but Shashi had to face some financial crises, which led to closing of his sweet shop. hence he along with his family shifted to Delhi.

Khushi worked in AR same as show in chamkili avatar, and deliberately used to play pranks on Arnav to irritate him, but they don't hate each other like in initial track of the show.

Coming to Payal and Akash, first Akash had seen Payal at temple and later started following her, they met each other at local market in Delhi, and later incidents led to their marriage.

Shyam had also seen Khushi in such local place once and got attracted by her, and reached Gupta house(GH) as paying guest to get her, but Shyam and Khushi's engagement din't happen as Khushi had refused it even after her buaji's and amma's constant pestering and blackmails, later exposed him with proofs infront of Guptas and kicked him out of GH.


So this is synopsis part, hope you people will like it. Waiting for your comments desperately...

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Edited by Periwinkel_98 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi readers. I'm back with 1st chapter hope you will like it do let me your views.

Chapter-1

It's a scenario of a grand wedding of youngest son of Raizada family "Akash Raizada" with daughter of Gupta family "Payal Kumari Gupta" held @ Raizada's pride The Shantivan i.e. Raizada mansion. At mids of all the wedding chaos one soul was highly impatient & was glancing towards main door again n again as though waiting for someone to appear form there.

Person: "Offo where is he? He promised to be there on time and see now... still no sign of him , like this he'll miss entire function..[glancing towards clock] oh god where is he? Wedding is almost over" she sighed. with disturbed thought, the person again tried to concentrate on the wedding rituals.

And soon the bride & groom where declared as husband & wife by the priest, and the all the guests retired to their respective homes after having delicious tummy full meal. Now only raizada & gupta family members where left at the alter. Suddenly Anjali Jha 'the glass doll of raizadas' marched towards someone with full fury & slapped the person hard shocking everyone present there, except one evil man who smirked at his victory.

Anjali: "How dare you... how dare you Khushiji? You thought you can do anything & no one will come to know about it?" she yelled spitting fire.

Khushi: "but Anjaliji, what did I..." she tried to ask, only to be cut rudely by another hard slap, making the corner of lips bruise by the impact.

Anjali: "Enough... I have seen your true face, now don't try to act all innocent." She continued.

[ recovering from shock nani voiced out]

Nani: "what kind of behaviour is this Anjali betiya? Why did you hit her?? Why are you shouting at her?" she enquired.

Mami: "Hello hi bye bye... This Phatti sadi only must have done something sasumaa this Gupta family is behind our wealth, she must have stolen something." Mami meddled in.

Nani: "Manorama". she warned shutting her.

But Anjali continued gritting her teeth, "mami is right nani , this Khushi is very greedy n character less women , she is a gold digger, first she was behind our chote & tried to trap him but when it happen, she tried to trap my shyamji in her charms." she said eyeing Khushi with disgust.

[ All were shocked at her accusations]

Nani: "No betiya it can't be, there must be some misunderstanding. Khushi bitiya is not like that." She said not able to believe her granddaughter's accusations.

Anjali: "Believe me Nani, I myself heard her saying to Shyamji to leave me. I was only quite so that Akash's wedding can happen without any interruption." She tried to convince her Grandmom.

Gaining back her composure, Khushi replied nodding negatively, "Nahi Anjaliji aap galath..." (was again interrupted by another slap, but this time it was from least expected person Garima.)

Garima: " I knew it, you were a curse to us. Is this how you repay us for our kindness? By bringing disgrace to our family?? you were always jealous of our payalia, as she become DIL of such a good family, but u stooped this low & tried to snatch someone's husband for that...chi". she said trying to save their sinking ship.

To make damage control Buaji also joined, "Aur nahi to ka Garima, if she was our own blood then she wouldn't have done this...don't know who's bad blood is flowing in her veins...I told Sashi babuva not to keep her but he dint listen, now see what she did."

[All this while Shashi was looking @ everything helplessly as he couldn't do much cause of his paralysed state. Khushi was all blank this while due to betrayal of Guptas.]

Buaji turned towards Raizada family, joining her hands she continued, "Please not punish our Payalia for this. She has nothing to do with it. We dint no this ungrateful girl will stoop this low...our Payalia is very innocent." She pleaded.

Anjali: "don't wary buaji... we all know Payalji is very good & well mannered, She will not suffer in this." She assured.

Akash: "Di is right buaji, Payal will not suffer for others mistakes." he said eyeing Khushi disgustingly.

[all this while other where clueless as not knowing how to react, & Nani was in deep thoughts.]

Anjali: "Now what are u still doing here u shameless women, get out of my house now." she yelled at Khushi who was all blank & lost. buaji added.

Buaji: "And mind you, don't even think about stepping in my house now. You are no one to us..." she bitterly.

"WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING HERE?" came a roaring voice.


So guys this was the 1st chapter...do let me know your views. waiting desperately for your votes and comments...

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